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[cherii]

Oh yeah, whoops! I have a bad memory! :wacko:

[jimmysaver13]

Ah, don't worry. The next chapter is tomorrow! Oh, kidwii is my brother, if you didn't already know.
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[cherii]

Off topic: Only guessing, but I think that he's your younger brother. Just a guess, because not many older bros are like that, even if it is on a forum. XD

On Topic: Yay! A new chapter is under-way! I can't wait for the next chapter. :D

[jimmysaver13]

Off Topic: Yeah, he's my younger bro.

On Topic: I have to go outside, but when I come back, I'll post the next chapter. Oh, and Lyrical March is being updated too, after this.
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[jimmysaver13]

Sorry for the LONG update. I had 2 basketball games (8th Grade: 8-0, 7th Grade: 5-3) and busy with other stuff, plus I'm getting ready for the Avatar Season Finale so I'll post a new chapter after Lyrical March.
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[Purple_Sparkle]

I'm getting ready for the Avatar Season Finale

Ditto :thumbsup:

so I'll post a new chapter after Lyrical March

Ooh looking foward to it *.*

[jimmysaver13]

Okay, here's Chapter 10! The 7th Grade team has a game tomorrow, so I don't know if I'll update tomorrow. As for Lyrical March, I'll update Friday or Saturday. This chapter pits Eustace and Sally in the ring. Remember, Eustace has planned something. What could it be? Find out!
Note: The crowd and announcer settings are now similar to WWE SmackDown! I've gotten into wrestling, so don't be surprised.

CHAPTER 10: EUSTACE V. SALLY

Jimmy and Cindy were at a table, drinking sodas. Cindy was smiling inside. She finally had Jimmy all to herself. For the time being.

"So," Cindy started. "how do you feel going up against Betty?" Cindy wanted him to crush Betty like a bug.

"I don't know," Jimmy shrugged. "we're both pretty excited."

Cindy's face stood still in shock. Then she put on a fake smile.

"Oh," Cindy said, disappointed. "well, I hope you don't mind me fighting Carl."

"Oh, its no big deal." Jimmy said. "Carl can handle himself. He won his first match. I'm sure he'll do great against you." Then Jimmy stopped. "Uh, I mean, I'm not hoping you lose or anything, it's just that-"

Cindy laughed and looked at him, trying to look her cutest. "Don't worry, Jimmy. I know what you mean."

They both looked at each other for a minute. Both of them thinking the same thing.

'Should I, no, it's too risky. She'll never do it.' Jimmy thought.

'Is he scared to? I don't want to make him nervous.' Cindy thought.

Slowly, though, they start to get closer, and closer, and-

"CINDY!" Libby interrupted. "it's time for the next match! Grab your boyfriend and let's go!"

"LIBBY!" Cindy shouted back at her, blushing. Jimmy was blushing too.

"Uh, she's right." Jimmy said. "It is time for the next match. Come on, Cindy."

Jimmy and Cindy both left, not satisfied by the interruption.


"Okay, everyone!" CJ said. "It's now time for the next match. Now, we're going to start having music to present the fighters, so you might here your favorite song."

Single Match: Eustace v. Sally

Eustace's music starts. (Think of Kane's music from WWE. If you don't know it, go to wwe.com and look under 'Kane.')

"The following is scheduled for one fall. Making his way to the ring, Eustace."

The crowd booed, but he just smiled. If his plan was to go into effect, he had to dispose of Sally first. It didn't matter if he won or not. He just didn't want to leave any loose ends. :unsure: :o

Sally's music starts. (Country music.)

"And his opponent, Sally."

Stats

Eustace: 75hp 19mp 18ATK 25DEF 0EXP
Sally: 46hp 54mp 41ATK 12DEF 0EXP

Eustace goes first.

Eustace attacks. =6hp lost.

Sally: 40hp

Sally uses Rope Toss. = 5mp lost. 21hp lost.

Sally: 49mp

Eustace: 54hp

Eustace uses Royal Bomb. =15mp lost. 23hp lost.

Eustace: 4mp

Sally: 17hp

"Darn it," Sally said, panting, sweating, and coughing up blood. "everytime I attack him, he attacks ten-fold."

"It's useless," Eustace said. "just give up, and I won't hurt you anymore."

"Never!" Sally said, and continued fighting.

Sally uses Call Bull. =10 mp lost. 26hp lost.

Sally: 39mp

Eustace: 28hp

Eustace uses Drop Kick. =2mp lost. 8hp lost.

Eustace: 2mp

Sally: 9hp

Sally attacks. =16hp lost.

Eustace: 12hp

"Hmm." Eustace said. "You're tougher than I thought. No matter. I'll kill you now."

Eustace uses Drop Kick. =2mp lost. 8hp lost.

Eustace: 0mp

Sally: 1hp CRITICAL!

"What!?" Eustace said, shocked. :o "You can't be alive!"

"Well," Sally said, weakly and coughing up blood. "here I am. Now it's time for you to go."

Sally uses Rope Toss. =5mp lost. 21hp lost.

Sally: 34mp

Eustace: 0hp DEFEATED!

"Here's your winner, Sally!"

The crowd cheered and Sally celebrated. Eustace just laughed.

"What's so funny?" Sally said.

"You fool!" Eustace said. "It didn't matter if I won or lost. In fact, my plan has just gotten easier! But for now, watch your back. Danger hides in remote places."

And with that, Eustace walked away, leaving everyone confused, shocked, and terrified.

End Chapter 10

Duh, Duh, Duh! :o Suspence! What's Eustace's plan? What will happen to Sally? Find out in the next chapter!

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Round 2

1. Beautiful Gorgeous v. April
2. Carl v. Cindy
3. Jimmy v. Betty
4. Sally v. ?

[Purple_Sparkle]

Duh, Duh, Duh! :o   Suspence! What's Eustace's plan? What will happen to Sally? Find out in the next chapter!

Oooo :unsure:
That was great :thumbsup: I can hardly wait for the match between Beautiful Gorgeous and April :D

[cherii]

Wow...that was an interesting fight. Another almost JxC kiss. x.x Oh well, can't wait for the fight between Beautiful Gorgeous and April! :P Wonder who'll win.

[Star]

OMG! I am so excited for the next chapter! GOOO APRIL!

[~~Megan~~]

I'm sorry, I haven't been reading... This is awesome so far!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Very good job and keep writing!!!

[jimmysaver13]

Thanks to everybody who reviewed this chapter. Eustace will have something planned for Sally, so read closely. As for the BG v. A match, it seems all of you like April's chances of winning. While I really admire it, take some time to look at BG's stats. Also, when they win a match, they get stronger, so don't count BG out.
Remember, as Eustace said:
"Danger hides in remote places." :o
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[jimmysaver13]

Next Match:
JUDY v. ELKE

What to Expect: (SPOILERS!)
Jimmy trying to find out Eustace's plan.
Sheen's love for Sally.
Libby's jealousy.
Sally using Sheen as a bodyguard.
Carl's relationship with Elke.
Hugh's pie disease.
Cindy's confrontation to April about Jimmy.
Eustace's 1st stage of his plan slighty fails. :blink:

That's what to expect in the next chapter!
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[cancel_me]

Ergh. WHY MUST YOU KEEP ME IN SUSPENSE?! :wacko:

[Star]

WHY MUST THE GOOD BE IMPAITENT WHILST WAITING FOR CHAPTERS?!

[Purple_Sparkle]

*waits patiently for the next chapter*
10 seconds later :'( :grr:

[cherii]

Wow! Is that all in the next chapter? Now I really can't wait! :P

[jimmysaver13]

Okay, it seems like you all are too frantic, so here's the next chapter! This chapter pits Judy and Elke in the ring. Also. some neat stuff (check out the NEXT MATCH post.) and some romance. I'm also going to make this a 2-part chapter. Okay, let's start!

CHAPTER 11A: Conflicts

Jimmy sneaked behind the wall to the villians' VIP section. Earlier, Jimmy told Carl and Sheen that he was going to find out what Eustace's plan was. Jimmy spotted a notebook that had "EUSTACE" on it.

'It must be the plan,' Jimmy said to himself, and he opened the notebook.


"Girl, stop pacing." Libby said, as Cindy was frantically pacing across the floor.

"I can't Libby!" Cindy said. "Jimmy's out trying to find Eustace, plus, I think he might be in love with April, too."

"...Duh!" Sheen said. Libby smacked him across the head.

"Calm down, Cindy," Carl said. "I'm sure Jimmy will be back."

"Yeah, in the meantime, though, if you're so sure that Jimmy and April might take it to the next level, then just confront April."

"Oooo!" Sheen raised his hand. "Can I video tape it?"

"And can I take notes like last time?" Carl said, also standing up.

"...No." Cindy said and she went to find April.

"Aw, man!" Sheen said. "Bummer!"

"Sheen." Sheen turned around to see Sally behind him. He smiled and ran to her. Libby wasn't liking this.

"Yes, cowgirl?" Sheen said, romantically. Libby was chewing her hair.

"Uh, Libby," Carl said, scared. "don't get mad, now."

"THOSE ARE MY NICKNAMES! THEY'RE FOR ME ONLY!" Libby said, angrily.

"Well," Sally began. "since Eustace is out to get me, can you like, be my bodyguard for a little while?"

Libby gasped in shock.

"WHAT!?" She said almost in Carl's ear. "SHEEN'S MY MAN! HOW DARE SHE ASK HIM TO BE HER BODYGUARD! HE'LL SAY NO! SHE'S JUST A SCARED LITTLE-"

"Libby!" Carl screamed. "You're in my ear!"

"Oh, sorry."

"OF COURSE, SALLY!!" Sheen said, screaming to her. "I'll do whatever it takes to keep you safe! When Eustace sees my moves, he'll back off for sure!"

"Thanks," Sally said, happily. "now, come on, let's get a soda."

"Sure thing, Sal-Gal!" Sheen said and they both left, with Libby karate chopping everything in sight. Even Carl.


"So, you sure this'll work?" Evil Jimmy said.

"Don't worry, old friend," Eustace said. "Sally should be coming down this hallway any second."

"What about the plan book?"

"Oh, I'm sure Neutron's already read the fake one I put out. Everything's okay."

"I hope so."


Cindy walked up to April.

'Well,' Cindy thought. 'this is it. The moment of truth.'

"Hey, April?" Cindy called.

"Oh, hey Cindy." April said.

"Um, I have to ask you something."

"Okay, shoot."

"Okay, um, are you still in love with Jimmy?"

"Oh, no. We're just good friends now. I'm with Bolbi."

Cindy's heart leaped and a big smile came up on her face.

"Oh, uh, okay, that's all I wanted."

Cindy ran back to Libby, running and prancing around like a pixie horse.


"So, this his plan." Jimmy said, finishing the book. "Not much of a plan. Unless," Jimmy figured something out. "No, this isn't the plan book. This is a fake. Which means Sally's in danger!" Jimmy quickly ran down the hallway. Only to be met up with Cindy, Libby, a bruised Carl, and some destroyed tables.


"Honey, are you sure you're going to be okay?" Hugh said.

"Yes, dear," Judy said for the 10th time. "Don't worry. I'll be fine. Oh, and don't eat any pie. Remember, you have Pieatocious, so you can't eat any pie." Judy then leaves.

"Shoot!" Hugh said, defeated.


"So, what do you want to drink?" Sheen said as Sheen and Sally walked down the hallway.

"I don't know," Sally said. "I'll have to see what they have."

Little did they know, Eustace and Evil Jimmy were waiting for them on the ceiling.

"What?" Evil Jimmy said in shock.

"What is it?" Eustace said.

"Sheen's with Sally."

"WHAT!? That little... she knew I would try to attack her, so she made Sheen her bodyguard."

"Smart girl."

"Okay, well, I'll just get rid of Sheen first. He's on my list, too."

"Okay, I'll watch out for anybody."

Sheen was behind Sally, when Eustace jumped off the ceiling, covered Sheen's mouth, and started beating him. 2 minutes later, Eustace let go, and jumped back to the ceiling.

"Sheen?" Sally said, walking to Sheen. "You were laging behind so I- AHHHHH!!!!"

Sally stared in horror, as she saw Sheen, bloody from head to toe, it looked like his arm was broken, and his legs were twitching.

"Oh my god!" Sally said. "Sheen! I have to find Jimmy!" And with that, she picked Sheen up, and ran to Jimmy.

"I think phase one went well." Evil Jimmy said, smiling.

"Yes," Eustace said, also smiling. "even though Sally is still alive, I got Sheen out the way." Eustace and Evil Jimmy then laughed and went back to their VIP section.


"And then, she asked him to be her bodyguard!" Libby explained to Jimmy and Cindy.

"Wow," Jimmy said. "you sure love Sheen."

"Heck yeah! And if I see her, I'll strangle her!"

"I bet you would." Cindy said, turning to Carl. "You nearly killed Carl."

"My scapula!" Carl screamed.

"JIIMMYY!" Sally screamed as she ran to her.

"Sally?" Jimmy turned around to see Sally, but she was holding a redish thing over her back.

"YOU!" Libby said angrily.

"This is no time for fighting Libby!" Sally said. She seemed to be..crying.

"Sally?" Jimmy asked, going over to her, giving he a hug. "Sally, what's wrong?" Cindy was extremly jealous.

"It's Sheen." She said weakly. Sally layed Sheen down, and everybody looked in shock and horror.

"SHEEN!!!!" Libby screamed as she bent down. "WHAT HAPPEN? YOU DID THIS!"

"No, I didn't!" Sally screamed back. "I guess Eustace must have attacked him fron behind."

There lied Sheen, unconsious, almost dead. Everyone cried. But Jimmy...all he could do was screamed in complete anger and sadness:

"EUSTACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

End of Ch. 11

:'( So sad. Is Sheen dead? What will Jimmy do to Eustace? Will Elke win her match? Find out next chapter. I actually had to go through several versions before I finally settled with this one. See ya next chapter!

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Round 2:

1. Beautiful Gorgeous v. April

2. Carl v. Cindy

3. Jimmy v. Betty

4. Sally v. Judy or Elke

[Estrella]

ZOMG!!!!!!!!!!!! :wacko: Sheen/Sally....IT BURNS!!!!!!! :onfire: :onfire: :onfire: :onfire:

[Star]

NO SHEEN'S NOT ALLOWED TO DIE.