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[sunnstar]

The long awaited Chapter 11 is he-uh!! (that means here. :D) Anyway, as I'm sure you all know, that was the worst cruise EVER. It's definitely cursed. Wanna know what happened? Ok, lets see... my watch broke, the digi waterproof camera broke, the disposable waterproof camera got lost (then found), my mom lost her two diamond rings that my brother and I gave her for Mothers' Day (then the housekeeper found them), my watch got fixed and broke AGAIN (it's fixed again now), my mom lost and found a shirt that she thought got taken out of the laundry room... and some stuff of the actual islands and stuff. Good news: I went (real) jetskiing and parasailing!! Whatever. Enjoy! I'll post the next chapter after Krista replies, or after I get 3 replies. Whichever comes first. Something tells me it'll be the second one. =D Again, enjoy!

Chapter 11

“What—what—what?!” sputtered Jimmy, after falling onto a hardwood floor.
“What a bright light,” Cindy said sarcastically. (Apparently her lack of insults had worn off.) “That’s exactly what I said when I fell into this cage about—” (she checked her watch) “ten minutes ago? Which means uh, WE should be winning right now!”
Jimmy tuned her out after the word “cage” and looked around. It was then that he realized that he had fallen directly into a steel cage from, looking up, a huge hole in the steel ceiling, which after several seconds automatically slid shut.
“Where are we?” he breathed.
Cindy opened her mouth and a gasp came out of it, but from Carl.
“Jimmy!”
“What, what?” Jimmy explained, wheeling around.
“Elaborate your vocabulary,” Cindy muttered,
“Jimmy. . . my yo-yo fell!” he looked horrified. Jimmy rolled his eyes and demonstrated the proper way to rewind a yo-yo.
“But Vortex, where in Eisenhower’s name are we?” Jimmy asked urgently.
“You walked—oh, excuse me, fell right into my little trap,” a voice said proudly (or arrogantly, in Cindy’s opinion).
Once again, Jimmy wheeled around, followed by Cindy, Libby, Sheen, and even Carl. (His yo-yo fell.)
“Yes, you have fallen right into my trap,” the voice continued. “See, this entire game was a setup. Knowing that you’d play along, I rigged both of the last rides to bring you here. Pretty genius, no?”
“No.” Cindy looked furious, but not as furious as Libby, after being informed that her dreams of being a star no longer existed. She, however, was too angry to speak.
“Well, you didn’t think about it by yourself,” another, deeper voice said irritably.
“Hey!” Sheen said, cupping his hand over his head in order to see. “Can you come out of those shadows? I can’t tell who you are!”
“I,” the first voice announced, this time definitely arrogantly, stepping into the light, “am Professor Calamitous. Surprised?”
“Oh yeah,” Carl breathed.
“Of course,” Jimmy said exasperatedly, rolling his eyes (not to Carl’s statement, but because practically all the traps he’s fallen in were devised by Calamitous).
“No way,” Libby fumed.

[AnDrEa]

ooh! Calamitous!!! cool!!! yay the so long expected chapter 11!!! and who helped him??? huh? huh? huh? lol wow u went jetskiing and parasailing!?!?!? that's so cool!!! well can't wait for next chapter!!!! woohoo u'r back!!!



o:) Andre o:)

[gummiworld]

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: This was the funniest chapter yet! I couldn't stop laughing.! Excellente! Opposite of horray for Carl's yo-yo troubles! *grabs pickle and starts to dance*

[sunnstar]

YAY two replies already! **goes to PM Andrea and Cami who is finally back** one more (different) reply and Chapter 12 is coming!

Yeah, the cruise may have been bad for me, but good for you. I finished the Hunt, wrote all but 1 or 2 chapters of TC (MDWN) [that's a fic that only Andrea and Krista know about], slightly edited the first 8 chapters and had another couple of ideas for an unnamed fic that nobody knows about 'xept Gwenniepoo, and started :uhoh: ! isn't that awesome?!

:uhoh: doesn't mean it's bad or something it just I means cant reveal it lol

[Chica_Andromeda]

I love your chapters so far!! Jeez, talk about your plot twists! I hope you update soon! ^_^

[AnDrEa]

yay!!!! now chapter 12 is coming!!!!! :dance:



o:) Andre o:)

[sunnstar]

Yes it is my dear!

Chapter 12

After getting over the shock and fury of seeing Professor Calamitous for the umpteenth time, Libby was able to speak again. She opened her mouth and just when she was about to let Calamitous have it, the annoyed voice spoke again.
“But, ‘Professor Calamitous’” (even without seeing the body of the second voice Sheen could tell that he was making air quotes) “I am the one who came up with that master plan. I just . . . thoughtfully let you help me.” Jimmy rolled his eyes: even Cindy had never sounded so conceited.
“Mr. Plan?” Carl spoke up. “Can you please, you know, reveal your identity now?”
“Of course, jellybag!” the voice said tauntingly.
“Jellybag . . . well, this is great!” Jimmy said sarcastically, realizing who the villain was.
“Indeed it is, jellybag leader. For I am . . . Meldar!” and Meldar floated out of the dark.
“Yup, just fantastic.”
“But Meldar and Mr. Calamitous, what do you want?” Carl asked worriedly. Sheen started laughing at something that no one else noticed yet.
“That’s—” Calamitous struck his evil pose— “‘Professor Calamitous’ to you!”
“Professor, huh?” Sheen said, amused. “If you’re so smart then what happened to your pants?”
Calamitous looked down and realized that his pants were lying on the floor in a gray heap. He turned red and pulled then up again; Sheen continued laughing.
After Jimmy got over this, the angry look returned to his face.
“So, Meldar, what’s your evil plan this time?” Jimmy wanted to know.
“Hey, what about me? I’ve had many more evil plans than Meldar, why are you asking him?”
“Because I’m the genius here, you’re just my assistant, remember nitwit?” Meldar explained crossly.
“Excuse me!”
Meldar rolled his eyes and fished a bag out of his jacket pocket. He opened the bag, took out a piece of chocolate, and threw it into Calamitous’s mouth.
“Right, I’m a nitwit, assistant, whatever,” he said, grinning.
Meldar rolled his eyes again. “No wonder Beautiful Gorgeous left you.”
“Ahem.” Jimmy cleared his throat. “Meldar . . . plan . . . evil . . . you?”
“Oh, right.” Meldar fumbled through his pockets and found a miniature flashlight; he held it under his chin as though he were about to recite a ghost story.
“Remember when Vandanna confiscated my cufflinks?”
“Hey, I confiscated them and gave them to Vandanna!” Jimmy protested.
“Ugh, details,” Meldar said, rolling his eyes and waving his hand. “Anyway, when Vandanna confiscated my cufflinks she took out the activation microchip and robotically electrified it so I couldn’t remove it from its hiding spot.”
“And?” Jimmy prompted him.
“So, you brainless little jellybags, I need you to get it for me!”
Jimmy and Libby both raised an eyebrow.
“Excuse me, but what makes you think we’re gunna do it for THAT tone?”
Meldar floated forward threateningly. Carl whimpered and crouched behind Sheen, but Jimmy took three steps forward. Meldar looked surprised.
“No way, Meldar!” Jimmy shouted.
“Yeah, in your dreams!” Libby proclaimed. Cindy stared at her with a weird expression on her face.
“I repeat, excuse me? You will do what I say or else.” Meldar flashed an evil grin.
Jimmy was starting to look the slightest bit afraid, but Libby felt skeptical and looked angry. She took a few more steps forward and spoke. “Or what.”
Meldar looked taken aback. “Well, I dunno, I didn’t think the head jellybag’s leader’s new girlfriend would challenge my royal evilness.”
“She’s not my girlfriend!” Jimmy cried, at the same time as Cindy, Libby, and Sheen. “And you are NOT a royal evilness.”
“Yeah,” Carl piped up, “that’s King Goobat.”
“Who’s King Goobat?” Meldar asked, looking bewildered.
“What? Man, have you been living in outer space?” Sheen laughed. “King Goobat is only the weirdest, most annoying. . .” he trailed off when he saw Jimmy stifling a laugh. “Oh, I guess you have been living it outer space!”
“Pchduh, Sheen, you should have said he lived in a cave!

Sorry, I haven't typed the rest of the chapter yet. Coming tomorrow night, I hope! (that last quote was from Carl in case you care)

[AnDrEa]

loved the chapter, but I thought April had the cufflinks, not Vandanna...well it worked this way! wel anyway I never thought about Maldar but I did thought Calamitous :P but I NEED u 2 finish this chappie!! :D



o:) Andre o:) 1 AÑO

[gummiworld]

*holds up cafeteria tray* Seconds please! :D

[Zeitgheist]

I can't believe I missed commenting on Chapter 11 :0

I was going to last night but, it was 3 am and I had barely enough time to read the chapter as it was =[ oh well... this reply has to account for both chapter 11 and 12. And with that said... I loved them! :D Meldar? I never would've guessed he'd show up after being rendered powerless by Jimmy the last time they met... then again, maybe that's why he's letting Calamitous "aid" him

Oh well. Looking forward to chapter 13! ^_^

[cynthia_aurora24]

woot.

awesome story, can't wait to read the next chappie!!

:rock:

[Beks]

Ha! Sheen! I love the little guy! ^_^ Great chapie! Write more soon!

[sunnstar]

Yay, thanks everyone! And to the person who was talking about the cufflinks thing... oh. =)

[sunnstar]

There was actually originally more to the chapter, but it was over four pages and it would have killed you. So here it is!

Chapter 12

After getting over the shock and fury of seeing Professor Calamitous for the umpteenth time, Libby was able to speak again. She opened her mouth and just when she was about to let Calamitous have it, the annoyed voice spoke again.
“But, ‘Professor Calamitous’” (even without seeing the body of the second voice Sheen could tell that he was making air quotes) “I am the one who came up with that master plan. I just . . . thoughtfully let you help me.” Jimmy rolled his eyes: even Cindy had never sounded so conceited.
“Mr. Plan?” Carl spoke up. “Can you please, you know, reveal your identity now?”
“Of course, jellybag!” the voice said tauntingly.
“Jellybag . . . well, this is great!” Jimmy said sarcastically, realizing who the villain was.
“Indeed it is, jellybag leader. For I am . . . Meldar!” and Meldar floated out of the dark.
“Yup, just fantastic.”
“But Meldar and Mr. Calamitous, what do you want?” Carl asked worriedly. Sheen started laughing at something that no one else noticed yet.
“That’s—” Calamitous struck his evil pose— “‘Professor Calamitous’ to you!”
“Professor, huh?” Sheen said, amused. “If you’re so smart then what happened to your pants?”
Calamitous looked down and realized that his pants were lying on the floor in a gray heap. He turned red and pulled then up again; Sheen continued laughing.
After Jimmy got over this, the angry look returned to his face.
“So, Meldar, what’s your evil plan this time?” Jimmy wanted to know.
“Hey, what about me? I’ve had many more evil plans than Meldar, why are you asking him?”
“Because I’m the genius here, you’re just my assistant, remember nitwit?” Meldar explained crossly.
“Excuse me!”
Meldar rolled his eyes and fished a bag out of his jacket pocket. He opened the bag, took out a piece of chocolate, and threw it into Calamitous’s mouth.
“Right, I’m a nitwit, assistant, whatever,” he said, grinning.
Meldar rolled his eyes again. “No wonder Beautiful Gorgeous left you.”
“Ahem.” Jimmy cleared his throat. “Meldar . . . plan . . . evil . . . you?”
“Oh, right.” Meldar fumbled through his pockets and found a miniature flashlight; he held it under his chin as though he were about to recite a ghost story.
“Remember when Vandanna confiscated my cufflinks?”
“Hey, I confiscated them and gave them to Vandanna!” Jimmy protested.
“Ugh, details,” Meldar said, rolling his eyes and waving his hand. “Anyway, when Vandanna confiscated my cufflinks she took out the activation microchip and robotically electrified it so I couldn’t remove it from its hiding spot.”
“And?” Jimmy prompted him.
“So, you brainless little jellybags, I need you to get it for me!”
Jimmy and Libby both raised an eyebrow.
“Excuse me, but what makes you think we’re gunna do it for THAT tone?”
Meldar floated forward threateningly. Carl whimpered and crouched behind Sheen, but Jimmy took three steps forward. Meldar looked surprised.
“No way, Meldar!” Jimmy shouted.
“Yeah, in your dreams!” Libby proclaimed. Cindy stared at her with a weird expression on her face.
“I repeat, excuse me? You will do what I say or else.” Meldar flashed an evil grin.
Jimmy was starting to look the slightest bit afraid, but Libby felt skeptical and looked angry. She took a few more steps forward and spoke. “Or what.”
Meldar looked taken aback. “Well, I dunno, I didn’t think the head jellybag’s leader’s new girlfriend would challenge my royal evilness.”
“She’s not my girlfriend!” Jimmy cried, at the same time as Cindy, Libby, and Sheen. “And you are NOT a royal evilness.”
“Yeah,” Carl piped up, “that’s King Goobat.”
“Who’s King Goobat?” Meldar asked, looking bewildered.
“What? Man, have you been living in outer space?” Sheen laughed. “King Goobat is only the weirdest, most annoying. . .” he trailed off when he saw Jimmy stifling a laugh. “Oh, I guess you have been living it outer space!”
“Pchduh, Sheen, you should have said he lived in a cave!” Carl scoffed.
“But he doesn’t!”
“That’s the point!”
“Argh, enough with the flibberty-gibber!” Meldar shouted.
“Someone’s been spending a little too much time with Cap’n Betty,” Sheen whispered to Carl. Meldar scowled.
“As I was saying, you five are gunna get the microchip for me and when I rule the world you’ll get a small financial reward, kapish?”
Jimmy started to answer when Libby tapped his shoulder:
“Jimmy, what are we gunna do?” she hissed.
“Yeah Neutron, if we don’t get the chip he’s gunna find something to finish that ‘or else,’ and if we do get it he’s gunna rule the world!” Cindy added.
“I think he’s been spending a little too much time with Calamitous, too,” Sheen commented. “Isn’t taking over the world sort of his thing?”
“Neutron, think of something!”
Professor Calamitous reappeared from the bathroom; this reminded Jimmy of something.
“Think, think, think. . .” Jimmy muttered, closing his eyes and clenching his fists.

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REPLY!!

[AnDrEa]

oh cool!! you finished it!!! an with a brain bomb!! I mean brain blast!!! cool!!




o:) Andre o:)

[sunnstar]

XD
Thanks! Andrea is my new favorite fan cuz she's always the fastest to reply! =D

[AnDrEa]

XD
Thanks! Andrea is my new favorite fan cuz she's always the fastest to reply! =D

awwww thank you!! I's nothing is really the result of lack of sleep and my addiction to ur fanfic and IDOJ!!! :bff:



o:) Andre o:)

[Zeitgheist]

Flibberty-gibber XD ...for some reason, that made me laugh.
I love ridiculous sounding words like that

Argh, another cliffhanger, though! I want to see Jimmy's plan now :dance:

[cynthia_aurora24]

lol, it's three thirty in the morning where I am,
and yet your new chapter stopped me from shutting my laptop.

:lol:

[Ang]

Sunnstar! I am sooo sorry for not replying! School has well, tooken over unfortunately. -_- <_< But I will NOT abandon you I promise!

Wow, I missed a couple chapters aye? Ah, no worries! Its still completely, aweomely, ahmaze-ingly, crazy.......grrrr um, I ran out of words. Hehe.... :unsure:

Anyways, I loved the chapters! Keep writing, keep up the awesome work, your much better than I am at writing(Ho boy is that true!).


Um, yeah ok I think you get the point now. :)


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