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[Band_Geek923]

All right here's Chapter 8!

We got to Jimmy's house.

"Here's my clubhouse," Jimmy said.

"Wow, cool," said Morris.

"Oh yeah it's cool wait till you see the inside of it," Jimmy said.

Jimmy put his hair in front of his scanner thingy and the floor dropped below us, and we slid down the tube into Jimmy's lab.

"Behold, my laboratory!" Jimmy said.

"Woa!" Torie and Morris said together.

"You like it?" Jimmy asked.

"Yeah it's so cool man. You make all these things?" Morris asked.

"Yep, Jimmy makes them all, and Carl and I watch him," I said.

"Wow, Jimmy you really are amazing," Torie said dreamly.

Oh no, I thought, She's starting to like Jimmy. She can't like him, she belongs to me, she even said she wanted to be my girlfriend.

"Umm..Jimmy you should show Torie and Morris around now," I said trying to get her attention away from Jimmy.

"Oh..yeah. Come on everyone, in the hover car," Jimmy said.

"Are you sure all 7 of us can fit in the hovercar?" Carl asked.

"Yes, now come on and get in," Jimmy said.

Carl got in followed by Cindy and Libby. Then Morris got in, then I got in and helped Torie in.

"Thanks, Sheen," she said happily.

"Of course anything for you my dear friend," I said.

Just then I saw Libby looking at me, she looked kind of hurt that I was sitting next to Torie and not her.

"Is everything okay Libby?" I asked her.

"Yes, Sheen. Everything is fine," she said.

"Are you sure?" I asked.

"She said yes, UltraFreak, now be quiet!" Cindy yelled.

"Hey, don't call Sheen UltraFreak, Cindy! If you're calling him one, then you're calling me one, now keep your wide mouth shut and let me enjoy this tour of Retroville!" Torie yelled.

Cindy didn't say anything back. She was just mad that my new lady had told her off.

I was starting to like Torie even more as the day grew on, and I could tell she was starting to like me even more by standing up to me.

As long as Libby didn't find out, it would be good.

Torie put her arm around me and sniffed my hair.

"Your hair smells nice, Sheen," she said.

"Thanks, yours does too," I said.

Then Torie sat back up and looked at the scenery.

I looked over at Libby who had saw us sitting like that, and I could swear I saw one little tear slide down her pretty cheek.


That's it I hope you enjoy.

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Great! Please continue soon!

[Band_Geek923]

Thanks I most definitely will.

I'll have Chapter 9 up later tonight! So stay tuned!

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Great! Can't wait! (haha, that rhymes!)

[Zoey <3]

I didn't read the whole thing but it sounds good so far. I'll read the rest in a bit

[Band_Geek923]

Well I'm glad you like it so far Zoey.

I hope you'll be willing to read the rest of it and new chapters I post.

[fierysue]

Darn, that girl Torie totally dissed my girl Cindy! Girl got guts!

:lol:

[Band_Geek923]

Oh my gosh....it's part 9!

Jimmy continued showing us around town.

Torie and Morris seemed to enjoy the tour.

"Wow you guys live in such a cool town. It's better than stupid Hollywood," said Morris.

"But that's where all the movie stars are," said Cindy.

"I know but a lot of those movie stars are so snobby, and the kids of the movie actors think they're so cool because they're parents are celebrities. It got annoying. At least here all of you guys are nice, and not snobby," said Morris.

"Yeah, I agree with you. Movie stars can get annoying," Libby said.

"So what do you guys want to do now?" asked Jimmy.

"Well, it is getting time for lunch, why don't we go eat lunch somewhere?" Torie asked.

"Yeah, let's go to McSpankys!" I said.

"Oh yeah, I could use a good burger," Carl said.

"McSpanky's? What kind of a name is that for a restaurant?" Morris asked.

"It was the name of the guy who made the restaurant, and it's a fast food restaurant," said Jimmy.

"Awesome, let's go," Morris said.

We went to McSpanky's.

Inside we found a seat and took our seats. I decided to sit in between Libby and Torie so her feelings wouldn't get hurt again.

But to my surprise, Libby said to me, "Um Sheen can you sit on the other side of the table please?"

"Why?" I asked.

"Becasue I want Morris to sit next to me," she said.

"Oh.....okay," I said. So I moved to the other side with Torie next to me.

Jimmy came back with our food, and he sat down on the other side of Torie.

I looked at where everyone was sitting. Cindy and Libby sitting on either side of Morris, Jimmy sitting on the other side of Torie, and Carl sitting in the middle of the booth.

Was Jimmy starting to like Torie? And was Libby starting to like Morris?
I couldn't lose Libby to Morris, and I couldn't lose Torie to Jimmy.

I was so confused and it looks like I was getting caught in the middle of a love triangle.



Now things are going to start getting more crazier as the chapters go on.

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

SO great! Can't wait for more! :thumbsup:

[Band_Geek923]

Thanks I'm glad you're getting to like the story a lot!

It's going to start getting good now!

[Band_Geek923]

Wow I'm going to get through this story fast because tonight you're getting chapter 10!

[J/C AVA]

I HAVE to reaquant myself to reading this. Frankly I haven't had time to read anything. :'(

That's great Millie. Can't wait for Chapter 10!

[Band_Geek923]

Thanks Pedro I'll be sure to notify you when Chapter 10 is up.

It's okay if you don't have time to read it all, I understand you're busy and stuff.

[fierysue]

I really enjoy reading this simple no-confused part of Sheen. :)

Tonight you say? *stares in front of computer*

[Band_Geek923]

I'm sorry my dad was on the computer the other day deleting things and I think he accidentally deleted Parts 10 and 11 of my story.

You'll have to wait a couple days before I post so I can re-write them, but they'll be up soon.

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Aw, that must be disappointing, but I'm sure, when you rewrite them, they'll be better than ever! :thumbsup:

[Band_Geek923]

Thanks, yeah maybe when I re-write them I'll fix them up a bit.

[Band_Geek923]

I finally have Chapters 10 and 11 fixed.

Now I just have to find time to post them.

[Band_Geek923]

Hey it's time for Chapter 10.

More conversations broke out as we ate our lunch at McSpanky's.

"How old are you guys exactly?" Cindy asked Torie.

"We're eleven and we're in the sixth grade," said Torie.

"Aw really?" I asked.

"Yeah, why?" Torie asked.

"Because we're in fifth grade and now we can't see each other in school," I said.

"Wait, your elementary school is sixth grade?" Morris asked.

"Yeah," Jimmy said. "Our elementary school system goes from kindergarten to sixth grade."

"Because where we used to live, sixth grade was in middle school, so I guess since we're here now, we'll be back in elementary school again," said Morris.

"Hey it's okay," Libby said.

"I guess but I'm tired of elementary school," said Morris.

"Wow Morris you really hate elementary school don't you," asked Carl.

"Yes, I can't believe I'll be stuck in horrible elementary school again."

"Just calm down and we'll see if we like it or not," said Torie.

She then turned to me.

"Sheen, this is a lot of spaghetti, would you like to share with me?" she asked.

"Sure," I said.

We dug in to the spaghetti with Libby watching us across the table. She probably knew what was going to happen, I think I kind of did too.
Torie and I both picked up the same noodle and ate it until we wound up kissing in the end. I liked it a lot and she did too that we took another noodle and did it again.

Just then Libby said, "Hey Morris, share my spaghetti with me."

"Okay," he said.

The two of them picked up spaghetti and kissed in the middle too.
That got me mad and I looked at her angrily.

"Libby, how could you kiss Morris like that in front of me when you know I like you!" I yelled.

"You like Sheen and you were kissing me?" Morris asked.

"No I did that because he was kissing Torie when he knows I like him," said Libby.

"You like Libby? You never told me that!" Torie said.

"I didn't want you to know," I said.

"You kissed my sister when you like Libby?! That's sick Sheen, really sick," said Morris.

"But I was just trying to get her jealous," I said.

"Stop!" Jimmy yelled. "Let me see if I can understand what's going on here. Sheen liked Torie and Torie liked Sheen. Sheen likes Libby but didn't want Torie to know that he likes her or Libby to know that he liked Torie. Torie was just being nice and was asking Sheen to eat her pasta with her, not knowing that would happen, so it was accidental, but Libby thought he kissed Torie to make her jealous, so to get her back, she kissed Morris the same way with the pasta and made Sheen think she likes Morris instead of her."

I looked at Jimmy.

"He's right, Libby. We just did it by accident, we didn't want it to happen," I said.

"Yeah calm down Libby," said Sheen.

"So you don't really like Torie?" Libby asked.

"As a friend, yes, but nothing else," I said.

"Yeah, we're just friends," said Torie.

"Okay good," said Cindy "because I don't want any rivalry going on here."

"Umm guys let's finish eating so we can get home," Carl said.

"Yeah," said Morris.

We finished our lunch then went home for the day.

We had a fun afternoon, now I had the rest of the day to think about what happened that day.

Libby had almost found out that I really do like Torie.

As long as she never found that out though, I was safe.




That's Chapter 10 for you.

[Band_Geek923]

Sheen: I demand you to reply! If you don't then I will throw rocks at you!

Me: Sheen, don't threaten them like that.

Sheen: If they don't reply I will threaten them.