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[CraazyOne]

Hehe Sunny, when AREN'T your chapters amazing and hilarious?! AWESOME job!


~Rach~

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Ooh, good job, Sunny! Funny chapter, and it was LONG! :o :thumbsup:

[AnDrEa]

oh wow sunny! there is just one word to describe this chapter ROFLOL! ok it's not a word but still! u rock!



o:) Andre o:)

[sunnstar]

..::Chapter 9:: A Top Secret Surprise::..

**Timmy, Sheen, Carl, Jimmy and Cindy are pushed out of the portal and fall on top of each other. They find themselves in a large, rectangular room filled with many squishy chairs and squishier people. The lights are kept maximally dimmed as to keep the members’ identities a secret. Cosmo and Wanda seemed to have left them at this point**

CINDY: (getting up from the top of the heap and dusting herself off) I seem to be back.

COMMANDER BAKER: Yes you are. And we still need your help—

TIMMY: Wheeee! This new dimension adds so much weight that I feel absolutely nothing from the two people crushing me!

CARL: Small-headed Jimmy, can we get off you now?

TIMMY: Why? This isn’t hurting me.

SHEEN: (in a wheezy voice)…But it’s hurting me. Carl’s crushing my scapula…

CARL: (nonchalantly) Oh, really?

SHEEN: GET UP!

[a/n: A note to Rach, Andrea, and Justine… I’m no longer allowed on IDOJ except to post chapters—not that I’d do anything else anyway—or CC. :'( =’(]

**While everyone is smirking at Sheen, one of the grey-haired men in the chairs gave a tiny cough**

COMMANDER BAKER: (pacing in front of a projector screen) As I was saying, we need your help. Agent Neutron, Agent New Girl, you need to stop the villains.

JIMMY: …We… realize that…

CINDY: Um, just out of curiosity, where do I fit into all of this?

COMMANDER BAKER: I’ve been watching from a distance for many months. Ms. Vortex—

CINDY: Cindy—

COMMANDER BAKER: —Ms. Vortex, you seem to have been of great assistance to Agent Neutron on his many missions.

**He stopped pacing and resumed his position at the podium and clicks his red button, and a series of photos appear on the screen: Cindy flying as Special Girl to destroy the wormhole, Cindy confronting Hulk-Jimmy, Cindy holding a diapered Baby Granny, and Commander Baker wearing a bathing suit at a pool party**

COMMANDER BAKER: Wh—what?! Who put that on there?

BTSO MEMBERS: (murmuring) Not me—nope—I didn’t do it.

COMMANDER BAKER: (turning off the projector) Point is, Agent Neutron, Agent New Girl, you need to save Retroville and other dimensions from those three villains.

CINDY: Clearly, we know th—dimensions? Hold up, there are more than one?

COMMANDER BAKER: (looking surprised) Certainly. Surely you didn’t think that Beautiful Gorgeous, Eustace Strych, and Victor—

TIMMY: (automatically) Vicky.

COMMANDER BAKER: Vicky would stop after two dimensions?

JIMMY: (sputtering) Well I—no but—well—I didn’t—but—

SHEEN: Yeah, what he said.

**Commander Baker turned to Sheen and Carl and looked taken aback to see the two of them sitting there**

COMMANDER BAKER: Oh, we won’t need you two. So, if you could just exit through the back—

**He pushed a purple button on the side of the podium marked with the letter E and Carl and Sheen both sprang out of their chairs and through two spaces in the ceiling that had obviously just opened**

COMMANDER BAKER: (turning to Timmy) Come to think of it, we probably won’t need you either—

JIMMY: (hastily) Whoa, it’s okay. This guy helps us.

COMMANDER BAKER: Very well. Agent Neutron, Agent… Vortex?

CINDY: Yeah.

COMMANDER BAKER: And Agent New Boy. We’re counting on you three to save our universe. With Eustace Strych, Beautiful Gorgeous, and Vicky on the loose, and those mayors acting like they are—

**The camera flickers to Mayor Quadar, who is walking around the park in circles with his arms tucked in like a duck, quacking**

COMMANDER BAKER: We need all the help we can get. Goodbye, agents, and good luck.

**And on that note of finality, the three of them were catapulted through the ceiling and the grey-haired man coughed again**

[CraazyOne]

*sigh* Aw, that is such a royal bummer. I miss you a lot, Sunny! :'(

But, I won't stop replying to your fic. ^_^ This chapter was GREAT! You always make me smile, even when I'm depressed! That's gotta be saying something. :D


~Rach~

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[a/n: A note to Rach, Andrea, and Justine… I’m no longer allowed on IDOJ except to post chapters—not that I’d do anything else anyway—or CC.  =’(]

Even though I'm not on your list, and I guess I'm not considered your friend, NOOOOO Sunny! Not even COSMIC CINDY?? That's awful! I'm going to miss you. ): I mean, I already miss you, but I'm going to miss you MORE! *Emotear*

Keep up the good writing... I look forward to seeing you next time you post your following chapter.

[Beks]

Nooooooooooooooooo(great chapter)oooooooooooooo!

[sunnstar]

Thanks for the replies, guys!

Enjoy a dramatic chapter!

..::Chapter 10:: The Pair of Gray Eyes::..

**Jimmy, Cindy, and Timmy have just been ejected from BTSO headquarters and landed somewhere dark and spooky. A spider scuttled by them and Cindy whimpered**

TIMMY: (rubbing his backside) Well, that was more painful than I thought it would be.

CINDY: Ah! Spider! Quick, someone, kill it, quick!

JIMMY: (laughing) Cindy, that’s just a piece of black lint.

CINDY: (crossing her arms) I knew that.

TIMMY: Uh, guys? Where are we?

**The camera zooms out quickly and Jimmy realized that he has no idea where they are**

JIMMY: I… I don’t know!

CINDY: (speaking slowly and clearly, as if to a five-year-old) Well, for one thing, we’re in a street…

JIMMY: (slightly hysterically) Obviously! But I don’t know what street we’re on, what city we’re in, what state, what country, I mean, for all we know, we could be on some parallel universe on the other side of the galaxy’s dimension!

TIMMY: Okay, slow down. You said, on the other side of the galaxy… the galaxy’s dimension… now how does that work?

JIMMY: No, seriously! I have absolutely no idea where Commander Baker sent us!

TIMMY: And why did he send us here?

CINDY: (sarcastically) Well, do you think it could have anything to do with the giant foreign space ship sitting ten feet away from us?

**The camera moved helpfully to the right, where a humongous ship, into which three houses could comfortably fit, was parked in the middle of the street**

JIMMY: (perfectly calmly) Well that’s convenient.

CINDY: Wait, Neutron, don’t you see those diamonds on the front?

JIMMY: What about them?

CINDY: They spell out the letter E!

TIMMY: Something tells me that’s Eustace’s ship.

JIMMY: Eustace has a ship?

CINDY: Well if not then he bought one! Come on, Neutron. Who else would put diamonds in the shape of an E on the front of their evil ship?

JIMMY: Good point! We should form a plan to get inside and steal the Hypno-Ray back.

TIMMY: …Did you fall on your head or something?

JIMMY: No, I just ate a lot of sugar before we left and now the street is spinning.

CINDY: (clearing her throat) So, can we make a plan now or what?

JIMMY: Yeah. Quick, let’s go in that dark alley and think of something.

TIMMY: (rolling his eyes) Yeah, because nothing bad every happens in the dark alleys.

**The three of them darted into the security of the shadows, unaware that the blinds on the farthest window on the right had shifted and a single pair of grey eyes was staring unblinkingly out of it**

JIMMY: (pulling a paper and pen out of his pocket) Now, this is what the ship looks like.

**He drew a rough outline of the ship and its doors and windows; the pair of eyes remained fixed on Jimmy’s face, unblinking**

JIMMY: There are doors here, here, and here. Now, knowing Eustace, he’ll be expecting me to try to steal the Hypno-Ray back. What we need to do is surprise them—there are three of them, three of us, and three doors. I’ll go through that front entrance right there and—

TIMMY: Speaking of the front entrance, have you noticed there are a pair of evil eyes staring at us through that window over there?

**He points to the window, and everything seems to happen in slow motion. The eyes didn’t move, blink, or widen, but a finger attached to the person lowered gradually and pushed a button. As Jimmy’s jaw dropped, something purple leaked out of the bottom and grew until it was as big as the ship itself. It turned so that it was horizontal and levitated until the ship was directly below it. The pair of grey eyes showed no surprise as the portal lowered itself until in enveloped the ship completely and the ship disappeared with the usual pop**

JIMMY: (dreadfully) We may have a problem.

TIMMY: Ya think?

CINDY: (crossing her arms) Neutron? Explain. Now.

JIMMY: To the lab?

**Jimmy was already pushing a series of buttons on his watch before Cindy could even reopen her mouth; within seconds, Goddard flew down from the sky and sat expectantly**

JIMMY: (already boarding Goddard) Get on!

**Goddard flew back to the lab; it seemed that they were not far from Jimmy’s house because landed in front of the clubhouse in less than ten minutes. Jimmy and Timmy jumped off but Cindy disembarked cautiously**

CINDY: Neutron, what’s going on?

JIMMY: (pulling a hair out of his head) Get in.

CINDY: Excuse me?

**Jimmy rolled his eyes and the trapdoor fell open**

CINDY: Oh, right. That ‘in.’

JIMMY: Here’s the thing. I can get from Retroville to Dimmsdale by stepping through this portal generator. Now, I was working on it in my room that day when Eustace and Beautiful Gorgeous and Victor—Vicky—whatever— stole the Hypno-Ray. Now, when you turn off the generator, the purple part flickers and emits sparks that have to be stamped out. I, unfortunately, was late for school and forgot to do this.

CINDY: (groaning) You didn’t!

JIMMY: I did. And when they’re left in a sealed environment for long periods of time, they fuse together. It seems that this time, the sparks fused together and grew until they formed a solid, nice-sized, portable portal. Easy to fit in the average plastic bag, the villains would have no problem taking it. They have been able to avoid capture by flitting back and forth through the dimensions—more that just here and Dimmsdale. To be able to stop them, we have to make them stay in one dimension.

TIMMY: You mean, just trap them?

JIMMY: No, because then we wouldn’t know where they are.

CINDY: So what are we doing?

JIMMY: If I pull this switch right here, the generator will cease to work. And because it was on for so long, all the dimensions will cease to work, which means—

TIMMY: We’re fusing them together?

JIMMY: We’re fusing them together.

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HOLY COW! That's so cool, Sunny! I can't wait to see what other types of dimensions there are. :ph43r: Maybe he'll meet Danny Phantom or something... LAWL. Anyway, keep up the good writing. I miss you A LOT, so update more frequently, mmmkay? D:

[sunnstar]

LOL, that would be cool, I hadn't thought of that. IDTS, thought, it would be too much. But I thought it would be hilarious if Tootie came to save the day (lol@Rach).

[CraazyOne]

Yay! That was an awesome chapter! And I totally agree with Krista. UPDATE. OFTEN. We miss you like crazy; seriously, we're going all emo when you're not here. LOL.


~Rach~

[Beks]

Yeah! Fusing demintions! Think of the possibilites! :wacko:

[sunnstar]

I luled pretty hard writing this chapter, enjoy it!

..::Chapter 11:: Power Down::..

JIMMY: Come on guys, it’s right over here!

CINDY: How do we turn it off?

JIMMY: Pull that blue lever!

TIMMY: You heard the man, pull!

**The three of them tugged on the stuck lever for a few seconds and then it finally lowered, making a loud, power-down noise**

JIMMY: Hooray, it—

**For a moment, none of them could see, but they seemed to be flying at a high speed in the air. They landed and found themselves in a dimension completely blank and filled to the max with people, animals, and houses**

CINDY: Where… are we?

TIMMY: Doesn’t this place look familiar?

CINDY: Yeah, but from where?

JIMMY: (gasping) This is the third dimension that Shirley created! We brought it back!

TIMMY: No way! … Um, so?

JIMMY: Nothing, it’s just weird. But where are—

**A loud, high-pitched scream interrupted him**

CINDY: Found her!

**Cindy was pointing to the middle of the crowd where Beautiful Gorgeous, Vicky, and Eustace were standing**

JIMMY: Let’s go!

**They made their way through the throng and eventually caught up with the villains**

EUSTACE: Well, well, well. We meet yet again.

CINDY: Just hand over the portal and the Hypno-Ray, Eustace!

EUSTACE: (laughing) Now honestly, Cynthia, why on earth would I do that?

TIMMY: Get him!

**Jimmy and Timmy both launched themselves at Eustace but a tall, gray-haired and gray-eyed man stepped out from behind Vicky and pointed the Hypno-Ray at the attackers**

GREY-EYED MAN: Stand up.

JIMMY: Now who are you?

BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: He’s a new villain I recruited from my hour of visiting Daddy in jail.

**The camera turns to Professor Calamitous for a minute**

Professor Calamitous: Hello?

BEAUTIFUL GORGEOUS: His name is Frank.

TIMMY: (snickering) Frank? That’s almost as dumb as Shirley!

FRANK: (his voice booming) IT IS NOT!

JIMMY: And what made you start hunting me down? What did I do, foil your evil plan, jail you for life, steal your weapons—I lose track, you know.

FRANK: I automatically hate every ‘hero’ I meet. It’s a villain thing, you wouldn’t understand.

CINDY: Thankfully.

JIMMY: So what are you gunna do to me, lock me in your evil lair, swear vengeance on me, help me out here, I lose track!

FRANK: I’m trapping you on my ship!

JIMMY: (rolling his eyes) Oh yeah, ‘cause that one’s never been done before.

TIMMY: Don’t you mean Eustace’s ship?

FRANK: (sighing) No. You let one rich boy call an interior decorator and this is what you get.

TIMMY: (looking around pointedly) I see no ship. You plan on getting us there how?

**Frank clicked a button on a remote and a familiar, sinister-looking ship flew down from the white sky and the pull-down stepladder opened**

FRANK: Beautiful, grab Blondie. Eustace, grab Big-Head. Vicky—

VICKY: Finally, someone remembers my name!

TIMMY: Oh, no. I’m not letting Vicky put me anywhere!

VICKY: Come on, twerp, you’re coming with me.

**The three villains picked up their hostages while Frank laughed maniacally**

TIMMY: Cosmo! Wanda! I wish I was in Jimmy’s lab!

**Timmy’s fairies poofed him into the clubhouse that was now two-dimensional**

CINDY: And you couldn’t have gotten us out, too?!

[Beks]

Yay, new chapter! I wonder if Shirley's there? :blink:

[CraazyOne]

:lol: Wow, that was great, Sun! You used the Professor Calamitous moment! :dance: XD

Frank was pretty darn amazing too. ^_^

And the ending was just great. Timmy wishes himself out of the mess, and leaves Cindy and Jimmy behind. Haha, wow.

I gives it two thumbs up! :thumbsup:

More soon, puh-leez! :D


~Rach~

[AnDrEa]

oh rachy I haven't read this since ur post on Jan 4 2008, 06:47 PM ...I couldn't even finish THAT! i'll try to read it this friday..plz don't think I abandoned u!


o:) Andre o:)

[AnDrEa]

you are WHAT???? Rach!! Sunnybelle!! amigocha del alma!! NOOOO :'( why!? why must the good leave IDOJ for good?? tell me it's not for good?? and CC??? :grr: well at least I (we) still got ur amasing writing! talking of wich amazing chapters!!!I loved this last one!!! lol I LOVE this ff!!! is so hilarious!!! lol I can't wait for next chapter!!! really cool!



Miss ya
o:) Andre o:)

[sunnstar]

Sorry about the no chapter last week, but enjoy! And for furture references, if I do that again, Rach has my permission to give a small summary of what was supposed to happen in that chapter.

..::Chapter 12:: Donut Crimes::..

**Cindy and Jimmy regain consciousness slowly and find themselves chained to the middle of a wall in an evil lair**

JIMMY: Again with the evil lairs. Can’t they be a little more original and kidnap us to somewhere exotic… like Hawaii?

CINDY: Yeah, that’ll happen.

**Eustace walks dramatically into the room**

EUSTACE: Well, well, well, well, well. Look what we have here—James and Cynthia, trapped!

CINDY: Let us go, Eustace!

SUSPENSE MWAHAHA. =)
JIMMY: (whispering) Just so you know, that never does anything.

EUSTACE: Sorry, but if you want to get off this ship you’re going to have to press the red button… waaay over there. And we’re taking off right now!

CINDY: Where are we going?

EUSTACE: Well, we couldn’t choose between the moon and Jupiter, so we decided on Pluto. It was Vicky’s idea!

**Eustace walked away, laughing evilly**

CINDY: Okay Neutron, what’s your big idea now?

JIMMY: I don’t have one. We have to throw something at the button to make it release us, but there’s nothing here heavy enough or near enough!

CINDY: You wanna talk heavy, try wearing these earrings. They’re the most painful things ever, and huge.

JIMMY: Then what are you waiting for?! Throw one now!

**The spaceship began to vibrate and raised a couple of feet off the ground**

CINDY: I can’t!

JIMMY: Vortex, if you want to live you’ll throw it now. Don’t you remember the way you saved the baseball game at the end of the year with that perfect pitch?

CINDY: But—

JIMMY: Cindy!

CINDY: The holes will close!

JIMMY: CINDY!!

**Just to add suspense, the camera switches to the middle of a donut store**

MAYOR: (holding bags) Fill these up with donuts a-sap!

CLERK: O—okay, but they’re a dollar apiece—

MAYOR: Do you think I’m about to pay for them? Now fill them up, NOW!

**Back to the ship**

**Cindy just managed to reach her ear with her hands chained. She pulled the purple earring out of her ear, aimed, and threw it as the ship was gathering steam**

JIMMY: You… you missed!

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Wow. This is really good, Sunny/Rach! I can't wait for some more! ^_^

And I don't blame her. I wouldn't want to get my ears pierced either... (And I like the name of the chapter. xD Cleverness.)

Seriously, you have to show me where you got that banner! I'm a newbie, & I don't know how to to do 1 or where to go to find 1! Could you tell me the code for that 1, because I want a banner like that, except with Jimmy on it, not with April the Gorlock. Could you send me the code, or something, so I can paste it into my replies/posts? That would be a BIG help if you would! :thumbsup: *.*
Yours truly, ^_^