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[sunnstar]

lol, cause if it was OC, than I would have to transform into Writer Woman, to get the nevarious OC Man from controlling your mind!

LOL!! Not good. **ducks**

Rachel, I envy your abilities. Your IC abilities and other crud.

Please write me into your will for your skillz. Please? D:






.:!Gwen!:.

Thanklez veryvery much!! :dance:

LOL. I'm sure they'll dry out by then.

[sunnstar]

Hi guys! This would make up for the last chapter--it reaches a fourth page on Word... so... ENJOY!!

..::Chapter 3:: Candy Bars and UltraLord::..

**The camera finds Jimmy back in Retroville, sitting at his desk in his room, taking apart an invention and wearing that oh-too-familiar expression of trying to fix a complicated machine**

JIMMY: (muttering to himself) And if I just take out this—and put in that—it should work!

**There was a loud whooshing noise, but Jimmy didn’t turn around until he heard a familiar, yet completely unexpected voice**

TIMMY: Hey Jimmy Neutron!

**Jimmy whirled around to see Timmy Turner and his hologram fairies, Cosmo and Wanda, emerging from the portal**

JIMMY: Wow, Timmy Turner! What are you doing here?

TIMMY: (shrugging) I was bored.

JIMMY: Figures.

COSMO: So Fudgehead, what do YOU think about the cheese idea?

JIMMY: What?

WANDA: He means, what do you want to do today?

JIMMY: Oh, I don’t know… I was just working on an old invention because I was so
bored…

TIMMY: Ooooh! What invention? Shrink ray?

COSMO: CHEESE RAY?

JIMMY: Actually, my Hypno-Ray.

TIMMY: Wow, fascinating!

**Cosmo nods**

WANDA: What is it?

TIMMY: Yeah, what?

JIMMY: It used to be called a Hypno-Beam, but I changed it because—

TIMMY: I’m bored. Let’s go!

JIMMY: Go where?

TIMMY: I dunno. Where do you bulgy guys usually go when you’re bored?

JIMMY: (thinking) The Candy Bar?

COSMO: Sounds unhealthy. To the Candy Bar!

**Jimmy and Timmy, with Cosmo and Wanda transformed into squirrels next to him, walk into the Candy Bar and notice Cindy, Libby, and Carl**

JIMMY: Hey guys! What are you doing here?

CARL: We’re bored. You?

TIMMY: (flatly) Same.

CINDY: (nervously flipping her hair) Why Timmy! I didn’t expect you to be here!

TIMMY: (in the same monotone) Like I just said, I was bored.

**Cindy frowns at Timmy’s obvious lack of interest in her crosses her arms, slumping back in the booth**

CARL: Hey Jimmy! Why is your usually two-dimensional friend, small-headed Jimmy here?

**Before Jimmy could answer, Sheen burst through the front doors, looking frantic**

SHEEN: Jimmy! Jimmy! JIMMY!

CINDY: (muttering) And I thought this would be a normal day.

JIMMY: Sheen? What’s wrong?

**Sheen opens his mouth to talk but stops short, noticing Timmy**

SHEEN: What’s he doing here?

LIBBY: (cutting Jimmy off) Long story. Sheen, what happened?

SHEEN: Well, you know that UltraLord movie I’ve been wanting to see since they
started making it four years ago?

CARL: (rolling his eyes) Yeah?

SHEEN: Well—well—well—

TIMMY AND CINDY: Spit it out!

SHEEN: The ticket-seller wouldn’t sell me a ticket!

TIMMY: What? The ticket-seller wouldn’t sell you a ticket?

SHEEN: And I repeat, the ticket-seller wouldn’t sell me a ticket!

TIMMY: That’s ridiculous! What other job does a ticket-seller have than to sell-
tickets?

SHEEN: That’s exactly what I said to the ticket-seller when he wouldn’t sell me a ticket!

CARL: (frantically) Enough with the tongue-twisters, they’re tearing my brain apart!

JIMMY: But why wouldn’t the ticket-seller—

CARL: (hysterically) Tearing my brain apart!

JIMMY: Sorry.

SHEEN: The guy said something stupid, like ‘you have to be eighteen or older or have an parent, guardian, or adult figure with you!’

LIBBY: What? That’s terri—did he really say it in that stupid a voice?

SHEEN: NO! That’s just me mocking him!

CINDY: Well was it rated R?

SHEEN: No, it was rated S!

EVERYONE ELSE: Rated S?

SHEEN: The guy said it stood for stupid. According to him, ‘no child under eighteen is allowed to see a movie that stupid without a—’

CINDY: And you’re telling us this because…?

SHEEN: (grabbing the front of Jimmy’s shirt) I NEED YOU TO HELP ME!

JIMMY: Sheen, calm down! What do you want me to do?

SHEEN: Use your Hypno-Ray to trick the guy into thinking I’m eighteen?

LIBBY: I thought it was called a Hypno-Beam.

CARL: No, Jimmy changed it.

LIBBY: Really? Why?

TIMMY: Man! Your conversations are even more pointless than mine!

SHEEN: Ahem… not to be of a bother or anything, but CAN WE GO NOW?

COSMO: (whispering to Wanda) He calls that not being bothersome?

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TIMMY: Dude, we haven’t moved yet.

[Beks]

cool chapter! I love Cosmo!...and cheese! :D

[CraazyOne]

Excellent the second time, too! :thumbsup: :D Great work, Sunnay... LOL! Keep it up!

Edit: Ahhhhh! 500 posts! I be a superposter now! LOL! A.... *runs away from Sunny's pitchfork*

~Rach~

[sunnstar]

cool chapter! I love Cosmo!...and cheese!  :D

Thanks! And LOL. =)

Excellent the second time, too!  :thumbsup:  :D  Great work, Sunnay... LOL! Keep it up!

Edit: Ahhhhh! 500 posts! I be a superposter now! LOL! A.... *runs away from Sunny's pitchfork*

~Rach~

Thanks! But HAHA to you, that's the last one you've read. =P Thanks again!

WOOT!! LOL, I need 4 more after this one to get 2600.

This is really goo, Rachel.

I can't wait to see waht will happen.

Lol, at Sheen mocking the ticket-seller-movie-guy.

I can't wait to read more.

Write more soon.

Gretchen

P.S. Do you have a story on Nick.com? I could have sworn you had one called the hunt or something.

Thanks!!

LOL. That was actually my idea... because Rach deserves like 50% (maybe more) of the credit. I wouldn't have had the JTPH idea without her... although it wasn't HER idea. I just thought of it from another idea from her. LOL.

Yeah, I did. Here's a link, if you want it!

[AnDrEa]

oh darn! I missed TWO chapters!!!! hey sunny may I ask u a favor? could u send me a PM notification when u update any of ur fics?? really! I'm so clueless!!! so please!!!

K anyway cool chapters!!!! idk why writers are always underestimating (sp?) their work! I loved both even if 2 wasn't that long! you are great with all these! and I love Cosmo!!! he really is the cherry on top of the ice cream!!!


o:) Andre o:)

[sunnstar]

oh darn! I missed TWO chapters!!!! hey sunny may I ask u a favor? could u send me a PM notification when u update any of ur fics?? really! I'm so clueless!!! so please!!!

K anyway cool chapters!!!! idk why writers are always underestimating (sp?) their work! I loved both even if 2 wasn't that long! you are great with all these! and I love Cosmo!!! he really is the cherry on top of the ice cream!!!


o:) Andre o:)

:o :o **faints :o :o REALLY?! YOU WANT A PM NOTIFICATION??? **faints again** :o Wow, that was like, the third highest compliment anyone has ever given my fic. I SHALL DO THAT WITH UTMOST GLEE. ^_^

Thanks!! I'm actually proud of this fic, no underestimating shall go on here. =)
Thanks again!! WOOTYOURULE.

..::Excerpt of the day:: CINDY: And you’re telling us this because…?::..

[AnDrEa]

:o :o **faints :o :o REALLY?! YOU WANT A PM NOTIFICATION??? **faints again** :o Wow, that was like, the third highest compliment anyone has ever given my fic. I SHALL DO THAT WITH UTMOST GLEE. ^_^

Thanks!! I'm actually proud of this fic, no underestimating shall go on here. =)
Thanks again!! WOOTYOURULE.

lol I never imagined u would feel so flattered! oh and I rule? wow that was like the *counts with fingers* ... highest compliment anyone has given to me :P :D :rolleyes:

oh and u said I gave u an idea in page 2? well it was in my first reply to this fic and u asked in page 4? well anyway w/e lol a...sorry :P --blushes--


o:) Andre o:)

[sunnstar]

LOL!

Right, I remember what it was. =P

..::Excerpt of the day:: CINDY: And you’re telling us this because…?::..

[AnDrEa]

lol and I love that excerpt! Cindy rules!!!


o:) Andre o:)

[sunnstar]

LOL thanks! Yeah she does!

--tear-- I had to edit my siggy because it was so big... AND IT'S STILL BIG.

..::Excerpt of the day:: CINDY: And you’re telling us this because…?::..

[AnDrEa]

really!? but it wasn't up to 5000 characters or something like that?


o:) Andre o:)

[sunnstar]

Nope, it was a little over 1000. But it was too long and it annoyed me. ^_^

[AnDrEa]

lol I don't really care much about my siggy :P


o:) Andre o:)

[sunnstar]

XDLOL, obviously.

[AnDrEa]

=P



o:) Andre o:)

[sunnstar]

^^^^^^^^^^
Waste of a post. =)
SPAMMERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR.

[Beks]

hey sunny may I ask u a favor? could u send me a PM notification when u update any of ur fics??

o:) Andre o:)

hey, I'm setting a trend! B)

[sunnstar]

LOL yup! Erm... how?

Ohright. I remember now. GO BEKA!!!!!!!