Okay, guys, this is pretty pathetic. I mean, no replies for FIVE days?! Geez. I was gunna give my 100th replier a special sneek-preview of the next chapter, but forget it.
Anyway, I'm not posting any chapters this week cuz it's Harry Potter Week, which means one chapter a day for five whole days, but on Friday you can expect the next chappie, mkay?
Anyway... REPLY! I'm starting to think I really SHOULD have done that PM-people-chapters-who-want-em thing.
Buh-bye!
My New Fanfic -- The Hunt!
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Posted 25 July 2007 - 12:38 AM
B-But I have already replied! :'(
No chappie everyday? Noooo! :'(
This has sadden me. (as if I already wasn't?)
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No chappie everyday? Noooo! :'(
This has sadden me. (as if I already wasn't?)
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Posted 25 July 2007 - 12:44 AM
Worry not, Amanda!
I meant not a chapter this week on IDOJ. Still posting on Nick.com... actually I just did, so you can expect it tomorrow unless NickeChris doesn't post it. =D
I meant not a chapter this week on IDOJ. Still posting on Nick.com... actually I just did, so you can expect it tomorrow unless NickeChris doesn't post it. =D
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Posted 25 July 2007 - 01:41 AM
NickeChris+notpostingchappie= :angrymob: :protest: :mad: :angrymob: :protest: :mad:
He better post it. Cause I wanna see it. :angrymob: :mad: :protest: :angrymob:
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He better post it. Cause I wanna see it. :angrymob: :mad: :protest: :angrymob:
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Posted 26 July 2007 - 12:08 AM
ACK! Rachel I love you! I saw your dedication to me and was like: I'm fabulous? :blink: Not sure if its true or not, but YAY!~ I feel so loved. :bff:
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Posted 26 July 2007 - 12:49 AM
Sorry, I've been so caught up in life, or lackthereof, I haven't been able to post everywhere on the forums.
But PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE post more soon...PLEASE! It would make me happy, and erm, PLEASE.
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But PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE post more soon...PLEASE! It would make me happy, and erm, PLEASE.
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Posted 26 July 2007 - 11:32 PM
Love ya too! and yeah. you're fabulous! oh, and sorry about no chappie yesterday, but that means one should appear on saturday instead.ACK! Rachel I love you! I saw your dedication to me and was like: I'm fabulous? :blink: Not sure if its true or not, but YAY!~ I feel so loved. :bff:
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Posted 26 July 2007 - 11:47 PM
Oh, it's okay! Now if only KRISTA would reply...Sorry, I've been so caught up in life, or lackthereof, I haven't been able to post everywhere on the forums.
But PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE post more soon...PLEASE! It would make me happy, and erm, PLEASE.
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And I'll post on Sunday as soon as I get on, okay? If you want more, go to Nick.
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Posted 29 July 2007 - 04:55 PM
Okay, here's Chapter 7! Erm, also, is Amanda the only one whose reading on Nick (from IDOJ)? Just wondering. I'd dedicate this to her, but I already did a chapter =D so this one's for you, Gwen!
Chapter 7
“This looks so, so, so incredibly awesome!” Cindy shrieked.
“I know, I know!” Libby squealed.
“It’s like one big corkscrew!”
The Maliboomer was like one big corkscrew: it started out purple at the bottom, then twisted around and around, the color fading to blue, green, yellow, then orange. At the very top (painted red) the car spun around “just like those teacups at Disneyworld,” as Cindy said.
“Come on, don’t just stand there!” Libby said. “Come on!”
“Have fun!” the ride attendant shouted, after pulling the protection gear over their heads (after all, this was a level four out of four ride).
“We will!” Libby answered.
Music started playing from somewhere closer to her ears, and she realized that there were speakers in each seat.
“Cool,” she said to herself, grinning.
“What!?” Cindy yelled from the seat next to her. Unlike most rides, this one had a five-across-four-down setup instead of the basic one-after-the-other “car.”
“Nothing!” Libby called back.
The ride started, and up they went. Around and around, in a blur of lilac, azure, jade, blonde, gold, and scarlet. When they got to the top, they started spinning around.
“I’m gunna throw up!” Cindy cried.
“You better not, there’s a clue!” Libby exclaimed.
Cindy looked up and there indeed was a folded up piece of pink paper. Hoping against hope, she pushed the button on her watch and pointed the face up to the top of the track. Some kind of laser beamed out of the watch and up to the clue and sucked it in, until it stuck magnetically to the face of the clock.
“That’s so cool!” Cindy and Libby cried at the same time.
“What’s that, ladies?” Jimmy gloated, with Carl and Sheen each holding onto an ankle.
“Spew-tron!” Cindy burst out.
“Vortex,” Jimmy retorted.
“Sheen?” Libby asked.
“Hey Libbs!” Sheen said.
“Estevez?!” Cindy exploded.
“Cindy!” Sheen greeted her.
“Neutron!” Libby said angrily.
“Libby,” Jimmy snapped.
“Carl!” Carl volunteered. When everyone looked at him, he said, “What? No one said my name yet!”
“Spew-tron, what are you doing?!” Cindy blew up.
“Winning!” Jimmy boasted, flying around the girls. The ride was slowing down as it ended.
“Um, Jimmy, how are we winning? We didn’t even get the second clue yet!” Carl wanted to know.
Jimmy smacked his forehead and said, “Carl!”
“Oh ho-ho!” Cindy said excitedly. “Mr. Smarty-Pants didn’t even get the second clue yet!”
“Thanks, Carl,” Jimmy muttered sarcastically.
“No problem, it’s my job,” Carl answered.
“Well, for your information, we’re now two ahead of you!” Cindy said triumphantly.
“Don’t you mean one?” Jimmy sneered, as the protection gear automatically rose over their heads.
Cindy pulled the pink paper off her watch and waved it in Jimmy’s face. She and Libby started running as she called, “No, I mean two!”
Chapter 7
“This looks so, so, so incredibly awesome!” Cindy shrieked.
“I know, I know!” Libby squealed.
“It’s like one big corkscrew!”
The Maliboomer was like one big corkscrew: it started out purple at the bottom, then twisted around and around, the color fading to blue, green, yellow, then orange. At the very top (painted red) the car spun around “just like those teacups at Disneyworld,” as Cindy said.
“Come on, don’t just stand there!” Libby said. “Come on!”
“Have fun!” the ride attendant shouted, after pulling the protection gear over their heads (after all, this was a level four out of four ride).
“We will!” Libby answered.
Music started playing from somewhere closer to her ears, and she realized that there were speakers in each seat.
“Cool,” she said to herself, grinning.
“What!?” Cindy yelled from the seat next to her. Unlike most rides, this one had a five-across-four-down setup instead of the basic one-after-the-other “car.”
“Nothing!” Libby called back.
The ride started, and up they went. Around and around, in a blur of lilac, azure, jade, blonde, gold, and scarlet. When they got to the top, they started spinning around.
“I’m gunna throw up!” Cindy cried.
“You better not, there’s a clue!” Libby exclaimed.
Cindy looked up and there indeed was a folded up piece of pink paper. Hoping against hope, she pushed the button on her watch and pointed the face up to the top of the track. Some kind of laser beamed out of the watch and up to the clue and sucked it in, until it stuck magnetically to the face of the clock.
“That’s so cool!” Cindy and Libby cried at the same time.
“What’s that, ladies?” Jimmy gloated, with Carl and Sheen each holding onto an ankle.
“Spew-tron!” Cindy burst out.
“Vortex,” Jimmy retorted.
“Sheen?” Libby asked.
“Hey Libbs!” Sheen said.
“Estevez?!” Cindy exploded.
“Cindy!” Sheen greeted her.
“Neutron!” Libby said angrily.
“Libby,” Jimmy snapped.
“Carl!” Carl volunteered. When everyone looked at him, he said, “What? No one said my name yet!”
“Spew-tron, what are you doing?!” Cindy blew up.
“Winning!” Jimmy boasted, flying around the girls. The ride was slowing down as it ended.
“Um, Jimmy, how are we winning? We didn’t even get the second clue yet!” Carl wanted to know.
Jimmy smacked his forehead and said, “Carl!”
“Oh ho-ho!” Cindy said excitedly. “Mr. Smarty-Pants didn’t even get the second clue yet!”
“Thanks, Carl,” Jimmy muttered sarcastically.
“No problem, it’s my job,” Carl answered.
“Well, for your information, we’re now two ahead of you!” Cindy said triumphantly.
“Don’t you mean one?” Jimmy sneered, as the protection gear automatically rose over their heads.
Cindy pulled the pink paper off her watch and waved it in Jimmy’s face. She and Libby started running as she called, “No, I mean two!”
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Posted 29 July 2007 - 05:05 PM
Yes, that chapter is amazingly WOW. :lol: YAY SUNNSTAR! I still love t even though I already read it! Can't wait for chapter8!!!!!!!!! :bff: :kawaii:
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Posted 29 July 2007 - 05:10 PM
Thanks!!! And watchoo mean you cant wait for Chapter 8, it's already on Nick! =D
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Posted 29 July 2007 - 08:29 PM
It's REALLY good. I wish I can write suspense as good as you. ^_^ <_<
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Posted 29 July 2007 - 08:46 PM
YAY! I LIKE! WRITE MORE SOON!
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Posted 29 July 2007 - 09:33 PM
Ooh, this is getting intense. O: PLEASE UPDATE! I hope the boys can pull out of their slump. :ph43r:
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Posted 29 July 2007 - 10:05 PM
YAY, a new reader! (I think.) And thanks! I think suspense is something I'm good at but not in these last few chapters. XDIt's REALLY good. I wish I can write suspense as good as you. ^_^ <_<
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Posted 29 July 2007 - 10:07 PM
Thanks, I definitely will!YAY! I LIKE! WRITE MORE SOON!
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Posted 29 July 2007 - 10:10 PM
Intesity rules! GO INTENSE!! and updates will be soon, young grasshopper. (Oh, ahem, KRISSY.) And will the boys pull out of their slump? HM...Ooh, this is getting intense. O: PLEASE UPDATE! I hope the boys can pull out of their slump. :ph43r:
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Posted 30 July 2007 - 05:27 PM
:lol: :lol: :lol: I laughed so hard when Carl said his own name... brilliant :rock:
I swallowed each and every chapter like big pieces of candy!
Can't wait for your next treat :wub: it's awesome! Keep on writing!
I swallowed each and every chapter like big pieces of candy!
Can't wait for your next treat :wub: it's awesome! Keep on writing!
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Posted 30 July 2007 - 05:29 PM
Thanks soooo much Zeit! **gives you candy** I'm gunna post more chapters later this afternoon cuz I'm gunna be outta town for two weeks, starting Wed.
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