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[J/C AVA]

Hiya guys!

As you may have noticed, the Life, Love and Death topic has been premenantly deleted. -cries and sniffs- I'll miss it...

Anyways, this topic is soley dedicated to the commenting and such for my fic The Comet Catalyst.

If any of you have suggestions, critisism (constructive of course), probelms or just wanna rave about it, THIS is the place to do so.

BIG Note: DO NOT comment in TCC topic itself! That's one of the reasons I asked Mara to delete it, due to the comments from previous readers (not personally towards them of course) after I made re-written versions of certain chapters. I was concerned that the content of a re-written chapter would sound different to the comments of the old version, throwing people off.

If any of you might have a problem with me making this thread, or any other concern, please feel free to PM me.

NOW GO CRAZY YOU LOVELY READERS!!!

[Beks]

Cool, dude.

[Macey]

YAAAY! TCC is back!

This is great news!

[J/C AVA]

Thanks alot guys!

The Introduction to TCC is BACK!! HERE!!!

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Hey, Pedro?? Whatever happened to MB??! Yesh, I'm gonna keep bugging you about it until you get on it again... XD

[J/C AVA]

Hey, Pedro?? Whatever happened to MB??! Yesh, I'm gonna keep bugging you about it until you get on it again... XD

Of course.

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Yeah! You BETCHA she's gonna be buggin' ya 'bout it 'till ya update!

Yeah, so hurry UP already!!!!

[Macey]

8D

The prologue= SO MUCH LOVE.

I love your description and use of music, Pedro. I just love it.

Also...COMET WITH A BACKSTORY YES PLZ. *shot*

[RocksmySocks]

I am LOVING the soundtrack, Pedro. I can't wait to finally start reading your revamped version!

[Mara=^.^=]

Sweetness!

I'll start re-reading soon!

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[J/C AVA]

Sweetness!

I'll start re-reading soon!

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

So will I with TOSOT. So will I.

MORE GREAT NEWS!!! Part 1 is up! Not much different from the original, but I might be looking to rewritting it in paragraph form.

[Macey]

*laughs* Oh Pedro, you have the characters perfectly. Gotta love Sheen and the Mood Machine. (Hey, that rhymes~)

And I LOVE how you portrayed Betty in a positive light. It was a really nice thing to see.

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Just so ya know, don't forget about MB!!

[J/C AVA]

Part 2 is now up!!!!

[Macey]

*squee* THAT WAS AWESOME.

The AI montage made me laugh, hard. Plus it was so appropriate. ...And creepy.

JC GOODNESS! And you have their personalities perfect for that kind of situation. Harsh, Jimmy, harsh...


AWESOME chapter!

[J/C AVA]

Awww, thanks Macey.

More good news, the re-written Part 3 is now up!!

HERE!

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Soz, but it looks just like it did last time I read it. How is it different?? Great job, tho!!!

[Macey]

WOOT.

I love the Jimmy and Goddard part at the beginning. Shows their bond off well. LOL@ Brobot cameo.

Hugh and Judy are just wonderful. Perfect characterization. I think Judy said "sweetie" too much though. Maybe "honey" would do?

OH NOES! The comet! I hope it's not evil. It probably is. D8

[J/C AVA]

I think Judy said "sweetie" too much though. Maybe "honey" would do?

Hmmm. Good point. I'll fix that when I get the time. Thanks.

OH NOES! The comet! I hope it's not evil. It probably is. D8

Well... just wait until the end of Phase 1 and Phase 2.

Thanks for replying though Macey.

[J/C AVA]

GREAT NEWS!

Part 4 is posted!!!

READ HERE

Feedback and Constructive Critisism is welcomed.