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[AmazingMe123]

Goddardcallsurmomatnight.



It's either that or he vogues. Your choice. Although I think FJ is much more suited to that.


=Jessi=

Aahahahaa.... All the girls in the background.

[underwater]

MORE

NOW


Corinne

[Chompyzilla]

this is just weird

[Mara=^.^=]

Yes, ladies and gentlemen, it's that time again: time for my typical complaints.

This chapter sucks.
Everyone is emo and out of character.
There's too much boring dialogue.
None of the jokes work.
The emotional impact is zero.
Future Jimmy is a pansy.
Future Sheen is a pansy.
In fact, everyone is a pansy.
Except Aurora.
Aurora is utterly mental.

FOR THE LIFE OF ME, I CANNOT END THIS BASTARD. EXCUSE ME WHILE I RIP MY HAIR OUT, WEAVE IT INTO A BEARD, AND THEN SHAVE THE BEARD OFF.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Chompyzilla]

THAT WAS completly random

[SweeneyxxTodd]

Looks like it's back to the old chopping block then. We can't have a pansy FS. Pansy FJ I can handle; I've kinda viewed him that way ever since the antidote. But FS? Make him do something badass. Like, they stop by Earth and while they're there, a warship attacks them, and the ship fires a huge torpedo at them and FS catches it and whips it right back at the warship, with one fluid motion. Then he puts his foot behind his head because he's the Chosen One dammit, and that's what Chosen Ones do.

[Mara=^.^=]

Looks like it's back to the old chopping block then. We can't have a pansy FS. Pansy FJ I can handle; I've kinda viewed him that way ever since the antidote. But FS? Make him do something badass. Like, they stop by Earth and while they're there, a warship attacks them, and the ship fires a huge torpedo at them and FS catches it and whips it right back at the warship, with one fluid motion. Then he puts his foot behind his head because he's the Chosen One dammit, and that's what Chosen Ones do.

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[okmeamithinknow]

Future Jimmy will always be a pansy, as long as he's not DJ. Therefore he is completely in character.

~Crys~

[Lizz]

That's always the difficult part: Ending the story. No matter how hard you try, it's always difficult.

[Mara=^.^=]

I have the ending itself written. I just...can't...get...there **beats head against stone wall**

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Not to mention connecting it with the epilogue just right. Now THAT has gotta be tough...

[SweeneyxxTodd]

I just...can't...get...there

That's what she said?

[Chompyzilla]

i still wanna know whats wrong with future sheen

[Mara=^.^=]

i still wanna know whats wrong with future sheen

Don't we all...I still haven't decided


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[SweeneyxxTodd]

My earlier joking aside, I do honestly want FS to be able to be fixed. He's had to suffer so much over the past ten years, I think he deserves a happy ending.

[Mara=^.^=]

I AM INCAPABLE OF WRITING A HAPPY ENDING

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[SweeneyxxTodd]

That's fine. A happy ending wouldn't really fit into TOSOT, at least not for everyone. As long as the ending makes sense, it's a good ending.

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

I AM INCAPABLE OF WRITING A HAPPY ENDING

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

Really?? Are you SURE about that?!

[Mara=^.^=]

I like bittersweet endings



~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Okay, at least there's that. Thanks, Mara.