The Other Side of Tomorrow - discussion topic
#4201
Posted 28 February 2012 - 12:17 AM
~Crys~
#4202
Posted 28 February 2012 - 01:30 AM
#4203
Posted 28 February 2012 - 02:48 AM
Weeeeeell, I am pretty bored right now...I think it would be interesting to see it chapter by chapter.
~Crys~
but not bored enough for chapter by chapter. How about volume by volume? Ya, I like that idea:
Volume 1:

Volume 2:

Volume 3:

Volume 4:

Volume 5:

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
#4204
Posted 28 February 2012 - 02:53 AM
1) Jeezum's crow you mention eyes a lot, don't you? haha They're in all the wordles, around the same size each time. I also find it interesting that as the volumes progress, the kids' names get smaller and the story really becomes about the future characters.
2) When I was at lunch today, I got this ridiculous idea for a drawing of Nav and Felix. I think I'm gonna do it. I just don't know how I'd go about creating what I've got in my head. I'm afraid when I draw it it'll come out shitty. But I've been laughing about it all friggin' day. I can't just abandon it...
#4205
Posted 28 February 2012 - 04:41 AM
Ya, I definitely have an obsession with describing eye color (I lost track of how many times I reassured the audience that April did, in fact, still have purple eyes1) Jeezum's crow you mention eyes a lot, don't you? haha They're in all the wordles, around the same size each time. I also find it interesting that as the volumes progress, the kids' names get smaller and the story really becomes about the future characters.
Also, Nav x Felix. The Yaoi shippers are coming.
~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
#4206
Posted 28 February 2012 - 04:55 AM
Also, Nav x Felix. The Yaoi shippers are coming.
lol
Not like that.
#4207
Posted 28 February 2012 - 04:36 PM
You just wait.lol
Not like that.
I delivered that image deep into your cerebral cortex, where it will remain dormant until...the opportune moment.
~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
#4208
Posted 28 February 2012 - 07:02 PM
You just wait.
I delivered that image deep into your cerebral cortex, where it will remain dormant until...the opportune moment.
~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
LIES
#4209
Posted 29 February 2012 - 12:54 AM
LIES

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
#4210
Posted 11 March 2012 - 11:13 PM
P.S. Props for cakes and lies
#4211
Posted 12 March 2012 - 01:13 AM
I did use the paragraph versionI think the only reason the names are so big every time is because it's written in script format. If she did the paragraph version it'd be a little different. Also, I noticed that in all of them the words "moment" and "one" "two" and "three" are always there. I think it's interesting how Libby's name is more prominent throughout the story than Cindy's.
P.S. Props for cakes and lies
And the reason for Libby's name being larger is that it's a combo of two people (kid Libby and F. Libby).
~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
#4212
Posted 12 March 2012 - 02:59 AM
#4213
Posted 12 March 2012 - 04:33 AM
Nah. It's because, with such a HUGE cast of characters, I can't use the traditional substitution "she" or "he" as much, and have to describe them by name.Well then I guess your characters just address each other by name very often.
~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
#4214
Posted 12 March 2012 - 04:49 AM
It would've been kinda cool of the kid characters had some sort of nicknames for their older selves rather than just putting "Future" in front of the name, making it long and sound kinda awkward. lol That's why I love Aurora having her own name, even if it is technically derivative of her middle name. At least its not just "Future Cindy".Nah. It's because, with such a HUGE cast of characters, I can't use the traditional substitution "she" or "he" as much, and have to describe them by name.
~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
And I'm not judging saying it should've been written that way, 'cause honestly, with how complex and long this story is, how they all adress eachother is one of the smallest conerns. Its just an observation.
#4215
Posted 12 March 2012 - 05:20 AM
Well, the kids also called DJ Evil Jimmy a lot (and they will call him "DJ" in some of the edits I'm doing). But there isn't really any nickname I can think of for FL and FS other than the usual "older Libby" and "Older Sheen".It would've been kinda cool of the kid characters had some sort of nicknames for their older selves rather than just putting "Future" in front of the name, making it long and sound kinda awkward. lol That's why I love Aurora having her own name, even if it is technically derivative of her middle name. At least its not just "Future Cindy".
And I think I recall the kids sometimes calling Future Carl "Skinny Carl."
And I'm not judging saying it should've been written that way, 'cause honestly, with how complex and long this story is, how they all adress eachother is one of the smallest conerns. Its just an observation.
~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
#4216
Posted 21 April 2012 - 04:46 AM

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#4217
Posted 25 April 2012 - 01:09 AM
ONLY 200+ PAGES LEFT BETWEEN ME AND WORLD DOMINATION
~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
#4218
Posted 25 April 2012 - 01:15 AM
Let it be noted that I am FINALLY done editing the first 100 pages of TOSOT.
ONLY 200+ PAGES LEFT BETWEEN ME AND WORLD DOMINATION
~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
Between you and world domination?
Aren't you forgetting something?
Or rather, someone?
Or rather...me?
*evil eyebrow raise*
#4219
Posted 25 April 2012 - 01:45 AM
Pssst....we'll take over the world together...Between you and world domination?
Aren't you forgetting something?
Or rather, someone?
Or rather...me?
*evil eyebrow raise*
THEN WE'LL EAT WAFFLES FROM YOUR WAFFLE LASER
~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =
#4220
Posted 25 April 2012 - 01:50 AM
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