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#81 sunnstar

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Posted 15 July 2007 - 04:55 AM

Here's another chappie-wappie! And the last quote is from the movie Sleepover, JSYK.

Chapter 5

Girls:
“Come on, open it faster, open it faster!” Libby hurried.
“I am, I am!” Cindy said. “Come over here where they can’t hear us.”
She opened up the pink piece of paper and put in on the table in front of them. This is what it said:

(Picture of a fire) – E + ST + (Picture of a stop sign) + (Picture of a mailbox) + (Picture of a ghost with a speech bubble and an arrow pointing to the question mark in it) + (Picture of Cindy) + R

“Huh?” Libby said. Her eyes were glazing over.
“Okay, let’s solve this one at a time,” Cindy instructed. She took a pen out of her pocket and started writing on the back of her instructions sheet.
“Fire minus E plus ST, so that’s ‘First,’ and then I guess ‘stop . . .’ then the mailbox is probably ‘mail,’ and what’s this thing with the ghost? It’s pointing to the speech bubble, what does that mean?”
“Boo,” Libby supplied.
“Boo hoo,” Cindy said, trying to think.
“No I mean the clue is ‘boo,’” she explained.
“Huh?”
“It’s pointing to a blank speech bubble from a ghost . . . and ghosts say ‘boo,’ don’t they?” Libby pointed out.
“Genius, pure genius,” Cindy muttered. “So that’s ‘boo’ and then a picture of me? Oh, I bet the answer is ‘me!’” and then that’s plus R, which makes it . . . ‘First stop, mail boomer?” No, that doesn’t make sense—”
“First stop, Maliboomer!” Libby exclaimed.
“Excuse me?”
“It’s a ride, Cindy,” Libby said as if it were incredibly obvious, “called the Maliboomer.”
“That’s awesome!” Cindy exclaimed.
“So all we have to do is go to the Maliboomer, ride it, and find the clue?” Libby asked.
“Let’s go!”
“But wait, we don’t even know where to go,” Libby reasoned.
“That’s why they gave us a map!” Cindy pointed out.
Both girls studied the map intently and after ten seconds, Cindy folded it back up.
“We just go straight down there, turn left, run until we see this, turn right, then go straight, and we’re there.”
She and Libby started running past the boys as fast as they could.
“What are you doing?” Jimmy shouted.
Cindy looked over her shoulder as she ran.
“Winning!”
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Posted 16 July 2007 - 03:38 AM

Mkay dudes... replies?
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Posted 16 July 2007 - 04:27 AM

Sorry I wasn't here. I have an attention span of a fish soyeah. Mkay now....*takes a deep breath.....*



OHEMGEE THAT WAS SOAWESOME RACHAEL! KEEP WRITING!


ITSSOAWESOMETERRIFICBLOWEDMYMINDSHORTLITTLEPOSTYTHINGS I EVER SAW!



That pays up yah?
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Posted 17 July 2007 - 12:23 AM

YAY WRITE MORE SOON!
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Posted 17 July 2007 - 03:21 AM

That pays up yah?

Yeah, it does. =D
And its Rachel, not Rachael.
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Posted 17 July 2007 - 03:22 AM

YAY WRITE MORE SOON!

Thanks, I will! I'll post it as soon as I get... **thinks** 4 more replies.

EDIT:: guys! It's been 2 days and no replies! Come on, I'm starting to think I should stop posting!
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Posted 19 July 2007 - 10:01 PM

Guys, I'm losing faith in you. I think from now on, maybe should I just PM the chapters to the people who are actually reading? Sounds good to me. Anyway, two or three readers: enjoy!

Chapter 6

“Jimmy,” Carl whined, “the girls are beating us!”
“I know, I know, but I can’t figure out this clue! Oh, if only I had my decoder watch!”
For the billionth time, he peered hopefully at the paper as if the answer would jump out at him:

D + (picture of a car) – J + (picture of a shirt with an arrow pointing to a white spot) – L + O + (picture of a tree) + H – RE + JU + (picture of a slanted L) – A

“I mean, I know I’m supposed to be a genius, but this is ridiculous!” Jimmy said exasperatedly.
“Can’t you just think harder? The girls probably already found their next clue!” Carl moaned.
“I’m trying!” Jimmy told him crossly. “But, like, D + car – J? There’s no J in car!” He was becoming hysterical.
“Hey Jim, can I try?” Sheen asked.
Jimmy turned red-faced to Sheen, who was playing a Nintendo game with his feet on the table.
“What makes you think that if I can’t figure it out, <I>you</I> could?!”
“Can I just try?” Sheen said.
“Fine,” Jimmy surrendered, turning his back to Sheen and crossing his arms, “but I guarantee you won’t be able to—”
“I got the first word!”
“What?!” Jimmy exploded.
“Go Sheen!” Carl cheered.
“See, I may not be school smart—”
“You can say that again,” Jimmy muttered.
“As I was SAYING, before I was so RUDELY inter<I>rup</I>ted, that I may not be school smart, but I do know cars,” Sheen explained.
“Huh?” the other two boys demanded.
“Look . . . D plus a picture of a <I>Jeep</I>,” Sheen said as if it were the most obvious thing in the world, “minus J equals ‘Deep!’” he looked incredibly proud of himself.
“Uh huh . . .” Jimmy said looking thoughtful. “Continue . . .”
“But I don’t know what this is!” Sheen looked confused.
“Ah, now that’s a face I recognize,” Jimmy teased him.
“Hey, Jimmy, that’s not very n—AHH! Lint!” Carl screamed.
“What?”
“Lint! On the paper . . . get it off!!” he begged.
“Oh, I get it! Lint minus L is int, plus O is ‘into!’” Now Sheen was getting hysterical. “Plus a tree plus H, minus RE is . . . teh? No, the!”
“I know the next one!” Jimmy yelled excitedly. “That’s an angle! JU plus angle minus A is jungle . . . ‘Deep into the Jungle!’”
“But that’s on the other side of the park! We’ll never get there in time!” Carl said.
“We will with my rocket shoes!” Jimmy said, grinning.
“But Jimmy, I’m sure those are against the rules,” Carl said worriedly. “Won’t we be disqualified?”
“Don’t listen to him, Jimmy,” Sheen shrieked. “It doesn’t specifically say ‘You may not use rocket shoes’ and besides, don’t you want to win?”
“You’re right, Sheen,” Jimmy said, gaining confidence. “Gentlemen, grab on!”
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Posted 19 July 2007 - 11:08 PM

I'm liking this, so far. They're headed deep into the jungle.... :ph43r:
But I have a feeling the girls are going to win. Keep writing!!! :thumbsup:
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Posted 19 July 2007 - 11:15 PM

Sorry I didn't reply, my friend and I were having a two-night sleepover marathon. xD I barely had time to get on, and when I did it was to send Mara something. Anyway, keep up the great writing. I'm in anticipation to see who'll win this round. Hey, if the girls win this, the guys have to win at some point. ;)

... Right? :blink:

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Posted 19 July 2007 - 11:26 PM

I'm liking this, so far. They're headed deep into the jungle.... :ph43r:
But I have a feeling the girls are going to win. Keep writing!!! :thumbsup:

Thanks a lot! DUN DUN DUN DUN... into the jungle!
I will, thanks!
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Posted 19 July 2007 - 11:33 PM

Sorry I didn't reply, my friend and I were having a two-night sleepover marathon. xD I barely had time to get on, and when I did it was to send Mara something. Anyway, keep up the great writing. I'm in anticipation to see who'll win this round.


It's okay :)
Thanks! Hey, if you're that much in anticipation... next week on Nick, for Harry Potter Week, I'm posting one chapter a day for five days. :) You can check it out if ya want.

Hey, if the girls win this, the guys have to win at some point.  ;)


MMMMM... maybe... :)
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Posted 19 July 2007 - 11:39 PM

MMMMM... maybe... :)


Whut? You couldn't possibly make them win all. I can tell that the guys would at least win one round. Jimmy is a genius, Sheen is pretty athletic, and Carl is their moral support. They'd do something right eventually, especially since Jimmy learns quickly.

But then again you never said that they'd lose, you just said "maybe." =D I'm an idiot.

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Posted 19 July 2007 - 11:43 PM

But then again you never said that they'd lose, you just said "maybe."

Mmmm... MAYBE
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Posted 20 July 2007 - 12:56 AM

YAY Good chappy. Keep writing. :thumbsup:
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Posted 20 July 2007 - 12:58 AM

YAY Good chappy. Keep writing. :thumbsup:

Yay another reply! :thumbsup: And thanks... I will!
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Posted 20 July 2007 - 01:19 AM

Sweet chapter. Write on! :rock:
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Posted 20 July 2007 - 01:25 AM

YAY! I was waiting for the next chapter. Hehe...... GO RACHEL! :bff:

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Posted 20 July 2007 - 01:29 AM

Sweet chapter. Write on! :rock:

I totally will, and thanks!
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Posted 20 July 2007 - 01:30 AM

YAY! I was waiting for the next chapter. Hehe...... GO RACHEL! :bff:

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Yay! GO AMANDA FOR POSTING! ;)

Um... who's Sha?
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Posted 20 July 2007 - 01:56 AM

Oops. Sorry, I meant Shadow. My keyboard cuts off words for some weird reason.

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