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#161 Chica_Andromeda

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Posted 02 November 2007 - 03:23 AM

You put up a new chapter?

WHERE have I been??!?!?!

Anyway, back on topic! That was great, April! :thumbsup: I actually thought it was GREAT!

But I have a question, was Sheen and Carl going to be the distractions (I don't know if I spelled that right...) in Future Cindy's plan? And why did she just suddenly go along with it? And why didn't Cindy want to hear her OWN plan (future self's)?

Wow, I sound like a complain-y, rude person! That was great! Really funny! I can't wait for more!!!

...evil writers block. :mad:

LOL

Hmm...I never really fully thought of what Future Cindy's plan was (Evil. Writer's. Block.), but Seen and Carl weren't going to be distractions in her plan. As for why she went along with it...I'd say that she liked it more than her own plan. And the reason Cindy didn't want to hear her future self's plan that much was because she didn't think it sounded all that good.

Hope that was a good answer for you! ^_^ And thanks!! I'm gonna TRY to get the next chapter as SOON as I can. :)
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#162 Mara=^.^=

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Posted 02 November 2007 - 05:14 AM

Aww, this fanfic is absurdly cute. I loved reading it so far.

Only Cindy should have gone to Brown, not Princeton. Princeton is evil > . <

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Posted 02 November 2007 - 06:07 AM

*Reads whole thing*

WOW! Good job!!!!
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Posted 02 November 2007 - 09:02 PM

Aww, this fanfic is absurdly cute. I loved reading it so far.

Only Cindy should have gone to Brown, not Princeton. Princeton is evil > . <

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

Ahhh, so it was Mara that Chica was so excited about replying. =D

Why ish Princeton evil?
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#165 Chica_Andromeda

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Posted 03 November 2007 - 01:24 AM

Aww, this fanfic is absurdly cute. I loved reading it so far.

Only Cindy should have gone to Brown, not Princeton. Princeton is evil > . <

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

Mara: OMG, Mara replied to my fic? Excuse me while I faint. *faints*

Thank you SO much!! ^_^ I'm REALLY glad that you liked it! :dance:

And LOL.

*Reads whole thing*

WOW! Good job!!!!


Alex: LOL, thanks! ^_^
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#166 CraazyOne

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Posted 03 November 2007 - 03:11 AM

Hey, Chica! It's so great to actually be able to READ your fic! I mean, it should NEVER have been deleted on Nick. It rocks! :music:

And Sunnstar is right...it does remind one of Mara's fic...Hmmm.... (And, yeah, take that as a compliment! :D )

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#167 Chica_Andromeda

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Posted 03 November 2007 - 03:24 AM

Hey, Chica! It's so great to actually be able to READ your fic! I mean, it should NEVER have been deleted on Nick. It rocks! :music:

And Sunnstar is right...it does remind one of Mara's fic...Hmmm.... (And, yeah, take that as a compliment! :D )

~Rach~

Ahhh, hiya Rach!! :dance:

Thanks!! I'm glad you finally got to read the newer chapters! Yeah, I'm still pretty upset about that...ah well, I guess.

LOL, I still don't see what everyone means (but of course I miss the obvious alot). I guess it adds to my Mini-Mara reputation I've got goin' on. :lol: There's all these coincidences between us. :P

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it! I'm hoping to finish up the next chapter (which I'm hoping will detail the plan more) up soon. ^_^
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Posted 03 November 2007 - 06:29 AM

Why ish Princeton evil?

Because my arch rival is going there... :lol:

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Posted 03 November 2007 - 03:46 PM

Because my arch rival is going there... :lol:

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I just realized how many JN fans have arch rivals. :unsure:

That's scary...and COOL! :lol:
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Posted 05 November 2007 - 03:59 PM

Because my arch rival is going there... :lol:

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

I just realized how many JN fans have arch rivals. :unsure:

That's scary...and COOL! :lol:

Haha, am I the only JN fan that DOESN'T have an arch rival then? :lol:

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Posted 05 November 2007 - 11:58 PM

I don't have one! :dance:
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Posted 06 November 2007 - 02:39 AM

I used to.

...but I soon realized he wasn't my rival, just some jerk. <_< :mad:
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Posted 12 November 2007 - 12:55 AM

Hi Chica and Company!

Well I finally got over here to read some fanfics I was shamefully neglecting.
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Cool new chapter Chica! You do a great job with Sheen and Carl, I agree.
-And Blinded Me With Science is a great song. It does remind me of Jimmy.

Great Googly Moogly! Mara came over here!
-I don't know if I've ever seen Mara in the fanfics.
-<Revives Chica with smelling salts.>

Justine, I loved your comment on your arch rival.
-"Just some jerk." Hilarious!

Beks, wow! You're lucky to have no arch rivals.
-Or maybe you're just an all around nice person. :P

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Posted 12 November 2007 - 01:47 AM

not to toot my own horn, but I guess I am. I don't hate anyone at all, not even my teachers.
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Posted 18 November 2007 - 03:21 AM

Because my arch rival is going there... :lol:

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:D I see. Same for me about high schools. Except TWO of my arch enemies are going there!

Sucks for me, tho, cuz SAMANTHA is going where I am.
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Posted 18 November 2007 - 03:32 AM

Hey Chica!

Wow, good chapter! I thought it was really cute how Jimmy and Jimmy ( :lol: ) talked about Cindy and Cindy ( :P )
I don't have any ideas for this, because usually coming up with plans is the hardest thing for me to do (which is why I try to stay away from them in my fanfics...) so I can't really help you!
I know! Writers block is TERRIBLE! I've gotton it before. But I can't wait for the next chapter and I'm just glad you finally wrote THIS one! =P

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#177 Chica_Andromeda

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Posted 23 November 2007 - 12:28 AM

Hi Chica and Company!

Well I finally got over here to read some fanfics I was shamefully neglecting.
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Cool new chapter Chica! You do a great job with Sheen and Carl, I agree.
-And Blinded Me With Science is a great song. It does remind me of Jimmy.

Great Googly Moogly! Mara came over here!
-I don't know if I've ever seen Mara in the fanfics.
-<Revives Chica with smelling salts.>

Justine, I loved your comment on your arch rival.
-"Just some jerk." Hilarious!

Beks, wow! You're lucky to have no arch rivals.
-Or maybe you're just an all around nice person. :P

Snazzo
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Thanks!! ^_^ LOL, I lurve coming up with Sheen and Carl's lines. Funnn. xD

Ehehe, I absolutely LOVE that song and it kinda fit for the title (in my dream world it did :lol:).
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#178 Chica_Andromeda

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Posted 23 November 2007 - 12:47 AM

Happy Thanksgiving, everyone! I decided I might as well post a chapter. Heck, I'm just glad I finally finished it. [shameless promotion]BTW, I'm working on a J/L oneshot/songfic. ^_^ I'm hoping to finish it soon, so be on the lookout for it![/shameless promotion] And heeeeerreee's the chapter (and yeah, excuse the lame chapter title)! :D



Chapter Sixteen: Spying On Yourself

CINDY: Don’t say that! It’ll jinx us!

SHEEN (rolling his eyes): Sheesh, you girls always overreact.

**Cindy narrows her eyes at Sheen, while Libby looks at him and shakes her head.**

LIBBY: Sheen, if ya weren’t so sweet, I don’t know what I’d do.

SHEEN: Ah, my queen. We make such a great team.

**Future Cindy leans against the doorframe, smiling as she watches Sheen and Libby.**

FUTURE CINDY (in amusement): Ha! You two never change.

**She regards the pair for a moment before a realization hits her. Quickly, she runs up the stairs.**

LIBBY: What was that all about?

SHEEN: I don’t know. But I’m sure it has something to with overreacting.

CINDY: Well, I’m going to go see.

LIBBY: Girl, that’s spyin’!

CINDY: Not when the person you’re spying on is yourself.

**Cindy gives a small smile and quietly tiptoes up the steps, trying her best to stay silent. She walks over to her future self’s closed door and listens closely. Inside of the room, Future Cindy stands by the window and watches as the sunlight dances across the trees. She clutches the phone to her chest and her gaze shifts downward as she sighs. With hesitation, she begins to dial a number.**

FUTURE LIBBY: Hello?

FUTURE CINDY (urgently): Libby, it’s me. Listen, I don’t really want to go into details right now, but I need you and Sheen to help me with something.

FUTURE LIBBY: Girl, ya sound upset. What’s wrong?

FUTURE CINDY: I’ll give you the full version if you come over, but Jimmy’s been captured by Nathan.

FUTURE LIBBY: What? Okay, Sheen an’ I will be over there as soon as we drop Esteban off with Carl and Elke. See ya then.

**Before Future Cindy can have a chance to respond, Future Libby hangs up. Sighing, she walks over to the door and opens it to find her younger self trying to listen in.**

CINDY (nervously): Um, I wasn’t spying if that’s what you were thinking.

FUTURE CINDY (disbelievingly): Uh-huh.

CINDY: I wasn’t!

FUTURE CINDY: I guess I don’t have to tell you what I came up here to do.

CINDY: No, but what about everyone else?

FUTURE CINDY: You’re welcome to tell them. I’ve got more work to do on the plan.

**Future Cindy walks back into her room as nonchalantly as she can, glancing one last time at her younger self. Soundlessly, the older woman closes the door. Shrugging, Cindy walks down the stairs.**

LIBBY: What’d ya find out?

**Cindy gets ready to talk, but is cut off by Sheen.**

SHEEN: Did you get caught?! Is your future self in cahoots with Nathan?! Tell us, woman!!

CINDY: (clearly aggravated): I’m trying to, but you won’t shut up!

LIBBY: Ignore him, Cin. Just tell us what happened.

**Cindy tries to tell them, but is once again interrupted. This time, by the sound of the doorbell ringing.**

FUTURE CINDY (rushing down the stairs): I’ve got it!

**She walks hurriedly to the door and flings it open as Future Libby rushes in while Future Sheen slowly follows behind her.**

FUTURE LIBBY: Okay, Cin, you’ve got some serious explainin’ to do.

FUTURE CINDY: I know, I know. C’mon, I’ll tell you guys in here.



Ooh, plot twist! :D Ha, anyway, I don't really like this chapter. Bleh, mucho horrible. x_x But I guess it's what you guys thought that really matters. So, did you like the chapter? Want to hit me over the head for my plot twist? Tell me! I LOVE reading you guys' comments! ^_^

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#179 CraazyOne

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Posted 23 November 2007 - 01:08 AM

YAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *deep breath* YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA------!!! *another deep breath* ---AAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY...... *passes out, until someone splashes water in her face*

Whoa! *cough, cough* Um, hehe.

CHICA, THAT WAS NOT A BAD CHAPTER. JEEZ! You're a great author! And, no, I DON'T feel like hitting you over the head! :lol:

But you'll post the next chapter soon, right? PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSE?????????????????????????

*passes out again*

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Posted 23 November 2007 - 03:51 AM

That was awesome! And you know how I know? Cuz I didn't really read it all the way thru the first time, in the PM. :P
Awesome!!

What's the "it" tho?
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