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Ooh, nice writing! I usually have my stories planned out to the dot, but sometimes writing stuff randomly is supah fun and helps me keep my juices flowing.  :lol: The images are flowing together a bit more now, and I can tell that you're doing better. Keep up the great chapters, and update soon!

P.S. Did you ever get to read any of my work, or were you too busy? Because that's totally okay if you were...  :unsure:

Thanks! I don't usually have my fics planned to the DOT... maybe like, the small circle, but usually not the dot. I don't think there's been a time where I haven't changed my mind at the last minute about SOMETHING. Anyway, thanks for replying! **hurries to continue writing Chapter 12**

PS. I, um, kinda forgot... can you give me a link?

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Well, I don't have mines planned like, line for line, but I've got the plot down. Hard. XD And I admit... sometimes I do change things at last minute, but usually only because I think it's necessary. Anyway, you're certainly welcome. All authors deserve credit, especially you. :bff:

P.S. Here's my ff.net profile. The further down you venture, the worse the quality of my writing becomes. :lol:

P.P.S. =D

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All I can say is... wow. Just wow, Krista. Talk about word-painting! That was just fabulous!! And I disagree with you (no offense), I like the earlier ones better... my fave one was the J/L. Really awesome!!

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Wait, wait, hold up... how many did you read? @_@ I'm kind of scared now.

Andyeah. Back on topic (since we're getting waay out of line): YOUR STORY ROCKS. KEEP UP THE FANTABULOUS WORK. :thumbsup:

... ^^'

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I read I think all but one, but the heck's Angel's one I read a few random sentences and decided it wasn't my style. NO OFFENSE!!

and you're right, we were off topic... feel free to keep complementing the fic! I'm having major writer's block in the middle of Chapter 12, though, so I'm going crazy... I really would PM the beginning half of it and ask your advice, but it's too early and I don't want to give you such a big spoiler :)

MWAHAHA

thanks for the fabulous work thing! I'll try to keep it up!

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None taken, LOL. heck's Angel starts off pretty rough, no? Don't worry, it's meant to be a gushy mushy JC sap story later on. :lol:; I just barely got to the part where they meet. WOOH FOR MY STUPIDITY OF STARTING OFF SO VIOLENTLY! :rock:

Anyway, I'll keep throwing compliments at you. :P Besides your story being fun and interesting and awesome, I think you're a great author period. Writer's block is Public Enemy #1. :bock:

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You're not stupid, it's just not my style of writing. :)

XD Thanks! Writer's block is actually public enemy #3. #1 is Dolores Umbridge and #2 is Lord Voldemort. Actually, scratch that. #1 is my science teacher from last year. (he closely beat my math, chumash, and history teacher, in that order, though.) Don't you just hate when you know the ending but can't figure out how to get there?

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Aaah, alright. I see. And don't worry, it's okay, I value your opinion!

LOL. Nice try, but I think we ALL know Public Enemy #1 is Cornelia Stuckey (evil English teacher D: *Shudder* ). Wait, wait, no... Public Enemy #1 is...

DUNDUN DUNNN.

LOST INTERNET CONNECTION. :o

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LOL
Lost internet connection isn't too bad unless you were at the very end of typing a post or... AN UNSAVED CHAPTER!!! (although thankfully on microsoft word if you restart the comp and don't save something, the next time you open word a thing will pop up. :)

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Don't you hate it when you type a super-uber-long MEGA post, press the "Add Reply" button, and all of a sudden the internet goes out?

DUDE, THAT'S LEIK ZA WORST. D':

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I know, it really really sucks... once I was typing this loong reply on Nick and I forgot something, and instead of "edit" I clicked "back" which, of course, erased everything. From now on, before I go back to edit (unless it's like one sentence) I always copy everything. Sometimes if I don't think the mod will post it I even save it to word.

Wow, 70 replies and almost 500 views! I'm doing pretty well for a newbie! Oh, excuse me, an AVERAGE JOE.

Guess what? I just thought of another idea for a fic! I'm starting it now, instead of trying to break my writer's block... mwahaha I am evil!

hmm I wonder what this button does **presses the code button over my name**

RACHEL Rachel rachel RACHEL

Edit:: nothing... hm...

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Yeah, same. I copy all of my replies before I post ANYTHING just to make sure. :wacko:

And you must TELL ME OF THIS IDEA! *Pokeprod* Pwease?

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Check your inbox ; wink wink

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how come -Krista gets to know everything before we common people!?!? first chapter Idontremember and now this!! I want to know too :'(
...sorry for that I'm like ff addict and I can't just wait for ANYTHING when talking 'bout ffs I'm EXTREMELY impatient!! lol


o:) Andre o:)

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Checketh your inboxeth.

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Hey guys! I started a "fanfiction fanclub" in the fanclub section... check it out! um, after you R&R, of course B) Enjoy!

Chapter 4

“You ready to go down, Vortex?” Jimmy threatened.
“Oh, please, it doesn’t matter, it’s just a movie anyway,” Cindy yawned.
“Did I mention that the winning team gets a million dollars per person?” Corki added.
“You’re going down, Neutron!” Cindy yelled.
“Wait, Corki, that’s not fair! We only have two people and they have three!” Libby protested.
“Hey, Libbs, Sheen and Carl aren’t real people, their half-brains make them half people. Actually, I think we have the advantage—two smarts against one smart and two idiots.” Cindy was smirking at the boys’ team.
“Hey!! I don’t know what you said, but it sounded mean, so as soon as the words process through my tiny, peanut-sized brain I’ll think of something to say back,” Sheen said confusedly.
“Young movie stars!” Corki interjected crossly. “Will you start already? Here’s your first clue! And, action!”
“Cut!” Jimmy yelled, and Corki groaned. “We don’t even know what to do!”
Corki snapped his fingers and the same guy came back with another donut. Corki ate it and gave Cindy and Jimmy maps, watches, and identical papers:

~*Rules, Instructions, and Guidelines*~
1. Read your first clue and look at the map. Try to find your next clue based on the riddle of the first one. (Girls’ clues are pink and boys’ are blue.)
2. When you find a clue, use your magnetic watches to beam in the papers. They may be on the top of rides or in the car in front of you.
3. Once you’ve found your last clue, the riddle will lead you to more clues and eventually the last one, along with the microchip.
4. If you find the microchip first, you win.
5. None of your clues lead to the same place, except for the chip.
6. If you find the other team’s clue, you may not destroy it, hide it, take it, or change the writing. If you do, your team will be instantly disqualified. There are cameras everywhere, so if you cheat, we’ll know. (This is why there is no camera crew as well.)
7. Keep your eyes open and good luck!
8. Go!

Cindy and Jimmy were both reading it aloud to their teams. As soon as they read number eight, they both opened their clues.

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Ooh, intensiftying. :ph43r:

I'M ROOTING FOR THE BOYS. xD Either way, it may lead to a trap, though (aka the microchip, because I'm not ready to believe that that's Corki). Now you've got me hooked like a fish. And the hook is rather painful with many cliffhangers.

Drat! *Selfpity*

P.S. I am sooo joining that fanfiction fanclub! :thumbsup: Writing is my LIFE (or at least a good majority of it :lol: ).

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COOLY! KEEP WRITING!

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Thanks guys!

[.:!Gwen!:.]

Oh my. Intense.

“Hey!! I don’t know what you said, but it sounded mean, so as soon as the words process through my tiny, peanut-sized brain I’ll think of something to say back,” Sheen said confusedly.

Lmao! I can't wait for more!!! --pressure--






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