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I agree with Flank, as well. It's not like standing up to DJ would have gotten him anywhere (or trying to escape for that matter). Unless he was so miserable that he literally did not care if he died, in which case sacrifice wouldn't have been that big of a deal for him.

[Macey]

Well, I just realized how much finding FL might be bad for FS.

I mean...after all those years, FS is probably a bomb waiting to explode. At this rate, it appears that the only person FS can trust is FL. (And if Jessi and I's oneshots are canon, FC)

So if FL gets hurt, endangered-or, if Jessi's crazy(ily awesome) theories are correct, dies- FS will not be happy. Two seconds of Heroic BSOD and then things get REALLY INSANE.

And he might not be the same after that.

Soooo there's my prediction.

[Mara=^.^=]

I love TVTropes

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[AnDrEa]

believe it or not I've just finished reading tosot! and I LOVED this last two chapters!!!! they were all so full of emotion and I could feel myself IN the story not as if I was reading it, but actually living it!!! and I could barely stop myself from crying of fear, joy and suspence!! and I will kill you Mara for leaving it there!!! I actually refreshed the page 3 times until I convinced myself you hadn't written more! I loved it!!! finally we are seeing some action there!!!! I was starting to think that it was going to be some stupid ending as in Braking Dawn! Really! I have NEVER (well once or twice) been so eager to read the next part of any ff!!!

I was also analysing and I think your descriptions are perfect! just impeccable! you know how to transport the reader where you want to! I am sure that I can imagine what is happening as claerly as you had it in your mind when you wrote it!!!!1

Great Job!!





Andre

[Star]

I just finished reading TOSOT after I'd been gone.....My God, Mara you are SO gifted! You are taking this story in such a brilliant direction and you have developed the characters to the point where I'm feeling their emotions as I read. It's so good....When are you updating next? Lolz.

I agree with Flank, I don't think FC is a liar. Clearly, he was defying DJ to try and help his old friends. He could be in serious trouble if DJ ever found that out!

The one thing that I would really love is to see how DJ reacts to Cindy if he ever sees her. That would be really interesting...

[Mara=^.^=]

Thanks so much!


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[Macey]

TOTALLY REVIVING THIS THREAD WITH MAJOR SUPER SPECIAL NEWS!

...I have officially decided; TOSOT is my favorite fanfic EVAR. The characters are in character. The OCs are lovable and not Mary Sues. The plot is awesome. And the writer is badass.

CONGRATS MARA-CHAN~



_{...Sorry, I just felt bad that this thread was so dead. xD}

[Mara=^.^=]

**hugs Macey**

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[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Sorry if I haven't posted here in a while, but I'm not sure if I can read TOSOT any longer... I think it's cuz of my lack of patience and the fact that I forgot where I last left off when I last read it... Soz, Mara.

[Mara=^.^=]

Just wait until it's all done, and then re-read it (or at least vol 5).

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[Macey]

**hugs Macey**

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*glomps Mara*

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Just wait until it's all done, and then re-read it (or at least vol 5).

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

Thanks for the advice, Mara. I'll treasure it always.

[J/C AVA]

Just wait until it's all done, and then re-read it (or at least vol 5).

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

I would say that I'm in the same boat as Em (i.e. - a different reason), but I guess I can take that as your answer.

[Mara=^.^=]

Speaking of which, next installment's coming out soon...

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[SweeneyxxTodd]

I can't wait!

[Mara=^.^=]

This chapter has given me SUCH a hard time. It's so hard trying to discern the boundary between funny and deranged.


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[Macey]

This chapter has given me SUCH a hard time. It's so hard trying to discern the boundary between funny and deranged.


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I LOVE YOU.

In a platonic way, lol.

[Pigquet3]

YESH!!! I'm so excited!!

I've been super curious and anxious for the following chapter for so long after that big event! I know it'll be epic, with Mara behind it! LOL *happy dances*





Pigquet

[Mara=^.^=]

I have a midterm on Friday, so I'll be pretty busy until then, but this weekend I'll hopefully get a chance to work on the next installment, and then get around to posting it next week.

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[Zoey <3]

Can't wait