4674 replies to this topic

[Mara=^.^=]

Another random after thought from Crys: What else has DJ force FS to do under the influence of his mind control.... Heeheehee....

Have buttsecks with FC. DJ is definitely a voyeur.

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[okmeamithinknow]

Have buttsecks with FC. DJ is definitely a voyeur.

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

*nodnod*

~Crys~

[Mara=^.^=]

DJ could never get involved himself. He's Genophobic, Erotophobic, and Arachibutyrophobic*.

*mad props if you know what this one means

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[SweeneyxxTodd]

Nonsense. DJ is just pretending to have those phobias so that people won't find out about his secret satyriasis.

EDIT: New thoughts.

Was anyone else reminded of an agni kai when DJ and Aurora were fighting with all their fire? Because that's one of the things that my mind kept coming to, if there were large paragraphs of fighting with little dialogue. In fact, lots of things in this chapter reminded me of various aspects of Avatar. Such as DJ being able to control FS with just a few words. That reminded me a lot of Long Feng controlling Jet with the words "The Earth King has invited you to Lake Laogai." It was even the same basic situation: FS showed up to defeat DJ, but DJ spoke some lines and in no time had FS attacking Aurora and FL. Cool stuff.

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

I'm proud to announce that...

THIS WAS THE MOST EPIC INSTALLMENT I'VE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!

It was SO much win, Mara!! I wonder what Aurora wants from DJ; I just wonder...

Zoey, your second version of the final quote was OMG HYSTERICAL!!!!!

Neutron,before you take me away from here, there’s just one other thing I want. One minor concession, that’s all. Lord knows I’ve never asked for a favor from you before, but just this once can you stop farting!? Ew!

I found myself giggling like CRAZY after reading it!

I also cracked UP when I read that DJ called Aurora "Cindy", just to peeve her! Ya know, cuz she hates being called that! I practically GUFFAWED when I read that!!!

All in all, very epic!! I'm just glad no one was actually killed... Just knocked unconscious, is all...

to INFINIY AND BEYOND!!!!!

[Zoey <3]

Haha I giggled when he called her Cindy too.

[Mara=^.^=]

Nonsense. DJ is just pretending to have those phobias so that people won't find out about his secret satyriasis.

I think the term you're looking for is "Aurora Satyriasis". Which, frighteningly, sounds an awful lot like oral psoriasis, which I imagine would be pretty painful.

Was anyone else reminded of an agni kai when DJ and Aurora were fighting with all their fire? Because that's one of the things that my mind kept coming to, if there were large paragraphs of fighting with little dialogue. In fact, lots of things in this chapter reminded me of various aspects of Avatar. Such as DJ being able to control FS with just a few words. That reminded me a lot of Long Feng controlling Jet with the words "The Earth King has invited you to Lake Laogai." It was even the same basic situation: FS showed up to defeat DJ, but DJ spoke some lines and in no time had FS attacking Aurora and FL. Cool stuff.

It's not surprising that you were reminded of an agni kai, since one of the scenes I watched in the course of my research was Zuko' duel with Admiral Zhao (I also drew lots of inspiration from Katara's fight with Master Pakku and her fight with Hama the bloodbender. Hadn't thought of or watched the Jet scene, though).


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[curiochibi]

He's Genophobic, Erotophobic, and Arachibutyrophobic*.

*mad props if you know what this one means

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

-giggles like an idiot-


Well, well, well...the smackdown begins. I believe everyone else has already taken the words out of my mouth, so I have no further comments about the installment at this point. Excellent work, as always, Mara.


=Jessi=

[Mara=^.^=]

Chapters 39 and 40 Condensed into Ten Lines of Chatspeak

DJ: lol ur stupid and u want me to sex u up
AURORA: F Uuuuuuuuuuuuu!
FS: Rawr im pissed imma keel u nao
DJ: lol i dun think so ur gonna kill her
FL: Eeeeeeeeeek
AURORA and FS: NYUUUUUUUUUUUU
FL: CROTCH SHOT
FS: *manly tears*
AURORA: win!
DJ: lol that was fun, where were we? oh ya, u wanted me to sex u up...

[Zoey <3]

Haha! So much win in one post! That pretty much sums up the whole chapters!

[Macey]

Chapters 39 and 40 Condensed into Ten Lines of Chatspeak

DJ: lol ur stupid and u want me to sex u up
AURORA: F Uuuuuuuuuuuuu!
FS: Rawr im pissed imma keel u nao
DJ: lol i dun think so ur gonna kill her
FL: Eeeeeeeeeek
AURORA and FS: NYUUUUUUUUUUUU
FL: CROTCH SHOT
FS: *manly tears*
AURORA: win!
DJ: lol that was fun, where were we? oh ya, u wanted me to sex u up...

d-dying

[Pigquet3]

Chapters 39 and 40 Condensed into Ten Lines of Chatspeak

DJ: lol ur stupid and u want me to sex u up
AURORA: F Uuuuuuuuuuuuu!
FS: Rawr im pissed imma keel u nao
DJ: lol i dun think so ur gonna kill her
FL: Eeeeeeeeeek
AURORA and FS: NYUUUUUUUUUUUU
FL: CROTCH SHOT
FS: *manly tears*
AURORA: win!
DJ: lol that was fun, where were we? oh ya, u wanted me to sex u up...

L.O.L!!! Amazing...yet true.





Pigquet

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! Ditto!!! I wholly agree!!

[J/C AVA]

Chapters 39 and 40 Condensed into Ten Lines of Chatspeak

DJ: lol ur stupid and u want me to sex u up
AURORA: F Uuuuuuuuuuuuu!
FS: Rawr im pissed imma keel u nao
DJ: lol i dun think so ur gonna kill her
FL: Eeeeeeeeeek
AURORA and FS: NYUUUUUUUUUUUU
FL: CROTCH SHOT
FS: *manly tears*
AURORA: win!
DJ: lol that was fun, where were we? oh ya, u wanted me to sex u up...

*Giggles, retains enourmous urge to laugh*

Ok... even I have to admit, THAT was funny!

[Mara=^.^=]

*Giggles, retains enourmous urge to laugh*

Ok... even I have to admit, THAT was funny!

WHOA!
I made Pedro laugh at a post with the word "sex" in it!


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[curiochibi]

Chapters 39 and 40 Condensed into Ten Lines of Chatspeak

DJ: lol ur stupid and u want me to sex u up
AURORA: F Uuuuuuuuuuuuu!
FS: Rawr im pissed imma keel u nao
DJ: lol i dun think so ur gonna kill her
FL: Eeeeeeeeeek
AURORA and FS: NYUUUUUUUUUUUU
FL: CROTCH SHOT
FS: *manly tears*
AURORA: win!
DJ: lol that was fun, where were we? oh ya, u wanted me to sex u up...

You just got quoted


=Jessi=

[Mara=^.^=]

@Jessi: Your creative status is very YES.

[curiochibi]

@Jessi: Your creative status is very YES.

I'll get on it ASAP. I know we talked about having an FL-in-Shangri-Llama oneshot, but are there any other requests? I'm open to anything, really; I'm up for a challenge.



=Jessi=

[Mara=^.^=]

If you want a REALLY challenging one, you should write something horror-ish from FS's point of view.

[Pigquet3]

I'll get on it ASAP. I know we talked about having an FL-in-Shangri-Llama oneshot, but are there any other requests? I'm open to anything, really; I'm up for a challenge.

This probably isn't the most creative idea that could come from a fan, but I'd love to see something about when NAV first met Aurora when she was 15, after she blew up his ship and then took him prisoner, and then they got to know eachother (the story he told the kids in 'Six Stars at Twilight') Or, even later when he first met April and their first impressions. I don't know, I'm a hopeless romantic for those two. But, would love anything that has to do with NAV in general (though I know you already did one about NAV and Laudya, so I wouldn't expect that.)

If you want a REALLY challenging one, you should write something horror-ish from FS's point of view.

I'd adore that!


I eventually want to collect all of Jessi's TOSOT oneshots, because I think they're the work of an extremely dedicated and creative fan. I love them! Even if I don't love the circumstance and characters always, I love how well she tries to put old happenings in their perspective. They're beyond clever! So yes, do more! Any more!






Pigquet