Mission, Save the World
#81
Posted 09 December 2007 - 08:09 PM
#82
Posted 09 December 2007 - 09:00 PM
Well, I'm catching up on my reading this quiet Sunday afternoon.
-I haven't been over here yet.
But Sunny, this is great! You capture the characters so well.
-Another Power Hour. Woot! Woot!
-Like some of the others, that did surprise me.
-Good to see Britney. (Brittnay) I love that Britney, you may recall. Thanks for giving her some character. She usually just says "like" and "oh my gosh!"
-Maybe Timmy will wish Cindy some earrings.
-I liked Cindy trying to flirt with oblivious Timmy.
One thing I especially wanted to mention.
Timmy: Man! Your conversations are even more pointless than mine!
Sunny! I fell on the floor laughing at that. :lol:
-Perfect! And absolutely Timmy.
Keep it going!
Snazzo
:huh:
#83
Posted 09 December 2007 - 09:46 PM
Everything's AMAZIN', Sun. You're a genius! LOLCosmo. Cheeeeese. < 3
I loved the ticket-seller selling tickets deal. Funnay stuff. That and the fact UltraLord is rated Stupid. XD That made me LOL.
#84
Posted 09 December 2007 - 11:15 PM
Hi Sunny and Company!
Well, I'm catching up on my reading this quiet Sunday afternoon.
-I haven't been over here yet.
But Sunny, this is great! You capture the characters so well.
-Another Power Hour. Woot! Woot!
-Like some of the others, that did surprise me.
-Good to see Britney. (Brittnay) I love that Britney, you may recall. Thanks for giving her some character. She usually just says "like" and "oh my gosh!"
-Maybe Timmy will wish Cindy some earrings.
-I liked Cindy trying to flirt with oblivious Timmy.
One thing I especially wanted to mention.
Timmy: Man! Your conversations are even more pointless than mine!
Sunny! I fell on the floor laughing at that. :lol:
-Perfect! And absolutely Timmy.
Keep it going!
Snazzo
:huh:
Thanks, Snazzo! Wow, plenty of IC compliments on this fic. **throws IAMOLAD out the window**
LOL, I do recall. (What's Brittnay?) LOL you're welcome! Yeah, that got annoying in my first fic.
Nice idea! :D And LOL. Haha@Timmy!
XD Thanks!! And LOL, that gives me a quote of the day.
Thanks for replying!!
*extremely late*
Everything's AMAZIN', Sun. You're a genius! LOLCosmo. Cheeeeese. < 3
I loved the ticket-seller selling tickets deal. Funnay stuff. That and the fact UltraLord is rated Stupid. XD That made me LOL.
It's okay =)
Thanks! Cheese is DA BOMB. Oh wait, Cosmo likes corn, doesn't he? Ohwell.
LOL, thanks!!! Rated S LOL.
..::Excerpt of the day:: Timmy: Man! Your conversations are even more pointless than mine!::..
#85
Posted 09 December 2007 - 11:44 PM
*agrees with everything above* :)Hi Sunny and Company!
Well, I'm catching up on my reading this quiet Sunday afternoon.
-I haven't been over here yet.
But Sunny, this is great! You capture the characters so well.
-Another Power Hour. Woot! Woot!
-Like some of the others, that did surprise me.
-Good to see Britney. (Brittnay) I love that Britney, you may recall. Thanks for giving her some character. She usually just says "like" and "oh my gosh!"
-Maybe Timmy will wish Cindy some earrings.
-I liked Cindy trying to flirt with oblivious Timmy.
One thing I especially wanted to mention.
Timmy: Man! Your conversations are even more pointless than mine!
Sunny! I fell on the floor laughing at that. :lol:
-Perfect! And absolutely Timmy.
Keep it going!
Snazzo
:huh:
#86
Posted 10 December 2007 - 12:04 AM
*agrees with everything above* :)
XD Thanks!!
..::Excerpt of the day:: Timmy: Man! Your conversations are even more pointless than mine!::..
#87
Posted 13 December 2007 - 03:11 AM
..::Chapter 4:: The Naked Mole Rat::..
**Two tall figures and one short one darkened the Neutrons’ doorstep at 4 PM Eastern Standard Time and rang the doorbell**
HUGH: (from inside) Hello? Who is it?
BOY: (clearly disguising his voice to make it sound high-pitched) Uhhh… room service!
BRUNETTE: Has anyone ever told you you look like a naked mole rat?
HUGH: (opening the door) I thought that was only in hotels—have I seen you before?
BOY: (nervously) No…
HUGH: Hmmm...for some reason you all look vaguely familiar and just a tad on the evil side...
**He stops to put on a pondering face**
HUGH: Nope! Probably just my imagination! Would you like some pie?
READHEAD: Sure I’d love some!
BRUNETTE: (knocking her in the ribs) No. Were here to see your son. Jimmy Neutron?
HUGH: He’s not home, but I can show you his room if you’d like!
READHEAD: (bluntly) Yes.
BRUNETTE: (whispering to the redhead) And by the way, I’m way prettier than you.
READHEAD: In your dreams!
**Hugh leads the three of them—whose faces, mysteriously, the camera is still not showing—up the stairs**
HUGH: Here it is!
BOY: (spotting Jimmy’s desk) Excellent.
BRUNETTE: (pointedly) Can we have some of that pie now?
HUGH: Sure! Would you like apple, cherry, blueberry, boysenberry—
READHEAD: (irritably) Surprise me.
HUGH: Okay!
**Once Hugh had merrily left the room, the three of them made their way over to Jimmy’s desk where the Hypno-Ray lay, fixed and fully functional**
BOY: Come on, let’s just take it and get out of here! Oh, and grab that too.
**The brunette snatched the Hypno-Ray and pulled the others downstairs and out the door**
HUGH: (returning) I hope it’s okay with you but I brought meringue—evil-looking villains? Where did you go?
**Back at the lair**
READHEAD: So what’s the plan?
BOY: We had a plan?
BRUNETTE: Obviously.
READHEAD: (in vague surprise) Really? What was it?
BOY: Beats me.
BRUNETTE: (scowling) Well I, unlike you, actually knew what I was doing.
BOY: (in relief) Oh, good.
BRUNETTE: (to the boy) You look like a mole rat.
#88
Posted 13 December 2007 - 03:17 AM
~Rach~
#89
Posted 13 December 2007 - 03:20 AM
:lol: Way ta go, Sunnay! A chapter I actually haven't read, too! :thumbsup: (Although, I already MYSTERIOUSLY knew what was going to happen...Hmmm...wonder why... :lol: ) Great job!!!!!
~Rach~
Thanks!! And LOL yeah. And LOL!!! Hahaha. Pie. XD
Thanks!
#90
Posted 13 December 2007 - 03:54 AM
#91
Posted 13 December 2007 - 03:57 AM
Ahaha, classic Hugh, opening the door to nefarious villains only to serve them some pie. < 3
XD Hugh PWNS!
#92
Posted 13 December 2007 - 04:29 AM
OK WOW :blink: LOL!!!! PAINFUL!COSMO: Wish yourself into cheese so you can eat yourself?
COSMO: Fudge-head! Fudge-head! Fudge—
LOVED THIS CHAPTER! SO FUNNY!
COSMO: CHEESE RAY?
(Chuckles) CHEESE!
JIMMY: Actually, my Hypno-Ray.
TIMMY: Wow, fascinating!
**Cosmo nods**
WANDA: What is it?
TIMMY: Yeah, what?
JIMMY: It used to be called a Hypno-Beam, but I changed it because—
TIMMY: I’m bored. Let’s go!
LOL!!!!! BTW.. O_o WHY'D HE CAHNGE IT? :P AGAIN LOVE THE CHAPTER!!!
AND OF COURSE THE LATEST CHAPTER (Points to it) REALLY GOOD! (Thumbs up) WAY TO GO! KEEP IT UP!
(End of screaming reply)
#93
Posted 13 December 2007 - 04:31 AM
:blink: HOW COULD I MISS ALL THESE CHAPTERS? BOO ME! WELL! TO MAKE UP FOR IT! I SHALL MAKE A SOMEWHAT LONG REPLY WHILE YELLING AT THE TOP OF MY LUNGS!
OK WOW :blink: LOL!!!! PAINFUL!COSMO: Wish yourself into cheese so you can eat yourself?
COSMO: Fudge-head! Fudge-head! Fudge—
LOVED THIS CHAPTER! SO FUNNY!COSMO: CHEESE RAY?
(Chuckles) CHEESE!JIMMY: Actually, my Hypno-Ray.
TIMMY: Wow, fascinating!
**Cosmo nods**
WANDA: What is it?
TIMMY: Yeah, what?
JIMMY: It used to be called a Hypno-Beam, but I changed it because—
TIMMY: I’m bored. Let’s go!
LOL!!!!! BTW.. O_o WHY'D HE CAHNGE IT? :P AGAIN LOVE THE CHAPTER!!!
AND OF COURSE THE LATEST CHAPTER (Points to it) REALLY GOOD! (Thumbs up) WAY TO GO! KEEP IT UP!
(End of screaming reply)
Wow long reply. O_0
Thanks for everything! and LOL, he changed it cuz I like that name better. MWAHAHA.
Woot, thanks again!
#94
Posted 13 December 2007 - 04:47 AM
o:) Andre o:)
#95
Posted 13 December 2007 - 04:48 AM
typical of writers! changing names just because they didn't like the other one! lol anyway super nice chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!etc! I loved it when Hugh came with the pie! it was awesome!!!!!!!
o:) Andre o:)
LOL! Thanks! And LOL. Haha pie...
#96
Posted 13 December 2007 - 04:51 AM
o:) Andre o:)
#97
Posted 13 December 2007 - 04:52 AM
LOL!! That was very thought out :lol:
#98
Posted 13 December 2007 - 04:57 AM
o:) Andre o:)
#99
Posted 13 December 2007 - 05:05 AM
And LOL, 42 I think? I've been watching this closely. ;)
#100
Posted 13 December 2007 - 05:16 AM
o:) Andre o:)
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