For Right Now I only have The Sumary, And The Prologue: Here It Is. More Will come realy soon,
Sumary: Evil Jimmy Clone Has A Plot To Trap Jimmy. But To Do That He Needs The Help Of U-Yee Who Was Defeated By Sheen In An Epic Battle, But When It Turns Out To Be A Trap, There Is One Flaw In his plan. Now Sheen and Libby must Rescue Jimmy, Carl, and Cindy, but to do it, they must...Defeat Libby's first Evil Clone, going through THE MAZE OF MINE, defeating a Third Poultra, even for a ittle bit, getting April to help them, so, now, they have to save Jimmy, Cindy, and Carl, and defeat Meldar Prime, The Yolkians, and most of all...JIMMY'S EVIL CLONE!!!
Sheen and Libby in...
The Genius Rescue!
Prologue: Professor Calamitous fails Again.
Jimmy: Whoa!
Jimmy is fighting Professor Calamitous
Jimmy: That was pretty smart to reverse the effect of my shrink-ray to enlarge the size of that marble, and try to make me go through the ground into your bottomless pit, but by using my laser I was able to reflect the laser to hit me, causing me to be able to get out of the way! I'd like to tell you, bottomless pits can't exist, the person has to go somewhere!
Calamitous: Neutron, my advantage of not being able to finish anything let me make it so that it dose NOT end! Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! Prepare to die, Jimmy Neutron! I've demolished your little puppy dog and now for YOU!
Goddard: Bark Bark!
Jimmy: Goddard! Way To Go!
Calamitous: I've had enough of this! Army, Attack!
Jimmy: Army?
3 masked men came out of a closet door
Jimmy: HA! I knew you couldn't have a REAL army!
Calamitous: What do you mean?
Jimmy: An Army is like, 6 people these are just henchmen.
Calamitous: Oh...Whatever! ARMY ATTACK JIMMY NEUTRON!
Jimmy takes a vase off of a nightstand and throws it at a man, who just gets back up and cracks his head.
Jimmy: Oh No! There's no way I can take them all on on my own?
A boulder falls from the sky onto a man's foot
Calamitous: WHAT IS THIS?
Down from the rope that was tied to the boulder comes Libby, Sheen, Carl, and Cindy
Jimmy: You came right on time!
Sheen: Hey Jimmy, can I see your Shrink-Ray?
Jimmy: Sheen, I don't think that's such a good idea...
Sheen: THANKS JIMMY!
Sheen takes the shrink-ray and fires it at Professor Calamitous's “Army†which shrinks them down into the size of three ants
Calamitous: ARGHHHH! I still have a few tricks up my uh...my uh...the thing on your
Sheen: SLEEVE FOR PEAT SAKE!
Calamitous: Oh, Right! Now, what were they?
Carl: Hey Jimmy, can I do it?
Jimmy: Be my guest Carl!
Carl fires the shrink-ray at Professor Calamitous who shrinks into the size of his “armyâ€
Jimmy: Call the cops guys, we've done enough for one day.
Sheen And Libby: The Genius Rescue
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Posted 23 July 2011 - 01:30 PM
interseting so far
but you double posted you might want to delete one
but you double posted you might want to delete one
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Posted 23 July 2011 - 01:39 PM
Nice Prologue, Skittlewolf. 
I can't wait to read more.
I can't wait to read more.
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Posted 25 July 2011 - 02:52 AM
Okay, here's Chapter 1, Now If You ask when the storyline goes on, I'll will tell you "it's because The story needs to be entertaining" Here it is!
Chapter One: The Super Suits
U-yee: AH! I was defeated by a the so called “Chosen One†who has no talent what-so-ever! All he can do, is put his foot behind his head! I will crush the living daylights out of him!
Jimmy EC: Well, I can tell you, the way to beat that guy, is to take out the REAL fighters!
U-yee: What do you mean?
Jimmy EC: It's not “The Chosen one†who is doing anything!
“U-yee: You were there! You were accompanying “the chosen one†when he defeated me!
Jimmy EC: Maybe, but maybe not! You saw this kid who's right here!
Holds up a picture of Jimmy
Jimmy EC: I'm not him! I'm his...um...identical twin...and I have something to tell you, it was not “the chosen one†or should I say Sheen Estevez who defeated you, it was that no good brother of mine! He installed something into his friend to make him win the fight! My brother, you see, he thinks he's the greatest person on earth and wants to take it over by hiding behind one of his friends! Now that his friend Sheen is the chosen one around here, he's one step closer on getting the whole world! I'd be surprised how if someone could stop his plan!
U-yee: What is your name? I must know it!
Jimmy EC: Call me, E.J. Clonium! I could grant you all your wishes, and soon you might be “the chosen one†who knows! The work to be done...the money to be made, and...the time I defeat My Twin Bro, once and for all!
-At Jimmy's Back Yard-
Carl: YOU CAN NEVER DEFEAT LLAMA BOY!!!
Sheen: Or ULTRALORD!
Jimmy: Oh, Yeah I Can! Beware The Wrath of Brain-Storm!
Sheen starts to punch air.
Sheen: Take That! And That! And...some of this! And that right there!
Jimmy: Sheen...Sheen.....SHEEN!
Sheen: What?
Jimmy: You're not doing anything.
Sheen: Then taste my tomatoes!
Sheen throws five tomatoes at Jimmy.
Jimmy: Sheen, I think we should get YOU to the lab!
Carl: Jimmy, why are we going to the lab?
Jimmy: You'll See!
Jimmy holds his hair in front of his DNA scanner V.O.X.
V.O.X: Welcome Jimmy, you may come in.
Jimmy: Thanks V.O.X!
Sheen: So Jimmy, what are we doing again?
Jimmy: Last night I made some things that will allow us to fight like we're really inside an Ultra Lord, Llama Boy, and Brain-Storm Fight!
Sheen: How?
Jimmy: Sheen, if you remember, I made you're dad a Super Suit so that he could impress you, I've done the same things in here!
Jimmy opens up a trap door where they find them selves inside what looked like a Super-Hero hide-out.
Sheen: Wow! This is really cool Jimmy!
Jimmy: I know, now over here, is where the stuff gets started!
Jimmy opens up a door with 4 different costumes in it.
Sheen and Carl: Wow!
Sheen: Jinx! You owe me a purple flurp!
Carl sighs and gives Sheen a Purple Flurp.
Jimmy: These costumes include superpowers from all of the heroes and villains that we play as!
Carl: Where is the Llama Boy one?
Jimmy: Since Llama Boy is half Llama and half boy, I made this suction-cup that you put on to turn YOU, Carl Wheezer, into half Llama and half Boy!
Carl: Give me! GIVE ME!
Sheen: CARL! Be patient...GIVE ME MY ULTRA LORD COSTUME!!!
Jimmy: Okay...I'm getting them out...sheesh!
Sheen: This Will Be So AWESOME!
Carl: Yeah, I know!
They put on their costumes and get sucked into a black (with a bit of purple) whirlpool.
Carl: WHAT''S GOING ON JIMMY?
Jimmy: I DON'T KNOW!
Sheen: I KINDA LIKE IIIT!
They suddenly hit a hard ground
Sheen: Were are we Jimmy?
They look up and find themselves in Mrs. Fowl's classroom.
Jimmy: I didn't give the suits a transportation system!
Sheen: NO! SCHOOL! WHY MUST THE GOOD DIE YOUNG!
Mrs. Fowl: Listen C-l-l-laaaaaas BRAWK! We all know that 5 x 5 = 2,864,936!
Class: Yes Mrs. Fair.
Jimmy: What's going on here?
Carl: I don't know Jimmy, and I don't like it...* in whisper* I'm scared.
Butch: I think we should SING!
Libby: No! Music is the worst thing EVER!
Jimmy, Carl, and Sheen: WHAT!!!
Carl 2: Mrs. Fair, can we get home so that I can throw darts at pictures of Llamas!
Mrs. Fowl: Sure Carl, CLASS DISMISSED!
The Other Sheen squirts Ketchup onto Libby
Sheen 2: Oops! Sorry, Nut-face.
Libby: Oh Yeah! TAKE THIS!
Libby throws a sandwich at Sheen's face.
Sheen: I'll deal with YOU later!
Jimmy * once they're all gone* Oh NO!
Sheen: What Jimmy?
Jimmy: I Know whats going on here!
Carl: What is it Jim?
Jimmy gulps and says...
Chapter One: The Super Suits
U-yee: AH! I was defeated by a the so called “Chosen One†who has no talent what-so-ever! All he can do, is put his foot behind his head! I will crush the living daylights out of him!
Jimmy EC: Well, I can tell you, the way to beat that guy, is to take out the REAL fighters!
U-yee: What do you mean?
Jimmy EC: It's not “The Chosen one†who is doing anything!
“U-yee: You were there! You were accompanying “the chosen one†when he defeated me!
Jimmy EC: Maybe, but maybe not! You saw this kid who's right here!
Holds up a picture of Jimmy
Jimmy EC: I'm not him! I'm his...um...identical twin...and I have something to tell you, it was not “the chosen one†or should I say Sheen Estevez who defeated you, it was that no good brother of mine! He installed something into his friend to make him win the fight! My brother, you see, he thinks he's the greatest person on earth and wants to take it over by hiding behind one of his friends! Now that his friend Sheen is the chosen one around here, he's one step closer on getting the whole world! I'd be surprised how if someone could stop his plan!
U-yee: What is your name? I must know it!
Jimmy EC: Call me, E.J. Clonium! I could grant you all your wishes, and soon you might be “the chosen one†who knows! The work to be done...the money to be made, and...the time I defeat My Twin Bro, once and for all!
-At Jimmy's Back Yard-
Carl: YOU CAN NEVER DEFEAT LLAMA BOY!!!
Sheen: Or ULTRALORD!
Jimmy: Oh, Yeah I Can! Beware The Wrath of Brain-Storm!
Sheen starts to punch air.
Sheen: Take That! And That! And...some of this! And that right there!
Jimmy: Sheen...Sheen.....SHEEN!
Sheen: What?
Jimmy: You're not doing anything.
Sheen: Then taste my tomatoes!
Sheen throws five tomatoes at Jimmy.
Jimmy: Sheen, I think we should get YOU to the lab!
Carl: Jimmy, why are we going to the lab?
Jimmy: You'll See!
Jimmy holds his hair in front of his DNA scanner V.O.X.
V.O.X: Welcome Jimmy, you may come in.
Jimmy: Thanks V.O.X!
Sheen: So Jimmy, what are we doing again?
Jimmy: Last night I made some things that will allow us to fight like we're really inside an Ultra Lord, Llama Boy, and Brain-Storm Fight!
Sheen: How?
Jimmy: Sheen, if you remember, I made you're dad a Super Suit so that he could impress you, I've done the same things in here!
Jimmy opens up a trap door where they find them selves inside what looked like a Super-Hero hide-out.
Sheen: Wow! This is really cool Jimmy!
Jimmy: I know, now over here, is where the stuff gets started!
Jimmy opens up a door with 4 different costumes in it.
Sheen and Carl: Wow!
Sheen: Jinx! You owe me a purple flurp!
Carl sighs and gives Sheen a Purple Flurp.
Jimmy: These costumes include superpowers from all of the heroes and villains that we play as!
Carl: Where is the Llama Boy one?
Jimmy: Since Llama Boy is half Llama and half boy, I made this suction-cup that you put on to turn YOU, Carl Wheezer, into half Llama and half Boy!
Carl: Give me! GIVE ME!
Sheen: CARL! Be patient...GIVE ME MY ULTRA LORD COSTUME!!!
Jimmy: Okay...I'm getting them out...sheesh!
Sheen: This Will Be So AWESOME!
Carl: Yeah, I know!
They put on their costumes and get sucked into a black (with a bit of purple) whirlpool.
Carl: WHAT''S GOING ON JIMMY?
Jimmy: I DON'T KNOW!
Sheen: I KINDA LIKE IIIT!
They suddenly hit a hard ground
Sheen: Were are we Jimmy?
They look up and find themselves in Mrs. Fowl's classroom.
Jimmy: I didn't give the suits a transportation system!
Sheen: NO! SCHOOL! WHY MUST THE GOOD DIE YOUNG!
Mrs. Fowl: Listen C-l-l-laaaaaas BRAWK! We all know that 5 x 5 = 2,864,936!
Class: Yes Mrs. Fair.
Jimmy: What's going on here?
Carl: I don't know Jimmy, and I don't like it...* in whisper* I'm scared.
Butch: I think we should SING!
Libby: No! Music is the worst thing EVER!
Jimmy, Carl, and Sheen: WHAT!!!
Carl 2: Mrs. Fair, can we get home so that I can throw darts at pictures of Llamas!
Mrs. Fowl: Sure Carl, CLASS DISMISSED!
The Other Sheen squirts Ketchup onto Libby
Sheen 2: Oops! Sorry, Nut-face.
Libby: Oh Yeah! TAKE THIS!
Libby throws a sandwich at Sheen's face.
Sheen: I'll deal with YOU later!
Jimmy * once they're all gone* Oh NO!
Sheen: What Jimmy?
Jimmy: I Know whats going on here!
Carl: What is it Jim?
Jimmy gulps and says...
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Cool!!!! THIS IS SO AWESOME!!!! I can not WAIT for the next chapter!!!! 
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Posted 25 July 2011 - 04:23 AM
Chapter 2, The Parallel Universe:
Jimmy: We're in a parallel universe!
Sheen: What's a paralleil universe?
Jimmy: One: It's parallel Sheen, parallel. Two: A parallel universe is a universe that is opposite than our universe!
Carl: Then why doesn't Mrs. Fowl look like Jimmy's Mo...I mean really pretty!
Jimmy: It doesn't make EVERYTHING opposite! Only the rather big stuff.
Carl: How did we get here Jimmy?
Jimmy: Let me think...THAT'S IT! The suits had so much power that when we all activated them at the same time the power made a whirlpool, making us get sucked into this parallel universe!
Sheen: Does that mean that...
Jimmy: Yes Sheen, it means that your a genius!
Sheen: YES!
Jimmy: But it also means that you hate Libby and Ultra Lord!
Sheen: NOOO!!! WHY DOES THE GOOD DIE YOUNG!
Jimmy: Calm down Sheen! I just need to recreate the suits and then when we get them activate them, we should go into a parallel universe compared to THIS universe, and that means home!
Sheen: How will you do that? You're probably REALLY stupid in this world, and you don't have a lab!
Jimmy: No, but I know who does! Come On guys! We need to get there quick!
They run from the classroom and race towards the road. Then they finally get to the Estevez's house!
Sheen: What are we doing at my house?
Jimmy: You're a genius! You probably have a lab, we go into the lab, I create three more costumes, and then the power will get us out of here!
Carl: But what if Sheen 2 busts in while we're in his lab?
Jimmy: I bet I could use something to hide that we're there!
Sheen: But what if I'm already in there?
Jimmy: One of you could be a distraction!
Carl: Can I be the distraction!
Jimmy: You're probably the only one we could use, I need to sneak in, and Sheen will probably destroy the real Sheen if he sees two of himself!
Carl: I'll just call Sheen out and he'll probably say “Hey Carl, How You Doing...â€
Jimmy: No, Sheen will hate you in this world, just run around like crazy trying to escape his every attack.
Carl: Okay Jim!
Carl knocks on the door when it gets answered by Sheen 2.
Sheen 2: What do you want bonehead?
Carl: I think you're inventions are really lame, and that you are a weird snot ball!
Sheen 2: YOU'RE GOING TO PAY FOR THAT! I'M COMING OUT THERE!
Sheen transports himself outside to chase Carl around like crazy.
Sheen 2: Come here you twit!
Carl: HELP! HEELLP!
Carl runs out-of-sight with Sheen 2 chasing him.
Jimmy: Now, I need one of you're hairs,
Sheen: Here you go.
Sheen rips out one his hairs.
Sheen: OW! There!
Sheen gives the hair to Jimmy who scans it and lets them inside!
Jimmy: I almost thought that that wouldn't work!
They go inside and see pictures of Brittney all over the place.
Sheen: NOOO!!! WHY MUST...
Jimmy: SHEEN!!!
Sheen: Sorry Jimmy.
Jimmy: Now I should be able to at least find a huge power source around here somewhere...Aha!
Sheen: What Jimmy?
Jimmy: There's a big box right there with all the equipment to make at least four different suits! I wonder if you invented the Hyper-Cube yet?
Sheen: Over here is a Pyramid, that looks a lot like your Hyper-Cube!
Jimmy: Cool, I never thought of making a Hyper-Pyramid before, anyways, here goes nothing!
Jimmy fires the Pyramid at the box and then turns over to Sheen
Jimmy: Okay, now lets get out of here!
But then they hear a noise and then hear Sheen's voice trailing down the hallway.
Sheen 2: No good little punk!
Sheen and Jimmy watch him from behind a big box as he sits down and turns on his computer, which has pictures of Brittney all over it.
Sheen: Computer, activate slide show!
Computer: Yes Sheen, doing so right now.....Done!
With quick thinking Jimmy brakes a glass and then pushes the button that says “ Back-Yard†Then both he and Sheen appear in Sheen 2's Back Yard.
Jimmy: That was a close one!
Sheen: I'd say! Hey, what's wrong with Carl?
Carl: Sheen used his master Marshall Arts powers in me!
Jimmy: Oh, I forgot that Sheen is very different in this universe!
Sheen: So what now?
Cindy: JIMMY!!!
Jimmy: Ah! Cindy!
Cindy: I wasn't able to find you after class because you ran out afraid of Sheen and Libby! Oh, I've missed you for SOO long! Let's go out! Come on!
Jimmy: Actually...I have some things to do...
Cindy: Oh, don't be so silly, you're dumber than a box of rocks, what could you possibly have to do?
Jimmy: Um...
Cindy: Probably signing a bunch of autographs since your the most popular kid in the school!
Jimmy: What?
Cindy: I'll leave you alone, and we'll see each other later! Bye!
Jimmy Bye...i think?
Sheen: Weird! PUT THIS STUFF TOGETHER BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE!!!!!
Jimmy: Alright! I'll get it put together!
Sheen: Thank you! THANK YOU!!!
3 hours later in the park
Carl: Jimmy, when will you get the suits ready?
Jimmy: Just one more attachment and I'll be ready to start these babies up.....Okay they're finished!
Sheen: FINALY!!!
Jimmy: Okay, we activate them in 5...4...3...2...1!
They all fire up the suits and go into the whirlpool again.
Carl: Hey Jimmy, I don't think we should ever start up so much power at the same time EVER AGAIN!
Jimmy: I agree Carl, hat universe was kinda creepy!
Sheen: So, where are we going to appear?
Jimmy: We should appear in the lab, just where we were before.
Sheen: That's good news!
But then when they hit the ground, they appeared somewhere none of them expected to be.
Jimmy: We're in a parallel universe!
Sheen: What's a paralleil universe?
Jimmy: One: It's parallel Sheen, parallel. Two: A parallel universe is a universe that is opposite than our universe!
Carl: Then why doesn't Mrs. Fowl look like Jimmy's Mo...I mean really pretty!
Jimmy: It doesn't make EVERYTHING opposite! Only the rather big stuff.
Carl: How did we get here Jimmy?
Jimmy: Let me think...THAT'S IT! The suits had so much power that when we all activated them at the same time the power made a whirlpool, making us get sucked into this parallel universe!
Sheen: Does that mean that...
Jimmy: Yes Sheen, it means that your a genius!
Sheen: YES!
Jimmy: But it also means that you hate Libby and Ultra Lord!
Sheen: NOOO!!! WHY DOES THE GOOD DIE YOUNG!
Jimmy: Calm down Sheen! I just need to recreate the suits and then when we get them activate them, we should go into a parallel universe compared to THIS universe, and that means home!
Sheen: How will you do that? You're probably REALLY stupid in this world, and you don't have a lab!
Jimmy: No, but I know who does! Come On guys! We need to get there quick!
They run from the classroom and race towards the road. Then they finally get to the Estevez's house!
Sheen: What are we doing at my house?
Jimmy: You're a genius! You probably have a lab, we go into the lab, I create three more costumes, and then the power will get us out of here!
Carl: But what if Sheen 2 busts in while we're in his lab?
Jimmy: I bet I could use something to hide that we're there!
Sheen: But what if I'm already in there?
Jimmy: One of you could be a distraction!
Carl: Can I be the distraction!
Jimmy: You're probably the only one we could use, I need to sneak in, and Sheen will probably destroy the real Sheen if he sees two of himself!
Carl: I'll just call Sheen out and he'll probably say “Hey Carl, How You Doing...â€
Jimmy: No, Sheen will hate you in this world, just run around like crazy trying to escape his every attack.
Carl: Okay Jim!
Carl knocks on the door when it gets answered by Sheen 2.
Sheen 2: What do you want bonehead?
Carl: I think you're inventions are really lame, and that you are a weird snot ball!
Sheen 2: YOU'RE GOING TO PAY FOR THAT! I'M COMING OUT THERE!
Sheen transports himself outside to chase Carl around like crazy.
Sheen 2: Come here you twit!
Carl: HELP! HEELLP!
Carl runs out-of-sight with Sheen 2 chasing him.
Jimmy: Now, I need one of you're hairs,
Sheen: Here you go.
Sheen rips out one his hairs.
Sheen: OW! There!
Sheen gives the hair to Jimmy who scans it and lets them inside!
Jimmy: I almost thought that that wouldn't work!
They go inside and see pictures of Brittney all over the place.
Sheen: NOOO!!! WHY MUST...
Jimmy: SHEEN!!!
Sheen: Sorry Jimmy.
Jimmy: Now I should be able to at least find a huge power source around here somewhere...Aha!
Sheen: What Jimmy?
Jimmy: There's a big box right there with all the equipment to make at least four different suits! I wonder if you invented the Hyper-Cube yet?
Sheen: Over here is a Pyramid, that looks a lot like your Hyper-Cube!
Jimmy: Cool, I never thought of making a Hyper-Pyramid before, anyways, here goes nothing!
Jimmy fires the Pyramid at the box and then turns over to Sheen
Jimmy: Okay, now lets get out of here!
But then they hear a noise and then hear Sheen's voice trailing down the hallway.
Sheen 2: No good little punk!
Sheen and Jimmy watch him from behind a big box as he sits down and turns on his computer, which has pictures of Brittney all over it.
Sheen: Computer, activate slide show!
Computer: Yes Sheen, doing so right now.....Done!
With quick thinking Jimmy brakes a glass and then pushes the button that says “ Back-Yard†Then both he and Sheen appear in Sheen 2's Back Yard.
Jimmy: That was a close one!
Sheen: I'd say! Hey, what's wrong with Carl?
Carl: Sheen used his master Marshall Arts powers in me!
Jimmy: Oh, I forgot that Sheen is very different in this universe!
Sheen: So what now?
Cindy: JIMMY!!!
Jimmy: Ah! Cindy!
Cindy: I wasn't able to find you after class because you ran out afraid of Sheen and Libby! Oh, I've missed you for SOO long! Let's go out! Come on!
Jimmy: Actually...I have some things to do...
Cindy: Oh, don't be so silly, you're dumber than a box of rocks, what could you possibly have to do?
Jimmy: Um...
Cindy: Probably signing a bunch of autographs since your the most popular kid in the school!
Jimmy: What?
Cindy: I'll leave you alone, and we'll see each other later! Bye!
Jimmy Bye...i think?
Sheen: Weird! PUT THIS STUFF TOGETHER BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE!!!!!
Jimmy: Alright! I'll get it put together!
Sheen: Thank you! THANK YOU!!!
3 hours later in the park
Carl: Jimmy, when will you get the suits ready?
Jimmy: Just one more attachment and I'll be ready to start these babies up.....Okay they're finished!
Sheen: FINALY!!!
Jimmy: Okay, we activate them in 5...4...3...2...1!
They all fire up the suits and go into the whirlpool again.
Carl: Hey Jimmy, I don't think we should ever start up so much power at the same time EVER AGAIN!
Jimmy: I agree Carl, hat universe was kinda creepy!
Sheen: So, where are we going to appear?
Jimmy: We should appear in the lab, just where we were before.
Sheen: That's good news!
But then when they hit the ground, they appeared somewhere none of them expected to be.
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Posted 25 July 2011 - 12:53 PM
oooh...cliffhanger
i was wondering what would happen to J/C in a parallel universe
cute
i was wondering what would happen to J/C in a parallel universe
cute
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Cool!!! 
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LOL! Awesome!
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Can't wait for next chap.
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Posted 26 July 2011 - 02:11 AM
Okay, in this chapter things start to go to the storyline!
Chapter 3 Jimmy VS Jimmy
They were in Shangrii Llama, then they looked up and saw two familiar faces!
Jimmy: U-yee? EVIL CLONE!?!
Jimmy EC: You catch on well Whippy-Dip! This Guy And I are going to get rid of your friend there, Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!
U-yee: I will destroy The Chosen One!
Sheen: You can't defeat me!
Jimmy: And He wont do it again, you've had your chance!
U-yee: But, I've got both of your friends! Surly you must accept the challenge now!
Jimmy EC raises Libby and Cindy with his gravitation ray.
Jimmy: Cindy?
Sheen: Libby?
Jimmy EC: Yep!
Jimmy: Wait a Second! It was YOU! You installed the whirlpool into my Suits! Once we were out of the way, you kidnapped Cindy and Libby!!
Jimmy EC: Well done Jimmy! It took U-yee over here 29 minutes to figure out the plan!
Jimmy: Evil Clone! Put Cindy, AND Libby Down RIGHT NOW!
Jimmy EC: WAIT! I still need to think of my answer...um...oh that's right NO!
Carl: Jimmy, what are you going to do?
Jimmy: I'm going to...going to...
Jimmy EC: HA! You don't even have any of your inventions! I thought of that while putting the whirl-pool in the suits!
Jimmy: Well I still have the Super-Suits!
Jimmy gets inside the Ultra Lord suit and flies up to destroy Jimmy EC
Jimmy EC: Oh No! Jimmy is coming at me! What should I do? Oh, that's right! DESTROY HIM!
He takes the gravitation ray off of Cindy and Libby and he Points it at Jimmy. He then makes Jimmy whack into the walls for 2 minutes.
Sheen: Libby babe, are you Okay?
Libby: Yeah Sheen!
Carl: We have to help Jimmy!
Cindy: He's right! There's no way to destroy The Evil Clone without him, Come on Carl lets get in these suits!
Libby: Then what do me and Sheen do?
Cindy: You two can keep watch.
Libby: Oh, No you don't I'm not going to keep...
Cindy and Carl: Goodbye!
Sheen: I'M BOARD!!!
Libby: Calm Down Sheen! We don't want to get attention!
Sheen: I do! HEY YOU STUPID CLONE! LOOKY HERE! I THINK YOUR THE BIGGEST MISTAKE SINCE ADOLF HITLER WAS BORN!!!
Libby: SHEEN!!!
Sheen: Sorry, but I'm REALLY board!
Jimmy EC: TAKE THAT! AND...THAT!!!
Carl: We'll save you Jim!
Jimmy EC: Oh, REALY!
Jimmy EC throws a cage at them trapping them.
Cindy: Dang It! I now really want to Kick Neutron 2's Butt!
Jimmy: Just use you're powers to get out of it!
Cindy: Oh, Right!
Jimmy EC: I don't think so!
Jimmy EC makes Jimmy transport inside the cage, and he then put up a electrical force field.
Jimmy EC: HA! Try to escape Now you stupid Kids!
Jimmy: I'd like to inform that YOU ARE A KID TOO!!!
Jimmy EC: Yeah, yeah, whatever.
U-yee: We still need to destroy the chosen one!
Jimmy EC: Oh, how do I care about that? Wait, I DON'T
Jimmy EC makes a cage fall on him.
Jimmy: How did you escape from your Clone-Planet!
Jimmy: Oh, I just got on the bottom of YOUR rocket, then once you were in space, I took some of my invisible powder and put it on me, then once you got to your stupid planet, you got so sucked into your friends singing that I was able tp put a horagram inot the sky pretending that I was still there! Then I ran off!
Carl: SHEEN, LIBBY, HELP!!!
Jimmy EC: Oh No you don't!
Jimmy: Just get out of here!
Jimmy EC: CAGE!!!
A cage starts to fall on Sheen and Libby but they dodge it before it could catch them.
Libby: Close One!
Jimmy EC: CAGE!!!
A cage fall right behind Sheen and Libby and the electric shock made them fly out of Shangrii Llama.
Jimmy: Way To Sheen and Libby!
Jimmy EC: Oh, they're no threat! The moron and his Girlfriend can't save you!
Jimmy: Then You don't know a THING about Sheen and Libby!
Jimmy EC: I'm your CLONE! I know EVERYTHING about you AND your friends!
Jimmy: But What if they've changed.
Jimmy EC: I'd figure it out!
Cindy: How?
Jimmy EC: When I was in Jimmy's lab getting De-Evilized or whatever. I planted a Chip onto Neutron to make it so when he finds something out I find something out!
Jimmy: You are one SICK Clone!
Jimmy EC: Yeah, I know!
Cindy: You can't keep us in here forever!
Jimmy: Yeah, Sheen and Libby will save us!
Carl: Unless They epically Fail!
Jimmy and Cindy: CARL!!! YOU'RE NOT HELPING!!!
(P.S. When E.J.C. Says I find something out, there is emphasis on the I)
Chapter 3 Jimmy VS Jimmy
They were in Shangrii Llama, then they looked up and saw two familiar faces!
Jimmy: U-yee? EVIL CLONE!?!
Jimmy EC: You catch on well Whippy-Dip! This Guy And I are going to get rid of your friend there, Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!
U-yee: I will destroy The Chosen One!
Sheen: You can't defeat me!
Jimmy: And He wont do it again, you've had your chance!
U-yee: But, I've got both of your friends! Surly you must accept the challenge now!
Jimmy EC raises Libby and Cindy with his gravitation ray.
Jimmy: Cindy?
Sheen: Libby?
Jimmy EC: Yep!
Jimmy: Wait a Second! It was YOU! You installed the whirlpool into my Suits! Once we were out of the way, you kidnapped Cindy and Libby!!
Jimmy EC: Well done Jimmy! It took U-yee over here 29 minutes to figure out the plan!
Jimmy: Evil Clone! Put Cindy, AND Libby Down RIGHT NOW!
Jimmy EC: WAIT! I still need to think of my answer...um...oh that's right NO!
Carl: Jimmy, what are you going to do?
Jimmy: I'm going to...going to...
Jimmy EC: HA! You don't even have any of your inventions! I thought of that while putting the whirl-pool in the suits!
Jimmy: Well I still have the Super-Suits!
Jimmy gets inside the Ultra Lord suit and flies up to destroy Jimmy EC
Jimmy EC: Oh No! Jimmy is coming at me! What should I do? Oh, that's right! DESTROY HIM!
He takes the gravitation ray off of Cindy and Libby and he Points it at Jimmy. He then makes Jimmy whack into the walls for 2 minutes.
Sheen: Libby babe, are you Okay?
Libby: Yeah Sheen!
Carl: We have to help Jimmy!
Cindy: He's right! There's no way to destroy The Evil Clone without him, Come on Carl lets get in these suits!
Libby: Then what do me and Sheen do?
Cindy: You two can keep watch.
Libby: Oh, No you don't I'm not going to keep...
Cindy and Carl: Goodbye!
Sheen: I'M BOARD!!!
Libby: Calm Down Sheen! We don't want to get attention!
Sheen: I do! HEY YOU STUPID CLONE! LOOKY HERE! I THINK YOUR THE BIGGEST MISTAKE SINCE ADOLF HITLER WAS BORN!!!
Libby: SHEEN!!!
Sheen: Sorry, but I'm REALLY board!
Jimmy EC: TAKE THAT! AND...THAT!!!
Carl: We'll save you Jim!
Jimmy EC: Oh, REALY!
Jimmy EC throws a cage at them trapping them.
Cindy: Dang It! I now really want to Kick Neutron 2's Butt!
Jimmy: Just use you're powers to get out of it!
Cindy: Oh, Right!
Jimmy EC: I don't think so!
Jimmy EC makes Jimmy transport inside the cage, and he then put up a electrical force field.
Jimmy EC: HA! Try to escape Now you stupid Kids!
Jimmy: I'd like to inform that YOU ARE A KID TOO!!!
Jimmy EC: Yeah, yeah, whatever.
U-yee: We still need to destroy the chosen one!
Jimmy EC: Oh, how do I care about that? Wait, I DON'T
Jimmy EC makes a cage fall on him.
Jimmy: How did you escape from your Clone-Planet!
Jimmy: Oh, I just got on the bottom of YOUR rocket, then once you were in space, I took some of my invisible powder and put it on me, then once you got to your stupid planet, you got so sucked into your friends singing that I was able tp put a horagram inot the sky pretending that I was still there! Then I ran off!
Carl: SHEEN, LIBBY, HELP!!!
Jimmy EC: Oh No you don't!
Jimmy: Just get out of here!
Jimmy EC: CAGE!!!
A cage starts to fall on Sheen and Libby but they dodge it before it could catch them.
Libby: Close One!
Jimmy EC: CAGE!!!
A cage fall right behind Sheen and Libby and the electric shock made them fly out of Shangrii Llama.
Jimmy: Way To Sheen and Libby!
Jimmy EC: Oh, they're no threat! The moron and his Girlfriend can't save you!
Jimmy: Then You don't know a THING about Sheen and Libby!
Jimmy EC: I'm your CLONE! I know EVERYTHING about you AND your friends!
Jimmy: But What if they've changed.
Jimmy EC: I'd figure it out!
Cindy: How?
Jimmy EC: When I was in Jimmy's lab getting De-Evilized or whatever. I planted a Chip onto Neutron to make it so when he finds something out I find something out!
Jimmy: You are one SICK Clone!
Jimmy EC: Yeah, I know!
Cindy: You can't keep us in here forever!
Jimmy: Yeah, Sheen and Libby will save us!
Carl: Unless They epically Fail!
Jimmy and Cindy: CARL!!! YOU'RE NOT HELPING!!!
(P.S. When E.J.C. Says I find something out, there is emphasis on the I)
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Posted 26 July 2011 - 02:20 AM
It was good. A few mistakes but I loved it. YAY EVIL JIMMY!!!!!
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Posted 26 July 2011 - 01:45 PM
but then how did he get out of the dark matter dimension and the clone planet had faded to an oblivionJimmy: How did you escape from your Clone-Planet!
Jimmy: Oh, I just got on my rocket, and I used it to jump off of the planet.
otherwise yay sheen + libby FTW
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Posted 26 July 2011 - 05:28 PM
that's what I was wondering.but then how did he get out of the dark matter dimension and the clone planet had faded to an oblivion
otherwise yay sheen + libby FTW
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Posted 26 July 2011 - 05:35 PM
and seth said he took his rocket and im like it faded to
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Posted 27 July 2011 - 02:13 AM
Everything was supposed to fade. Then the whole planet was sucked into that dark side thing. So basically he couldn't just hop on his rocket and come back to Earth if he could then 1) he would have reappeared in an episode 2) Jimmy would have done something else
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Posted 27 July 2011 - 02:21 AM
I'm Going To Fix It
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Posted 27 July 2011 - 02:26 AM
Promise!!!
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Posted 27 July 2011 - 02:27 AM
Oh and I believe the board/bored your looking for is spelled b-o-r-e-d
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Posted 27 July 2011 - 02:43 AM
Now we don't know how he got there!!!!! *runs around screaming*
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