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[sunnstar]

LOL. Ohsnap. NOW EVERYONE KNOWS. :ph43r: **hides behind bookshelf**

[AnDrEa]

sorrey! my fault! *drops death* :bath: (i've always what to say that!)



o:) Andre o:)

[sunnstar]

LOL, I was joking. My #1 computer dream is to be #1, but that won't happen unless Amanda, Krista, and Gwen's computers all explode.

LOL, say what? "*drops death*"?

[AnDrEa]

lol! wow you really have awesome wishes for them this Christmas! lol and yeah 'drop death'! :P


o:) Andre o:)
PS: 5 or 6 more to go!

[sunnstar]

LOL!! Would you settle for "they all get swamped with homework till I catch up"?

Till what?

Edit:: Oh, your 2000? yeah, lol, 9 more.

Edit2:: Ooooh. 5 more till spot #9! :dance:

[AnDrEa]

lol think of better wishes, that 'they all go on a super vacation with no computers or are too busy to log in!' :P that'll do! *.*


o:) Andre o:)
PS: 3 and 7 more to go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :bunny:

[sunnstar]

LOL. I was just gunna go with "Mara bumping my post number up by 4000," but that works too!

YAY!

Okay, okay, let's stop spamming up my fic. XD

[AnDrEa]

is not spamming, is offtopicness :P but wait I have one more thing to say.....ask her that for a birthday present!!!!!! :dance: :D



o:) Andre o:)
PS: one and 5 more to go!

[cancel_me]

Haha, awesome chapter, Sunny! YOU LOOK LIKE A NAKED MOLE RAT. >8U Lolplz. For a minute I thought you were going Kim Possible/Jimmy Neutron/Timmy Turner on us. XDDDDDD Sorry...

Good writing! Oh, but "aloud" in chapter 3 should be "allowed" methinks.

P.S. Well, if you haven't noticed I've been offline for the past five days before today, but I only came on to celebrate Gwen's birthday. Haha no one even noticed...

[sunnstar]

Haha, awesome chapter, Sunny! YOU LOOK LIKE A NAKED MOLE RAT. >8U Lolplz. For a minute I thought you were going Kim Possible/Jimmy Neutron/Timmy Turner on us. XDDDDDD Sorry...

Good writing! Oh, but "aloud" in chapter 3 should be "allowed" methinks.

P.S. Well, if you haven't noticed I've been offline for the past five days before today, but I only came on to celebrate Gwen's birthday. Haha no one even noticed...

Thanks!! XD And LOLyeah. But no, that's not gunna happen.





OR IS IT? :ph43r:

No, it's not. =)

You're right, I was wondering what the other thing that sounded like "aloud" was. XD

I NOTICED!

[sunnstar]

Enjoy! I expect a whole hoist of replies.

..::Chapter 5:: Mayors and Belly Button Lint::..

**Jimmy, Timmy, Sheen, and Carl (along with the squirrel-disguised fairies) walked into Jimmy’s house**

JIMMY: Dad, I’m home!

**Hugh was to be found in the kitchen, eating a slice of meringue pie**

HUGH: Oh, hi Jimbo! Just eating some of the pie your mother baked this morning.

CARL: (hopefully) Can I have some?

JIMMY: (skeptically) And she let you eat it?

HUGH: Well, first I offered it to the creepy people who came by but they left, so I figured—

JIMMY: What people?

HUGH: They looked really familiar… I couldn’t put my finger on it, but one of them had really bright red hair.

SHEEN: (edgily) Well, we’ll just head upstairs now…

JIMMY: Right. Come on guys.

**They followed Jimmy upstairs and he opened the door**

TIMMY: Whoa dude, cool room! I’m bored.

SHEEN: Where is it? I need to see that movie NOW!

JIMMY: Over there on my—Holy Heisenberg! My Hypno-Ray’s been ray-napped!

CARL: Your ray took a nap?

SHEEN: No Carl. He said his ray was ray-napped, like, stolen—STOLEN?! But Jimmy, I need to see that movie NOW!

TIMMY: Hey look guys, there’s a note!

CARL: (reading out loud, slowly and clearly) Dear James, We’re sorry we had to steal your Hypno-Ray. Please accept this piece of bellybutton lint instead. Yours truly, the naked mole rat.

SHEEN: Who do we know that looks like a mole rat?

JIMMY: I don’t know, but I have a bad feeling about this.

TIMMY: Why?

JIMMY: The announcement for the new mayor is in twenty minutes and a group of villains have a mind-control device. Does that sound good to you?

TIMMY: No, not really.

JIMMY: (throwing the note back on the table) Then what are we waiting for? Let’s go!

**They sprinted halfway down the stairs before Carl stopped them**

CARL: Hey, can I have that bellybutton lint?

JIMMY: No, why?

CARL: I collect it.

JIMMY: Of… course you do…

TIMMY: (snapping in front in his face) Jimmy!

JIMMY: (shaking his head) Right, right. Everybody in the hover car, now!

**Nineteen minutes later, the four of them arrive at the typical announcement destination, gasping and panting. The mayor is standing behind a podium and lights are flashing every second**

MAYOR QUADAR: (eating a chocolate bar) Mmm, this is some good candy—oh! Hello everyone. I have quite a big announcement today. But before that, I’d like to inform you all that our favorite duck from the community pond, Quackie, gave birth!

HUGH: Woohoo!

MAYOR QUADAR: And now, for the real announcement—

**The three villains stepped out of the shadow of a tall tree and the boy pointed the Hypno-Ray directly at Mayor Quadar, whose face immediately turned blank and vacant**

EUSTACE STRYCH: I am the new mayor of Retroville.

There you go, Chica! :D

[ShadRose17]

(Jaw drop) Wooow, POST MORE SUNNYYY!

[AnDrEa]

jawdrops! Blimey Sunny! :P I never really expected it!!! amazing chapter!!! I can't wait to read what's next!!!!



o:) Andre o:)

[sunnstar]

(Jaw drop) Wooow, POST MORE SUNNYYY!

LOL, thanks! I will!

jawdrops! Blimey Sunny!  :P  I never really expected it!!! amazing chapter!!! I can't wait to read what's next!!!!



o:)  Andre  o:)

LOL!! Blimey? HAHAHALOL. Thanks!!

Thankschicaforeplying.

[CraazyOne]

YAAAAY! :dance: Great job, Sunnzay!

Hmm...not to sound nitpicky about grammar (ugh, I can't help it) but I found a few (easy-to-fix) mistakes...

HUGH: They looked really familiar… I couldn’t put my finger on it, but one of them had really bright read hair.

I think that one's purdy self-explanatory. Hehe

Please except this piece of bellybutton lint instead.

That would be "accept"...

TIMMY: (snapping in front on his face) Jimmy!

I'm sure you meant "of" as opposed to "on"...

Anyways, I hope those were helpful pointers and didn't sound obnoxiously...know-it-all-ish. :lol: :P

You did an awesome job. ^_^

~Rach~

[Beks]

ooo, the plot thickens! :ph43r:

[AnDrEa]

jawdrops! Blimey Sunny!  :P  I never really expected it!!! amazing chapter!!! I can't wait to read what's next!!!!

o:)  Andre  o:)

LOL!! Blimey? HAHAHALOL. Thanks!!

yeah blimey! I wanted to say that! lol


o:) Andre o:)

[sunnstar]

YAAAAY!  :dance: Great job, Sunnzay!

Hmm...not to sound nitpicky about grammar (ugh, I can't help it) but I found a few (easy-to-fix) mistakes...

HUGH: They looked really familiar… I couldn’t put my finger on it, but one of them had really bright read hair.

I think that one's purdy self-explanatory. Hehe

Please except this piece of bellybutton lint instead.

That would be "accept"...

TIMMY: (snapping in front on his face) Jimmy!

I'm sure you meant "of" as opposed to "on"...

Anyways, I hope those were helpful pointers and didn't sound obnoxiously...know-it-all-ish.  :lol:  :P

You did an awesome job.  ^_^

~Rach~

Thanks!!

Dayung, did I really type "read" instead of "red?" WHOOPS. xDD Thanks for telling me!

Wow Sunnstar, this is a great story so far.

Omg. Eustace Strich? I never would have guessed.

I hope Jimmy and Timmy can save the town.

GrEtChEn

P.S. Thanks for the link to your nick.com story. I liked that one too.
You are a really excellent writer

Thanks!! You can call me Sunny. =)

LOL, me too!

Oh, you're welcome! And thanks!!!!! =)

Hey, great story.

I just made one.

You should check it out.

Tokianna (Toki)

Thanks! And mkay.