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[Purple_Sparkle]

There lied Sheen, unconsious, almost dead. Everyone cried. But Jimmy...all he could do was screamed in complete anger and sadness:

"EUSTACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

:o This is so sad :'( But I'm sure he'll be okay :unsure:

[Estrella]

KILL EUSTACE! KILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[cancel_me]

Well, there goes any chances for J/A out the door. Aw.
And... poor Sheen!

Just a note: I think to you need to fix these things... ^^;;

Jimmy sneaked behind the wall to the villians' VIP section.

Change "sneaked" to snuck.

There lied Sheen, unconsious, almost dead. Everyone cried. But Jimmy...all he could do was screamed in complete anger and sadness.

I don't know if I'm right about this one, but change "lied" to lie (I always get confused with lie and lay), and changed "screamed" to scream.

Sorry I'm such a grammar nerd. :unsure:


Other than that, WONDERFUL CHAPTER! You've got me hooked into your awesome story, and I can't wait until the next matches. =D

[cherii]

Krista, I picked up on those errors too. I used to always correct people if they had grammar or spelling mistakes, but it got them annoyed so I stopped. xD Great chapter! Left in suspense. Please let Sheen live!

[jimmysaver13]

Don't worry, Sheen will live. He's just unconsious. I'll try to update Lyrical March today if I have time.
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[jimmysaver13]

Sorry for the long update. I was sick, but now I'm better and ready for a new chapter! Chapter 11B is Judy's fight with Elke to see who will go against Sally in Round 2. Enjoy!
Note: Elke's power has been moved up, since her old stats were Ms. Fowl's.
Couples: CarlxElke, HughxJudy

Chapter 11B: JUDY V. ELKE

Jimmy and the others were seated in the VIP section. Sheen was better now, with the help of "Dr. Jimmy." At the ring entrance, both combatants were getting some...talking.

"Sugar booger," Hugh began. "remember when we watched all those RPG games Jimmy and his friends always played? Fight just like that."

"Honey," Judy said. "I'll be fine. For the 37th time."

"Sorry, it's just that...I'm worried."

"Oh, sweety," Judy said, moving close to Hugh and giving him a kiss. "don't worry. I'll fight as hard as I can."


"What's wrong, Carl?" Elke said. Carl had been in deep thought.

"Huh?" Carl said, waking up from his thoughts. "Oh, well, it's just that...well, this match means alot to me."

"Why?"

"Well, this match decides which girl I like."

Elke just stood there in shock. :o Did Carl like Judy? Jimmy's MOM? :blink:

"You see," Carl began. "before I met you, I was in love with Jimmy's mom, Judy. Her orange hair, her nice dress, her lips just right when she was baking those marvelous cookies."

" :o " Elke just stood in shock again. "WHAT DOES SHE HAVE THAT I DON'T!" :angry:

"Well, we'll see at this next match."

"WHAT!??!?!!?!?" Elke said, angrily. She wasn't mad at Carl. She was mad at Judy for stealing her man.


"Okay, everyone," CJ said. "It's now time for our next match."

Round 1, Match 8: JUDY v. ELKE

Judy's music starts. (Uh, :unsure: any music.)

"The following contest is sheduled for one fall. Making her way to the ring, Judy."

Jimmy, Carl, and Hugh clapped the loudest.

Elke's music starts. (hard core rock music.)

"And her opponent, Elke."

Carl was surprised.

"Why does she have rock music?" Nick said.

"Probably someone said something mean to her, Carl." Libby said, looking at Carl.

"Uh, I don't know." Carl said defensively.

"Wow, Elke," Judy said. "I didn't know you were a rock fan."

"Shut it, old lady!" Elke snapped. Everyone gasped.

"Oh, no she didn't!" Jimmy said, angry.

"Calm down, Jimmy." Cindy said, soothing Jimmy.

"Elke? What-" Judy was interrupted.

"YOU STOLE CARL FROM ME!" Elke screamed. "ALL HIS LIFE HE LOVED YOU! NOW HE WILL LOVE ME AND NOT YOU!!!!!"

Jimmy looked at Carl shockingly. In fact, everybody did. Even the villians. Even the people that didn't know him. Carl just sank back in his seat.

"NOW YOU WILL DIE AT MY HANDS!"

Judy goes first. (Thank god.)

Judy attacks. No effect.

Elke uses Llama Smash. =30mp lost. No effect.

Elke: 1mp

"It looks like none of their attacks are working." CJ said, still shocked at Carl's relationship with Judy.

"Elke," Judy said. "stop this foolishness. We both can't win."

"THAT'S WHAT YOU THINK!" Elke said, still furious. "YOU'D WANT THAT, DON'T YOU! DIDN'T CARL TELL YOU? THIS MATCH IS TO SEE WHO HE LIKES!"

Everyone gasped at the same time. Carl shrunk in his seat more.

"YOU'D LIKE FOR ME TO FORFEIT! YOU'D LIKE TO END THIS MATCH SO YOU CAN GO BACK TO SMOOTH-TALKING CARL AGAIN, WOULDN'T YOU!?"

"Elke!" Judy screamed. "I'm married!"

"SO!? YOU COULD BE CHEATING ON HUGH!" Jimmy and Hugh gasped. "WELL, FORGET IT! CARL IS MINE! AND HE WILL [b]NEVER-BE-YOURS!!!!!!!!!"

Judy defends.

Judy: 95def

Elke uses MP Recovery. =30mp recovered.

Elke: 31mp

"Whoa!" Sheen said. "She can recover MP?"

"That just goes to show you how powerful Elke really is." Jimmy said.

"Aw, man!" Sally said. "I'll have to fight her!?"

Judy defends.

Judy: 95def

Elke uses LLAMA WAVE RAVE.=31mp lost. 33hp lost.

Elke: 0mp

Judy: 0hp DEFEATED!

"Here is your winner, in a hard battle, Elke!"

The crowd was too shocked to cheer. For Elke, however, it was a moment of joy. She went to Judy.

"Now," Elke said. "he's mine. And there's nothing you can do about it." Elke then walked out of the ring, leaving everybody, even CJ, speechless.

:blink: :o Wow! What an intense chapter! A special note that in Libby's fight, 2 new characters of mine will appear. My dog, Mickey, and CJ's girlfriend, and Libby's cousin, Clair. So don't miss Libby's fight against Nick! See ya next chapter!

Round 2:

1. Beautiful Gorugeous v. April

2. Carl v. Cindy

3. Jimmy v. Betty

4. Sally v. Elke

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[Purple_Sparkle]

Yet another great chapter ^_^ :thumbsup:

[cancel_me]

Oh, cool! But LOL, Judy wanting Carl? Never. She loves Hugh too much to do that. :)

Anyways, AWESOME CHAPTER! Keep up the fantastic work. :dance:

[cherii]

That was a really good chapter! Elke can get very passionate about Carl! :P Aww, you were sick. Great that you're better now! :dance:

[jimmysaver13]

Thanks everyone! Also, I'm taking a break from this story (not too long) to work on Lyrical March. It's been so long since a chapter's been up on that story. Don't worry. I won't keep you all in suspense long.

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[Star]

-sings-

Elke's gone insaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaane

=)

Fabulous chapter ;)

[Purple_Sparkle]

Thanks everyone! Also, I'm taking a break from this story (not too long) to work on Lyrical March. It's been so long since a chapter's been up on that story. Don't worry. I won't keep you all in suspense long.

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Looking foward to it ^_^

[kidwii]

Whew. Sorry for the LONG update, but I'm working on a new fanfic called ,"The Ultimate Tournament." Now, I know what you're saying: 'Wait! Aren't you already working on "The RPG Tournament?!" Well, yes, but this one is very different. This is a story where Sonic, Mario, Jimmy, Naruto, Inuyasha, Mickey Mouse, and others fight each other for $1000, a trophy, and the title of "The Greatest Fighter of All Worlds." Of course, Jimmy Neutron and 9 people he picks will be in it. It will be posted on fanfiction.net, not here. So I have to limit the updates for here. Me, my brother, and new friend are working on it together, so it should turn out great.

Wanna see it? Well, it's not done yet. In fact, I've only done the first chapter. It should be up soon, though. I need a laptop so I can write it on Microsoft Word, so it might take a while.

Anyway, for Lyrical March and The RPG Tournament, I haven't forgot about them. I'll still update.

Wanna see what "The Ultimate Tournament" is all about? Okay:

THE ULTIMATE TOURNAMENT
Rated: T (PG-13) for Strong Violence and Scenes of Blood
Chapters: Season 1: 37 Seaon 2: ? Season 3: ? Season 4: ? Season 5: ? Season 6: ?
Mario, Sonic, Inuyasha, Jimmy Neutron, Naruto, and Mickey Mouse has been called to take part in "The Ultimate Tournament." In this tournament, these 6 captains have a choice to pick 9 people to join them. There will be 4 others too, so don't miss it on fanfiction.net!
Release Date: IF I GET MY LAPTOP BEFORE THE END OF THE SCHOO YEAR: June 15 IF I GET MY LAPTOP AT THE BEGINNING OF THE NEXT SCHOOL YEAR: September 2007.
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[jimmysaver13]

Well said, bro. Well, I finally have some time to myself. (I have to go to the 8th Graders Basketball tournament.) So I decided, why not update on "The RPG Tournament?" In this chapter, Oliender faces Baby Eddie. Also, I've cut out the music for the characters. They'll just come out and fight; it makes it more easier. Well, enjoy!

Chapter 12: Oliender vs. Baby Eddie

Jimmy was training in the Training Room. Cindy decided to look for him, since the next match was up soon. She finally found him by the weights.

"Well," Cindy began. "that was some match, huh?"

"Yeah." Jimmy said. "I didn't know Elke had that much power."

"So, what are you doing now?"

"Well, I think I learned a new attack."

Cindy was shocked by this. "Really?"

"Yeah. You see," Jimmy began. "I've been watching Naruto lately and I've come up with a theory. If Neji can hit an opponent's chakra points, why can't I hit someone's Magic Points?"

Cindy was awestruck and happy. If he learned this new attack, he could destroy Betty!

"If I could deplete all of my opponent's Magic, they won't be able to use any techniques. AND if they're Attack points are lower than my Defense points, I could win the match with ease."

"Wow," Cindy said. "you really are a genius."

"Attention spectators," The person over the intercom said. "the next match is about to begin. Fighters, please make your way to the battlefield."

"Well, it's time for Oliender's match." Jimmy said to Cindy as they walked down to the VIP section.

"Yeah," Cindy said. "I heard that he wants to fight Ike. That's why he's been in silent training."

"I'm waiting to see how strong Baby Eddie is. I may have to fight him."

AT THE BATTLEFIELD

"All right," CJ said. "It's time for our next match! And, this is the start of the 2nd half of the 1st round! In this match, we have Oliender, wishing to fight Ike in this tournament, will face Baby Eddie."

The 2 come out.

"I'm not losing to you!" Oliender said. "I have to fight Ike for my revenge!"

"Heh," Baby Eddie laughed. "the only way you'll ever fight Ike is if you make it to the Semi-Finals. Of course, that means beating me!"

"Ready? Fight!"

Round 1, Match 9: Oliender vs. Baby Eddie

Oliender: 78hp 97mp 57ATK 20DEF 0EXP
Baby Eddie: 63hp 32mp 17ATK 93DEF 0EXP

"Whoa!" Jimmy shouted.

"What's wrong, Jim?" Carl said.

"Baby Eddie's defense matches my mom's!"

"Well," Ike said. "your mom got beat, so maybe Baby Eddie will lose too. I want to fight Oliender just as much as he wants to fight me, but can he even hit Baby Eddie?"

Oliender goes first.

Oliender attacks. No Effect.

"What!?" Oliender screamed.

"Ha ha ha!" Baby Eddie laughed. "You didn't think I was this strong, huh? Well, never underestimate your opponent!"

Baby Eddie uses Rattle Smack. = 5mp, 3hp

Baby Eddie: 29mp

Oliender: 75hp

"Darn it," Oliender thought. "I have to find some way to beat him. I WILL fight Ike!"

Oliender uses Kick Repeat.= 20mp, No effect.

"WHAT!?" Oliender, even everyone else screamed. "HOW CAN THAT HAPPEN?! MY KICK REPEAT DIDN'T EVEN FAZE HIM!"

"Heh," Baby Eddie smiled. "get a taste of REAL power!"

Baby Eddie uses Rattle Gun.= 25mp, 22hp

Oliender: 53hp

Baby Eddie: 4mp

"ARGH!" Oliender said, coughing up blood. "That last hit...really...took it out of me...UGH!...if I don't stop him...COUGH...I'll never...reach my dream.

FLASHBACK

"Come on, Oliender!" Ike said, "Fight me like you mean it!"

"Okay!" Oliender said. "Here it goes: Kick Repeat!"

An arrary of kicks came at Ike.

"Repel!" Ike screamed.

The kicks flew back to Oliender, knocking him out cold, in front of the kids.

"Get stronger, Olie! That's the only way to beat me!"[I]

END FLASHBACK

"Don't worry...Ike..." Oliender struggled to get up. "I HAVE gotten stronger. AND I WILL BEAT YOU!"

Ike just smiled.

"That's my Olie."

"BUT FIRST, I HAVE TO DEAL WITH DIAPER BREATH OVER HERE!"

Suddenly, Oliender's attack power raised dramatically.

"Whoa!" Jimmy felt his power. "Oliender's getting stronger and stronger by the minute!"

"UNTIL I FIGHT IKE," Oliender screamed. "THIS POWER WILL BE UNLEASHED! I WON'T LOSE TO ANYONE ELSE! AAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!"

Oliender: 150ATK, 100mp

Everyone was shocked that Oliender's power had grew.

"What is this?!" Baby Eddie said.

"MY TRUE POWER!"

Oliender uses Spirit Ball. =100mp, 100hp

Oliender: 0mp

Baby Eddie: 0hp DEFEATED!

"And the winner is, Oliender!"

The crowd cheered as Oliender went back to his original state. He smiled at the loud cheer from the crowd. He won. He was one step closer to fighting Ike. Of course, Ike had to win too, but that didn't matter right now. Ike just looked at Oliender.

"Yep," Ike said. "That's my Olie."

END OF CHAPTER 12

Well, that's all for today! Oh, and you can go to bracketmaker.com and see the full bracket. Just click on "Find a Tournament." Click "Illinois", and then "Fighting." It's at the bottom. See ya!

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Round 2

1. Beautiful Gorgeous vs. April

2. Carl vs. Cindy

3. Betty vs. Jimmy

4. Sally vs. Elke

5. Oliender vs. Bolbi's Sister or Junkman

[Purple_Sparkle]

Wow it was a quite a long wait for this chapter...but worth it ^_^ :thumbsup:

[jimmysaver13]

Thanks! Next chapter will be up today, after I get home from my away basketball game.
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[Purple_Sparkle]

Yay! *.* :dance:

[jimmysaver13]

Wow. Sorry again for the long wait. I was done in Disney World and I went to the Super Bowl! :P Also, I've been very busy with other things and my school work. I'll try to update as soon as I can, which will probably be tomorrow. In the meantime, here's a sneak preview of the next 2 chapters:

Chapter 13: Bolbi's Sister vs. Junkman

- We find out what Bolbi's Sister's name is.

-We hear more of Eustace's master plan.

-Junkman fights Bolbi's Sister.

-Betty makes a move on Jimmy.

-Cindy and Libby accidentally sneak in on Ike taking steroids. :o :'(

Chapter 14: Ike vs. Zix

-Jimmy deactivates Ike's steroids.

-Evil Jimmy tries to finish off Sheen for good.

-Oliender talks to Ike before his match.

-Ike fights Zix.

-Eustace comes up with a plan to try to kill Jimmy.

Lots of drama in these 2 chapters. Stay tuned for more chapters!

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[NekoGirl]

-Betty makes a move on Jimmy.

Ooh, I can't wait for this one! lol ^_^

& Bolbi's sister vs Junkman, LOL, I've GOTTA read that chapter! :lol: :thumbsup:

[kidwii]

Don't worry NekoGirl, you won't be disappointed with this chapter. Well, it's time for Chapter 13! Alot of drama in this one, with the steroids and all. This chapter pits Bolbi's Sister against the Junkman! Who will win? What is Bolbi's Sister's name? Find out now!

Chapter 13: Bolbi's Sister vs. Junkman

"So, did you make the plan yet?" Evil Jimmy said to Eustace. They were out at the snack bar.

"Yes, and I think this is a good one. I actually have 2 plans, if the 1st one backfires." Eustace said.

"Which is?"

"The 2nd plan is so brilliant, I can't tell you right now. But my first plan is you fighting Sheen again."

"Again?! I'm still sore from Betty!"

"Tough. You have to jump Sheen and make sure...he doesn't get found."

"Hey, what about that "Ike" kid? Him and Oliender will be tough since they wanna fight each other."

"Oh don't worry. I have Goobot on that right now..."


"Good luck, sis!" Bolbi said to his sister.

"It will be a sinch!" Bolbi's Sister said. "For I am the great Ignishka!"

"Those are strong words. Well, good luck!"


'When did Oliender get so strong?' Ike thought to himself. 'He had to train with someone.' Then he looked up at Jimmy, talking to Cindy and Carl. 'Of course. How else would he be that strong? If I'm not careful, I may lose.'

Ike walked down the hall to see a person in a brown cloak.

"Um, who are you?" Ike asked.

"My name is of no importance." The person said in a dark voice. "I heard...you wanted to get stronger."

"What?! How did you hear that?!"

"Oh, everyone knows. Don't worry, I can help you."

"You can? With training?"

"FASTER THAN TRAINING!" The voice was very excited. "With these!"

The person gave him a needle and some pills.

"Are these..." Ike drifted.

"Yes," The person answered. "Steroids. Just inject it in to your bloodstream and take 2 pills and you'll feel stronger than Jimmy Neutron himself!"

'Stronger than Jimmy?' Ike haden't imagined that. 'I like this.'

"Okay, I'll take them. How much?"

"Oh, for you, only 50 cents."

"Really? Thanks, pal!"

Ike gave him the money and ran off. The person smiled and took off his hood to reveal...King Goobot.

"Oh yes, child." The evil king said. "They're 50 cents. But the look that will be on your face will be priceless. I can't wait to tell Eustace that he took the posion." The evil king laughed before he left.


"Okay, everyone! Time for the next match!" CJ said. "This one pits the Junkman against...um, how do I say this? Aw, yes, Ignishka! Both combatants, please come to the arena!"

They both come out.

"I'll squash you like a 3-eyed bug!" Junkman gloated.

"Don't be sure of that!" Ignishka said.

"Ready? Fight!"

The bell rung, and the match began.

Round 1, Match 10: Ignishka vs. Junkman

Ignishka: 18hp 42mp 55ATK 34DEF
Junkman: 44hp 11mp 20ATK 25DEF

Ignishka goes first.

Ignishka attacks. 30hp

Junkman: 14hp

"Wow," Jimmy said. "That took a lot out of him."

"Yeah, Ignish...Iguna....Ig...THAT GIRL will win for sure." Sheen said. Libby smacked him in the back of his head.

"Don't be rude!" Libby said.

"I'm not! You can't say her name either! NOONE CAN!"

"Except Bolbi." Carl interrupted.

"SHUT UP, CARL!" Sheen screamed.

"Well, looks like I'm going to have to bring out the big guns! GUN EFFECT!

Junkman uses Gun Effect(Junkman now has 4 guns at his disposal. All damage towards him has a 50% reduction.)

Ignishka defends.

Ignishka: 35DEF

Junkma shoots all guns. 5hp

Ignishka: 13hp

"Ugh!" Ignishka said. "Those guns really hurt!"

"SIS!" Bolbi screamed.

"You made a silly mistake coming to this fight. Now, you will die here!"

'Darn it, I have to find someway to beat this freak of the week. But how? With those guns, my attacks won't have that much effect. Gotta use some magic.'

Ignishka uses Slap Dance, but she takes damage as well.=5mp, 17hp.

Ignishka: 8hp, 37mp

Junkman: 0hp DEFEATED!

"And the winner is Ignishka!" CJ said.

The crowd cherred, but Bolbi saw what was wrong. There was no way she could've taken that much damage from a simple attack like that. In fact, she's not supposed to take any damage. That puts her in a bad situation for her next match. Jimmy saw this too. It reminded him of an episode of Naruto, when Hinata's organs were struck by Neji. He wondered...

"Hey Jimmy." Betty said.

Jimmy instantly got out of his trance. "Oh, hey Betty." He wondered if Cindy was watching. Fortunately, she was talking with Libby.

"Um, well, I came here to ask you if you wanted to go to the snack bar."

"Oh, yeah, that sounds great. Let's go."

Jimmy and Betty walk off to the snack bar. Unfortunately, Cindy saw the whole thing.


"I HATE THIS!!!" Cindy screamed to Libby as they were walking down the hall.

"Girl! If you keep screaming in my ear, I go deaf!"

"Sorry, it's just that...why does she always have to ruin things? Me and Jimmy were finally getting close."

"Well don't worry Cin. I'm sure- *squirt* What the heck was that?"

"I don't know. I think it came from that locker room. Let's go."

The 2 girls run to the locker room door to hear more squirting. They open the door to see Ike putting the needle into his skin...

Well, that's Chapter 13! OOOO, suspense! Will Ike die? Well, if you read the spoilers, then you know the answer. Next chapter is Ike's fight! See ya!

Round 2:

1. Beautiful Gorgeous vs. April

2. Carl vs. Cindy

3. Betty vs. Jimmy

4. Sally vs. Elke

5. Oliender vs. Ignishka

NOTE: I will be putting things from Naruto in the story from now on. It's now my favorite show, and I think it'll go well with the story.

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