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[Mara=^.^=]

I had to.



I regret nothing


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
If you can think of any others that belong on this list, add them, and we'll get even MORE schwaaaasted!

[~~Megan~~]

"A character has a pensive, introspective and emotional soliloquy inside his or her head"

[Mara=^.^=]

"A character has a pensive, introspective and emotional soliloquy inside his or her head"

Actually, there's only a few times in the entire story where we get to hear what's going on inside a character's head (the chapter Two Hearts, One Mind notwithstanding). Most of the ridiculously emotional soliloquys are spoken.

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[~~Megan~~]

Kk, just take off the "in his or her head" part then

[Mara=^.^=]

Kk, just take off the "in his or her head" part then

lol

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Mara=^.^=]

Hey guys, could you do me a favor? TOSOT is only 4 reviews away from having the most reviews of any JN story on ff.net...

If any of you would be willing to post an extra reply, even a few derpy words, I would be eternally grateful


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Posted! It should show up within the hour.

[Mara=^.^=]

Thanks, Em!

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[~~Megan~~]

*salutes* Right away, ma'am.

[SweeneyxxTodd]

I hope you find my new reviews to your liking.

[Mara=^.^=]

OMG Mary...total comment bombardment...I'm dying

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[J/C AVA]

I shouldn't even be saying this (since I haven't read the story in AGES and... *IDOJ Mob* *Me* PLEASE! DON'T KILL ME! I'VE BEEN SUPER BUSY!!! ), but may I do the honors of making TOSOT THE most reviewed JN story in FF.net by summiting a review from yours truely?

Unless someone else decides to do that, to which I say go ahead.

[SweeneyxxTodd]

Oh I think TOSOT has secured that spot pretty solidly, Pedro. Em and Megan each submitted a review and I reviewed the first ten chapters, so we're about 8 reviews over what was needed. But we should propel it further into victory. Go ahead and bombard Mara's inbox with comments

[Mara=^.^=]

Yes, Mary power-post-bombed me into the lead with an amazing series of pseudo-spam comments.

I have a better idea for you, el Peds. Don't review TOSOT...READ IT!


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
P.S. A revised edition will be hitting the mainsite in a matter of days. I've been correcting some serious typos...and I added the DJ joke into the plot itself

[SweeneyxxTodd]

Did you enjoy your new reviews?

[Mara=^.^=]

Did you enjoy your new reviews?

I had a chucklefest.

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[SweeneyxxTodd]

lol chucklefest. New favorite word.

[Lizz]

How revised is it? I'd like to know.

I have a request, Mara. When you do get the revised version of TOSOT up, can you list all the changes you made to the story? I shamely might not notice any if there right there.

[Mara=^.^=]

How revised is it? I'd like to know.

I have a request, Mara. When you do get the revised version of TOSOT up, can you list all the changes you made to the story? I shamely might not notice any if there right there.

The changes are almost entirely grammatical...now and again I cut out a line of dialogue, or tweaked a joke a bit, etc. Over the course of the story it added up to like ten pages removed!

The alterations aren't major (with the exception that the kids will now be calling DJ, well, "DJ" in the story itself), but I'll try to make a list when I post the revised material.


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Katia11]

p.s. congrats on your fic being the most reviewed, mara! (I'm assuming it now is. I haven't been on f.fnet in a while)