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Temper Tantrum
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Posted 16 September 2007 - 10:20 PM
OH! ITS GREAT! MORE! :thumbsup:
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Posted 16 September 2007 - 11:01 PM
Amazing as ever, Beks! Keep going, it's great! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
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Posted 17 September 2007 - 12:00 AM
WOW! YES! What I've been waiting for!
First of all, the JC in this? Pure, :wub: I LOVE IT! CE? CARL WAS ACTUALLY NOT BEING SCARED?! SQUEEEEEEEEEEE. Carl is just so awesome like that! YAY CE! And Sheen? Oh wow Sheen. LOL. "But, my dad told me not to do that anymore!" That was pure, Sheen-ness there. = :P
Thanks for the heads-up on this chapter! PLEASE, keep me updated if ya can! I would appreciate it. ^_^
As you can see, no matter how much time I have. I ALWAYS give great feedback! Its one of my talents. So expect a great reply from me!
First of all, the JC in this? Pure, :wub: I LOVE IT! CE? CARL WAS ACTUALLY NOT BEING SCARED?! SQUEEEEEEEEEEE. Carl is just so awesome like that! YAY CE! And Sheen? Oh wow Sheen. LOL. "But, my dad told me not to do that anymore!" That was pure, Sheen-ness there. = :P
Thanks for the heads-up on this chapter! PLEASE, keep me updated if ya can! I would appreciate it. ^_^
As you can see, no matter how much time I have. I ALWAYS give great feedback! Its one of my talents. So expect a great reply from me!
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Posted 17 September 2007 - 12:01 AM
Great fanfic!! I LOVE THE JC MOMENTS!! It makes me want to SQUEEEE FOREVER!!! I LOVE IT!!! Good Going!
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Posted 17 September 2007 - 12:17 AM
Awww! Guys, you're making me blush! (again) Thanx! I might actually hurry with a new chapter!
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Posted 17 September 2007 - 01:18 AM
HEY!
Wow this is AWESOME! I hope Cindy can come up with another plan! I hope Jimmy don't kill anyone! And I hope you'll post the next chapter SSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!
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Wow this is AWESOME! I hope Cindy can come up with another plan! I hope Jimmy don't kill anyone! And I hope you'll post the next chapter SSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!
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Posted 17 September 2007 - 01:22 AM
Thanx! Oh, and welcome to IDOJ!
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Posted 17 September 2007 - 02:59 AM
*tastes*A little J/C, a little C/E, and a dash of Sheen! Voila!
mmm!
it's coming along quite deliciously!
c'est magnifique. now I'm excited again for the next chapter!
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Posted 20 October 2007 - 05:40 PM
I'm sorry guys! I know I havent posted a chapter in forever, but I have a loophole, I mean an explaination: one word: SCHOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I've been swamped everyday! This might take a while. Sorry. -_-
I've been swamped everyday! This might take a while. Sorry. -_-
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Posted 20 October 2007 - 07:15 PM
okay dokay!
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Posted 25 November 2007 - 12:25 AM
ok, I know I made you guys wait so long, so here *holds out hand* slap my hand. I deserve it. Its been over a month since the last chapter. Oh well, hopefully this chapter will help redeem myself.
The Usual Damage
There was an awed silence in the bathroom as the children stared open-mouthed at the hole in the wall left by Jimmy’s escape. They had time to exchange terrified glances before, with a gigantic hiss; sprinklers on the ceiling burst forth a torrent of rain. They turned to the door as Sheen scrambled inside.
“I did it! I got the…” he started to say as he noticed the crumbling wall. “Whoa, what’d I miss?” he asked, looking expectedly at them. The silence broke.
“Well…um, Sheen,” Cindy said. “Jimmy kind of…turned into a rampaging monster again.”
“Really? Cool! This dance just keeps getting better and better!” Sheen said, a goofy look of enchantment on his face. Libby turned to Cindy, her hands over her head to protect it from the sprinklers.
“What do we do now, Cindy?” she said. Cindy looked down at Jimmy’s watch, now clamped to her wrist.
“We get help, that’s what we do.” she said. “Come on, everyone outside”. She led the way out the hole in the wall. By the light of the full moon, people dressed in their best attire were running terrified down the street in the wake of the orange monster. Jimmy didn’t seem interested in them, however. He scanned the screaming crowd for a certain someone, overturning cars and peering underneath. As the kids stood outside, taking in the bizarre scene, Sam crossed their path, running wildly with his hands over his head.
“Not again! I’m outta here, yeah.” He said. They watched his progress out of sight. Tearing her eyes away from the distraction, she looked down at the watch, tapping it with a finger.
“Oh I hope this works!” she thought. From the watch, she heard mechanical clicking and a bark. “Goddard?” she asked into the watch. On a tiny screen, the metal canine leaped up from the floor of Jimmy’s room and inclined his head.
“Goddard, no time to explain. Jimmy’s in trouble and we need your help. Come downtown as fast as you can.” An affirmative bark came from the bark. “Oh, and bring the jet-pack.” Another bark. She tapped the watch again, returning it to normal. She looked up at the gang.
“Ok guys, I know you want to help, but I need you to stay away from Jimmy while he’s like this.” She held up her hands as protests erupted from the group. “Look guys, listen. Last time we did this, we all had superpowers. But now we don’t have that advantage. I need you to stay here.”
“But Cindy…” Libby said. Cindy interrupted.
“No Libby. You guys have a good chance getting really hurt if you come. Do this for me now, and I’ll never ask anything from you again. Please. I don’t want to see any of you hurt.” Libby sighed.
“All right girl, but I don’t want to see you hurt either.” They looked up as Goddard whirled above them, a strap of Jimmy’s jet-pack held in his metal teeth. He landed and Cindy took the jet-pack from him, slowly putting it on.
“First the watch, and now his jet-pack. What’s next, his catchphrases?” She smiled a little. Staring determinately at her friends, she said, “Don’t worry. I have a plan.” She felt the red button on the jet-pack’s left strap. “I’ll see you guys later.” She said. She pressed the button, and felt the twin rockets pop from the side, roaring with fire. As she lifted up from the ground, on some strange impulse, she shouted, “Gotta blast!” and immediately stated laughing in spite of herself, both at herself and the looks on her friends faces as they grew smaller from her view in the sky.
“Ya now, being Jimmy has its quirks.” She thought as she streaked across the sky, Goddard in tow.
From her position in the sky, Cindy could see whole streets destroyed, fires, smashed cars, the usual damage. Cindy scanned for some sign of jet black hair, a glimpse of a maroon blazer, or a shimmer coming off of pair of pearly white buckteeth.
“If I were Eustace, where would I hide?” Cindy said to herself. She pondered this for a second, and then caught sight of Madame Melissa’s Expensive Jewelry Store.
“Aha!” she said, maneuvering towards the store.
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So, does that make up for the long wait?
The Usual Damage
There was an awed silence in the bathroom as the children stared open-mouthed at the hole in the wall left by Jimmy’s escape. They had time to exchange terrified glances before, with a gigantic hiss; sprinklers on the ceiling burst forth a torrent of rain. They turned to the door as Sheen scrambled inside.
“I did it! I got the…” he started to say as he noticed the crumbling wall. “Whoa, what’d I miss?” he asked, looking expectedly at them. The silence broke.
“Well…um, Sheen,” Cindy said. “Jimmy kind of…turned into a rampaging monster again.”
“Really? Cool! This dance just keeps getting better and better!” Sheen said, a goofy look of enchantment on his face. Libby turned to Cindy, her hands over her head to protect it from the sprinklers.
“What do we do now, Cindy?” she said. Cindy looked down at Jimmy’s watch, now clamped to her wrist.
“We get help, that’s what we do.” she said. “Come on, everyone outside”. She led the way out the hole in the wall. By the light of the full moon, people dressed in their best attire were running terrified down the street in the wake of the orange monster. Jimmy didn’t seem interested in them, however. He scanned the screaming crowd for a certain someone, overturning cars and peering underneath. As the kids stood outside, taking in the bizarre scene, Sam crossed their path, running wildly with his hands over his head.
“Not again! I’m outta here, yeah.” He said. They watched his progress out of sight. Tearing her eyes away from the distraction, she looked down at the watch, tapping it with a finger.
“Oh I hope this works!” she thought. From the watch, she heard mechanical clicking and a bark. “Goddard?” she asked into the watch. On a tiny screen, the metal canine leaped up from the floor of Jimmy’s room and inclined his head.
“Goddard, no time to explain. Jimmy’s in trouble and we need your help. Come downtown as fast as you can.” An affirmative bark came from the bark. “Oh, and bring the jet-pack.” Another bark. She tapped the watch again, returning it to normal. She looked up at the gang.
“Ok guys, I know you want to help, but I need you to stay away from Jimmy while he’s like this.” She held up her hands as protests erupted from the group. “Look guys, listen. Last time we did this, we all had superpowers. But now we don’t have that advantage. I need you to stay here.”
“But Cindy…” Libby said. Cindy interrupted.
“No Libby. You guys have a good chance getting really hurt if you come. Do this for me now, and I’ll never ask anything from you again. Please. I don’t want to see any of you hurt.” Libby sighed.
“All right girl, but I don’t want to see you hurt either.” They looked up as Goddard whirled above them, a strap of Jimmy’s jet-pack held in his metal teeth. He landed and Cindy took the jet-pack from him, slowly putting it on.
“First the watch, and now his jet-pack. What’s next, his catchphrases?” She smiled a little. Staring determinately at her friends, she said, “Don’t worry. I have a plan.” She felt the red button on the jet-pack’s left strap. “I’ll see you guys later.” She said. She pressed the button, and felt the twin rockets pop from the side, roaring with fire. As she lifted up from the ground, on some strange impulse, she shouted, “Gotta blast!” and immediately stated laughing in spite of herself, both at herself and the looks on her friends faces as they grew smaller from her view in the sky.
“Ya now, being Jimmy has its quirks.” She thought as she streaked across the sky, Goddard in tow.
From her position in the sky, Cindy could see whole streets destroyed, fires, smashed cars, the usual damage. Cindy scanned for some sign of jet black hair, a glimpse of a maroon blazer, or a shimmer coming off of pair of pearly white buckteeth.
“If I were Eustace, where would I hide?” Cindy said to herself. She pondered this for a second, and then caught sight of Madame Melissa’s Expensive Jewelry Store.
“Aha!” she said, maneuvering towards the store.
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So, does that make up for the long wait?
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Posted 25 November 2007 - 01:47 AM
WOW BEKA!! That was great! LOLIloveSheen. "Really? Ooh, cool!" and hahaha, Eustace at the jewelry store. :lol:
Genius, Beks, genius!
Genius, Beks, genius!
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Posted 25 November 2007 - 02:00 AM
"First the watch, and now his jet-pack. What's next, his catchphrases?"
Hehe, Beks, that was genius. This whole chapter was great; I have to say that must've been one of my favorite lines. But I loved this a lot too...
Cindy scanned for some sign of jet black hair, a glimps of a maroon blazer, or a shimmer coming of a pair of pearly white buckteeth.
LOL, I can just imagine them sparkling blindingly in the moonlight... :lol:
Excellent work, as usual! I hope you can get the next chapter up sooner...right? :unsure:
~Rach~
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Posted 25 November 2007 - 02:10 AM
I just love this fanfic! It Awesome!! You got it dude!
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Posted 25 November 2007 - 02:10 AM
remember, I'm doing double duty with fanfics. I'm writing a chapter for Letters to Sweden first, then another chapter for Temper Tantrum, and so on.
oh, and thanks! :wub: you all think I'm a genius. If only you knew... :ph43r:
oh, and thanks! :wub: you all think I'm a genius. If only you knew... :ph43r:
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Posted 25 November 2007 - 02:11 AM
LOL. "If only you knew..." one of my favorite quotes... :D
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Posted 25 November 2007 - 02:20 AM
Right! :thumbsup: Hurray for doing double duty! We'll have to watch for the next chapter to "Letters to Sweden", first... Well, I hope that chapter and the next to "Temper Tantrum" BOTH come soon!remember, I'm doing double duty with fanfics. I'm writing a chapter for Letters to Sweden first, then another chapter for Temper Tantrum, and so on.
oh, and thanks! :wub: you all think I'm a genius. If only you knew... :ph43r:
"If only you knew..." C'mon, that was a work of genius! You're a literary genius, if nothing else! You can't deny it, Beks!!!!!!!!!!!!
And seriously, whatever you're referring to can't be as bad as the blonde moments I've had at work. :blink:
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Posted 25 November 2007 - 02:21 AM
it's an actual quote! from where? :huh:
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