cool chapter!!!! I loved it! super funny!!
I'll be waititng for next chapter!
o:) Andre o:)
Mission, Save the World
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Posted 04 February 2008 - 06:22 PM
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Posted 09 February 2008 - 12:58 AM
Aww, even Rach didn't reply? =(
Sorry it's short. ;X
..::Chapter 13:: One of Those TV-Like Chapters::..
**Jimmy/Timmy Power Hour 4: Mission, Save the World returns from a commercial to find Jimmy staring at the wall where the button was**
JIMMY: You… you missed!
CINDY: Gee Neutron, you think I don’t know that? It’s not my fault I can only move my wrist more than three inches!
JIMMY: Okay… we must have just taken off. Rocket ships can’t attain a constant speed until they’re approximately a hundred thousand feet in the air… that won’t take longer than forty-five seconds… Cindy, can you get it this time with your other hand?
**In another room, Beautiful Gorgeous, Eustace, and Vicky were relaxing in their evil planning room, leaning back on their chairs with their feet on the table. Suddenly, Beautiful Gorgeous cocked her head—**
BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: Do you hear something?
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CINDY: I—I guess, but I’d have to use my left hand—
JIMMY: Try!
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EUSTACE: Is there any particular reason we left our prisoners alone in the room with the escape button?
VICKY and BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: Come on!
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**Cindy pulls out her other earring and aims carefully and the button that now seems miles away**
JIMMY: Come on, come on…
**She threw the earring square at the target just before the villains entered the room. In slow motion, Beautiful Gorgeous jumped to stand in its way and at the same time, there was a great deal of pink smoke and the mayors of Retroville and Dimmsdale magically appeared**
MAYOR QUADAR: Hey… you got some onion rings in this place?
EUSTACE: Stop the girl!!
MAYOR OF DIMMSDALE: Or some peanut butter in your pocket?
**While the villains were distracted, Cindy took advantage of the moment to throw her earring at the button. The three villains screamed as it hit the target and the handcuffs broke open. Just as the rocket ship was gaining speed, a trapdoor opened beneath Jimmy and Cindy, who fell through it and, in slow motion, landed on a huge mattress**
TIMMY: **nervously** Betcha wanna thank me, huh?
Sorry it's short. ;X
..::Chapter 13:: One of Those TV-Like Chapters::..
**Jimmy/Timmy Power Hour 4: Mission, Save the World returns from a commercial to find Jimmy staring at the wall where the button was**
JIMMY: You… you missed!
CINDY: Gee Neutron, you think I don’t know that? It’s not my fault I can only move my wrist more than three inches!
JIMMY: Okay… we must have just taken off. Rocket ships can’t attain a constant speed until they’re approximately a hundred thousand feet in the air… that won’t take longer than forty-five seconds… Cindy, can you get it this time with your other hand?
**In another room, Beautiful Gorgeous, Eustace, and Vicky were relaxing in their evil planning room, leaning back on their chairs with their feet on the table. Suddenly, Beautiful Gorgeous cocked her head—**
BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: Do you hear something?
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CINDY: I—I guess, but I’d have to use my left hand—
JIMMY: Try!
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EUSTACE: Is there any particular reason we left our prisoners alone in the room with the escape button?
VICKY and BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: Come on!
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**Cindy pulls out her other earring and aims carefully and the button that now seems miles away**
JIMMY: Come on, come on…
**She threw the earring square at the target just before the villains entered the room. In slow motion, Beautiful Gorgeous jumped to stand in its way and at the same time, there was a great deal of pink smoke and the mayors of Retroville and Dimmsdale magically appeared**
MAYOR QUADAR: Hey… you got some onion rings in this place?
EUSTACE: Stop the girl!!
MAYOR OF DIMMSDALE: Or some peanut butter in your pocket?
**While the villains were distracted, Cindy took advantage of the moment to throw her earring at the button. The three villains screamed as it hit the target and the handcuffs broke open. Just as the rocket ship was gaining speed, a trapdoor opened beneath Jimmy and Cindy, who fell through it and, in slow motion, landed on a huge mattress**
TIMMY: **nervously** Betcha wanna thank me, huh?
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Posted 09 February 2008 - 11:09 PM
Aw, man, I feel so bad, Sunny! :( I'm so sorry I missed the last chapter. Let's just say life got me...sidetracked. Eh, but I'm still here! And I got TWO chapters! ^_^
They were both awesome!!! I LOVE the way you threw in the suspense but still kept it humorous. And--and--and....
EEEEEEEEEEK! DONUT CRIMES!!!!!!!!!!! MOI BELOVED CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!
LOL.
I just had to spaz out a sec. I'm OK now. :P
Keep it up, Sunnzers! This fic rox my sox and all that jazz. XD
~Rach~
They were both awesome!!! I LOVE the way you threw in the suspense but still kept it humorous. And--and--and....
EEEEEEEEEEK! DONUT CRIMES!!!!!!!!!!! MOI BELOVED CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!
LOL.
I just had to spaz out a sec. I'm OK now. :P
Keep it up, Sunnzers! This fic rox my sox and all that jazz. XD
~Rach~
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Posted 29 February 2008 - 03:26 AM
Thanks Rach!! LOL, I wanted that to be Chapter 15, but there isn't even a Chapter 15. Sigh. [LOL.] Post 3100!!
..::Chapter 14:: It’s Vicky!::..
CINDY: (shrieking) Thank you?! I could kill you!! You left us there with no means of escape—
JIMMY: It would’ve taken no effort to get us out with you—
CINDY: But instead of wishing us out, you devised some stupid scheme that was a split-second of getting us sent to some other planet!!
TIMMY: (after a small pause) How many S’s do you think were in that sentence?
**Cindy jumps to attack him but Jimmy barely holds her back**
TIMMY: Look, I’m sorry, you know my brain is freakishly small!
JIMMY: You can say that again.
COSMO: You know his brain is freakishly small!
TIMMY: But before one of you kills me, can we please get our dimensions back to normal! Either that or I need to go on Weight Watchers fast, this bulginess is killing me.
JIMMY: Be my guest, I can’t restrain her any longer!
TIMMY: I wish everyone was in their normal dimension and nothing like this ever happened again!
**The entire universe was sucked into a giant black hole, which incidentally isn’t even black, more like a random blend of every color that looks black if you squint your right eye, and every dimension was spit back out, hanging in the middle of space. The people all floated back to their homes and the inter-dimension portals started to close**
TIMMY: Nice working with you, Neutron.
JIMMY: Same with you, Turner. Although next time do try to save the hostages before takeoff.
CINDY: (with a sigh) Boys.
**The three of them shook hands and left to their rightful dimensions just as the three villains flew past the camera**
BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: We were this close, Eustace. This close!
EUSTACE: You know it was all your fault, don’t you? You were the one that got distracted by those mayors.
BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: Me?! I can’t believe you could think for a minute that—
VICKY: What does it matter?! We still lost anyway!
BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: That was negative.
VICKY: (sarcastically) Bye, Beautiful Gorgeous. How I will miss your joyful sarcasm.
BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: Bye Victor—remember, I’m still prettier than you!
VICKY: It’s VICKY! And in your dreams!
EUSTACE: (muttering) Girls!
**They all got through to their dimensions and every portal closed; the screen went black for a minute and then Professor Calamitous popped up from behind bars**
PROFESSOR CALAMITOUS: Hellooooooooooo?
THE END
Well guys, this is the last of me. Byeeeeeeee everyone!! Bye!!! :bff:
..::Chapter 14:: It’s Vicky!::..
CINDY: (shrieking) Thank you?! I could kill you!! You left us there with no means of escape—
JIMMY: It would’ve taken no effort to get us out with you—
CINDY: But instead of wishing us out, you devised some stupid scheme that was a split-second of getting us sent to some other planet!!
TIMMY: (after a small pause) How many S’s do you think were in that sentence?
**Cindy jumps to attack him but Jimmy barely holds her back**
TIMMY: Look, I’m sorry, you know my brain is freakishly small!
JIMMY: You can say that again.
COSMO: You know his brain is freakishly small!
TIMMY: But before one of you kills me, can we please get our dimensions back to normal! Either that or I need to go on Weight Watchers fast, this bulginess is killing me.
JIMMY: Be my guest, I can’t restrain her any longer!
TIMMY: I wish everyone was in their normal dimension and nothing like this ever happened again!
**The entire universe was sucked into a giant black hole, which incidentally isn’t even black, more like a random blend of every color that looks black if you squint your right eye, and every dimension was spit back out, hanging in the middle of space. The people all floated back to their homes and the inter-dimension portals started to close**
TIMMY: Nice working with you, Neutron.
JIMMY: Same with you, Turner. Although next time do try to save the hostages before takeoff.
CINDY: (with a sigh) Boys.
**The three of them shook hands and left to their rightful dimensions just as the three villains flew past the camera**
BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: We were this close, Eustace. This close!
EUSTACE: You know it was all your fault, don’t you? You were the one that got distracted by those mayors.
BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: Me?! I can’t believe you could think for a minute that—
VICKY: What does it matter?! We still lost anyway!
BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: That was negative.
VICKY: (sarcastically) Bye, Beautiful Gorgeous. How I will miss your joyful sarcasm.
BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: Bye Victor—remember, I’m still prettier than you!
VICKY: It’s VICKY! And in your dreams!
EUSTACE: (muttering) Girls!
**They all got through to their dimensions and every portal closed; the screen went black for a minute and then Professor Calamitous popped up from behind bars**
PROFESSOR CALAMITOUS: Hellooooooooooo?
THE END
Well guys, this is the last of me. Byeeeeeeee everyone!! Bye!!! :bff:
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Posted 09 March 2008 - 09:35 PM
Well, not sure if you'll be reading this, Sunny, but I must applaud a lovely ending to a lovely fic.
*applauds*
That was awesome!
*bows to Sunny's awesomeness*
And...goodbye, Sun...
~Rachel~
*applauds*
That was awesome!
*bows to Sunny's awesomeness*
And...goodbye, Sun...
~Rachel~
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Posted 01 April 2008 - 01:55 AM
Bye dear Sunny! You'll be sorely missed.
:'( :'( :'( :'(
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Posted 01 April 2008 - 02:11 AM
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa(great end to a great story)aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! :'( :'( :'(
bye, Sunny!
bye, Sunny!
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I'D forgive you, FJ... <3<3
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Posted 06 April 2009 - 09:40 PM
Ha, you're NOT gone for good, cuz you've replied to other topics for several weeks to months now!! And I saw my previous post here, and, yay! I'm not a n00b anymore!!!!! 'Twas great, and I hope you write another fantastic fic soon!!!!!! :bff:
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