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[Beks]

Alright Pedro, you asked for it!



Dear Lord, what have I done?

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

*dies from over-childish exposure*(just don't do Telletubbies, PLEASE!!!) jk

[J/C AVA]

Beks, ILU. Can you marry me? JK!

[okmeamithinknow]

~Crys~

[Mara=^.^=]

OMG Crys, I nearly peed myself.


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[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

ROFLMAO!!!! Haha, CLASSIC!!!

[SweeneyxxTodd]

In that case, you'll need this:




~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

Strange how accurate and appropriate this is.

[Zoey <3]

Haha! I almost died laughing at these. Someone should make a contest with these.

[Lizz]

Hey Mara, I thought I'd should tell you this, but when I was reading TOSOT on FF.net, I was on Chapter 36 and on the part of where Jimmy recites that long list of numbers for the password, it's gone. I mean the list of numbers are gone. Apparently now the site deletes long words that are bunch together in the text (or something like that.) you should check for yourself. Cuz that was my favorite part of the chapter!

[Mara=^.^=]

Hey Mara, I thought I'd should tell you this, but when I was reading TOSOT on FF.net, I was on Chapter 36 and on the part of where Jimmy recites that long list of numbers for the password, it's gone. I mean the list of numbers are gone. Apparently now the site deletes long words that are bunch together in the text (or something like that.) you should check for yourself. Cuz that was my favorite part of the chapter!

Eeeerg, stupid ff.net! What won't it delete??

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[Mara=^.^=]

BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

err, I mean...

the remainder of the chapter has now been posted (I think it's around 6-7 pages). Just scroll to the end of Libby's mummy section and pick up there. [LINK]

Enjoy - hopefully I managed to crank up the creepometer on this last bit.


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[J/C AVA]

@Crys's Simpsons pic: AWESOME!!! EPIC WIN!!

@Mara: Well, time to do some TOSOT catch-up.

P.S.-Love that a quote from my IDOJ story is in your sig. I feel honored.

[Beks]

Dude, unethical Jimmy is a bastard.

[J/C AVA]

[Mara=^.^=]

Dude, unethical Jimmy is a bastard.

Yes, yes he is.

But he's also a total badass.

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[okmeamithinknow]

I love unethical Jimmy. He's almost as awesome as DJ. His last line made me chuckle.

~Crys~

[okmeamithinknow]

~Crys~

[Mara=^.^=]

TOSOTxCRYS

IT'S FORBIDDEN LOVE!!1!


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[Pigquet3]

Okay, first, before I say ANYTHING about this insanely awesome, and highly creepy (in an enjoyable way) installment...

~Crys~

DUDE, CRYS, THAT IS AWESOME! I LOOOOVE THAT MOVIE, AND THAT LINE! YOU'VE REALLY DONE IT NOW! I LOVE YOU! LOOOL!


Okay, back to the actual story, lol. Mara, this is by far the creepiest thing in TOSOT you have ever written, and I LOVE you for it! I kinda like unethical Jimmy (is that what we're calling him?), lol. He's kinda like a miniature DJ. After some time into his talk about how to work the computer, I totally knew where this was going...eerie to the extreme, dude!

But, I loved his little speech about all the times Jimmy's done things that are far from "moral", when he's endangered his loved ones lives, based off of real events through the series...and then Jimmy's defense of himself saying the good he's done...gosh, I loved it.

Yo, big needles! *shudders* J/K, no, actually I got a lot of pleasure from reading that description of the injection, and I think I will be rereading it a LOT.

No, really, I love reading scenes where someone is strapped up or bound in some way, being painfully tortured with no way out...its a creepy part of my being even I don't fully understand...

Yes, Beks, bastard pretty much sums him up, lol. But, so is DJ, and he's totally hot, so who knows how this one will turn out.

This is probably my favorite of all the kids' subconciousness realms. Its Jimmy's love of math and science turned completely against him. He has to remind himself that he cares about emotions and morals. Jimmy's not a bad person, and wouldn't do this to a person, but this is almsot showing what he's capable of...kind of like DJ, only this one's more on his level somehow...I don't know. I have much rereading and studying of it to do (and a lot of looking up words...*goes to grab the dictionary*)

Please keep this in! The fic doesn't have much centering around the 5 children, so these scenes show the impact the adventure has on them as we know it has.

This is good stuff...and through the whole thing I kept telling myself...only Mara would...only Mara...




Thanks for this! I'll most likley come back with more comments later, but I felt guilty not saying at least SOMETHING now after just finishing it, 'cause it was too good to make you wait.

As always, keep up the great work! And, let's try to make that creepometer explode!!




See ya,

Pigquet

P.S. Yeah, Crys, I loved his last line, too...XDDD

P.S.S. Yay, Pedro's gonna catch up!

[Mara=^.^=]

No, really, I love reading scenes where someone is strapped up or bound in some way, being painfully tortured with no way out...its a creepy part of my being even I don't fully understand...

Oh lolz, Pigs likes bondage (that's OK, I clearly enjoy those sorts of scenes as well, or I wouldn't be writing them). I get the feeling Nav would be more than happy to go along with that sort of thing anyway, Pig...

Anyhow, thanks for the lovely response, as usual! I always look forward to your comments

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