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[Scythe]

I Fixed It.

[AmazingMe123]

Again!! And what happened to your avatar.

[Scythe]

I didn't fix how we got to Shangrii Llama, I fixed how he got off the planet.

And My Avatar, I tried to make Change...WHICH IT WILL NOT DO!!!!!

[AmazingMe123]

Sucks.

[Chompyzilla]

*crazy*

[AmazingMe123]

[Chompyzilla]

anyway on to chapter 4

[AmazingMe123]

Can't wait.

[Scythe]

I haven't writen any of chapter four yet, 1) becuase I'm SOOO Not in the writting mood. 2) I can't think of what to put next...

[AmazingMe123]

I haven't writen any of chapter four yet, 1) becuase I'm SOOO Not in the writting mood. 2) I can't think of what to put next...

Oh well. 1) ya i know the feeling 2) good luck 3) I love your new avatar

[Scythe]

Man Sorry for taking FOREVER!!!! Here is Chapter Four.



Chapter 4, The Doppelganger:

Libby: Man, That was close, I almost wonder how we escaped!

Sheen: Yeah, Libby, I um...I need to tell you something...

Libby: Yeah Sheen, what is it?

Sheen: Um...(Romantic Pause gets broken) Ultra Lord is on in 20 hours so we'll need to stop him quick!

Libby: Seriously Sheen, you NEED to stop thinking about Ultra-Freak and think about saving our friends!

Sheen: Okay, Wait! It doesn't matter because the one that's on today I have in mini T.V. Form...Jimmy made it for me.

Libby: Just listen to me. You are a hyper active person with a loving of Candy, Puppets, and a Super-Hero, now this has NOTHING to do with any of those.

(Me: Yeah Right!)

Sheen: Okay, I'm a bit Hungry...let me get some Twinkies out of my Back-pack...No, Kwinie, no, Twonkie, Yes! Twinkies!

-Back At Shangrii Llama-

Cindy: Sheen And Libby WILL save us, well not Ultra-Loser, but Libby will!

Jimmy: Sheen can save us Vortex! Libby is the one who wouldn't know the meaning of going on an adventure! Sheen and I have been going on WAY more than you and Libby!

Cindy: Libby could kick Ultra-Loser's butt before he could even touch her!

Jimmy EC: Ah, I LOVE fights, QUIET! I see that you you don't want to fight until you die, but I have a piece of hair that belongs to Libby, If I can get Libby away from Sheen, I can just take this hair, put it in this machine...and...

Carl: AHHH! It's to horrible!

Jimmy: Carl, It's not even created yet!

Carl: Oh, sorry!

Jimmy EC: Behold, Libby's Evil Doppelganger!

Cindy, Carl, And Jimmy: WHAT!?!?!

Jimmy EC: Yeah Whippy-Dip, your friends can't get to you when my Evil Doppelganger gets them!

Jimmy: Sheen KNOWS Libby, he won't be fooled!

Jimmy EC: Yeah, but the clone knows exactly what happened to everything they've done!

Cindy: How is that any different?

Jimmy EC: BECAUSE SHE KNOWS ABOUT EVERYTHING THAT LIBBY LIKES!!!

Cindy: Oh, Okay.

Jimmy EC: CLONE! FIND THOSE KIDS!!!

Libby EC: Yes Master,

Libby EC walks away.

-Back wherever Sheen and Libby are-

Libby: So we need to get to Jimmy's lab and find something that we could use!

Sheen: I have a bag of Jimmy's hair! Let's go!

Libby: And, how do we get there in time?

Sheen: I can contact Jimmy's watch, and he can call Goddard to our spot!

Libby: Wow Sheen! That was really awkward!

Sheen: Huh?

Libby: Well, You never talk about anything serious, or ever have a plan!

Sheen: What?

Libby: Never mind...

Sheen: Jimmy, Jimmy, come in...Jimmy!

Jimmy (on Sheen's mini T.V.): Sheen! What do you need?

Libby: Get Goddard down here!

Jimmy: Okay, I'll get Goddard down there straight away!

Sheen: Okay! (turns off the T.V.) So, Libby, how about we...um...while were waiting...

Libby: Sheen, we are NOT going to watch Ultra Lord!

Sheen: DANG IT!

Libby: Hey Look! Goddard!

Goddard: Bark Bark!

Sheen: What's up Dog!

Libby: Sheen! Goddard, take us to the lab!

Goddard: Bark Bark!

They get onto Goddard and Goddard takes them to the Lab. While Libby EC who is shrunk is hanging onto Goddard's foot.

-An Hour Later At Jimmy's Backyard-

Sheen: Okay Libs, I'll get some of Jimmy's hair out and then, oh Man!

Libby: What?

Sheen: I have some of my hair in this bag!

Libby: Well, while you sort out hair I'll hang out over here.

Libby EC Slowly gets over to Libby and Ducked-tapes her mouth shut and ties up her hands and arms in less than 50 seconds, then She went over to Sheen and made him think she was Libby.

Sheen: Got It!

Sheen holds the hair to V.O.X. And opens the door to get inside.

Libby EC: Okay, now what are we going to use to help you friends...I mean Jimmy, Cindy, and Carl!?!

Sheen: Shrink Ray, Cheese Ray, Hypno-Ray, and my favorite some good Book gum!

Libby EC: Why d owe need Book gum?

Sheen: Well, I think that If I'm able to scan Jimmy's book of genius, I can probably get some of his Genius into me when I chew the gum!

Libby EC: Oh, O.K.

Sheen: Okay, now, SCAN!!!

Sheen scans the book and from the scanner comes a piece of gum!

Sheen: YES!!!

Libby EC: Thank you!

Libby EC takes the gum from Sheen and eats it.

Libby EC: Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!

-The Backyard-

Libby: Mmm, mmm, MMMM!

Libby licks her way through the Ducked-tape and then uses her head-phones in her pocket (that she got with her mouth) and then used it to fight her way through the ropes.

Libby: Close one! Now to get Sheen before something bad happens!

[Scythe]

Chapter 5, Prisoners Of A Look-A-Like

Sheen is put up to Jimmy's lab's wall.

Sheen: This is just like Ultra Lord episode 295, when RoboFiend tried to destroy Ultra Lord by using a Giant robot hand to bat him to the sun so that he would die, but then again, this is more like episode 528 when...

Libby EC: Shut Up!

Libby: No! You can!

Libby EC puts ducked tape onto Sheen's eyes then she flipped the other Libby over and ran in circles around her. She then ripped the ducked-tape off his face.

Libby EC: I'm glad you're alright Sheen!

Libby: don't listen to her, I'M the real Libby!

Libby EC:Oh No! It's a Clone!

Libby: Don't listen to her Sheen! I'm Libby, SHE is the evil clone!

Sheen: So...confusing!

Libby: When we were in the lost tomb you said that the queen flew on the wings of an eagle and took her peanut-butter sandwich for a walk!

Libby EC: One of the Nicknames you tried to give me was Libbylicouse!

Sheen: No...I Can't.....Figure out who is who!

Libby EC: I used to style my hair like this!

Libby EC put her hair over her eye and some of it into a puff, she then put it back to normal.

Libby: I Ultra Lord episode 230 Ultra Lord took his plasma blaster and shot it at Robofiend!

Sheen: I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!!!!!

Libby EC: I can't either!

Libby EC takes Libby's arm and throws it into the cloth magnet.

Libby: And...what is this?

Libby EC: Cloth magnet, and then, once I get this small magnet done I can put it behind you and set out the knives!

Libby: SHEEN! How could you let her in?

Sheen: How was I supposed to know that she was a Clone?

Libby EC: DONE!

Libby EC put the two super magnets above Sheen and Libby

Sheen: You won't get away with this!

Libby EC: Looks like I already have, it's too late for you two to escape so I'll tell Master that you're already done for, oh, after I set out the knives! Bye!

Libby: Sheen, you need to find out how to break us out of here!

Sheen: How am I supposed to know what to do?

Libby: I don't know! But we need to get out of here, the magnets are starting to pick up the knives!

The knives were already positioned at the ceiling.

Libby: Do you have any gum?

Sheen: Yeah...

Libby: Take the gum, and try to use your body to pull off of the cloth magnet, and try to stay for 5 seconds...HURRY!!!

Sheen: What do I do then?

Libby: make your self look the other way, then stuff your small magnet with gum!

Sheen: Okay!

Sheen tries hard to pull away but just gets slammed back into the spot.

Libby: SHEEN HURRY!!! You can do this! The knives are already starting to point at us!

Sheen: I...I've got It!

Sheen put his hands behind his back and then used his feet to push off of the wall.

Libby: Okay, now...

Sheen: I've got a better idea!

Libby: You have an idea?

Sheen: I need to get to the knives quick!

Libby: RUN SHEEN! BE FASTER THAN THE MAGNET!!!

Sheen: I've...almost...got...GOT THEM! AHHHHH!

Libby: Man, that's one strong cloth magnet!

Sheen: Tell me about it!

Libby: okay, I'll put this piece o paper inside my pocket, and then when my Clone tries to trick you again, You'll know that it's not me!

Sheen: Okay!

Libby: Now let's track down that Clone!

Sheen: How do we get out of this magnet?

Libby: Break out,

Sheen: Again?

Libby: Yes, again! The call for Goddard to get us away from these magnets!

Sheen breaks free again and and then opens the door by holding onto a lever.

Goddard: Bark Bark!

Libby: Goddard, break us out of here!

Goddard throws a bunch of Jimmy's clothes into the magnets.

Libby: Good boy Goddard, now we need to track down my clone.

Goddard opens up his video screen and shows that she is only two blocks away.

Sheen: Piece of cake, we could get there in no time!

Goddard: Bark, Bark, grrrrr, Bark!

-Outside on Jimmy's hover-car-

Libby: There, There's my clone! Okay, I'm now lowering the hover-car!

Sheen: NO! LOOK!

Libby: What?

Sheen: You might want to look that way!

Libby: AH! It's Evil Jimmy, lead by an army of everyone in Retroville!

Goddard: Bark!

Jimmy EC: HA HA! While you two were with my,probably most talented clone, I was off collecting samples from every person in Retroville!

Libby: What?

Jimmy EC: Now that everyone is cloned, I can get you two out of the way, destroy these clones, and then create 1,000 Evil Jimmy Clones to frame him, and his stupid friends, so then no one will stop me when I try to finish what I failed to do last time!

Libby: You're going to form another Evil earth and and make this one fade into oblivion!

Jimmy EC: Yep! You catch on quick, too bad you have to die!

Libby: SHEEN! Fie up the hover-car, I think I know what to do if we're able to get out to sea!

Sheen: Do the Hula?

Libby: No, fire a torpedo to blow up all of the cloned people!

Sheen: Oh, that works too!

Goddard: Bark Bark!

Libby: We've got trouble!

Sheen: MAN! I LOVE That Game!

Libby: No, we have some Clones to get rid of!

Cloned Cindy got onto the hover-car.

Cindy EC: Now, you're going to die!

Libby: I don't think so!

Libby takes her headphones and whacks Cindy in the face with them!

Cindy: HA! Is that the best...

Libby: NO!

Libby takes Goddard and he extends his neck. Then she swings Goddard side-ways and pushes Cindy off the Hover-car.

Libby: Keep driving Sheen!

Sheen: With the power of Ultra Lord I will get this car to sea!

Libby: Yeah, well, let's get there before..AH!

Sheen: Libby?

[Katia11]

Hope to see more soon!

[Scythe]

Now, for my additional Information that I put before each two chapters, I'd like to tell you, that there will probably no less than fifteen Chapters (Not counting the hillarious Epilouge) There will probably be either not much more, or just as much, chapters in it, so please no one crab at me for making it SO short, thank you, here is chapter 6.


Chapter 6, How To Fire A Torpedo: By Sheen Eztevez:

Sheen: Libby? LIBBY? Where is she?

Libby: Sheen!

Sheen: AH!

Jimmy EC: Ha ha! You want your girlfriend?

Sheen: I guess so.

Libby: Put me down!

Jimmy EC: Whatever you say!

Jimmy EC drops Libby.

Sheen: Libby!

Libby: Sheen! Help! Wait...NO!!!

Sheen: I'm coming!

Sheen comes around and catches Libby;

Libby: Thanks,

Sheen: You're welcome, um, what do we do now?

Libby: Get to sea and fire a torpedo at the clones, that should destroy at least half of them.

Sheen: Okay...Uh, Libby...

Libby: Yeah Sheen?

Sheen: How am I supposed to fire the torpedo?

Libby: You've done it before!

Sheen: Yeah, we blew up a whole ship, I don't remember were it was!

Libby: I can't explain to you where it was, now just look around and find it.

Sheen: I found it!

Libby: That was quick, where was it?

Sheen: Right here!

Libby: Sheen, that's a snorkel!

Sheen: Oh...

Libby: Look for the button that says, for emergencies only.

Sheen: Okay...

Goddard: Bark Bark!

Libby: Sheen, I think Goddard found it!

Sheen: FINALY! Where is is Goddard?

Goddard directs his head to the button.

Sheen: Oh, there it is!

Sheen goes over to the button.

Libby SHEEN! Don't push it yet! Wait until we reach water...okay...okay...Not yet!

Libby Goes into water and then they look behind them and see a bunch of clones swimming at them.

Libby: Okay Sheen, my signal will be GO! Okay!

Sheen: GOING!

Libby: SHEEN NO!

Sheen pushes the button and then the torpedo fire the other direction.

Sheen: Sorry,

Goddard then takes a satellite out of his back and bastes a sound wave slowing them down.

Libby: That might hold them off for...8 seconds.

Sheen: Don't worry I have some tomatoes!

Libby: Sheen, I don't think that that will...

Sheen throws the fruit at the clones.

Libby: Okay, I still don't think that will keep them down, how are they going so fast?

Sheen: I don't know, but it might be those water skies!

Libby: That's probably it, now since YOU wasted the torpedo, we can go into the air!

Jimmy EC: I don't think so!

Libby: What? AHH!

A net comes over them and they get carried away by Evil Jimmy's Rocket.

-Later-

Libby: Were are we?

Sheen: We're inside Robofiend's evil black void from episode 364!

Libby: Sheen, this is serious!

Sheen: Sorry,

Trap door opens

Both: AHHH!!!

They fall into two metal hands which tie them up in ropes, then the floor opens and shows a pit of boiling hot lava.

Sheen: I don't think this looks good!

Jimmy EC: Now that you two are trapped with no way to escape, I am going to leave and start my plot! Ha ha ha!

Libby: Great Sheen! This is all your fault!

Sheen: How is it my fault?

Libby: Because you didn't fire the torpedo when you should have!

Sheen: You said Go, so I thought I was supposed to go!

Libby: Yeah I said WHEN I say go, not, the first time I say the word go fire the torpedo!

Sheen: Sorry, Libby, I didn't know!

Libby: Sheen, I think I'm being a bit harsh on you, If we want to make it out of here and save Jimmy and Cindy,

Sheen: And Carl.

Libby: Yeah, Well, we're going to have to work together!

Sheen: Okay.

Libby: Now if we swing far enough to that side and...Sheen start to rock and loosen the ropes!

Sheen: Okay.

Sheen starts to untie the ropes as Libby swing both of them.

Libby: Okay, when I call Rope, you let go!

Sheen: Okay!

Libby: 5...4...3...2...ROPE!

Sheen unties the ropes and they fly right beside the lava.

Libby: AH!

Libby starts to fall into the lava.

Sheen: I've got you!

Sheen goes over and grabs Libby's arm.

Sheen: Um...what was it again? Oh yeah! DON”T LET GO!!!!!

Libby: Sheen! You're making to much noise! Now pull me up!

Sheen pulls Libby up onto the ground.

Libby: Thanks Sheen!

Libby takes his hand and gets ready to kiss him but gets stopped by Evil Jimmy.

Jimmy EC: Well, well, well! Looks like you two were able to outsmart me! There's no use trying to save Jimmy, He's dead! And you can't bring him back to life!

Sheen: Hey Libby, did we pack that thing that brings things back to life?

Libby: The Electro-Life reviser? Yeah!

Sheen: HA! Take that you stupid clone! You can't defeat Sheen Estevez And Libby Folfax!

Jimmy EC: Oh Yeah?

Sheen: Yeah! You're just a little cheap copy of Jimmy, we could kick your butt four thousand times in one day!

Libby: SHEEN!

Sheen: It's okay, he cant defeat, The Sheen!

Libby: Maybe, but THEY could!

Sheen: Who?

Libby: THEM!

[Scythe]

This Fic isn't so good, I think I should stop writting it, I mean, I write the book on Open Office so that I can fix spelling mistakes easyer (see what I mean!) and I use a font of 14, It's almost five pages a Chapter, (and with all the times where a person if saying a one word sentince like "Okay" it kinda wastes room) and there is not going to be ANY more chapters than 25,

It's REALY short, and short says "I'm a lazy writter, and can't figure out how to put in detail, and write"

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Please, don't stop!! It's getting really good!!

[Scythe]

Chapter 7, Journey To The Center Of Evil Jimmy's Lair:

Libby points to a group of clones coming straight at them.

Sheen: Oh, that would make sense! Hey! This reminds me of Ultra-Lord episode 7 when Ultra-Lord has to battle an army of mini Robofiends!

Libby: Sheen, Run!

Sheen: Oh, I forgot!

They starts running but get stopped by more clones, then when they run the other direction a bunch of clones stopped them...They were surrounded by clones!

Libby: This doesn't look good Sheen! They'll attack at any moment!

Sheen: Not if I can help it!

Libby: What are you gonna do?

Sheen: I...I don't know...Wait!

Sheen reaches into Jimmy's Hyper-Cube and pulls out a picture of Jimmy.

Sheen: JIMMY'S ATTACKING YOU!!!

Sheen throws the picture of Jimmy at a clone of Nick, who just crumbled the picture and threw it into the lava.

Libby: Great plan Sheen! Okay, I've got one!

She takes a boombox out of the Hyper-Cube and turns a ROCKIN' Song on!

Nick EC: I have to attack...but the music is SO good...I give up!

They all start to dance as Evil Jimmy starts to try to stop them.

Jimmy EC: Hey Nitwits! You're supposed to be attacking the puny kids!

Libby: Let's get away!

Sheen nods and they crawl though the clones.

-Outside the Lava Room-

Libby: Man, I just left my Boombox in there, But it's still not as important as saving our friends!

Sheen: Hey Libby could I ask you a question?

Libby: Yeah Sheen, what do you need?

Sheen: Where are we?

Libby looks up and sees some sort of training room, there were hoops in the air, flames would go through them every now and then, there were punching bags and a track course, there was even a pool, behind a curtain Sheen and Libby made out five men working on things.

Libby: Man, you don't see these kind of things usually!

Sheen: Tell me about it! This is even cooler than the gym Ultra-Lord goes to in episode 56!

Libby: Okay, we need to find the hover-car, and Goddard, the first place I would think to find them would be over in that area over there!

Libby points to the spot behind the curtains where clones were obviously creating things.

Sheen: Let's do this thing!

They sneak up behind the curtains and see 19 clones working on different inventions, one of the clones were just then carrying Goddard in.

Libby: Okay, when I say go, you blast them with the knock-out ray!

Sheen: Got it!

Libby: 10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2 GO!

Clone 1: What was...

Sheen blasts the knock-out ray at him, then at everybody else.

Sheen: Coast now has nobody awake in it!

Libby: It's “Coast is clear” Sheen, now lets get Goddard and get out of here before they wake up!

Sheen: Hey Goddard! Come on, we need to get out of here!

Goddard: (whimper)

Sheen: Yeah, Tell me about it!

Libby: Come on Guys!

Sheen: We should go, She'll Get grumpy!

Goddard: Bark bark!

Libby: Okay, now Goddard, show us where We are and where the hover-car is!

Goddard opens up his stomach and shows that the Hover-Car was only two rooms away.

Libby: Wow, closer than I thought!

Sheen opens the next door and then slams it shut.

Sheen: Man, that place is going to need focus to get through!

Libby: Let me see

She opens the door to see a room filed with a maze, except the walls were made of burning hedges.

Libby: No Prob. Goddard can just list us over the fire, piece of cake!

Sheen opens up the door and they take Goddard's legs to fly over the lava and onto the other side of the room.

Libby: Okay, the next room should have the hover-car!

They open the door to see only the hover-car.

Libby: Found it! Now we can get of this place, dang it! It needs gas!

Sheen: Hey, I saw a big faucet full of Gas down in the training room!

Libby: Then lets go and get it!

Goddard: Bark Bark!

But then all of the doors slammed shut, and and locked them selves.

Goddard: (whimper)

Sheen: Hey! What's going on?

Then they felt a slight touch from behind them.

Sheen: Libby,

Libby: Yeah Sheen?

Sheen: You fell that too right!

Libby: Yeah,

Then they turned over and saw someone they didn't expect to see.

Now i'm not going to work on it for a while, and all you people that are reading this can guess who it is (Not that shocking once you know though)

I start doing more tomorow at 3:00 pm.

[AmazingMe123]

Cool!!! To bad your not gonna work on it... But can't wait!!!

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

I'm guessing it's Eustace??

[Scythe]

I said that I would start again at 3:00 or 12:00, that's not that long.