Meaning 3 in the morning or 3 in the afternoon?? Noon or midnight?? HUGE differences.
Sheen And Libby: The Genius Rescue
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, Jul 23 2011 06:14 AM
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Posted 31 July 2011 - 02:33 AM
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Posted 31 July 2011 - 03:00 AM
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Posted 31 July 2011 - 03:06 AM
Ah, I figured that. lol I look forward to your next update!
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Posted 31 July 2011 - 07:02 PM
To me it is!!!!!
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Posted 31 July 2011 - 07:21 PM
Chapter 8, The Most Hansom Teenager On Earth:
Both: Goobot!
Goobot: Hello, your shocked? Well, isn't it obvious that I am the one who gave the clone all the equipment to make this place!
Libby: I forgot, The Yolkians are an advanced speicies!
Goobot: Well, At first I thought it was Neutron trying to trick me, but then when he told me his idea, I started to like it...and now, you all can die! It's not MY Planet why should I care?
Libby: Sheen, drive!
Sheen takes off smashing into Goobot's face and then they fly off.
Sheen: Close one!
Libby: Okay, we still need to find Shangrii Llama and save Jimmy, Cindy, and Carl!
-They fly off into the distance as we go back to Evil Jimmy and the clones-
Evil Jimmy finally shuts off the music as we goes over to a speaker and says,
Jimmy EC: All Inventors, come here with your inventions!
Once he finishes 6 inventors come up with boxes
Jimmy EC: Number One!
Man 1 from invention 1: Here we give you my invention, a big brick that can put out lasers and blow up whatever is in a 3 inch radios of it!
Jimmy EC: Three inches?
Man 2 From Invention 1: Yes,
Jimmy EC: NEXT!
Man 1 From I. 2: Here we have a pencil that will knock someone out for 15 seconds!
Jimmy EC: Well, THEY have a ray that can knock someone out for 3 minutes! NEXT!
Two more men and a boy come up.
Jimmy EC: I don't see an invention tall-stuff, what is it?
Man 1: The invention is this teenager, he is probably the most attractive boy on the face of the earth, and knows everything about what most girls like! He'll probably take “Libby†away from that weirdo unstable kid in 5 seconds!Then when they're not together, we can capture Sheen and He will trap Libby, and then destroy them!
Jimmy EC: Are you sure this will work chief?
Man 2: We are 89 % sure!
Jimmy EC: Then send him out to find them!
Boy: Whatever you say!
The boy walks away and starts tracking down Sheen and Libby.
-In The Hover-Car-
Libby: Hey Sheen, Could you pass the ketchup?
Sheen: Sure.
Sheen and Libby were eating food from MC. Spankies (A different one, not the one that got stolen by the Space Bandits)
Libby: Man, I'm getting to think that Jimmy ISN'T dead!
Sheen: Hey, no one can trick, The Sheen! And I bought it.
Libby: Yeah, but what if he just said that so that so we would stop trying to look for him!
Sheen: Good point, Hey whats that?
Libby: I hear screaming!
They look down and see a boy about 14 years old, holding onto a tree branch for dear life.
Libby: I think we should try to save him!
Sheen: Good idea, I was thinking that we let him hang thee, and then I would wait until Ultra-Lord finds him and save him, and then I would finally meet Ultra-Lord in person!
Libby: Sheen!
Sheen: Sorry, let's go save the dude.
They swoop down and the kid falls onto the hover-car.
Boy: Thank you, I thought I was going to die!
Libby: How did you get up there?
Boy: Um...um...I fell of a plane!
Libby: Wait a second! What's your name?
Boy: Drake Johnson...
Libby: (love struck) That's my favorite name!
Sheen: Hey Libby, instead of flirting with the pretty boy, Let's get back to our probem!
Libby: Problem...I...I don't think there's any problem!
Sheen takes Libby's head and shakes it.
Sheen: OUR FRIENDS ARE KIDNAPPED!
Drake: Hey, is that how you treat a girl as great as this? (To Libby) So, the movies are open, and...I was thinking we could go there together...
Libby: Well me and Sheen are trying to...Yes! Sheen turn this Hover-car around, were going to the theater!
Sheen: \What is Ultra-Lord playing?
Libby: No, I just think it's a great way for us to meet Drake!
Sheen: How can we meet him if we're at the movies...You're not supposed to talk!
Libby: Sheen, we just saved a guy, and I think we should meet him!
Sheen: Whatever!
Sheen turns the Hover-Car around and heads towards the movie theater.
-At the theater-
Sheen: There.
They start to go inside.
Drake: Wait! Oh no, I only have enough for two people!
Libby: Oh, well Sheen's VERY Patient, he'll wait until the movies over, right Sheen!
Sheen: (Depressed) Sure, whatever.....
Libby: Let's go!
They go inside as Goddard scans some of Drakes hair.
Sheen: What are you doing Goddard?
Goddard shows a picture of Drake and shows a description:
Created: Evil Jimmy Clone's Lair
Name: Unknown
Mission: Get Libby Folfax away from Sheen.
Sheen: WHAT!?! Libby, WAIT!!! Come boy!
Goddard: Bark Bark!
They go inside the theater and use the knock-out ray to knock-out everyone in there way.
Sheen runs over to see Libby and Drake going into a room.
Sheen: Ah! Libby...LIBBY!
He pushes the door open and then points his Knock-out ray at Drake.
Sheen: Back away from my Girlfriend!
Drake: Make me you little twerp!
Sheen fires the knock-out ray at Drake who just stays still holding Libby:
Drake: Cute little toy, did you make it?
Sheen: Libby: He's trying to get you away from me so that the clones can capture us!
Libby: What do you have against Drake?
Sheen: He was sent by the clones.
Libby: Do you honestly expect me to believe...
Drake: Listen! You're just a little freak who should die! Who cares about you or you're stupid friends! They can die for all anyone cares! Your just a Hyper-active little freak!
Libby: Hey, that's my friend you're talking about! Well, he IS hyper-active and weird,
Sheen: Hey!
Libby: But you have no idea how cool he is!
Drake: I don't care what my masters think, I can demolish you both right now, they're not my bosses, besides, I never liked you, you're 3 years younger than I am! So long suckers!
Libby: Run!
They start running as Drake throws exploding bricks at them.
Libby: Get in the hover-car!
Sheen: Lets get to jimmy's lab, there's one more thing that I want to get!
Both: Goobot!
Goobot: Hello, your shocked? Well, isn't it obvious that I am the one who gave the clone all the equipment to make this place!
Libby: I forgot, The Yolkians are an advanced speicies!
Goobot: Well, At first I thought it was Neutron trying to trick me, but then when he told me his idea, I started to like it...and now, you all can die! It's not MY Planet why should I care?
Libby: Sheen, drive!
Sheen takes off smashing into Goobot's face and then they fly off.
Sheen: Close one!
Libby: Okay, we still need to find Shangrii Llama and save Jimmy, Cindy, and Carl!
-They fly off into the distance as we go back to Evil Jimmy and the clones-
Evil Jimmy finally shuts off the music as we goes over to a speaker and says,
Jimmy EC: All Inventors, come here with your inventions!
Once he finishes 6 inventors come up with boxes
Jimmy EC: Number One!
Man 1 from invention 1: Here we give you my invention, a big brick that can put out lasers and blow up whatever is in a 3 inch radios of it!
Jimmy EC: Three inches?
Man 2 From Invention 1: Yes,
Jimmy EC: NEXT!
Man 1 From I. 2: Here we have a pencil that will knock someone out for 15 seconds!
Jimmy EC: Well, THEY have a ray that can knock someone out for 3 minutes! NEXT!
Two more men and a boy come up.
Jimmy EC: I don't see an invention tall-stuff, what is it?
Man 1: The invention is this teenager, he is probably the most attractive boy on the face of the earth, and knows everything about what most girls like! He'll probably take “Libby†away from that weirdo unstable kid in 5 seconds!Then when they're not together, we can capture Sheen and He will trap Libby, and then destroy them!
Jimmy EC: Are you sure this will work chief?
Man 2: We are 89 % sure!
Jimmy EC: Then send him out to find them!
Boy: Whatever you say!
The boy walks away and starts tracking down Sheen and Libby.
-In The Hover-Car-
Libby: Hey Sheen, Could you pass the ketchup?
Sheen: Sure.
Sheen and Libby were eating food from MC. Spankies (A different one, not the one that got stolen by the Space Bandits)
Libby: Man, I'm getting to think that Jimmy ISN'T dead!
Sheen: Hey, no one can trick, The Sheen! And I bought it.
Libby: Yeah, but what if he just said that so that so we would stop trying to look for him!
Sheen: Good point, Hey whats that?
Libby: I hear screaming!
They look down and see a boy about 14 years old, holding onto a tree branch for dear life.
Libby: I think we should try to save him!
Sheen: Good idea, I was thinking that we let him hang thee, and then I would wait until Ultra-Lord finds him and save him, and then I would finally meet Ultra-Lord in person!
Libby: Sheen!
Sheen: Sorry, let's go save the dude.
They swoop down and the kid falls onto the hover-car.
Boy: Thank you, I thought I was going to die!
Libby: How did you get up there?
Boy: Um...um...I fell of a plane!
Libby: Wait a second! What's your name?
Boy: Drake Johnson...
Libby: (love struck) That's my favorite name!
Sheen: Hey Libby, instead of flirting with the pretty boy, Let's get back to our probem!
Libby: Problem...I...I don't think there's any problem!
Sheen takes Libby's head and shakes it.
Sheen: OUR FRIENDS ARE KIDNAPPED!
Drake: Hey, is that how you treat a girl as great as this? (To Libby) So, the movies are open, and...I was thinking we could go there together...
Libby: Well me and Sheen are trying to...Yes! Sheen turn this Hover-car around, were going to the theater!
Sheen: \What is Ultra-Lord playing?
Libby: No, I just think it's a great way for us to meet Drake!
Sheen: How can we meet him if we're at the movies...You're not supposed to talk!
Libby: Sheen, we just saved a guy, and I think we should meet him!
Sheen: Whatever!
Sheen turns the Hover-Car around and heads towards the movie theater.
-At the theater-
Sheen: There.
They start to go inside.
Drake: Wait! Oh no, I only have enough for two people!
Libby: Oh, well Sheen's VERY Patient, he'll wait until the movies over, right Sheen!
Sheen: (Depressed) Sure, whatever.....
Libby: Let's go!
They go inside as Goddard scans some of Drakes hair.
Sheen: What are you doing Goddard?
Goddard shows a picture of Drake and shows a description:
Created: Evil Jimmy Clone's Lair
Name: Unknown
Mission: Get Libby Folfax away from Sheen.
Sheen: WHAT!?! Libby, WAIT!!! Come boy!
Goddard: Bark Bark!
They go inside the theater and use the knock-out ray to knock-out everyone in there way.
Sheen runs over to see Libby and Drake going into a room.
Sheen: Ah! Libby...LIBBY!
He pushes the door open and then points his Knock-out ray at Drake.
Sheen: Back away from my Girlfriend!
Drake: Make me you little twerp!
Sheen fires the knock-out ray at Drake who just stays still holding Libby:
Drake: Cute little toy, did you make it?
Sheen: Libby: He's trying to get you away from me so that the clones can capture us!
Libby: What do you have against Drake?
Sheen: He was sent by the clones.
Libby: Do you honestly expect me to believe...
Drake: Listen! You're just a little freak who should die! Who cares about you or you're stupid friends! They can die for all anyone cares! Your just a Hyper-active little freak!
Libby: Hey, that's my friend you're talking about! Well, he IS hyper-active and weird,
Sheen: Hey!
Libby: But you have no idea how cool he is!
Drake: I don't care what my masters think, I can demolish you both right now, they're not my bosses, besides, I never liked you, you're 3 years younger than I am! So long suckers!
Libby: Run!
They start running as Drake throws exploding bricks at them.
Libby: Get in the hover-car!
Sheen: Lets get to jimmy's lab, there's one more thing that I want to get!
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Posted 31 July 2011 - 07:27 PM
Dun, dun, DUUUUUUNNN... Evil cliffies!! 
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Posted 31 July 2011 - 07:48 PM
Everyone just has to have cliffies!!!!!!
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Posted 31 July 2011 - 07:58 PM
That's what make fics so exciting! 
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Posted 31 July 2011 - 08:34 PM
I guess.... But they KILL the readers!!!
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Posted 31 July 2011 - 08:45 PM
I didn't think it was much of a cliff hanger...
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Posted 31 July 2011 - 10:40 PM
No... That's good. 
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Posted 01 August 2011 - 08:24 PM
what happened to yoo-yee
i think he will figure out evil jimmy's plot and help try to stop it
i think he will figure out evil jimmy's plot and help try to stop it
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Posted 13 August 2011 - 02:28 PM
Crap! I wanted to see more action! More adventure! More intrigue!!! More... romance... 
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Posted 13 August 2011 - 02:36 PM
I probebly wouldn't of if it wasn't so short. I've read even the first chapter of other fics that are longer than my whole book so far.
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Posted 13 August 2011 - 02:37 PM
Awww, I was getting SO into it, and it was getting SSSOOOOOO good!!
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Posted 13 August 2011 - 07:10 PM
that was a lame ending
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Posted 13 August 2011 - 08:00 PM
Fine, I'll finish the fanfic.
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Posted 13 August 2011 - 08:02 PM
Yay!! Haaaaaaaaavvvee FUN with it!!
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Posted 27 August 2011 - 12:31 AM
New summary at the top. (The story is getting a bit different)
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Posted 27 August 2011 - 01:00 AM
im not going to look at it
i want to be surprised
i want to be surprised
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