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The Other Side of Tomorrow - discussion topic

Started by Mara=^.^= , Dec 28 2006 12:58 AM

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#401 CraazyOne

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Posted 22 December 2007 - 05:38 PM

But I just straightened my hair today! I'll have to wait until tomorrow night!

Besides, I don't think a shower will work. I'm stuck on a fundamental plot hole that I've discovered in my invasion plan.

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

Auuughhh! I hate fundamental plot holes! They make you want to scream and tear your hair out! Sometimes you just have to...sit on it. And, yeah, I know you've been stumped for a while already, but I've noticed that after long periods of total writer's bock, ideas just pop into your head out on nowhere. But it can take time. And a lot of thought. Since you're dealing with a war, maybe (you've probably already done this) you should sketch out your "battlefield"... That could help. Then just run through various battle strategies in your mind, and EVENTUALLY, you might hit on something that will fix your problem.

Yeah, I probably didn't help, but, eh, I tried. *shrugs*

~Rach~

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Posted 06 January 2008 - 05:35 AM

Hi there Mara and Company, but mostly Mara.

This doesn't have much to do with TOSOT ...

But I was over in Music Videos snooping around for a change.

And there were two of Mara's I just HAD to compliment her on.

I know her mailbox is always stuffed full.
-And her PM box probably gets a workout too.

So I thought I'd post here.

I really liked the Partridge Family one, from One of Us. "Get Happy."
-That was hilarious and awesome.
-I've always liked Libby's grin when she turns the radio off and turns.

And I loved White Houses. Wow Mara!
-You got so many bits and clips to fit the lyrics to the song.
-Alas, I don't know the song well so I can't quote you them.
-But there were clouds while singing about clouds.
-Cindy and Libby shooting smoothie out of their noses and the lyrics matched.
-And spinning the bottle while the song talked of spinning empty bottles.

SUPERB! :kawaii:

Do pardon me for straying off Topic, but I just had to say.

Snazzo
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#403 Mara=^.^=

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Posted 06 January 2008 - 07:58 AM

Thanks so much for the compliments!
I love those music videos. I always appreciate viewer commentary :lol:

Ya, White Houses was the first JN music video I ever made, and it's still my favorite. Unlike other videos, that I had to "force", White Houses came so natrually. I was in the local flower nursery buying flowers for mother's day when POOF! Inspiration hit and I knew I HAD to make a music video with that song. It was crazy, cause the whole thing just came to me in a flash, and I didn't have to think twice about it.

Oh, and good news everyone! The next segment of TOSOT is almost ready!

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

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#404 loopin

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Posted 10 January 2008 - 07:02 PM

:kawaii: :kawaii: :kawaii:

:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

:nosebleed: :nosebleed: :nosebleed: :nosebleed:

:wub: :wub: :wub:
YAAAYYY!!!

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#405 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 03 February 2008 - 02:44 AM

First of all, I'd have to say that your ff is AWESOME!!!!!!! I must admit, you really had me going for a sec' when you said that it was JIMMY, not Libby, who was exposed to the Megalomanium! But I got over it soon enough. Might I say, your ff is, how shall I put it... OFF DA HOOK! I can't wait until you post the remaining chappies of TOSOT! I'll only be able to reply about every couple weeks, because I have a fairly busy schedule. I'm SO lovin' your ff, so post the next chappies ASAP, okay? Your ff rocks; keep it up, Mara! You're the best! B)
Yours truly, RetroChica333 (AKA Amelia *.* )

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#406 REBEL_15

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Posted 12 February 2008 - 07:52 AM

tosot is awesome mara! i really hope u get pass ur writers block and write more excellent work keep it up!

:rock: :rock: :rock: :rock:
:pyro: :pyro: :pyro: :pyro:
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
:kawaii: :kawaii: :kawaii: :kawaii:

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#407 Mara=^.^=

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Posted 12 February 2008 - 11:25 PM

You mean the writer's block more frequently known as "college"? Ya, me too...

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#408 AnDrEa

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Posted 13 February 2008 - 04:21 AM

You mean the writer's block more frequently known as "college"? Ya, me too...

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

haha lol :lol:

o:) Andre o:)

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#409 REBEL_15

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Posted 13 February 2008 - 08:10 AM

yer i still have high school to get past :onfire: :grr:

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#410 Mara=^.^=

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Posted 19 February 2008 - 02:46 AM

I'm posting the next installment now. Sit tight.

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

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#411 Beks

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Posted 19 February 2008 - 02:50 AM

*grabs the edge of my chair so tight my knuckles turn white* Squeeeeee!!!!! She's posting it!

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#412 Ang

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Posted 19 February 2008 - 02:59 AM

NOWAI!!! *waits*

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#413 Mara=^.^=

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Posted 19 February 2008 - 03:00 AM

^_^ Breathe Beks, breathe. It'll take a few minutes to show up.

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#414 Beks

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Posted 19 February 2008 - 03:03 AM

But my face didn't even turn blue yet... :rolleyes:

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#415 Ang

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Posted 19 February 2008 - 03:06 AM

Um, I'm not obsessed if I'm sitting here at the TOSOT index opened, right?

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#416 Mara=^.^=

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Posted 19 February 2008 - 04:06 AM

It's working! Huzzah!

click now

Critique is welcomed, this is a very choppy and badly written chapter. I just couldn't get it to come out right, so I gave up.

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

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#417 Ang

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Posted 19 February 2008 - 04:28 AM

WOO!

Mara, that was AMAZING. I like it! It's VERY informational! I like chappys like that, they look impressive. :D

Great work!

(I'd type more, but I gotta go to bed. D: )

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#418 girlgenius123

Fer cryin' out loud...

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Posted 19 February 2008 - 12:11 PM

Very sweet update. :ahoy:

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#419 Mara=^.^=

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Posted 19 February 2008 - 08:36 PM

Glad you liked ^_^ Find any errors that need correcting?

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#420 Flank

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Posted 19 February 2008 - 08:51 PM

I'm reading TOSOT now and I so :wub: it. I regret I couldn't read it before and talk about it here. In two days I read 60 pages, not much for me, but I had other stuff to do. Of course I love it, it makes me think a lot about various things, too much to talk here. If you want critics, I'd change there one or two technical details for realism and I can't wait until I read the new chapter! May be you need help with weapons too? :lol: