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#81 Beks

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Posted 09 December 2007 - 08:09 PM

duh, sunny :rolleyes:
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Posted 09 December 2007 - 09:00 PM

Hi Sunny and Company!

Well, I'm catching up on my reading this quiet Sunday afternoon.
-I haven't been over here yet.

But Sunny, this is great! You capture the characters so well.
-Another Power Hour. Woot! Woot!
-Like some of the others, that did surprise me.
-Good to see Britney. (Brittnay) I love that Britney, you may recall. Thanks for giving her some character. She usually just says "like" and "oh my gosh!"
-Maybe Timmy will wish Cindy some earrings.
-I liked Cindy trying to flirt with oblivious Timmy.

One thing I especially wanted to mention.
Timmy: Man! Your conversations are even more pointless than mine!

Sunny! I fell on the floor laughing at that. :lol:
-Perfect! And absolutely Timmy.

Keep it going!
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#83 JimmySpaz

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Posted 09 December 2007 - 09:46 PM

*extremely late*

Everything's AMAZIN', Sun. You're a genius! LOLCosmo. Cheeeeese. < 3

I loved the ticket-seller selling tickets deal. Funnay stuff. That and the fact UltraLord is rated Stupid. XD That made me LOL.
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Posted 09 December 2007 - 11:15 PM

Hi Sunny and Company!

Well, I'm catching up on my reading this quiet Sunday afternoon.
-I haven't been over here yet.

But Sunny, this is great! You capture the characters so well.
-Another Power Hour. Woot! Woot!
-Like some of the others, that did surprise me.
-Good to see Britney. (Brittnay) I love that Britney, you may recall. Thanks for giving her some character. She usually just says "like" and "oh my gosh!"
-Maybe Timmy will wish Cindy some earrings.
-I liked Cindy trying to flirt with oblivious Timmy.

One thing I especially wanted to mention.
Timmy: Man! Your conversations are even more pointless than mine!

Sunny! I fell on the floor laughing at that.  :lol:
-Perfect! And absolutely Timmy.

Keep it going!
Snazzo
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Thanks, Snazzo! Wow, plenty of IC compliments on this fic. **throws IAMOLAD out the window**
LOL, I do recall. (What's Brittnay?) LOL you're welcome! Yeah, that got annoying in my first fic.
Nice idea! :D And LOL. Haha@Timmy!

XD Thanks!! And LOL, that gives me a quote of the day.

Thanks for replying!!

*extremely late*

Everything's AMAZIN', Sun. You're a genius! LOLCosmo. Cheeeeese. < 3

I loved the ticket-seller selling tickets deal. Funnay stuff. That and the fact UltraLord is rated Stupid. XD That made me LOL.


It's okay =)

Thanks! Cheese is DA BOMB. Oh wait, Cosmo likes corn, doesn't he? Ohwell.

LOL, thanks!!! Rated S LOL.

..::Excerpt of the day:: Timmy: Man! Your conversations are even more pointless than mine!::..
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Posted 09 December 2007 - 11:44 PM

Hi Sunny and Company!

Well, I'm catching up on my reading this quiet Sunday afternoon.
-I haven't been over here yet.

But Sunny, this is great! You capture the characters so well.
-Another Power Hour. Woot! Woot!
-Like some of the others, that did surprise me.
-Good to see Britney. (Brittnay) I love that Britney, you may recall. Thanks for giving her some character. She usually just says "like" and "oh my gosh!"
-Maybe Timmy will wish Cindy some earrings.
-I liked Cindy trying to flirt with oblivious Timmy.

One thing I especially wanted to mention.
Timmy: Man! Your conversations are even more pointless than mine!

Sunny! I fell on the floor laughing at that. :lol:
-Perfect! And absolutely Timmy.

Keep it going!
Snazzo
:huh:

*agrees with everything above* :)
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Posted 10 December 2007 - 12:04 AM

*agrees with everything above*  :)


XD Thanks!!

..::Excerpt of the day:: Timmy: Man! Your conversations are even more pointless than mine!::..
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Posted 13 December 2007 - 03:11 AM

Wow, I'm only on Chapter 4? LOL.

..::Chapter 4:: The Naked Mole Rat::..

**Two tall figures and one short one darkened the Neutrons’ doorstep at 4 PM Eastern Standard Time and rang the doorbell**

HUGH: (from inside) Hello? Who is it?

BOY: (clearly disguising his voice to make it sound high-pitched) Uhhh… room service!

BRUNETTE: Has anyone ever told you you look like a naked mole rat?

HUGH: (opening the door) I thought that was only in hotels—have I seen you before?

BOY: (nervously) No…

HUGH: Hmmm...for some reason you all look vaguely familiar and just a tad on the evil side...

**He stops to put on a pondering face**

HUGH: Nope! Probably just my imagination! Would you like some pie?

READHEAD: Sure I’d love some!

BRUNETTE: (knocking her in the ribs) No. Were here to see your son. Jimmy Neutron?

HUGH: He’s not home, but I can show you his room if you’d like!

READHEAD: (bluntly) Yes.

BRUNETTE: (whispering to the redhead) And by the way, I’m way prettier than you.

READHEAD: In your dreams!

**Hugh leads the three of them—whose faces, mysteriously, the camera is still not showing—up the stairs**

HUGH: Here it is!

BOY: (spotting Jimmy’s desk) Excellent.

BRUNETTE: (pointedly) Can we have some of that pie now?

HUGH: Sure! Would you like apple, cherry, blueberry, boysenberry—

READHEAD: (irritably) Surprise me.

HUGH: Okay!

**Once Hugh had merrily left the room, the three of them made their way over to Jimmy’s desk where the Hypno-Ray lay, fixed and fully functional**

BOY: Come on, let’s just take it and get out of here! Oh, and grab that too.

**The brunette snatched the Hypno-Ray and pulled the others downstairs and out the door**

HUGH: (returning) I hope it’s okay with you but I brought meringue—evil-looking villains? Where did you go?

**Back at the lair**

READHEAD: So what’s the plan?

BOY: We had a plan?

BRUNETTE: Obviously.

READHEAD: (in vague surprise) Really? What was it?

BOY: Beats me.

BRUNETTE: (scowling) Well I, unlike you, actually knew what I was doing.

BOY: (in relief) Oh, good.

BRUNETTE: (to the boy) You look like a mole rat.

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Posted 13 December 2007 - 03:17 AM

:lol: Way ta go, Sunnay! A chapter I actually haven't read, too! :thumbsup: (Although, I already MYSTERIOUSLY knew what was going to happen...Hmmm...wonder why... :lol: ) Great job!!!!!

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Posted 13 December 2007 - 03:20 AM

:lol: Way ta go, Sunnay! A chapter I actually haven't read, too!  :thumbsup: (Although, I already MYSTERIOUSLY knew what was going to happen...Hmmm...wonder why... :lol: ) Great job!!!!!

~Rach~


Thanks!! And LOL yeah. And LOL!!! Hahaha. Pie. XD
Thanks!
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Posted 13 December 2007 - 03:54 AM

Ahaha, classic Hugh, opening the door to nefarious villains only to serve them some pie. < 3
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Posted 13 December 2007 - 03:57 AM

Ahaha, classic Hugh, opening the door to nefarious villains only to serve them some pie. < 3


XD Hugh PWNS!
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Posted 13 December 2007 - 04:29 AM

:blink: HOW COULD I MISS ALL THESE CHAPTERS? BOO ME! WELL! TO MAKE UP FOR IT! I SHALL MAKE A SOMEWHAT LONG REPLY WHILE YELLING AT THE TOP OF MY LUNGS!

COSMO: Wish yourself into cheese so you can eat yourself?

OK WOW :blink: LOL!!!! PAINFUL!

COSMO: Fudge-head! Fudge-head! Fudge—


LOVED THIS CHAPTER! SO FUNNY!

COSMO: CHEESE RAY?


(Chuckles) CHEESE!

JIMMY: Actually, my Hypno-Ray.
TIMMY: Wow, fascinating!
**Cosmo nods**
WANDA: What is it?
TIMMY: Yeah, what?
JIMMY: It used to be called a Hypno-Beam, but I changed it because—
TIMMY: I’m bored. Let’s go!


LOL!!!!! BTW.. O_o WHY'D HE CAHNGE IT? :P AGAIN LOVE THE CHAPTER!!!

AND OF COURSE THE LATEST CHAPTER (Points to it) REALLY GOOD! (Thumbs up) WAY TO GO! KEEP IT UP!

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Posted 13 December 2007 - 04:31 AM

:blink:  HOW COULD I MISS ALL THESE CHAPTERS? BOO ME! WELL! TO MAKE UP FOR IT! I SHALL MAKE A SOMEWHAT LONG REPLY WHILE YELLING AT THE TOP OF MY LUNGS!

COSMO: Wish yourself into cheese so you can eat yourself?

OK WOW :blink: LOL!!!! PAINFUL!

COSMO: Fudge-head! Fudge-head! Fudge—


LOVED THIS CHAPTER! SO FUNNY!

COSMO: CHEESE RAY?


(Chuckles) CHEESE!

JIMMY: Actually, my Hypno-Ray.
TIMMY: Wow, fascinating!
**Cosmo nods**
WANDA: What is it?
TIMMY: Yeah, what?
JIMMY: It used to be called a Hypno-Beam, but I changed it because—
TIMMY: I’m bored. Let’s go!


LOL!!!!! BTW.. O_o WHY'D HE CAHNGE IT? :P AGAIN LOVE THE CHAPTER!!!

AND OF COURSE THE LATEST CHAPTER (Points to it) REALLY GOOD! (Thumbs up) WAY TO GO! KEEP IT UP!

(End of screaming reply)


Wow long reply. O_0

Thanks for everything! and LOL, he changed it cuz I like that name better. MWAHAHA.

Woot, thanks again!
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Posted 13 December 2007 - 04:47 AM

typical of writers! changing names just because they didn't like the other one! lol anyway super nice chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!etc! I loved it when Hugh came with the pie! it was awesome!!!!!!!



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Posted 13 December 2007 - 04:48 AM

typical of writers! changing names just because they didn't like the other one! lol anyway super nice chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!etc! I loved it when Hugh came with the pie! it was awesome!!!!!!!



o:)  Andre  o:)


LOL! Thanks! And LOL. Haha pie...
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Posted 13 December 2007 - 04:51 AM

:lol: (btw just posting a smilie is not spam if with that you express your most inner thoughts! u know what they say an image is worth more than 1000 words [just translated that from Spanish...sorry!]! so it is not spam point! (haha lol point instead of period! lol did u get it point inst-k forget it...)



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Posted 13 December 2007 - 04:52 AM

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LOL!! That was very thought out :lol:
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Posted 13 December 2007 - 04:57 AM

oh oh oh!!!! sunny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! go to overall top ten poster!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M IN!!!!!!! cool!!! that officially proves I don't have a life outside the computer!!!!!!! oh and Rachelinda only 40 or so more and u'll be in the top 5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Posted 13 December 2007 - 05:05 AM

AAAAAAAAAAAAAH congrats!! Only 10 more and then you'll be #9!
And LOL, 42 I think? I've been watching this closely. ;)
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Posted 13 December 2007 - 05:16 AM

yeah I know! I'm so exited! *high five* see why u can't leave! another reason! u are one step closer to achieve ur goal!!!! :P which is to rule IDOJ forums!!!!! maybe I shouldn't have said that outloud...



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