I don't see why not to post it here. Sure, it'd be better in the mainsite, but still... I'M JUST SO DAMN CURIOUS!!!
The Other Side of Tomorrow - discussion topic
#2621
Posted 21 August 2010 - 08:28 PM
I don't see why not to post it here. Sure, it'd be better in the mainsite, but still... I'M JUST SO DAMN CURIOUS!!!
#2622
Posted 22 August 2010 - 04:49 AM
~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
#2623
Posted 22 August 2010 - 04:55 AM
Yay!Sent it to Katie for beta-reading!
~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
Special thanks to Katie, too, for taking the time to beta-read all these installments for Mara! I can't wait!
#2624
Posted 22 August 2010 - 05:57 AM
Everyone else...get ready for a beatdown

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
#2625
Posted 22 August 2010 - 04:02 PM
#2626
Posted 22 August 2010 - 04:43 PM
~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
#2627
Posted 22 August 2010 - 05:08 PM
#2628
Posted 22 August 2010 - 06:06 PM
#2629
Posted 22 August 2010 - 07:08 PM
Should I have someone else beta-read it?
EDIT: Sent it to Krista as well. Hopefully she'll have nothing better to do with her Sunday night than stare at the screen and be my revision lackey.
~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
#2630
Posted 22 August 2010 - 07:18 PM
Crap, I just remembered...Katie is gone for the weekend. She probably won't get around to reading it any time soon.
Should I have someone else beta-read it?
It depends on who you chose. You know, beta readers are like your sidekick...giving somebody else that responsability may not have the same results.
#2631
Posted 22 August 2010 - 07:54 PM
#2632
Posted 22 August 2010 - 08:06 PM
#2633
Posted 22 August 2010 - 08:32 PM
~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
#2634
Posted 22 August 2010 - 09:06 PM
#2635
Posted 22 August 2010 - 09:47 PM
#2636
Posted 22 August 2010 - 10:08 PM
Awesome!!!! The aroma of TOSOT is stronger and more pungent than ever before! I can almost smell it!! lol
Yeah that's a 10 on the ol' creep o'meter
~Crys~
#2637
Posted 22 August 2010 - 10:23 PM
@Emily--I actually liked it. LOL.
#2638
Posted 22 August 2010 - 10:42 PM
I spent upwards of 5+ hours “researching†for this installment by watching anime fight scenes, youtube clips of martial arts competitions, amateur self-defense vids, and the entirety of Crouching Tiger Hidden Dragon.
I'd like to extend my sincerest thanks to Katie, without whom these two chapters would literally have never been finished. I can't believe this has become a compliment, but you really are DJ. I'd also like to thank Krista for listening to me screech an earlier draft of this installment, and Beks for accidentally giving me the inspiration I needed to finish the final version. Finally, I'd like to say how grateful I am for everyone's patience...I realize I'm the slowest updater on the face of God's green earth.
So, here we go! Click the links below, and read away! (since this installment is so long, may I suggest a brief pause after Chapter 39 to digest what you've read? Just sayin'
Chapter 39: Winner Take All
Chapter 40: End Game
Make sure to tell me what you thought...running commentary is the tasty blood cocktail to my inner vampire.
~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
P.S. I made the last installment I posted – you know, the one where FC meets with the kids – into its own chapter. Just 'cause.
#2639
Posted 22 August 2010 - 11:05 PM
more coherent comment when I'm done. Because. lsdkhaflkhfjadhfaklfhkfhs;afnkjs;kfd;hrr;sak
#2640
Posted 22 August 2010 - 11:21 PM
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