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[okmeamithinknow]

I think it would be interesting to see it chapter by chapter.

~Crys~

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Once I get on a computer, not just a phone, like I'm using now, I'll use my fic Emerging Compassions for this meme!! This oughtta be FUN!!!

[Mara=^.^=]

I think it would be interesting to see it chapter by chapter.

~Crys~

Weeeeeell, I am pretty bored right now...

but not bored enough for chapter by chapter. How about volume by volume? Ya, I like that idea:

Volume 1:


Volume 2:


Volume 3:


Volume 4:


Volume 5:



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[SweeneyxxTodd]

Two things:

1) Jeezum's crow you mention eyes a lot, don't you? haha They're in all the wordles, around the same size each time. I also find it interesting that as the volumes progress, the kids' names get smaller and the story really becomes about the future characters.

2) When I was at lunch today, I got this ridiculous idea for a drawing of Nav and Felix. I think I'm gonna do it. I just don't know how I'd go about creating what I've got in my head. I'm afraid when I draw it it'll come out shitty. But I've been laughing about it all friggin' day. I can't just abandon it...

[Mara=^.^=]

1) Jeezum's crow you mention eyes a lot, don't you? haha They're in all the wordles, around the same size each time. I also find it interesting that as the volumes progress, the kids' names get smaller and the story really becomes about the future characters.

Ya, I definitely have an obsession with describing eye color (I lost track of how many times I reassured the audience that April did, in fact, still have purple eyes ), and since there are no real synonyms for "eyes", it gets repeated a lot.

Also, Nav x Felix. The Yaoi shippers are coming.

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[SweeneyxxTodd]

Also, Nav x Felix. The Yaoi shippers are coming.

lol

Not like that.

[Mara=^.^=]

lol

Not like that.

You just wait.

I delivered that image deep into your cerebral cortex, where it will remain dormant until...the opportune moment.

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[SweeneyxxTodd]

You just wait.

I delivered that image deep into your cerebral cortex, where it will remain dormant until...the opportune moment.

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

LIES

[Mara=^.^=]

LIES

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[~~Megan~~]

I think the only reason the names are so big every time is because it's written in script format. If she did the paragraph version it'd be a little different. Also, I noticed that in all of them the words "moment" and "one" "two" and "three" are always there. I think it's interesting how Libby's name is more prominent throughout the story than Cindy's.

P.S. Props for cakes and lies

[Mara=^.^=]

I think the only reason the names are so big every time is because it's written in script format. If she did the paragraph version it'd be a little different. Also, I noticed that in all of them the words "moment" and "one" "two" and "three" are always there. I think it's interesting how Libby's name is more prominent throughout the story than Cindy's.

P.S. Props for cakes and lies

I did use the paragraph version

And the reason for Libby's name being larger is that it's a combo of two people (kid Libby and F. Libby).

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[SweeneyxxTodd]

Well then I guess your characters just address each other by name very often.

[Mara=^.^=]

Well then I guess your characters just address each other by name very often.

Nah. It's because, with such a HUGE cast of characters, I can't use the traditional substitution "she" or "he" as much, and have to describe them by name.

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[Pigquet3]

Nah. It's because, with such a HUGE cast of characters, I can't use the traditional substitution "she" or "he" as much, and have to describe them by name.

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It would've been kinda cool of the kid characters had some sort of nicknames for their older selves rather than just putting "Future" in front of the name, making it long and sound kinda awkward. lol That's why I love Aurora having her own name, even if it is technically derivative of her middle name. At least its not just "Future Cindy". And I think I recall the kids sometimes calling Future Carl "Skinny Carl."

And I'm not judging saying it should've been written that way, 'cause honestly, with how complex and long this story is, how they all adress eachother is one of the smallest conerns. Its just an observation.





Pigquet

[Mara=^.^=]

It would've been kinda cool of the kid characters had some sort of nicknames for their older selves rather than just putting "Future" in front of the name, making it long and sound kinda awkward. lol That's why I love Aurora having her own name, even if it is technically derivative of her middle name. At least its not just "Future Cindy". And I think I recall the kids sometimes calling Future Carl "Skinny Carl."

And I'm not judging saying it should've been written that way, 'cause honestly, with how complex and long this story is, how they all adress eachother is one of the smallest conerns. Its just an observation.

Well, the kids also called DJ Evil Jimmy a lot (and they will call him "DJ" in some of the edits I'm doing). But there isn't really any nickname I can think of for FL and FS other than the usual "older Libby" and "Older Sheen".

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[Mara=^.^=]

Yay, more fanart! This time by AsheWolfie05



I love that the artist gave him assless chaps

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[Mara=^.^=]

Let it be noted that I am FINALLY done editing the first 100 pages of TOSOT.

ONLY 200+ PAGES LEFT BETWEEN ME AND WORLD DOMINATION


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[RocksmySocks]

Let it be noted that I am FINALLY done editing the first 100 pages of TOSOT.

ONLY 200+ PAGES LEFT BETWEEN ME AND WORLD DOMINATION


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

Between you and world domination?

Aren't you forgetting something?

Or rather, someone?

Or rather...me?

*evil eyebrow raise*

[Mara=^.^=]

Between you and world domination?

Aren't you forgetting something?

Or rather, someone?

Or rather...me?

*evil eyebrow raise*

Pssst....we'll take over the world together...

THEN WE'LL EAT WAFFLES FROM YOUR WAFFLE LASER


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

You 2 really know how to make me laugh!!