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[caseyrox76]

I knew the real Sheen was under there somewhere! He's so awesomely creepy (and really kinda hot)!
And Dictator Jimmy kind of scares the crap outta me. <_< Poor Libby! And poor Aurora!
Amazing update, Mara! :kawaii:

[Mara=^.^=]

LOL @ everyone's comments.

I'm afraid I may have gone a bit overboard with DJ's sadism in this chapter. I just wanted him to make a strong first impression, cause I know that FS was bound to make an even stronger first impression...

Incidentally, nobody's mentioned the events that happen at the beginning of the chapter. Thoughts?

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[caseyrox76]

It was a little disapointing, and a little nerve racking because now the kids have the only vile of antidote, and now they're trapped in the emotion-maze. :unsure: AND they have no clue that the second vile had been broken. I'm nervous for them. *bites nails* Also, Aurora's reaction was almost kind of masochistic and creepy-- but it a good way. It was really gripping and really powerful. :D

[okmeamithinknow]

I'm freaking out now... Only one antidote left and it's the kids that have it? Crap! Things are not going to go well. :o

I love that they're going to have to work together to get through the last 6 rooms of DJ's emotional maze. I also think it's so ironic that Jimmy's the one who came up with the idea. It definitely shows him growing up since in WLK he wanted to take all the responsibility on himself for Earth's peril. The concept of different rooms making you feel certain emotions, brilliant! Makes me wonder what emotions are going to lie in the next set of rooms. I wonder if there will be a room that makes them want to tell all their darkest secrets to one another! That would be great for Jimmy and Cindy. :P

I completely spazed when DJ took Future Libby to Future Sheen's cell and when he said "I know just what to do with you…" I knew that was where he was taking her! Oh man, but is that backfire for him? Part of me thinks he should have known better. After all if Sheen would have given up his life for Libby when he sent her back to Earth, what makes him think he's going to kill her now? *Shakes head* Silly DJ, even after all these years he underestimates the true power of love! <3

Future Sheen! OMG!!! Freaking hawt! The only way to describe him. <3

I can't wait for the next update. This is one of the cruelest forms of torture.

[Macey]

OMG MARA.

THAT WAS SO MUCH WIN.

FS is awesome :o Haha, you can tell he's Sheen though. xD I had a feeling DJ would take FL to FS though.

DJ. OMG. Sadism! I knew it! Krista, is that why you love him so much? lol. I have a feeling he knows what FL did though, and ahead of time.

THE ANTIDOTE NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. xD Poor Aurora. She's a strong little lassie. lol.

Wow, those emotion rooms were freaky! Carl scared me so much, :blink:

Great job Mara!

[Beks]

O....M....G!!!! :dance: :dance: :dance:

I'm still all tingly from reading it! ^_^ The emotion maze...SO COOL! I wonder what the next six rooms will be? Paranoia? Lust? :lol:

OH NO! The kids have the only antidote vial left! :wacko: What will become of this? What will become of Aurora? :o

Let this be known for all generations to come: FS is EFFING HAWT!!!!! I can't wait to see if he and Sheen will meet up...it is sure to be hilarious! I wish I could actually see their expressions! :wub:

YESH! DJ has revealed his sadistic self! :dance: Is is bad that I still think he's awesome? :P

AW! No FC in this one...but he might be in the next one! :dance:

*dances the night away* :dance:

[John Richards]

Also, did anyone else see... ummm... mature subtext in this remark?

DICTATOR:And I should perhaps point out that his ravenous appetite extends beyond the need for mere food…

[Beks]

:lol:

[caseyrox76]

Also, did anyone else see... ummm... mature subtext in this remark? DICTATOR:And I should perhaps point out that his ravenous appetite extends beyond the need for mere food…

I did. I blushed when I read that line, John. I'm not sure if that's what it's supposed to mean... but I sure hope not! (Ew.)

[okmeamithinknow]

Also, did anyone else see... ummm... mature subtext in this remark?

DICTATOR:And I should perhaps point out that his ravenous appetite extends beyond the need for mere food…

Oh I got it... and I lol-ed manically!!! Great quote!!!

[John Richards]

...
and if the fic's still rated T, then that gives me an excuse to keep my own fic rated T when I get to the...

Oh yeah, I don't want to spoil it.

[Mara=^.^=]

Also, did anyone else see... ummm... mature subtext in this remark?

DICTATOR:And I should perhaps point out that his ravenous appetite extends beyond the need for mere food…

Yay! I'm glad you picked up on that. There was actually a lot of mature subtext in this chapter. ;)

As far as "DJ should have known better than to put FS and FL together"...well, let's just say that DJ is STILL 2 steps ahead of everyone. He knows something we don't.


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Macey]

As far as "DJ should have known better than to put FS and FL together"...well, let's just say that DJ is STILL 2 steps ahead of everyone. He knows something we don't.

I KNEW IT.

*shot*

[Beks]

I wanna see a "Sheen/FS eye contact WTF" moment! :onfire:

[Zoey <3]

I wanna see a "Sheen/FS eye contact WTF" moment! :onfire:

LOL Me 2

[Kaytron]

now I really can't wait for the next installment.

this FS/FL meeting just hooks you up to the fic even further. (if that's even possible)

^Kaytron^ :ph43r:

[Mara=^.^=]

Thanks everyone!

**waits eagerly for Pigquet's review**


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[okmeamithinknow]

As far as "DJ should have known better than to put FS and FL together"...well, let's just say that DJ is STILL 2 steps ahead of everyone. He knows something we don't.


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

Suck! Oh man that makes me even more impatient for the next installment....

[Mara=^.^=]

LOL I actually have no idea what's gonna happen in the next installment. I haven't written it yet. I have the part after that, but I'm not sure how things will turn out...


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[okmeamithinknow]

I completely understand... Somehow I'll be writing one thing and another idea that should go on later in the story will pop up... I think I have a huge notebook filled with ideas somewhere floating around my room....