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[iloveslinky]

Oh my God, I can't believe that worked! Or, at least she's thinking about it... THAT'S ALL THAT MATTERS! POWER TO THE CARL FANS!!!!!!!

Slink

P.S. Gratzi, Beks!

[Mara=^.^=]

Apparently, you can make anyone look good in your drawings.


Technical stuff.

I really enjoy the technical side in this fanfic. It was done with thinking and knowledge and it makes the story more reach. It's not some cheap unrealistic stuff like Star Wars with their whizzing flashy laser beams. Even when you Mara are not a specialist on space warfare, you don't put in crud, I appreciate it too. It's grreat to find details like teleporting bombs, or Aurora's suit manipulating energy, or black holes in mines, I'll discuss it with pleasure. May be I will even be able to add something to TOSOT. :P Where did you get this stuff, btw?

Now, some my remarks.

Aurora mentions aluminum sulfate ore which costs a lot, but actually this mineral is very common and cheap (it consists of common aluminum and sulfur) and has rather not medical applications. I'd suggest you to use something like sodium rhodanate instead.

Three suns made me think a little about it. Usually, star systems have two stars, or sometimes one, like ours. A system with three stars must be more rare, but it's quite possible that such systems exist too. But is the sunrise eternal? Usually stars are near each other, so even if in a system are two or three stars it just makes a day a bit longer. To get an eternal sunrise we must have a planet surrounded by three stars, what is hardly possible, because orbits would be too unstable to exist for a long time. But, after some thinking, I came to an idea that in such system could be one big star, like ours, or even many times bigger, and several small stars, just a several dozens of times bigger than our Jupiter, orbiting around the big star like planets. It must be rare, but it's possible. Then a planet orbiting among those stars must have only day at least most time of a year.

Ya, I know the aluminum sulfate ore was a stretch. I was thinking something like "maybe it's expensive in this part of space?" but basically I just chose it because we had been talking about it in Chemistry and I was feeling lazy.

The "Land of Eternal Sunrise" is definitely meant to be an literary/artistic convention. I didn't mean to imply that it was ALWAYS daytime on the planet, merely that all those suns made the kids FEEL like daylight was eternal. Also, that desert planet really isn't going to last long. It'll probably be cooked in a couple more centuries.

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

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You know what'd be awesome? If he WAS a hunk muffin....

Well, actually, that's quite possible. Dictator Jimmy probably doesn't feed him much, so he might have thinned out a bit...

[loopin]

Yeah... I'm worried about future Sheen A LOT. :'( He is in BIIIGGG trouble...

Future Carl, however, is probably Jimmy's minion or henchmen or something by now, and since he's probably the only human DJ can talk to, DJ'd keep him alive.

And because DJ probably only feeds him ultra-healthy super food, there's a good chance Carl COULD be hot!! :kawaii:

[Mara=^.^=]

I have super exciting TOSOT related news. I had a brilliant idea last night at 3 am (that's when all my brilliant ideas occur).

I can safely say that the story will end with (at least the suggestion of, if not more) one pairing that NONE OF YOU WOULD EVER EXPECT. I'm sure of it. Mu hu hahahaha!

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Flank]

WOW! :blink: Can't wait to see. :D

[iloveslinky]

Lemme guess! Carl and AURORA!!!

*tomato'd*

Slink

[Flank]

"Cleans hands after tomatoes."
Mara, if you are writing about the final battle, I can talk a bit about warfare and such military stuff, if you want to. It may help you to write things and avoid mistakes.

[girlgenius123]

I have super exciting TOSOT related news. I had a brilliant idea last night at 3 am (that's when all my brilliant ideas occur).

I can safely say that the story will end with (at least the suggestion of, if not more) one pairing that NONE OF YOU WOULD EVER EXPECT. I'm sure of it. Mu hu hahahaha!

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

Future Carl and Future Libby? ;) *slapped*

No, but that is worth speculating!

[Justine<3]

I can safely say that the story will end with (at least the suggestion of, if not more) one pairing that NONE OF YOU WOULD EVER EXPECT. I'm sure of it. Mu hu hahahaha!

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

...is that good or bad? :blink:



~*(+Justine+)*~

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Future Carl/Aurora?? Future Sheen/Aurora? Future Libby/ Dictator Jimmy??
OH THE CLIFFHANGER-NESS OF IT!!

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Future Carl/Aurora?? Future Sheen/Aurora? Future Libby/ Dictator Jimmy??
OH THE CLIFFHANGER-NESS OF IT!!

Mara, you just like to drive people crazy! :lol:

Dictator Jimmy / April !

[loopin]

EGAD! PERHAPS!!



Ok, people, get ready to laugh. Slink and I did an art trade on DevintART, and my for my art, I had to do GOTH CARL from TOSOT.

I present to you, CARL!!!

:kawaii: :kawaii: :kawaii: :kawaii: :kawaii:

(BTW, ignore the arms. They are complete epic FAILS.)

[Flank]

It' not so bad, even arm. He looks great there, really scary, LOL.

[iloveslinky]

HOOTFLAOWL!!!!!!!!!!!

*Five uncontrollably laughing minutes later*

Oohh, ohh, oohh.... Ok, I just love that picture!

Slink

[Sabbie1000]

:blink: A couple that nobody would think of! Aw, I wanted to see DJ and Aurora get together in the end so hopefully Libby and Carl? That'd actually be pretty interesting, ya know? :D


Update soon the suspense is driving me crazy! :wacko:

[Justine<3]

XDD

Great job, Loopy! XDD




~*(+Justine+)*~

[Beks]

Pairing you wouldn't think of....um...

Elke pops out of nowhere somehow, and there's Carl/Elke?

or, Aurora and a security droid that has feelings?

or, little Libby and Future Sheen?

or, April and Future Carl?

or, Aurora and another live experiment guy like Future Sheen?



PS: I LOVE the pic, loopin! So cute! *huggles computer*

[Sabbie1000]

Thinking back, I don't think it could involve Aurora and Dictator Jimmy because in that fic you wrote of when he had captured her it was a little bit of "evil romance" so just imagine if he wasn't evil. :wacko:


Sooo. It must be dealing with some of the other characters: April, Sheen, Libby, Carl, Lee, etc?

-_-

[Mara=^.^=]

EGAD! PERHAPS!!



Ok, people, get ready to laugh. Slink and I did an art trade on DevintART, and my for my art, I had to do GOTH CARL from TOSOT.

I present to you, CARL!!!

:kawaii: :kawaii: :kawaii: :kawaii: :kawaii:

(BTW, ignore the arms. They are complete epic FAILS.)

OMG THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT HE LOOKS LIKE!!! **falls over laughing** This is like the best pic of Carl EVER! I wanna print it out and put it on my wall!

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =