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[underwater]

Finally started reading this.

Who knows when I'll finish...it's very long.



Corinne

[Mara=^.^=]

Sent the next installment to Katie for proofreading!

Shit, I am cranking these out right and left. Go me!!


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
I am almost tempted not to post it until Pigquet finishes that giant rant she promised

[RocksmySocks]

Beta-read! Didn't really have much in the way of suggestions. I guess that means you guys will get it soon!

[Anita]

OMG OMG OMG

Soooooo excited for the next installment!!!!!!
Pleeeeeease, post it post it post it!!!! :DDDD

ps: I always talk about TOSOT with one of my best friends... I showed her some scenes of the last installment and she also almost had a heart attack (Yup, TOSOT's becoming famous in Brazil! Yay!)

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

I agree with Anita! POOOOOOOOSSST EEEEEEEEEEET!!!!!!!

[Mara=^.^=]

I agree with Anita! POOOOOOOOSSST EEEEEEEEEEET!!!!!!!

I have to go take an exam...I'll have it up later tonight my time (or early morning your time).

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Anita]

Tomorrow will be AWESOME !

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

I have to go take an exam...I'll have it up later tonight my time (or early morning your time).

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

I'll be sure to check it out tomorrow my time ASAP!!!! You rock, Mara!!!

[Zoey <3]

Yay! I can't wait!

[Lizz]

It'll be great to come home and read some TOSOT after an exhausting day of work

[Mara=^.^=]

You rock, Mara!!!

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Mara=^.^=]

You take the breath right out of meeeee
You left a hole where my heart should be!
You gotta fight just to make it through,
'cause I will be the death of yooooouuuuuuuuuu
[/end random song clip]

Seriously, I can't stop listening to Breaking Benjamin. Probably bad for my health, but it's oh-so-DJ/A-sweet. MUST SUCCUMB.

Anywhere, here's the next installment...or rather, the end of the last one. Only 3 pages long, but at least it ends the cliffhanger:
--> The Conclusion of "End Game" <--


This will be all over soon...
Pour salt into the open wound
Is it over yet? Let me in!
So sacrifice yourself, and let me have what's left
I know that I can find the fire in your eyes
I'm going all the way
Get awaaaaaay, pleeeeeaaaaase

OK I'm done.

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Beks]

First! *is smacked*

Yay! They got the antidote! I was worried that DJ would somehow get ahold of it and get rid of it. But now he's better, if he ever wakes up! I hope he does! Too bad he didn't get to see Jimmy while he was megalomanium-ized. Would have been a sweet reaction.

Lolz, "skinny Carl"

The part at the end with Aurora was really touching and sweet. At least for now, it seems like she's not regretting giving him the antidote.

Wow, I'd always thought that Sheen would be excited to see himself like that in the future, but I guess his nightmare hallucination dream kinda put that side of himself on the 'evil' side rather than the 'badass' side.

Can't wait for more, eventually!

[okmeamithinknow]

Holy !

Amazing! Mara, have I ever told you how awesome you are? No? Well let me tell you now.

You always seem to exceed my expectations when it comes to your TOSOT updates.

I give you a million and one WIN points and a cookie for this brilliant update!

~Crys~

[Mara=^.^=]

Yay! Installment = Crys-approved!

Also, I'm already halfway done the next chapter, Retribution, so hopefully you should get it sometime in October. That's not too long of a wait, right?


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Beks]

Yay sometime in October!

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

I don't have a lot of time at the moment to read this installment, but I'll be SURE to read it later this evening!! This one sounds like it's gonna ROCK!!!

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Scratch that. I just read it, and boy, am I glad DJ got the antidote when he did! I just hope he wakes up soon. Lol at "skinny Carl"! That part cracked me up! Now we just have to wait for younger Jimmy and FC to return. Maybe they'll have saved Future Goddard by then! Who knows?? No one but Mara, and perhaps Katie, that's for sure! I have faith that she'll get Chapter 41 to us in her own good time. This installment ROCKED, Mara!!! Very much appreciated!

[Zoey <3]

Woah! That was Amayzing as usual! I'm really glad DJ got the antidote, I wonder whats going to happen when/ if he wakes up. I loved the part with Sheen and Cindy.

[Beks]

Noooooo! Just read the ending that Mara rewrote. If you guys didn't see, she reworded the final part a bit and changed it quite dramatically, with only a few words! D:

Noooooooo! Aurora! I mean, I almost saw this coming, but still! Whaaaaaa!!!!