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#61 sunnstar

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Posted 09 July 2007 - 04:03 AM

Of course I am. Just tomorrow, when I get some sleep, I promise.
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Posted 26 July 2007 - 02:18 AM

Are you going to write more, BekBoo? :unsure:

I really want to hear more! Pleaseee? **puppydogeyes**

Its been a really longg time since you've posted.



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Posted 26 July 2007 - 11:55 PM

I will, I promise! I swear on my love of Sheen that I will write it and post it as soon as I possibly can! I've just been so busy lately. I promise I will put it up ASAP!
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Posted 27 July 2007 - 12:01 AM

*le GASP!*

Your a-alive...?! :o

Its a mircle! YAY! I will sooo wait on it BekBoo, I swear on my love for Shadow and Silver! (LOL :lol: )

YES. I know what you mean. I might not get to get on IDOJ during the week when school starts! :o Its soo unfair! But, if I cool my time on here, my mom said she MIGHT let me on during the week.


**bows to my mom**

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Posted 27 July 2007 - 06:30 PM

BekBoo, I am INCREDIBLY SORRY it took so long! I was in this forum and I was like, okay Rachel, you promised to read it, so read it NOW. And I did and guess what?
You know that old person llllllllllong ago who made the dictionary? He was stupid enough to limit the synonyms of "FABULOUS" to a few. He completely forgot Mara-tastic and, of course (since I don't know your name) BEKBOOTASTIC!! this fic is SO bafulous! (Yes, bafulous. wink to krista who for some reason has not read this and abandoned my fic) I'm actually glad you stopped there because if I read another chapter (at least in the next ten minutes) it would totally ruin the green eyes thing suspense.

LOVIN IT!!

And I love love love your "Hocrux for Sale" thing. It would be funnier if you asked for "Volly Wolly" or "Voldy Woldy" or "The Dead Lord" or "The Dark Chicken" or something. Heehee
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Posted 27 July 2007 - 07:45 PM

Glad you like it! ^_^ By the way, my name's Rebeka, but you can call me Beks! B) But seriously, I need to write the next chapter super quick, or there'll be an angry mob! :angrymob:


Stay BekBootastic! :thumbsup:
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Posted 27 July 2007 - 09:21 PM

BekBootastic you are! and yes, I will be part of that angry mob...

OMG, just wondering, do you go on the Nick boards and if you do, did you read Tropicalee's fic Shall We Dance? ITS BEKBOOTASTIC, and it reminds me completely of this. Actually at first I thought you WERE Tropicalee. =D

LOVE the new siggy!
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Posted 28 July 2007 - 04:19 AM

And I love yours! ^_^ I play flute, and I loved her hair so I put it up!

I think I might have heard of Shall We Dance. Maybe I named my chapter subconsiously after it. Who knows? :blink: I am not Tropicalee, I 100% guarrantee. He/She (probably she) sounds cool if they're BekBootastic! ^_^
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Posted 29 July 2007 - 04:04 AM

Thanks! I don't know who the person in your siggy is, tho, I seemed to have missed something on the boards because practically all drawings are in similar animations.
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Posted 07 August 2007 - 03:01 AM

Ok, finally here's the next chapter:


Chapter 13: The Rage That Blinds


Jimmy stomped over to the refreshment table and angrily grabbed a cup. Filling it with punch, he downed it in one. He got another and turned around to find Cindy staring at him.

“What?” he said irritably.

“Oh, nothing.” Cindy said sarcastically. “You just put Eustace in an arm lock, that’s all!”

“He deserved it.”

“Well, maybe he did,” Cindy said. “But that doesn’t explain why you did it. Usually I’m the one who resorts to fighting. I didn’t even know you could do an arm lock.”

Jimmy glared into the midst of the people still waltzing around the room. It seemed an eternity since Cindy and himself had too been dancing carefree across the room.

“I don’t know why I did it either. Maybe it was impulse, but I’ve never done that to anyone before, even to people like Eustace.” He closed his eyes. “Lately, I’ve been getting irritated very easily. Yesterday, when I was watching my favorite show, that emergency test screen came on. I got so mad; I threw my soda at the TV.” He glanced at Cindy. She was still staring at him, but with an expression he could not identify. He averted his eyes, afraid he would get mad at her too.

“Right now, when I think of Eustace I just want to…” He suddenly squeezed his cup, making it collapse in his hand, spilling punch down his arm and onto his angrily distorted face. He looked up at Cindy’s now plainly terrified face and his expression softened a little.

“I’m going to clean up in the bathroom.” He said a little too angrily than he meant. He tossed the cup into a trash can, and with a last look at Cindy, disappeared into the bathroom.

Cindy stood on the spot, staring at the door. Her expression displayed a mixture of sadness and fear. Suddenly Libby, Sheen, Carl, and Elkie came up to her, fresh from the dance floor.

“Hey Cin…” Libby started. “Whoa! What happened? Where’s Jimmy?” she said, seeing the look on her face. Cindy looked at Libby. She would always understand.

“Jimmy and I bumped into Eustace on the dance floor, literally. He tried to get Jimmy to let him dance with me, but Jimmy wouldn’t have it. When Eustace insisted, Jimmy, our Jimmy, put Eustace in an arm lock.” She paused as looks of shock and amazement crossed all their faces. “He’s in the bathroom right now, calming down I think.” She looked at the door again. “I just don’t know what to do.”

Inside the bathroom, Jimmy splashed his face, hunched forward in front of the sink. Water dripping down his face, he slowly straightened up. He looked absently in the mirror, and yelled out. There, where his reflection should have been was the face of a gruesome monster. He looked behind him, and seeing no one, looked closer at the monster. It had cracked, orange skin, and green hair and eyes. Apparently, it was very wide shouldered, because Jimmy couldn’t see its entire outline. Jimmy stood staring at this strange unfamiliar creature impersonating his reflection, yet he couldn’t help feeling like he knew it somehow. Then the reflection spoke, and a shocking realization hit Jimmy.

“You!” he shouted.




Ooo, what will happen next?
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Posted 07 August 2007 - 03:18 AM

:D YAY! NICE CHAPPY! WRITE MORE SOON!
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Posted 07 August 2007 - 04:52 AM

ACK! Awesome yet again Beks! I can't wait to hear more! I actually got jinxed on my Chapter 13 as well..... but, I wrote it finally! The sad part is, I have NO idea what to do with Chapter 14! Grrr.. :grr:


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Posted 07 August 2007 - 03:37 PM

As for me, I have tons of ideas for chapter 14. I'm going to...wait...I can't tell you what I'm going to do. That will ruin the surprise! :P
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Posted 10 August 2007 - 04:43 AM

Lucky you.... <_< But yay for me cause I can't wait to read chapter 14! YAY! :dance:



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Posted 11 August 2007 - 03:08 PM

It will come ASAP, I promise. Unfortunetly, school starts for me on the 23rd, so i'm kind of busy now.
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Posted 11 August 2007 - 04:33 PM

Lucky you. School starts back for me...tommorrow! :o I know right? But I will still read don't worry!


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Posted 11 August 2007 - 06:13 PM

Lucky you. School starts back for me...tommorrow! :o I know right? But I will still read don't worry!


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:blink: :blink: Tomorrow? Is Sunday.... Your school starts on Sunday?
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Posted 11 August 2007 - 06:30 PM

Oh....I thought today was Sunday.... :lol: Heh. I shouldn't have ate chocalte today.... :lol:


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Posted 11 August 2007 - 06:32 PM

Oh....I thought today was Sunday.... :lol: Heh. I shouldn't have ate chocalte today.... :lol:


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:lol: I was thinking that yeasterday! I thought today was sunday! HAHA! But its not, Its satrday
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Posted 12 August 2007 - 02:19 AM

I just read your fanfic now, and I love it!!! :D The plot is thoroughly intriguing and your characterizations are dead-on.

I really can't wait until you post the next chapter!! ^_^
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