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[Macey]

Wow. I feel really...wanted? :huh: LOL


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

YOU SHOULD.

New chapter late tonight or tomorrow? :unsure:

[Mara=^.^=]

Whenever I get it back...

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[fierysue]

OK.

*rotten eggs thrown at me*

I'M SORRY! I just replied to Mara's PM. So...

*cowers*

Sorry?

[Macey]

OK.

*rotten eggs thrown at me*

I'M SORRY! I just replied to Mara's PM. So...

*cowers*

Sorry?

...That means you're done?

THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU :kawaii:

You have done IDOJ great service. *shakes hand*

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

You mean the next chapter could be posted TONIGHT???????!!!!! :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

[fierysue]

You mean the next chapter could be posted TONIGHT???????!!!!! :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

It really depends on Mara.

I'm sorry I made the wait longer... :(

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

lol it's ok, Sue! *hugs*

[Mara=^.^=]

Update in 10-20 minutes!


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[J/C AVA]

SO EXCITED!!!!!!!! :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

[Beks]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK! :wub:

[Mara=^.^=]

Okey doke, chapter 33 is up and ready to read! And yes, it is a FULL chapter (12 pages), complete with new characters!

[-Click to Read-]

Enjoy and comment~


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[J/C AVA]

He, like I always said, my writing can never touch yours. :lol:

Grumbles over Mara's perfect syntax, sentence, and word choices and at my mediocore suckiness in prose writing

[RocksmySocks]

You got my comments earlier, but I just want to say again how much this chapter ROCKS.

Not joking at all when I say it might be my favorite so far. Suspenseful, involved, and hilarious. I bow down to your awesome authoress skills, Mara. You started out as an excellent writer, yet somehow you keep improving.

And I will always love Carl's reasoning for his favorite number. That has to be one of the most adorable things I've ever read!


I loved the new installment in almost every way...


...



*grumbles over the cliffhanger*



Hehe. B) Nah, it's cool. :thumbsup:

[Mara=^.^=]

And you'll be happy to know that I included the gag about Sheen's favorite number that you recommended! :lol:


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Beks]

I loved it!! Yay for FC being introduced....though I'm sad that he led FL to DJ... -_- I still love him though...I didn't see you mention a shirt, so I'm going to assume he doesn't have one. :P

[Mara=^.^=]

**pats Beks reassuringly**

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[Alex]

That was BRILLIANT AWESOMENESS! Great job so far... Loved the JN tech part, and Aurora and Libby getting separated makes it more suspenseful. Along with Carl's betrayal.

TOSOT is finally start to close in on the final scene it looks like...
:ph43r:

[Kaz]

OMG, pure awesomeness.

I had a strange, funny moment while reading this. I was reading the gag about the warm spot Sheen swam through, when (Only God knows why :lol:) I looked at the ceilling and said, "You rock, Mara."

I continued reading for a moment, stopped dead and looked puzzled. Then I said to myself, "Why did I look at the sky? Mara's not a god!"

It just struck me as funny how I looked up when I said it. As I said, God only knows why.


I loved this chapter though. I am so hyper right now coz, of course I wanna read more, but I'm hardly in a position to, am I? ^_^

It's great Mara. You still got the magick.

[Mara=^.^=]

I continued reading for a moment, stopped dead and looked puzzled. Then I said to myself, "Why did I look at the sky? Mara's not a god!"

It just struck me as funny how I looked up when I said it. As I said, God only knows why.

Nah. When I randomly "talk" to someone who isn't present, I also look up at the sky. I think it's just a natural reaction when directing a thought at someone far away.

Oh, and by the way... your sig is hilariously awesome. :thumbsup:

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Kaz]

Thanks. Laura made it for my birthday. ^_^