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[sunnstar]

Wow, did I really confuse Eustace with Calamitous? :lol:' WHOOPS.

Yeahsure, he shaved his head. ;)

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I think what happened was you got so into your story and carried away you decided to make some sort of twist, and instead of having your main character be Calamitous you went for EUSTACE. But that's okay. Plot twists are nice. :thumbsup: :bunny:

[sunnstar]

LOLZ. No--well, actually, when I wrote the Prologue/Chapter 1 right before posting the Fanfic Voting Topic! on Nick.com, and it was gunna be Calamitous. But when I redid it I had Eustace from the beginning (or at least once I posted the first chapter). So LOL. Ten points to Krista to fixing my mistake. XD

[sunnstar]

Wheeee, have fun! REPLYPLZ.

..::Chapter 6:: A Lost Shoe::..

**The entire audience gasped in shock**

BRUNETTE: And me! Beautiful Gorgeous Calamitous! Although I really prefer not to be addressed by my last name…

MYSTERIOUS READHEAD: And me too! I’m Vicky! Or as Chip Skylark calls me, Icky—with a V.

REPORTER: And what’s your last name?

VICKY: Uh, in my dimension it’s kind of a tradition for most people not to let anyone else know your last name, so…

BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: (to the other villains) Just to be clear, I get to rule the dimension that makes me look skinny.

EUSTACE: Oho, and what dimension is that?

VICKY: Oooh, diss!

BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: (rolling her eyes) That was not a diss. Jeez, you sound like my insane father.

RANDOM WOMAN: And what are you going to do with Mayor Quadar now?

EUSTACE: (whispering to Beautiful Gorgeous) Yeah, what are we going to do now?

BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: (grabbing the microphone and the Hypno-Ray) I’ll tell you what we’re going to do. Mayor Quadar, you are officially a villain!

JIMMY: (whispering) Oh no!

TIMMY: I know! VICKY’S here! Could this get any worse?

MAYOR QUADAR: (a vacant, hypnotized expression filling his face) Hey! Hey balloon vendor over there! I want a balloon NOW, foo’, and I’m not going to pay!

BALLOON VENDOR: But these are free balloons! I give them away at every public announcement.

MAYOR QUADAR: Stop stuttering, punk, and HAND IT OVER.

**The balloon vendor (which is really an inaccurate title because he’s not vending anything) picked a pink balloon out of the cluster and gave it to the ex-mayor with a bewildered expression**

MAYOR QUADAR: (hugging the balloon while squealing girlishly) Ooh, pink, my favorite!

TIMMY: Well he’s a manly mayor.

CARL: And a great criminal!

MAYOR QUADAR: You there, in the blue! I want that hot dog!

KID: (covering his hot dog) No!

MAYOR QUADAR: Aww, please?

KID: No! It’s my hot dog, get your own!

MAYOR QUADAR: (scanning the crowd) Hey hot dog seller! How much for a hot dog?

BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: Now come on, Eustace, Victor.

VICKY: It’s VICKY!

BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: But I’m still prettier than you.

EUSTACE: Come on, you two! Let’s just go back the way she came and do more villainous things!

**To Jimmy and Timmy’s horror, Vicky pulled something that looked terribly like an inter-dimensional portal in a plastic baggie out of her pocket. Sheen and Carl, of course, were staring obliviously off into space**

TIMMY: (whispering to Jimmy) What are we supposed to do?

**While the half crowd are looking surprised and half the crowd are buying food, Jimmy and Timmy are trying to devise a plan while Sheen and Carl are slathering various condiments onto their hot dogs**

JIMMY: Guys, come on! The portal’s closing!

CARL: Can I keep my hot dog?

JIMMY: NO! Now hurry, or we’re gunna have to go back to the lab and reopen the portal ourselves!

SHEEN: Fine, but I’m keepin’ the hot dog!

**The four of them ran towards the purple closing portal. Jimmy, Timmy, and Sheen managed to dive through before it disappeared, but it closed around Carl’s ankle in mid-jump. His shoe was floating in midair for a few seconds until Sheen finally pulled him through. Carl’s loafer fell to the ground and the swirling portal sealed itself and disappeared with a pop**

Big PROPZ to everyone that guessed!! :thumbsup:

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Great chapter!! I liked to readz it. 8D A LOST SHOE rawharhar that's cute.

OH YAY TEN POINTS LEMME EAT NAO nomnomnomnom. :B

[sunnstar]

Great chapter!! I liked to readz it. 8D A LOST SHOE rawharhar that's cute.

OH YAY TEN POINTS LEMME EAT NAO nomnomnomnom. :B

Thanks!! LOLthanks.

Are point tasty? In that case I give myself fifty points. **gains 10 pounds**

ROFLx10 AT YOUR SIGGY... At first I thought it was a fart and then I realized Santa's pants were down XDD

Great chapter, Sunnstar.

Lol, carl lost his shoe.

Keep up the good work, and Happy Holidays to you!

Gretchen


P.S. Around Christmas, I usually go away from the computer for awhile, so I won't be able to read your story for awhile:(

But I'll be back in 2008.
So happy new year to you too!
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I finally have an avatar yay!

Thanks!! You too!!

Awwww. But yay avvies!

[CraazyOne]

:blink: How did I miss this?

Anyways, awesome chapter! Now I finally get to read what happened before the gang jumped through the portal and Carl lost his shoe! :lol: I just love Mayor Quadar's "villainy"... Hilarious! I eagerly await his other acts... *seals lips* Hehehe...

Keep up the great work and update again soon! :D

~Rach~

[.:!Gwen!:.]

omghotdogftw. XD

Btw, it's Mayer Quasar.

Like the Johnny Quasar character was promoted or something. Idk.

Anyway, GREAT JOB RACH. :thumbsup:





.:!Gwen!:.

[sunnstar]

:blink: How did I miss this?

Anyways, awesome chapter! Now I finally get to read what happened before the gang jumped through the portal and Carl lost his shoe!  :lol: I just love Mayor Quadar's "villainy"... Hilarious! I eagerly await his other acts... *seals lips* Hehehe...

Keep up the great work and update again soon!  :D

~Rach~

LOLidk XD

Thanks!! And LOL. Haha thanks!! XDDDDD

Thanks again!

omghotdogftw. XD

Btw, it's Mayer Quasar.

Like the Johnny Quasar character was promoted or something. Idk.

Anyway, GREAT JOB RACH.  :thumbsup:





.:!Gwen!:.

LOLXD.

Oh suuuuuuuuure it is.

Thanks!

[.:!Gwen!:.]

LOLXD.

Oh suuuuuuuuure it is.

Well, I can assure you it isn't this Quadar thing you insist on. That sounds like a type of bird. :3







.:!Gwen!:.

[sunnstar]

Wow, you're right.

TV.COM LIED TO ME!!

[CraazyOne]

Haha. Quadar, Quasar. What's the difference? :P

TV.com? But then, the internet isn't always your most reliable source of info, is it? :lol: Sad, considering certain of us (*points to self*) rely heavily on it for school reports.

At least Gwen caught that mistake. You know I never would have... :lol: :D

~Rach~

[AnDrEa]

oh lol! awesome chapter sunny!!!! really good! sorry I can't post more but I'm getting kicked out of the comp!

and rachy! I love ur status!


o:) Andre o:)

[sunnstar]

..::Chapter 7:: Free Samples::..

**The camera finds Timmy, looking happy in his home dimension, while Cosmo and Wanda are in their fishbowl; Jimmy, panicked pink in the face from running; Sheen, messily eating his hot dog; and Carl, running jogging around with his shoe mysteriously redrawn on his foot. The four of them find Eustace, Beautiful Gorgeous, and Vicky, hovering nearby a mayor on a similar platform with tons of cameramen**

DIMMSDALE MAYOR: Good afternoon, everyone… citizens of Dimmsdale… crazy mob-formers… Timmy Turner’s dad…

TIMMY’S DAD: Hi, cameramen that are filming everything here, even, say, if the mayor happened to turn evil!

TIMMY: (smacking his head) Well this cannot be good.

DIMMSDALE MAYOR: Hello, people and occasional dogs! As you know—or you might not know but happen to be here out of boredom or a lack of social life—today is the day where I get to ‘crown’ the new mayor. And since, of course, I was the only one running, I’m sure we’re all very nervous to see who won. Chompy, may I have the envelope?

**Chompy the goat makes a muffled goat noise and waits for the mayor to release the polka dotted envelope from his teeth**

DIMMSDALE MAYOR: (opening the envelope) Thank you, Chompy. And the new mayor is—

**Vicky points the Hypno-Ray at the mayor and his face snaps into obedience**

DIMMSDALE MAYOR: Vicky!

**The audience screams**

RANDOM OLD GUY WITH A HEARING AID: What’d he say?!

VICKY: (running to assume the microphone) CITIZENS OF DIMMSDALE. As your new official ruler, I hope you all know that I’m going to make very bad things happen. VERY BAD THINGS.

**The audience begins to run in circles, shrieking loudly, except for the random old man who is just standing there, dumbfounded**

BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: (indignantly) Hey!

EUSTACE: What about us?

VICKY: What about you?

EUSTACE: Well, we let you be co-rulers of our dimension. Why can’t we rule here too?

VICKY: No one said you couldn’t!

BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: Ooooh.

EUSTACE: Awww! Group hug!

BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: (backing away, looking grossed out) Ew. Villains don’t do that.

VICKY: I was just announcing myself as the main ruler because everyone around here knows and fears me.

**Cue a five-second clip of Chip Skylark singing “Hey Vicky, you’re so, so icky, just the thought of being around you makes me so, so sicky”**

BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: I see your point.

VICKY: And for my first act, I now declare the mayor—whose last name I’ve never found out—AN OFFICIAL VILLAIN. Mayor—do villainy things!

DIMMSDALE MAYOR: (in a flat monotone) I went to the store yesterday, and they were selling chocolates, and I didn’t pay for my free sample.

TIMMY’S DAD: Egad! You are a villain!

DIMMSDALE MAYOR: (turning robotically to face him) Duh.

[CraazyOne]

YAYYZZ!

That chapter was funny, as usual. Helped cheer me up when I felt purdy depressed... :unsure:

Keep up the awesome work, Sunnster! :D

~Rach~

[AnDrEa]

I still feel depressed but let me tell ya this chapter was great! very, very funny! I loved the random old man! he made the trick! definetely! it really looks as a real eppie! u are really talented! Keep up amiga!!! u do it best!
en serio! un capítulo fascinante!



o:) Andrea Drea o:)

[Beks]

:lol: :D ^_^ hahaha! This is great!

[sunnstar]

..::Chapter 8:: The Pitchfork::..

**After a few seconds, the crowd started to panic**

TIMMY: Citizens of Dimmsdale! Calm yourselves! It’s not like something bad has never happened to us before—remember the flying meteor? Remember when Chompy got goat-napped? Remember the president being attacked by an evil bug—okay you can panic again.

**While some people start to scream, Timmy flicks the switch on the microphone to turn it off. Little does he know that all he did was turn on the echo and that the mic was still on**

TIMMY: Wow, Jimmy. It's ironic, but this is all your fault. I mean, if you hadn't happened to have left the Hypno-Ray in your room, unprotected, instead of in your lab where there's security impossible to get through... we wouldn't be in this mess, now would we?

RANDOM GUY WITH PITCHFORK: GET HIM!

CINDY: Whoa, whoa, guys! Don't go chasing them just because Neutron made one simple mistake! HE didn't know there were villains loose in town.

JIMMY: Cindy? Where'd you come from?

CINDY: ...I don't know. I was in my room, admiring my pierced ears, and all of a sudden I got sucked through my closet and landed in a big comfy chair and this guy, Commander Baking sent me here through some purple archway...

RANDOM GUY WITH PITCHFORK: GET HER TOO!

JIMMY: (yelling to the mob) Wait, wait, wait!! Okay, Vortex, you said Commander Baker sent you here—did he tell you a reason or—you got your ears pierced?

CINDY: (giggling) Yeah, a couple of days ago. Do you like them?

JIMMY: (breathlessly) Yeah, they look—so why did Commander send you here?

RANDOM GUY WITH PITCHFORK: They’re getting away!

TIMMY: Dude, we haven’t moved yet.

RANDOM GUY WITH PITCHFORK: GET THEM!

TIMMY: But this would be a great time to start!

**The five of them started running offstage and down the walkway before they realized that the portal had long since disappeared and that they had no way out**

TIMMY: Cosmo! Wanda!

COSMO: (poofing out of nowhere) You rang?

TIMMY: I wish we had a portal!

**Cosmo waved his wand and an old man appeared**

TIMMY: I said portal, not mortal!

COSMO: Oh—right.

**The all-too-familiar purple swirling portal popped into existence in front of them**

JIMMY: Quick, guys, through here!

CARL: Oh no, not again!

SHEEN: And Carl, keep your shoe on this time.

CARL: (meekly) ‘Kay.

**They dived through the portal and the angry mob stopped and stared at the spot where they’d disappeared**

RANDOM GUY WITH FLAMING TORCH: They went through that purple blob! Hurry, after them!

TIMMY: (from Retroville, but still audible in Dimmsdale) I wish the portal was closed!

**The portal popped closed and the many people that in were mid-air fell to the ground**

RANDOM GUY WITH NO LONGER FLAMING TORCH: …Ow!…

[Beks]

haha! :lol: great!