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Steroids...eep. ._. Disturbing. *Shiver*

Anyways, great chapter! I appreciate the Betty scene very much. :bff: *Is scared about the Jimmy vs. Betty scene, though. O_O; *

[NekoGirl]

Love it! Though I can easily be freaked out by the usage of steroids on what's supposed to be a kids' show, (yes, its directed towards teens, but the original purpose was for kids) but I'll definitely keep reading the chapters regardless.

& the JB scene: priceless, can't wait for more, & I hope you show the Candybar scene, that'd be too cute for words. :wub: ^_^ :thumbsup:

[jimmysaver13]

Don't worry, I'll show the Candy Bar scene. There might not be a kiss though.
Okay, I might update tomorrow, so be ready! Chapter 14's spoilers are on the same page as Chapter 13. See ya!
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SPOILERS AHEAD ABOUT JIMMY AND BETTY'S FIGHT! IF YOU DON'T WANT TO KNOW, DON'T READ!

I know all of you are waiting and nervous about the Jimmy/Betty fight. So, I'll give you guys a sneak peek at what's to come. Don't worry, they won't try to kill each other. Just a simple fight. However, at the end of the fight, when the winner is decided, Eustace will do something to Jimmy that will change Jimmy, his friends and family, and the whole tournament, especially in the Finals.[/U]
:blink: :unsure: :o HINT HINT! It also happens inNaruto so you might remember it if you watch the show. That's all for now!

[NekoGirl]

Yet another of my many reasons fr hating Eustace, lol. Can't wait for Chapter 14!

(but I haven't watched Naruto, (no offense) so I wouldn't know the hint/spoiler, either way I can't wait!) ^_^

Especially the Candy Bar scene, gotta love it! :wub: :dance:

[jimmysaver13]

Trust me, if anyone doesn't hate Eustace (which is very rare) then they'll definately hate him after Jimmy and Betty's fight. People who DO hate Eustace, you'll literally want to jump into your computer, take Eustace, and strangle him with your bare hands. :rolleyes:
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OMG, I hope it has some angst in it. =] Cindy and Betty must realize their undying love for Jimmy!! xD *Moves on the edge of my seat until I fall off* ACK! Must...read...next chapter! -Crazyphyscoperson- :wacko:

[jimmysaver13]

CHAPTER UPDATE:

Okay, today I have to go to an Anime Club Meeting, so I won't be back til about 8:00 central time. I'll post the next chapter, plus a new chapter of Lyrical March. See ya then.

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[NekoGirl]

Can't wait for 9pm eastern time then!! :thumbsup:

Kim Possible: So the Drama + cute JB chapter, LOVE IT! ^_^ :wub:

[jimmysaver13]

Hey guys. Well, the meeting ran longer than I thought so I can't update today. :angry: :'( :grr:
BUT tomorrow I don't have anything special to do except get a haircut, so I'll update both stories tomorrow. So bear with me until tomorrow!

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[NekoGirl]

Hey, no problem. These things happen. Besides, that just makes tomorrow a thousand times better, the 4th season of Kim Possible begins tomorrow, as we all know here, so no complaints from me! :thumbsup: :wub:

Definite Kim/Ron & Jimmy/Betty shipper forever! LOL :lol:

[cherii]

That's fine! ^_^ I can wait...I think. Anyway, you didn't need to send me an email because I wasnt replying. I've always been here, but when I tried to post a message, my internet got disconnected.

[~~Megan~~]

Ohmyfreakinggosh. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed, but I've been grounded since before Xmas. Jeez, this story is getting good. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

[jimmysaver13]

Okay, here's Chapter 14! This chapter pits Ike in the ring with Zix. Lots of drama here, and a plot is slightly revieled. Let's get started!

NOTE: Chapter 14 will be split into 3 parts.

Chapter 14A: Plots Unfolded

Cindy and Libby are shocked at what they are witnessing. Ike, putting steroids into him. Why? Why would he do this? Ike caught sight of them and quickly put the things back into his bag.

"Oh! Uh, hey girls!" Ike said, nervously. "Um, what are you guys doing here?!"

"Ike!" Libby shouted at him. "Did I just see you take steroids?!"

"No! It was...uh...some medication. Yeah, that's it."

"That didn't look like medication to me," Cindy said.

"Okay, look," Ike said. "I was worried about Oliender and me fighting, seeing how strong he is now. So this guy in a brown cloak sold these to me for 50 cents."

"Ike," Libby said, furiosuly. "Do you know what these do to your body?"

"Makes me stronger, right?"

"NO! They make you look stronger and feel stronger, but they mess up the insides of your body. Soon, you'll die from those!"

"WHAT!?" Ike was surprised. He didn't think of the risks then. "How can I stop it?"

"You can't," Cindy replied.

"NO! I DON'T WANT TO DIE!"

"You should've thought about that before you put steroids in to you!" Libby screamed.

"Hold on, Libby," Cindy said. "Remember when Sheen was badly hurt by Eustace?"

Libby winced at the mention. She still had bad thoughts about those gruesome 3 minutes. "Yes."

"Well, Jimmy patched him up and he was good as new."

"What's your point?" Ike asked.

"...Wow, you really are dumb. Jimmy can get the steroids out of you!"

"Really?! He can?!" Ike said, excited and relieved at the same time. "That's great! Take me to him!"

"You better be glad for Jimmy." Libby said, still angry. "If it wasn't for him, you wouldn't have a second chance to live."

- In the Heroes VIP

"Okay Ike," Jimmy said, done with his "operation", "You're all fixed up."

"Oh thanks Jim." Ike said, smiling. "Now I can concentrate on my next fight now."

"Well, that's good." Carl said. "Just don't do steroids again."

"Oh, don't worry. I've learned my lesson." Then Ike walked off. However, in the shadows, someone was watching...

- In the Villians VIP

"Hey, Eustace," Evil Jimmy said.

"Yes? What is it?" Eustace said.

"Jimmy just undid the poison on Ike."

"WHAT!? Darn that Jimmy Neutron! He makes me want to pull my HAIR out!"

"So, what do we do now?"

"Well, as you know, after that last match, Sheen caught King Goobot and beat the gop out of him."

"Oh yeah! I have it all on tape!"

"Well, Sheen must be getting training from Jimmy. As well as Oliender getting training from Jimmy. We must dispatch of Sheen right away."

"Why don't we go after Jimmy?"

"He's too strong now. Sheen is the next possible threat, putting aside Cindy. I want you to try to finish him off for good."

"You mean kill him?"

"Yes."

"Got it, boss." And Evil Jimmy sped away to find Sheen.

"*chuckle* I love it when he calls me boss." Eustace snickered before going back to his plans...

End of Chapter 14A

Duh Duh Duh! :o Suspense once again! Will Sheen be able to handle another ambush by Evil Jimmy? Will he defeat Evil Jimmy? Find out in Chapter 14B: Sheen vs. Evil Jimmy! See ya!

Round 2:

1. Beautiful Gorgeous vs. April

2. Carl vs. Cindy

3. Betty vs. Jimmy

4. Sally vs. Elke

5. Oliender vs. Bolbi's Sister

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Ooh, good chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^ :dance:

[jimmysaver13]

Wow. Sorry for the long update. You know how school can be. Well, I'm back with another chapter! In this chapter, Sheen and Evil Jimmy have their anticipated duel. It is RPG style.
NOTE: This is the second part of Chapter 14. Also WARNING!: JIMMYXBETTY LOVERS MIGHT NOT LIKE THE FIRST PART OF THIS CHAPTER!!!
Note 2: This chapter has a lot of reference to Elke and Judy's fight.

Chapter 14B: Sheen vs. Evil Jimmy

Sheen was training down at the training room. Jimmy said to train, since the accident with Eustace (See Elke and Judy's fight). Libby decided to talk to Cindy about the boys they both like. Since Jimmy, Cindy, and Betty were the main love triangle, she wanted to spice things up about her and Sheen.

"So?" Libby started. "What's going on with you and Jimmy?"

"Well," Cindy said. "It's nothing fancy. Just some time alone. To him, we're just hanging out. But to me, every moment is precious."

"I bet it is."

"So, what about you and Sheen? You two haven't been very active at the time."

"WHAT DOES THAT SUPPOSE TO MEAN?!" Libby shouted with rage.

"Whoa! I'm not dissing on your relationship, or saying that you guys used to...you know."

"WE'RE JUST KIDS!!!!! :mad: "

"I know! It's just that, you guys haven't really been close than you guys have."

"*sigh* I know. It's just that... after the attack, Sheen's been so caught up in training with Jimmy."

"It looks like we're just 2 side people to Jimmy and Sheen."

"Yeah. Sheen's so obsessed with growing stronger, and Jimmy's obsessed with Naruto."

"Actually Libby, Jimmy's made some good points by watching that show. He's gotten stronger too, so he'll be able to crush Betty!

"You got issues, girl."
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"Okay Sheen, that's enough for today." Jimmy said as Sheen finished up on the punching bag.

"You know Jim?" Sheen said. "I could get real strong before my match. We might make it to the championship together!"

"Yeah. But if we do, you know I'll win."

"Yeah, I know." Sheen said as they walked out of the training room.

"Hey Sheen," Jimmy said. "From now on, watch your back. You are one of the main targets."

"Okay, I understand."

Jimmy walked off. Sheen stood there for a second, then noticed something.

"Okay, come on out. I know you're hiding."

Evil Jimmy jumped off of the ceiling to face Sheen.

"Well, you ARE stronger. I see you have been training with Jimmy." he said.

"How about we skip the talking and get to the fighting that the fans want."

"I was hoping you would say that!"

Non-Tournament Battle: Sheen vs. Evil Jimmy


Darn it! I don't hve enough time to finish this chapter! Don't worry, I'll edit the rest in when I get time. In the meantime, read what's here and wait for the rest.

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[NekoGirl]

About the JB fans comment: If it was Cindy's & Libby's chat, then my response: meh. :rolleyes:

I've come to expect that stuff out of Cindy, so this is the normal for me.

Like this: as long as it doesn't come from JIMMY or Betty, then its no big deal. It IS Cindy, after all, lol. :P

But otherwise, pretty good chapter, & I like the tension that's building up, so no complaints on this end. ^_^

So let's have the JB date in the next chapter or whenever. Bring on the next part! :thumbsup:

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^_^ Oooh, I can't WAIT for the next chapter! Bring it on, lol. :lol: Plus I'm nervous about JB's date and fight... What will happen next? :wacko: *Smacks self in the face* I need to get ahold of myself.

Anyways, update soon! :dance:

[jimmysaver13]

Whew. Sorry for the long update. I had ISATs so I couldn't get on. Before I post the next chapter, I'm going to answer some questions that have been posted after Chapter 14B.
Note: Chapter 14 is a side chapter. Ike and Zix's fight won't happen until Chapter 15.

NekoGirl: I'm glad you liked the chapter. I know how the chat with Cindy and Libby can get to JxB fans. About the JB date.
Um, :unsure: okay, don't be mad, but something is going to interrupt their date.
:protest: :mad: :PCpwn: Now before you jump off a building, their date will happen. Don't worry.

Krista: JB's date will happen in Chapter 14C. The JB fight will shock you if you like Jimmy more than Betty.

Chapter 14C is coming up!

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[jimmysaver13]

Okay, here's the next chapter! In this chapter, Sheen and Evil Jimmy duel it out. But with Sheen's new power, can Evil Jimmy prevail? Also, Jimmy and Betty have their date. But Cindy and Libby interrupts it by telling them that Sheen is...well, read on.

Chapter 14C: An Awaited Confrontation

Non-Tournament Battle: Sheen vs. Evil Jimmy

Sheen: Lv. 1 11hp 11mp 78ATK 82DEF 0EXP
Evil Jimmy: Lv. 1 91hp 13mp 18ATK 53DEF 0EXP

"Finally," Sheen said. "I finally get a crack at you."

"I've been waiting for this too." Evil Jimmy said and he charged at Sheen.

Evil Jimmy attacks. 0hp

"Darn," Evil Jimmy said. "I forgot you got stronger by training with Jimmy."

"Actually, I already had this strength!" Sheen said proudly.

"WHAT!?" Evil Jimmy was shocked by this.

"Let's continue!" Sheen said.

Sheen attacks. 25hp

Evil Jimmy: 66hp

"Shoot," EJ said. "I can't beat him at this level. What can I do?"
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"So, what have you learned from that show?" Betty asked Jimmy. They were out on their first "date." He knew Cindy wouldn't like this, but Betty was just too cute to resist.

"Well, I've learned a lot and that's what's getting me stronger and smarter." Jimmy said.

"Oh, that's nice."

Jimmy thought for a moment and decided to ask her the question.

"Betty?" Jimmy asked.

"Yes?" Betty answered politely. Jimmy loved that.

"What was your REAL purpose of bringing me here?"
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"Darn! Another hit!" EJ screamed. He could tell he was losing this fight. He hadn't even touched Sheen and Sheen had already dealt great damage to him.

Sheen: 6mp

Evil Jimmy: 36hp

"What's wrong, Evil Jimmy?" Sheen said mockingly. "I thought you were tough. Then again, you DID lose to Betty."

That last comment angered EJ. EJ went for an attack. But just as he was about to connect, Sheen blocked it!

"WHAT!?" EJ said surprised. "How?!"

"Because I trained under Jimmy Neutron, the greatest RPG fighter in the world!" Sheen immediately sent a shot to EJ's stomach.

"Ugh!" EJ said as he dropped to the floor, blood coming out of his mouth.

Evil Jimmy: 11hp
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"What are you talking about Jimmy?" Betty asked confused. 'Has he already catched on? I knew he was smart but not THIS smart!'

"I know you brought me here for a reason." Jimmy said seriously. "What is it?"

"What do you mean?" Betty said, hiding her shocked feelings. "I wanted to be with you."

"Really? Then why didn't you do it in front of Cindy?"

Betty eyes went wide. She's trapped.

"Since you and Cindy are in a war for me, it would only be fair to torture Cindy with her jealousy."

Betty was awestruk.

"If you really wanted to date me, you would've did it where Cindy could see. Not in a remote place where we are in now."

'Oh my god!' Betty thought to herself. 'He's completely right. Has he figured out?'

"You and I both know that if you're in a war, you have to destroy your opponent at all means. Now, tell me, why did you bring me here?"

"Okay, Jimmy." Betty confessed. It was pointless to hide it. "I'll tell you. I brought you here because..."
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"Now, I'll deliver the final blow!" Sheen shouted. "And end you and the villains! ONCE AND FOR ALL!!!!"

EJ saw no hope. With a fireball in his hand, Sheen looked unbeatable. Sheen lifted his hand and let it down.

'No!' Evil Jimmy thought. 'THIS CAN'T BE THE END OF ME! NOOOOOOOOO!'

Sheen let down the fireball...but it didn't contact with EJ.

"No." Sheen said shockingly and surprised.

No. It was someone Sheen didn't want to see.

"No!" Sheen screamed. The one who took the shot for EJ...was Eustace Strych himself.
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"Our match?" Jimmy said. "You're afraid of our match? Why?"

"Because I feel something bad is going to happen." Betty answered. "First, Eustace is always after you, and Cindy will make SURE that I lose. And plus, I don't want our friendship to end."

"Betty," Jimmy started. "You don't have to worry about a thing. I'll talk to Cindy before our match. As for Eustace, I can handle him. And don't think that this match will break up our friendship. Remember when we agreed that this match won't affect us?"

"Oh, right." Betty said embarrased.

"Don't worry Betty." Jimmy said confortingly. "Everything's going to be alright."

"Thanks Jimmy." And with that, she leaned towards him... :wub: <3
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"WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE!?!?" Sheen said, shocked. :o

"You know," Eustace said in an evil tone. "I've been watching this, Naruto too. And I've found a lot about their powers. Like this one for instance: Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Missile!"

A big flame missile shot right out of Eustace's mouth and at Sheen. Sheen fell down, screaming of his burn marks, while Eustace grabbed Evil Jimmy and whisked him away. Meanwhile, 2 girls saw the whole thing. They were...

"SHEEN!" Libby said, almost crying.

"We have to get Jimmy!" Cindy said. "Come on, let's go!"
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Jimmy and Betty's lips almost touched when...

"JIMMY!" Libby's voice was heard.

Jimmy stopped instantly, to Betty's disappointment, and looked at Cindy and Libby, huffing and puffing. Unfortunately for Jimmy, they were still in the position to kiss, and Cindy saw the whole thing. Cindy's body language was saying some bad stuff. :uhoh:

"What were you doing with her?!" Cindy shouted.

"Uh, well-" Jimmy started.

"CINDY!" Libby interrupted. "WE DON'T HAVE TIME FOR YOUR LOVE BLUES! JIMMY, SHEEN'S BEEN BURNED BY EUSTACE!!"

"WHAT!?" Jimmy said shockingly.

"We saw him get burned by Eustace with this new power called, Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Missile."

"No way!" Jimmy said. "Don't tell me he watches Naruto too!?"

"WHATEVER!" Libby said, almost crying. "YOU HAVE TO COME QUICK!"

Jimmy and the gang ran to Sheen's spot. Carl was already there. And on the ground was a black, smoked, unconsious Sheen.

"No." Jimmy said, hiding his anger, but he couldn't contain it. In a fit of rage, he screamed to the sky, "EUSTACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

END OF CHAPTER 14C

Wow! What a chapter! Sheen is yet again almost dead. Will Sheen live? What about Eustace and Evil Jimmy? And whats happened to Ike? Find out in Chapter 15!

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[jimmysaver13]

Okay, here's Chapter 15! This chapter pits Ike and Zix on the battlefield. How is Sheen? Will Ike live up to his promise to Oliender? Let's find out!

Note: Chapter 15 will be 2 parts.

Chapter 15: Ike vs. Zix

"Why me? Why does it always have to be me?" Sheen said, pouting. Jimmy had already tended to his burn marks.

"Maybe because you train under Jimmy." Nick said.

"But why not get Jimmy?" Cindy asked.

"Because they know that if they get me," Jimmy said. "Sheen will come to my aid. That's why. They're smart enough to take out my help."

"Well, that's just great." Sheen said sarcastically.
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Ike was at the door to the battle arena. He was thinking if he would win or not.

"Ike?" Oliender said, sneaking up on Ike.

"Huh? Oh, hey Oliender." Ike said.

"What are you doing?"

"Just thinking."

"About what?"

"About...about how I might lose. Zix is tough, you know."

"Ike, don't worry about if you lose. Just focus on the different ways you can win. Then, we'll definetly fight for sure."

"Thanks, O."

"Don't call me that!" Oliender said, laughing. :lol: "Well, anyway, good luck. I hope you win."

"I would think that you would root for me to lose." Ike said.

"Now why would I do that? We do have to fight, remember?"

"Right. See ya." And with that, Ike opened the big doors and went to the arena.
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"All right, everyone," CJ said. "It's time for the next match. This match pits Ike against Zix."

The 2 come out and get equal applause.

"Are you two ready?" CJ asked. They both nodded. "Well then, get ready, fight!"

Round 1: Ike vs. Zix

Ike: 81hp 83mp 14ATK 19DEF 0EXP
Zix: 14hp 91mp 13ATK 75DEF 0EXP

"Hey, dude," Zix said. "I have nothing against you, but I bet you won't even touch me!"

"Yeah?" Ike said. "Then prove it!"

Ike goes first.

Ike uses Super Punch. 5mp No effect.

Ike: 78mp

"What?!" Ike said. "How did it not effect him?"

"I told you, you won't even touch me!"

Zix uses Super Blast. 10mp 4hp

Ike: 77hp

"Argh!" Ike said. 'There's no way I can win this. I guess I'll have to use my secret power.'

Ike closed his eyes and began to concentrate. He can feel his magic flowing freely through him. He made his magic go a certain way. Now, he was becoming more powerful.

"What is this?" Zix asked nervously.

"Ike..." Oliender said.

"I made a promise to someone..." Ike said. "That I would meet them to fight. I'm not giving up on that promise! Oliender, watch closely. This is what you'll be up against!"

Ike turned gold and then his stats jumped up.

"NOW MEET "GOLD IKE!

Gold Ike: 131hp 133mp 64ATK 69DEF 0EXP

"How can he get this strong?!" Zix said. Everyone was surprised. Except CJ and Jimmy. They could easily surpass that level.

"Well," CJ said. "Looks like he finally unlocked it."

"Now Oliender," Ik..Gold Ike said. "Watch closely. Because soon, YOU WILL FACE THIS POWER!"

To be continued...

That's all for today!

HUGE NOTE: I won't be online until Sunday, so expect a new chapter on Monday. Also, Lyrical March will be updated on Next Friday. See ya then!

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