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[J/C AVA]

@Laura: :lol: Hey, I like the Fairly Oddparents!! But each one's unto his own.

Ok, I'll save you with an update like I promised.

Here we go... again.

*Back on Earth within the lair, a few moon monsters repair the huge hole in the wall that Libby, Sheen, Carl and Goddard put. On the other side of the large room was the Dimension Portal strapped on wires from the celling. In a darkend booth overseeing the room, the leader, shrowded in a black robe with a hood silhouetteing his upper face and his nose and mouth exposed, is in deep contemplation, as in sensing something else. Next to him is his High Captian*

H.C.: The prisoners also escaped through that portal around an hour or so ago. And around that time our sensors picked up three other humans and a robotic kaynine. We could have followed them but our sensors couldn't pick up thier trall and...

*He noticed the empty rage in his master's face*

Moon Leader: *In a menicing voice similar to Darth Vader except gives you the chills* You know Captain, you are lucky that I am in a good mood.

H.C.: Well I greatly apologize but...

*He then starts to suffocate and is slightly lifted aground*

M.L.: Otherwise, your body would be floating into the skin-melting heat of the sun and your blood-grueling
screams would be deaf to your decapitated ears!!

*Finally he gets go his grip and the captain falls struggling heavly to cacth his breath*

M.L.: And do you know why I am in a good mood despite your stupidity? I have sensed... a another.

*He walks, with a cane as he limps, to his black throne and sits. He moitioned his arm and a screen came upon the window. And who else would appear on his screen? None other than Cindy*

M.L.: Yes. This one, Cynthia Aurora Vortex, has a power deep within her heart. I can feel it: Her heart bursts with dark, delicious emotions. Anger, fear, hostility and rage. I have not sensed a power like her's in a long time.

*He grins showing his rotten teeth decayed*

M.L.: Yes. With her in our side, her power will assist our cause greatly and no mere FOOL would dare to challenge us. She shall be more than an invincible warrior, she shall be... my apprentice.

*Suddenly his face gazes as in dreaming in thought*

M.L.: Yes. I sense her presense. She's on the Planet Gorlock. And... her friends are on Planet Nelfar.

H.C.: *cough* Sir, she's only one child. She could be anywhere in the universe. We could be serching endlessly for days and not find...

M.L.: She IS on Planet Gorlock Captain!!!

*He instantly rises from his throne*

M.L.: Captain, prepare your finest men and attack Planet Gorlock. Bring me the girl ALIVE!! Then initiate an attack on Planet Nelfar and destory ANYONE who dares get in your way and kill her friends.

H.C.: And what about Noemi sir.

M.L.: She has outlasted her usefulness.... extetminate her!

*He omitts an evil laugher that would even make a tough solider tremble and it echoes far into the distance of the darkness of despair......*

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Well, there you go. Part of the Moon Monster's sinnister leader is reveled but now I wonder: What shall we name him?

It's werid but this chapter oddly reminds me of Star Wars.

Anyway, feedback is welcomed and I believe Noemi goes next.

Thank you all very much. ^_^

[Fire Pearl]

Thans for the rescue ^_^ Sorry didn't mean to bash a cartoon you both like *sorry*

Oooo I liked it very very much...the suspense :unsure: .... :dance:

Nice done!!! Poor Cindy...poor everyone....


Ooo can't wait to see it continued :dance: :kawaii:

[J/C AVA]

Your welcome. And apology excepted. ^_^

Still, what can we call him? Obviously Darth Vader has been taken since Star Wars A New Hope.

[Fire Pearl]

:lol: Uh....I wouldn't have called him Darth Vader anyways... :lol:

I don't know....I'm not good at coming up with male names... :rolleyes:

[J/C AVA]

How about we brainstorm this along with Noemi. :D

[J/C AVA]

Just keeping this fic afloat, who's turn is it now to post?

[Fire Pearl]

Actually it's Noemi's....


Hmmmm.....let's give her some more time and if she doesn't post, I will, okay? ^_^

[N!no]

Actually it's Noemi's....


Hmmmm.....let's give her some more time and if she doesn't post, I will, okay? ^_^

you can go on im stuck with statistics right now and i think ill hv to go to the clinic and then classes if i can

sorry :'(

[Fire Pearl]

Hey, I understand it. o:) We just don't wanna let MB die down ^_^


Let's say, if you don't post in the next two days or something like that, I will and then you've got time to post the most epic part we've ever seen :rock:


:wub: Alrighty, Noemi???

[J/C AVA]

That sounds like a good idea Laura.

If one of us doesn't post anything for any reason for the next 2 days after he/she made his/her last post, then the other will take over.

Although I think that this might be a little bit confusing also. Or at least it has the potential to be.

[Fire Pearl]

Okay...this is gonna be short -_- And I'm sure you guys will have to take over my turn soon^^ I'm running outta time.... -_-
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Libby*suspicious expression* So you're tellin us, that all this stuff really did happen?

Sheen: You're kidding us right? AHA Jimmy is a liar!!! *points accusingly at him* Face Ultralord's wrath!!!

Carl: Sheen stop it, you're scary!

Libby: Oh boys...how do I always get in such a mess? <_<

Sheen: Surrender, surrender!!!

Laura: :kawaii: Would ya look at this??? Carl, Sheen and Libby being completely insane!!!! LIVE!!!MY DREAM CAME TRUE!!!

Jimmy: Uh huh....*slaps forehead*

Pedro: You really should believe us...I mean look at this....

Laura: Do I get an autograph??? Pretty please???

Jimmy: Didn't you say you were gonna stop the whole fan thingy???

Laura: DUH!!! I didn't know Sheen and Libby were gonna come!!!

Carl*coughs*

Laura: Uh...and Carl *fakes smile*

Jimmy: Argh! This doesn't matter right now! Now that you are here as well guys...perhaps we can find a way outta here!

Pedro: But how?

Jimmy: Well....

Sheen: Hey guys, I don't wanna interrupt you, but I think that chick here needs help....

*He points behind him at Noemi's lifeless body. Jimmy, Pedro and Laura bend forward in order to take a look at the person*

Laura *high shriek* NOEMI!!!

*She runs the few meters and kneels down next to her friend*

Pedro: What...but how?

Jimmy*shakes slowly the head* How is that possible...?

*both stare in awe at each other*

Libby* raises one eyebrow* Don't tell me, you know her as well!

Jimmy: Actually we do.

Sheen: May...you're picking up a lot of weirdos on one day, dude!

Laura*hysterically*: Could ya stop the chit chat, and damn help Noemi???!!!

*The others look at each other and quickly nod*

Jimmy: Oops...yeah right.

*He sits down on Noemi's other side and begins to observe her. The others stand aside and watch...a bit confused about everything that happened*

Grandma Taters: Well dear...

Sheen*whispers to Carl* Seriously who is that?

Carl*shruggs*

Grandma taters: ...what is wrong with the poor girl?

Jimmy: Hmmm.....*he continues wordlessly*

Laura: C'mon!!! I mean...why...how...what...How did she come here? Is she alright? And...and...

Libby: Whoa calm down you guys! We just found her!

Sheen: Yeah...and she didn't look happy...

Carl: Sheen she is unconscious!

Sheen: That's what I'm saying! Would you be happy, while being knocked out?

*Libby just rolls her eyes. Pedro, Laura and Granny Taters ignore the two and keep on waiting*

*Silence*

*Suddenly Carl opens his mouth and asks, a bit confused:*

Carl: Uhm....there is one thing, I don't quite understand though. Jimmy...why are you so eager on finding Cindy, so that she's safe? You're enemies after all....

*Pedro, Grandma Taters and Laura look uncertain at each other, while Jimmy freezes in his movements*




*Back at the lair. The Moonmonsters walks through the floors and mumbles angrily*

Moonmonster: Do this, do that....kidnap her, examinate her...could the high persons do something on their own?

GM: Quit the complaining, it's getting on my nerves!

MM: *scoffs* So?

GM*rolls her eyes* Let's just execute her and get it over with!

*They finally reach the spot, where they had been said Noemi should be....but find it empty*

MM: Okay...I'm seriously fed up with this job by now! *both growl frustrated*




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I don't have much time, so I tried not to write about something majorly important in the storyline...as to not spoil it ^_^ So bear with me^^ anyways, that's my contribution ^_^ I know it's crappy, but what the heck...

[N!no]

IM SO VERY SORRY FOR NOT WRITING MORE AND CONTRIBUTE TO THIS STORY! SO I FELT SO GUILTY AND DECIDED TO WRITE SOME MORE QUICK! FEED BACK IS ALWAYS WELCOME U GUYS!!

TAKE CARE AND NOW BACK TO THE STORY

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back to the cell where everybody is captured...

Jimmy: Guys let's get into important manners. What's wrong with this girl?

Sheen: I would like to tell you...

Carl: But we don't remember what Goddard said.

Sheen: As usual. Same happens when you speak...

Libby: U're hopeless.

Jimmy: Libby do you remember perhaps something my dog told you?

Libby: Yah, he said that the situation was critical and that when we found her she must had experienced a crazy tachy-tachyc-

Jimmy: Tachycardia u mean.

Libby: Yah that... the reason why she was unconcious. Oh...

Jimmy: What?

Libby: Her brain was also insanely affected by a drug...

Jimmy: **gasped**

Laura: Oh my god! **sniffing** that cannot be true

Tatters: Oh sweety please don't start crying. U'll make me cry too.

Libby: Well, the good thing is that Goddard left her heartbeat estabilized and .... I don't know if I must say it...but she's probably lucky to be alive now.

Sheen: My Libbylicious, you are so smart!

Libby: **blushing** SHEEN..how many times I've told you not to call me like that??

Sheen: I don't know, but i can ask Goddard

Carl: Sheen Goddard is not here with us remember?

Sheen: Oh...right...no Libby I can't tell

Libby ***mutters** I'll go soon insane. **gazes Laura worried**

Laura: **with tears in her eyes ranting** I should had taken her when we had the chance. I shouldn't have left her alone. She always cared about me and got me off a problem and I didn't do it for her.

Pedro: **patting her shoulder** We did what she asked for. She was fighthing pretty much in there to not harm us and knew it would be dangerous for you and me if she followed us.

Tatters: He's right. It was too dangerous. It was better in that way...I think. She didn't want you to get hurt.

Carl: :'( This is just so sad. I need a tissue.

Laura: **still with tears in her face** Here, have some. Noemi got this for us the other day...

Libby: Guys I don't want to be rude..but what's with that...that black suit she's wearing.

Sheen: Well guys it looks like a battling armor to me and besides look at that belt... who knows what those people have been planning to do with her

Everyone: **jaw dropped**

Tatters: **mutters** And then I wonder why he's always doing stuff that suggest he doesn't use his head

Sheen: What?

Jimmy: Sorry Sheen but u just said something coherently.

Libby: He means that you told something with sanity.

Sheen. Why do I have the feeling you are mocking of me...

Laura: **half smiling** Thanks Sheen. You're right. Your theory is quite stunning..

Sheen: Ok..

Pedro: So what are we doing now? Does she has any hope Jimmy?

Carl: Guys...

Jimmy: Not now Carl. I'll find it out Pedro. Goddard have you done a scan to see how she is?

Sheen. libby I have the feeling we're forgetting something now that I see that girl again...

Jimmy: Did Goddard do any full scan to her? Did he find anything else?

Carl: Just that she was cold and looked so lifeless..

Laura: **eyes popped and whimpers**

Libby: U'RE NOT HELPING

cARL: Oh...Sorry **smiles sheepishly***

Jimmy: Ahem

Libby: Oh..yah...Jimmy Goddard found that

Sheen: She has some weird thingy in her left hand

Libby: Yah some really really little device.

Jimmy: It must be a nano device..Why didn't he take it off?

Libby: Well coz of the suit...We don't know how to remove it...

Sheen: Actually I understood that the suit is like another layer besides the skin. It is almost a sure thing that they can be controlling with it so they can't take a chance on getting her back to normal

Everyone: **eyes popped***

Laura n Pedro: WHAT?

Laura: This has really been your day.

Jimmy: **clears throat** Sheen you're beginning to scare me
Tatters: Oh dear!

Jimmy: So they're making themselves sure to not get that out of her hand. WE MUST TAKE THAT OUT OF HER. That has to be the reason why she is under their orders.

Carl: Guys...

Jimmy: I've gotta think what to do now.

Carl: Guys...

Tatters: If we could just have a hint of what this is all about

Carl: GUYS!!

Jimmy: **jumps and stares**

Carl: Jimmy you weren't listening. Before Goddard was taken from us. He put your hypercube in my pocket. He thought it might become handy.

Jimmy: WHY DIDN'T YOU SAY THAT BEFORE!?

Carl: You didn't ask and I kinda forgot

Everyone: **roll eyes**

Sheen: Great, but then I'm the one who's dumb...

Jimmy: **beggins looking inventions in the hypercube turns around and looks at the rest seriously*** I'm using my latest invention.

On the room everyone stars puzzled at Jimmy...He just talked about a new invention and no one could imagine how would that help.

Pedro: What is this invention Jimmy?

Libby: Yah Jimmy, what do you have in mind?

Tatters: Do tell. What are you trying now Neutron?

Laura: A new invention? Since when you have tried it?

Jimmy: I haven't.

Carl: **gasped**

Libby: Jimmy if you haven' tried it yet you know it can be too unsafe and the girl would be...

Jimmy: dead.. yes I know, but we need to take the risk so she can get rid of this suit. Otherwise the others will kill her anyway.

Laura: It isn't going to hurt her right? **eyes glistening**

Jimmy: A bit. It's a little shock that my Reliving Genius 2000 will give her to wake her up.

Laura: **stares at noemi** Ok.... **eyes shut** then try it.

Tatters: **pats her shoulder** Don't worry little one, she's gonna be just fine.

Pedro:**worried** Are you sure about this? She won't attack us after this right?

Laura: **serious voice** I won't allow that.

Pedro: You know it can be dangerous and... ok just do it. We take the risk

Tatter: it is better than not trying.

Laura: **smiles** So what are you waiting Jimmy?

Libby: For goodness sake..this is going to be good..

Carl: I'm scared

Sheen: Girly and...

Libby: I heard u Sheen!

Sheen: **sheepishly** Sorry my queen...

Jimmy: **takes out a silver remote from Goddard** Initialize reliving genius....now. **pushes green button**

Carl: i don't want to see this...I'm getting dizzy

SHeen: Then don't!

Tatters. Oh boy..

Libby: Guys stop it!

A short shock reaches Noemi's body, but she didn't move. Her eyes remained shut and breathing lightly. Jimmy kept looking to see if there was any response after he tried his new gadget but suddenly a joyless expression was in his face.

Jimmy:**ranting** Stupid thing, it doesn't work!

Laura. Jimmy you tried.

Tatters: Yes she's right.

pedro: Yah dude, u're doing the best you can.

Libby: I'm surprised that they're telling you the right thing

Laura n Pedro: :blink:

Libby: What do you want me to think after I know u're fans?

Sheen: Well...... **gleefully** I don't mind having fans at all

Libby: **watches Sheen upset**

Sheen. Of course Libs is my fav chick **winks at Libby**

Carl: Guys

Sheen: Now what Carlito? why do you always have to interrupt?

Carl: but Guys...

Pedro: Oh please don't start this again...

Jimmy kept looking at the silver remote and sighed. Laura got near him.

Laura: Jimmy it's ok. You'll figure another way I'm sure.

Jimmy: Why do you think I always get everything to be done?

Laura: Coz you always do and that's what Noemi and Pedro and your friends think too you know? Even Cindy does...

Tatters: Even i think that now...

Jimmy: **watches Tatters with wide eyes and then watches Laura**
Cindy?...**sighs in defeat** She always tries the opposite Laura..

Carl: GUYS

Everyone stares in disbelieve at Carl...Laura and Jimmy looked at him quizically and Pedro cocked his head as he prevented Libby from slapping Sheen and Tatters tried to cover up Sheen.

Carl: i'm sorry but you weren't listening!!!

Tatters: I better not ask.. <_<

Pedro: What is it Carl?

Jimmy: Yah Carl now what's the matter?

Libby: coz u know I was a little busy in here!!! **makes a fist attempting to punch Sheen** :catfight:

Pedro: :wacko: Please Libby have mercy...

Sheen: uhmm..Carl ....why do you...WANT OUR ATTENTION NOW??!!

Laura: **worried** Carl are you ok?

As soon as Laura stopped a light noise was heard from the back of the cell.

Carl: Thank goodness....

Jimmy: **puzzled** Now what? What is it that you wanna tell us Carl?

Carl: The girl is awaken..

Jimmy: Yah yah yah now to get back on the subject i think we should-
WHAT?!

Carl: The girl is awaken. That's what I tried to say and you didn't listen.

Everyone was with mouth agaped and soon Laura got away from the shock.
Laura: **with tears sprints out to Noemi who was sitting on the floor with her hand on her chest** Noemi you're ok!!!

Sheen: Hey Jimmy your thingy did work after all!

Noemi: **looks at her in disbelieve and has another scan around to see the rest of the kids, Tatters and Pedro trapped in a cell. Her eyes still gloomy and her face very pale**
WHAT in the world do you think you're doing?!

Laura: **shocked** But... but....

Noemi: I warned you to stay away from me.**gazes to the wall**

Laura: But Noemi.. Sheen and Carl brought you here and Goddard helped you till the others separated him from all of you.

Noemi: **with indignance**They should have left me when they found me.

Jimmy: **surprised** Woah..what a mood to be awaken. Look we're here to help you.

Noemi: **sarcastically** In a prison cell? Do you have any idea of the mess you have gotten into? ***stands up with her hand still on her chest to face the bars***

Laura: **bewildered** How are you talking with us and not attacking?

Pedro: **stunned** yes I'm impress...

Noemi: **watches back with the corner of her eye and looks at the bars again**I'm fighting that and he's not controlling me right now. I don't think he knows I'm here now. **cocks her head looking at the floor**

Jimmy: **with a dark look on his face** Who are you talking about?
is this the same one that has Cindy now?

Noemi: **emotionless** That doesn't matter.

Laura: **worried** Why are you acting like this? i can't recognize you Noemi. You have to trust us so we can help

Noemi: **dryly** You can't.

Laura: But now you're safe and here Jimmy will figure out a way so you...

Noemi: **cuts her talk** stop it. **breaths heavily** You were insane to bring me in here.

Libby: Sorry sista but we saw u in Jimmy's lab and u had to be one to help to find 'em and we just couldn't let u in there to die all alone.

Tatters: She's right honey you can't just say there's nothing to do.

Sheen: And you were sad already. I could see that on your face when we found you.

Carl: We were all scared.

Pedro: yah Noemi, you had us all worried. and besides you're like a super fan of Jimmy...

Jimmy: *half smiling* I though u also were like your friend wanting to be with us...so just chill out and...

Noemi: Neutron, you don't seem to understand.

Pedro n Laura: **mouth agaped**

Jimmy: **inquiring look** Did you just called me...
***gazes how noemi keeps her hand on her chest uneasily**
You're still in pain. Let me see how I can help u and get your heartbeat normal.

Noemi: Stand back.

Libby: What are u--?

Laura: Noemi?

Pedro:Girl please listen to us

Noemi: I said stand back.

Laura: **nods and looks at Jimmy** ok

noemi: **turns around again taking out a golden laser sword** Here goes nothing.. **crashes the bars and remains kneeling down with her right hand holding her weapon, she was breathing hard**

Jimmy: ***eyes wide opened stuttering** This can't be...

Tatters:**glasses fell** ..possible

Laura: **stutters** You broke t-the

Pedro:b-b-bars

Pedro: Careful, that is dangerous to do in your state!

Noemi:**gazes Pedro** I know it. **looking back at Jimmy**I guess you'll have to shock me some more times when the mind control strikes back. I can't stay lot of time with you as I am with a tracker device too.

Jimmy: There has to be a way for you to hide from the sys during a long time

sHEEN: How come she gets along with him and not us?

Jimmy: You don understand that they're after all of us for not good. They'll eliminate us without hesitation.

noemi: **looks at Jimmy blunty** What are you saying?

Jimmy: There's no point on separating from the groyp. You can protect us with those weapons after we get that device out of your left hand. Maybe we can find Goddard to help me.

nOEMI: **sighs and turns back** That's not possible. Even if your robo canine tries they will intoxicate me and him for trying, and that includes you too.

Jimmy: Look, I have lots of insruments in the hypercube including my computer. I hacked into the sys. There's an important flaw or this may be a trap...which somehow I have the feeling it is not, but it is a possibility.

Noemi: **swings back violently facing the mechanic canine**
What flaw? a trap??

Jimmy: Yes, just stay with us

Noemi: Let's leave this place to hide then **picks her hand to stuckit firmly on her chest**

Sheen: alrighty!!

Carl: Finally we're out of here!

Jimmy: Yes but we must do it before the others know we escaped.

Laura: Noemi? you're staying with us right? **puppy eyes**

Noemi: **facing her back** Don't look at me like that...

Laura: :kawaii:

Noemi: Darn.

Laura: **looks at noemi sadly** Does it hurt that much?

Noemi: Yes.

Libby: Sorry to interrupt but let's keep going outta here people.

Jimmy: Ok. let's make a plan...

Noemi: I have one already. **jimmy with wide eyes open** Jimmy get the map of this place quick and look for the halls big enough to be with the hovercar..Tell me about the security system in this place. Where are the cams located and the guards' positions

Jimmy: **takes out amini computer and puts in on his lap** I'm on it, but I have one question...Why the hovercar?

Noemi: Because they must have your vehicle still in here

Jimmy: Oh right....Noemi how do you have all this ideas?

Noemi: I learnt it from someone I'm talking to but I don't want to mention

Jimmy: **blushes a bit** Oh... I see

Noemi: For the moment I'll be in charge as I'll be in front of you if anyone tries to attack. If something happens to me you keep the others safe. Got it?

Jimmy: Yes...

Pedro: Laura...Don't you think this is a bit...

Laura. weird? yah I know...

Libby: who cares...Cindy would be delighted and I want to keep my neck

Carl: Libby u're scaring me

Tatters: Well boys stop talking and begin walking

Sheen: YAH! Let Ultralord protect us!

Libby: <_<

The whole group begin walking trough the ghastly halls together and had Jimmy guiding them. He got a digital map in a smaller device and got the mini computer into the hypercube for security reasons. Now they were all wondering how to gain Cindy back and clear all the misunderstandings. What they weren't aware is that some blue sparkling eyes with blond hair kept watching everything from behind and began to follow them...
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Voice 1: **talking to his watch** I found them. They just escaped. Should I follow them or get back home?

Voice 2: No. Keep watching and inform us if they need our protection if other that are not supposed to get involve appear all of sudden. Be careful and report back to us in an hour.

TO BE CONTINUED

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Well guyz i hope this isnt too much...sorry for such post....... i just wish u don't get bored with this **sighs**

so tell me if this needs to be corrected or sth that doesn't fit ok?? there's no prob!
^_^

[J/C AVA]

@Laura & Noemi: AWESOME YOU TWO!!!! And Noemi, don't feel sorry. We all know how school can interuppt what we love to do. So don't worry Noemi, we understand. ^_^ Plus you, as in everybody, at times writes better under pressure. And sometimes it can come out as the best result. And it was worth it. ^_^


And Laura, Its not crappy! Like I said to Noemi, sometimes the best writing can come through the most stressful of moments. So your rushing has worked for both of your advantages.

I'm VERY happy with what you've writen. AWESOME!!!

*Both Laura and Noemi stare at me*

What?

[N!no]

@Laura & Noemi: AWESOME YOU TWO!!!! And Noemi, don't feel sorry. We all know how school can interuppt what we love to do. So don't worry Noemi, we understand. ^_^ Plus you, as in everybody, at times writes better under pressure. And sometimes it can come out as the best result. And it was worth it. ^_^


And Laura, Its not crappy! Like I said to Noemi, sometimes the best writing can come through the most stressful of moments. So your rushing has worked for both of your advantages.

I'm VERY happy with what you've writen. AWESOME!!!

*Both Laura and Noemi stare at me*

What?

:kawaii: omg thanks Pedro.......
now i can rest in peace

^_^

[J/C AVA]

Your welcome. He, he. ^_^

[Fire Pearl]

I thought it was pretty awesome too, Noemi!!! *.* :dance:


Just one thing I'm confused about....wasn't Goddard with Cindy? He wasn't in the prison cell....he was with April and Cindy, so that Cindy thought everyone else was mind controlled...

^^I thought I'd point that out...

[N!no]

OOPS DING DING

GODDARD WASNT IN THE CELL?? PLS ANSWER ME BACK SO I CAN MODIFY IT AND TAKE HIM OUT OF THE LAST PART OR SHOULD WE MAKE GODDARD STAY WITH THEM AND EDIT A PREVIOUS PART???

LETS CLEAR THIS UP B4 WE CAN CONTINUE

OH GOSH IM SO CLUELESS!!

:wacko:


OK TELL ME THEN LAURA AND PEDRO IF GODDARD MUST NOT BE IN THE CELL OR NOT??? WHOS EDITING TELL ME PLEASE I JUST DONT WANT TO EDIT WITHOUT YOUR CONSENT OK?

[Fire Pearl]

^^ It's okay....but well...I dunno....it was kinda in the storyline, as to make Cindy a bit more...determined and desperate on the whole thing...and to take care for creating a conflict, when they all meet (that's what i think, at least)

Yes, Godddard was definitly not in the cell, I'm sorry :'(

And....I don't know whether we should change that Goddard wasn't in the cell...Cindy thinking Libs, Sheen and Carl turned bad as well, somehow added more tension to the atmosphere... :lol:

That's how I see it ^_^

[J/C AVA]

*Looks at Noemi's post and the other chapter*

Oh yeah!! Goddard was supposed to be with Cindy and April.

Kinda of a mix up. Hmmmm......

I'm stumped on how to fix this. ^_^

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Yeah, there WAS a bit of a mix-up, there! Just a thought: Could ya include me somehow in the fic as a minor character??? I'd love it & be eternally loyal to replying to this fic!! *puppy-dog-eyes* PLEASE???????
Yours Truly,
*.* Amelia
P.S. Fire Pearl, what's with the whole vampire Cindy thing?? No offense, but that kinda creeps me out, it being near Halloween & all... Do you have a soft spot for that variation of her personality?? Let me know! ;)
Yours Truly,