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[sunnstar]

No, just said by a lot of people. XDD

[ShadRose17]

YAY! AWESOME! WRITE MORE!

[Beks]

haha! Writer Woman! *clears throut*

Dun dun dun duuunn! Writer Woman, here to save the day from bad fanfiction!
My laso makes you confess you fanfiction mistakes! *flies away* Whooosh!!!

[J/C AVA]

Nice chapter Beks. HA! That's just like Sheen "This dance keeps getting better." :lol: Can't wait for the next chapter.

[Beks]

@Snazzo: I pretty sure it's lasso, but I make spelling mistakes.

@J/C AVA: thanks! I'll have the next chapter up ASAP

@JimmyandCindyforever: See @J/C AVA

@Sunny: Really? It sounded like it was from an actual something

@CraazyOne: I'm not a genius! and I can prove it! See! *drools*



@everyone: thanks a bunch for the replies! You guys rock! :rock: *Writer Woman flies away into the sun set* Whooosh!!!

[Chica_Andromeda]

Ooh, Beks, GREAT job! :thumbsup:

This chapter was awesome! And darn funny. I love your narrative so much... < 3

Keep up the great work! ^_^

[Ang]

Beks, seriously, it's WOW.


I must say, that's an amazing chapter. I love it! I mean, wow! Left me utterly speechless. :D

What I really loved though, was the fact that Cindy was using Jim's catchphrase. AMAZING.


YOU WIN A COOKIE.

[Beks]

Yah! Cookie! *munches down*

[Justine<3]

BEKA!
(I think I might be the only one who calls you this here...)

I read all the chapters on ff.net (no review, too young to get an account...) and now I read the newest chapter...


....AWESOME! I loved it! Great job!

PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!


~*(+Justine+)*~

[sunnstar]

JUST SO BEKA KNOWZ:: I actually like it when you PM me telling me there's a new chapter, btw. I almost never check the *FF forum, so when you tell me you updated, I APPRECIATE IT. XD Just so you know!

Edit:: And no you're not, Justine. I call her Beka, Bekas, or (IDK if I've ever actually typed this tho but it sounds cool in my head) Bekaz.

[Justine<3]

Edit:: And know you're not, Justine. I call her Beka, Bekas, or (IDK if I've ever actually typed this tho but it sounds cool in my head) Bekaz.

LOL. OK.


~*(+Justine+)*~

[JimmySpaz]

Whoa, Bekz. Sorry for my being...well, very late with this reply. :unsure:

I'd have to say that this chapter does make up for the wait (heck, mine are waay longer, I've had my readers ((if there are any left)) waiting since August or September :blink: ) Thanks for sending me the PM telling me you updated, your ff's are always worth reading! This chapter was just as amazin' as I knew it would be. (you wrote it, c'mon! :rolleyes: ) Can't wait till next update!

[CraazyOne]

JUST SO BEKA KNOWZ:: I actually like it when you PM me telling me there's a new chapter, btw. I almost never check the *FF forum, so when you tell me you updated, I APPRECIATE IT. XD Just so you know!

Yeah, Beks, that was a good idea... I wouldn't wanted to have MISSED your excellent chapter! :o So thanks for lettin' us all know. :D

~Rach~

[Beks]

your welcome! *cough* new chapter in Letters to Sweden

[Beks]

it's been, what, less than two weeks, and I already have a new chapter? I'm on a roll! *sizzle* I wonder if being Writer Woman had anything to do with it? :blink:


An Unlikely Alliance

Cindy rocketed to the jewelry store and tried to land carefully, but with a sputtering from the jets, they gave out and she fell the short distance onto the hard pavement, landing on her butt.

“Ow. Not to self: Next time Jimmy does that, don’t laugh at him.” She said to herself, getting up and rubbing her backside. She looked through the store window, and saw deserted rows of glass display cases glittering with expensive gems. She opened the door, making the door bell echo strangely in the silent store. Walking carefully across the thin carpeted floor, Cindy tuned her acute senses to pick up the smallest hint of the rich boy’s presence. She walked behind the counter and suddenly, from a large cabinet, she heard a voice.

“Whoever you are, I’m warning you…go away or I’ll…I’ll…” Cindy opened the cabinet to find Eustace scrunched up in it, his hands halfheartedly in fists.

“You’ll what?” Cindy said, an amused smirk on her face. Eustace unclenched his pathetic fists and quickly put an irritated face over his frightened one.

“Oh it’s you, is it?” he said as he climbed out of the cabinet. He dusted off his blazer and attempted to seem as dignified as possible, but Cindy wasn’t impressed. She continued staring at him with an amused glare until he gave up.

“Oh all right, go ahead. Laugh at me for running away like a little girl. I know you want to.” He said. Cindy crossed her arms and shifted her weight to one side, still smirking.

“Actually, I came here with a proposition for you, Strych.” She said. Eustace slowly smiled, his dark eyes flashing. “A deal, eh?” he said. “All right, let’s hear it.” He too crossed his arms. Cindy put her hands on her hips and glared unafraid into his eyes.

“You know I want to get Jimmy under control, right?” she said.

“Right.” Eustace said slowly.

“And you like living here, in your big fancy mansion, right?”

“Right.”

“Well,” Cindy said, suddenly grabbing Eustace’s blazer. “If you don’t help me get Jimmy back to normal, I’ll kick you to Algeria!” Eustace held up his hands

“Ah! Not the face!” he said. Cindy let Eustace go, her hands back on her hips.

“Do we have an understanding, then?”

“All right, I’ll help get your little boyfriend back, but no one better find out about this, or I’ll see no end of it.” Cindy rolled her eyes. “Fine.” She said.

Suddenly, an earth-quaking tremor shook the ground, knocking them to the floor, following by a distant roar.

“How, perchance, are we going to catch him…it…whatever you want to call it!” Eustace said exasperatedly, sitting up from the floor.

“I have a plan. It’s a bit sketchy, but it’ll have to do.” Cindy said. “Ok, I lead Jimmy somehow into that dead end at the end of Turner Street, where you’ll be hiding, and Goddard will secretly project a holographic car that will be falling straight at me. Hopefully, Jimmy won’t notice it’s not real.”

“And if he does?” Eustace yelled. Cindy ignored him.

“Jimmy will think I’m in trouble, and that’s where you come in. You ‘save’ me from the car, Jimmy’ll see it, think you’re not so bad, and turn back to normal.”

“And you think that’ll work?” Eustace said.

“Well, I don’t see any of your great plans!” Cindy took up her glare once again.

“Fine, but I still don’t like it.”

“Ok, now go to the dead end, and I’ll be there with Jimmy.” Cindy said. Eustace nodded, and they both ran out from behind the counter and out the door. Cindy watched Eustace sprint away around the corner. “This has to work.” She thought as she once again blasted into the sky.

She found Jimmy in the park, straining to uproot a tree while the squirrel in it pelted him with acorns from above, making him even more angry.

“Squirrels mock Jimmy! Jimmy smash squirrels!” he yelled. Cindy landed behind him where he couldn’t see her. Suddenly realizing that her N-men powers couldn’t save her if this went wrong, she was reluctant to attract hi attention. But she finally took a deep breath, and then called his name.

[sunnstar]

LOL, that was awesome! "Squirrels mock Jimmy!" ROFL!!!

**coughit'sStrych**

Keep up the good work!!

[Justine<3]

Oh awesome!

Great chapter Beka! I canNOT wait for more! Great going!

sigh, I always write the dumbest replies...


~*(+Justine+)*~

[Beks]

**coughit'sStrych**

eh, whatever. it all sounds the same to me. ^_^