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[J/C AVA]

ROTFLMBO!!!!!!!!! About time Sheen, Carl, and Libby got into the picture.

I love it Noemi. You did such a great job. I espaclly loved the way Goddard communicated using his screen.

Great Job Noemi!! :thumbsup:

Now.... *looks at Luara* who's next? :rolleyes:

[Fire Pearl]

Yeah yeah, I know it's my turn :lol: :lol: :lol:

Btw I loved it Noemi :kawaii:

Okay....I'm gonna post todaay or tomoooroow or...no definitly the latest will be tomorrow :lol: But you hafta give me the chance to post....I'm so busy right now :onfire:

[N!no]

:kawaii: im glad u like it, well u see i tried to give a bit of humor on this...so i definitely needed Sheen! and Goddard so u can hv lot of more stuff to do with Jimmy and him..

well laura now u'll hv Robbie in this too ^^

Pedro thx very much 4 the feedback
Laura thx u too

^_^

[Fire Pearl]

^_^ Alright....here we goooooooooooooooooo....

*silence*

Laura: You know....

Jimmy: What?

Laura: Well...I mean we're in a bad situation...like really bad...

Jimmy*shakes head*: Laura...what the heck is wrong with you? You know, one time one thinks you got everything right and then....comes such a ....comment....

Laura: HEY!!! First of all, I'm unpredictable, since my horoscope told me so...

Pedro*rolls eyes* : And of course she believed in it...

Laura: And second I was going to say....that every time you're in a BAD situation, Carl and Sheen would pop out of nowhere and save the gloomy mood!

Jimmy: Your point?

Laura: Uhh....I just felt like pointing that out.

Jimmy: Actually I'm glad the guys aren't here. Otherwise my stupidity would have harmed more people I care about...

Pedro: Don't. Even. Go. There. AGAIN.

G'Taters: This unhappiness is making me sad.

*everyone stares at her and shakes their heads.*

Laura: Taters....you're damn right.


Sheen: HERE WE GOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Carl: SHEEN WATCH OUT!!!!!!!!

Sheen: Uh what?

Libby: I SEE A WALL! WAY TOO NEAR!!!!

Sheen: WHERE?!!

Carl: RIGHT IN FRONT OF US!!!!!!

Sheen: Oh...why didn't ya say that earlier, dude?

*Sheen tries casually to direct the hover car away from the wall, while his two friends look frightened at each other. Since the hover car is so fast, they can't see the two figures that stroll along the floor.*

G'Moon monster: I tell you, this all is a complete...Uh...do you see that...

Moon Monster: Not....good...at all...

Sheen: CHILLAX!!! I'VE GOT EVERYTHING UNDER ....

*the hover car crashes against the moon monsters and causes them to fall hard down at the ground*

Sheen:...Control....

Libby: Okay, THAT'S IT!!!! My hair is totally ruined by now, thank you!

Carl: Uh guys...

Sheen: O come ON!!! You can't tell me this wasn't an awesome stunt! *shouts over his shoulder at the two startled monsters, while the hover car drives further away:*

Sheen: Sorry guys!

Libby: You know somethin'?

Carl: guys....

Sheen: Don't look at me like that....CARL LOVES JIMMY'S MOM!!!

Libby:Okay...that's just gross....

Carl*waves his fist*: Do NOT!!!

Sheen: Suuuure...

Carl: Okay, perhaps i do, but...

Libby: WHOA!!!

Carl: that's none of your business Sheen, and I tell you that you can't insult me and that...

Sheen*rolls eyes* Yadda....yadda....yadda...

Carl: And we're about to crash into that shiny portal! And Jimmy's mom is younger than she....

Libby: WHAT?

Carl: Yeah...

Libby: Repeat the portal part!!!!!! :mad:

Carl: Uh? :blink: Oh that...yeah you see there is a shiny door in front of us and we're just about to crash into it...

Sheen: COULDN'T YOU HAVE SAID THAT EARLIER!!!!

Carl: You're the pilot!

Sheen: Say what!

Libby*worried*: Goddard...what is that....

*but before the canine can answer, the Hover Car drives straight through the Dimension portal. The three children clang afraid to each other. Goddard whines as he keeps Noemi's lifeless body from falling down. Suddenly a friendly voice rings.*

Friendly voice: Good day. Thanks for traveling with the interdimensional transfer.

Sheen: Dude....that's weird....

Libby: Shhhhhhh!!! :mad:

Friendly voice: Unfortunately we tracked human life forms. Passengers are not allowed to bring humans with them, due to the new order system. We will immediately continue with the transfer, as soon as we kindly sent the human life forms into a dark underground cell. We hope you enjoyed your trip and have a nice stay.

Sheen: Wow...poor human life forms, uh?

Libby*exasperated* Sheen...WE ARE THE HUMAN LIFE FORMS!!!!!!!!

Sheen: Oh....that's not good, is it?

*white light flashes. In the glimpse of a second, the world vanishes in front of their very eyes. After a few minutes they open her eyes again. The first thing they see is darkness.*

Libby: Great....simply great.

Sheen: You know...perhaps saving Jimmy and Cindy wasn't a good idea after all...

Libby*sarcastically* Why would you think so?

Sheen: Well you see, we're in a dark cell, without Goddard, the hyper cube or any other of Jimmy's cool inventions and have no clue about our surroundings or how to get out her...and that girl here is still unconscious.

Libby: Really? I did not notice!

Sheen: That's what I'm here for!

Libby: ARGHH!!!! :grr: :mad: :mad: :mad:

Carl: Uh guys....I think I'm allergic to dark prisons.


April: Now I've told you everything we know about the enemy.

Cindy; what is not much <_<

April: Not our fault.

*They walk outside the tent, when they suddenly hear a familiar barking sound. Cindy's head jerks around.*

Cindy*disbelieving*: GODDARD??


Sheen: Okay...so we're screwed now. What do we do next? Crying? Begging? Playing Ultra Lord and saaave the daaay?

*Before Libby is able to kill Sheen for his stupidity they hear an excited female voice from the distance*

Voice: SHEEN??? OH MY GOSH IT'S YOU!!!

Sheen:Uh.....

Voice: JIMMY!!! LOOK AT THIS!!! SHEEN IS IN OUR CELL!!!! *a bit quieter* now what did I tell you?!


^_^ That's all for my turn^^ I'D also appreciate a feedback very much. Sooo now....I think it's time for you again, Pedro :D

[J/C AVA]

First of all: AWESOME!!!!! Sheen is funnier as ever and you had Libby and Carl in character and everything!! :thumbsup: Great job Laura.

But here's a question: Are all the kids (us inclued) all trapped in the same cell? Cause last time I checked, Me, You, Jimmy and G'Taters was trapped in a cell on April's home planet. But when Cindy found Sheen and the rest, she says "JIMMY!!! LOOK AT THIS!!! SHEEN IS IN OUR CELL!!!!". Cindy and April are in another planet, ship or somewhere else. Did you make it seem that Cindy found Jimmy and is now in the cell with us?

:huh:

Great job btw.

[Fire Pearl]

:lol: No...Cindy found Goddard...since he was no human he just came through the portal like April and Cindy did. But Sheen and co got transferred in 'our' cell....one of us found them^^

I'm so sorry I didn't make that clear :unsure:

[J/C AVA]

Oh!! That makes more sense... I think. *Still confused*

Let me get this straight: Goddard is now with Cindy and April but Sheen, Libby and Carl got transported into our cell and is now with us?

I could be wrong. :lol:

[Fire Pearl]

Yup...security system...since the humans could be traitors, they were immediately transferred to the same cell, where 'we' are in...

So only Goddard is with Cindy and April.

You got it right ^_^

[J/C AVA]

Oh! OK. NOW it makes sense. ^_^ That's cool. At least Sheen and Carl will give humor to this already tense fic. :thumbsup:

[N!no]

^_^ gr8! sheen and carl together will make jimmy's head spin a bit ....to desperate himself lol

[Fire Pearl]

:lol: I'd never expect something else...But we'll see, when Pedro continues :lol:

[J/C AVA]

I'd never expect something else...But we'll see, when Pedro continues

:lol: You got me Luara.

Ok, next...

*The three kids turn around and to their overwhelming surprise find Jimmy, Pedro, Laura and G'Taters, with Laura's face beaming and Jimmy's face filled with excitement at the sight of his freinds*

Carl: JIMMY!!!!!!!

*Carl runs and gives Jimmy a BIG hug, almost too big.*

Jimmy: ACK!! CARL?!?

Carl: Oh! Sorry.

Sheen: Hi Jimmy, Hi boy with the Harry Potter glasses, Hi girl who looks like a goth girl, and Hi...

*Sheen sees Taters and suddenly begins pondering*

Sheen: Hm. I've seen you somewhere....

*A ticking clock sounds*

Sheen: *Ring*: Nope! Doesn't ring a bell.

G'Taters: Ow c'mon sunny. I'm sure you vaguely remember me.

*The ticking clock sounds again*

Sheen: *Ding*: Nah. Still not getting it.

Jimmy: Don't feel bad Taters. He probably doesn't remember you cause of your mind control may have erased his memory of that moment. It happens all the time.

*Taters smiled in reasurence*

Jimmy: Guys? It'd like you to meet Grandma Taters.

G'Taters: Hello dearies. I'm so happy to meet you.

Sheen: Well who ever she is, she reminds me of my grandma...

*An image of his Grandmothers crwalspace rears in his head*

Sheen: AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!

*He jumps on Libby*

Sheen: Help!! Evil Crwalspace!!!!! May Ultralord save me!!!

*Agitated, Libby drops Sheen to the ground and he comes back to senses as Libby scorns him, hands on her hips*

Sheen: Sorry.

Jimmy: And these two here are Pedro and Laura.

*But before Pedro can introduce himself, Laura speeds up to Sheen*

Luara: OMG!!! I NEVER, EVER, NEVER, EVER, EVER THOUGHT I'D MEET YOU IN PERSON SHEEN!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!! :kawaii:

Sheen: Uh, dude, you're scaring me.

Libby: Yeah. And he's MY boyfriend. So you betta wacth yo' self....

Laura: AHHHHHHHH!!!!! :kawaii: OMG!!! LIBBY WAS' UP GRIL!!! I'M SUCH A BIG FAN OF YOURS!!!!

Libby: Uh.. thank you?

Carl: Jim, she's starting to creep me out.

Laura: *Gasps* Oh, Carl!! You're SO shy, handsome and funny!!! I LOVE that in a boy!!!

Carl: *Blushes* Well, he, he. You really think so?

Laura: OF COURSE I DO!!!!!!!

*Sheen, Libby, and Carl look to Jimmy*

Jimmy: Ha, ha. Long story.

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Cindy: GODDARD!!! It's YOU!!!!

*Goddard runs up to Cindy and let's her pet him. He then jumps on Cindy's arms and licks her cheek*

Cindy: He, he. It's great to see you boy!! *Touching her cheek* And for once that wasn't gross.

April: I remember him. He fought along side Jimmy Neutron to free my people from Meldar's oppressive show.

Cindy: Speaking of which, where's Libby, Sheen and Carl?

*Goddard's screen came up and showed Libby, Carl, and Sheen being separated by the new order's system*

Cindy: Oh. That's what happened huh?

*Goddard barks in agreement*

Cindy: Can you lock in their quordenates?

*Goddard's screen came up again and scans the whole sector for the others. As it scanned, Cindy's mind ponders on what happened so far:

-Jimmy and the rest has been possessed by the moon monsters
-The leader very likely wants to take over the whole universe
-Sheen, Libby, and Carl are in who knows where....

Suddenly Goddard's screen came on again and from the screen spotted a grayish planet with an asteroid belt around it and ships blocking the way all around it. Then not three but four more green blips appeared.*

April: Oh no. Your friends must be trapped in Planet Nelfar. It's a prison planet where the universes most evil of criminals are held captive.

Cindy: So if that's a prison planet, then why is Libby, Sheen, and Carl there? Maybe they...

*Suddenly the word criminal ran through her head as an image of her friends passed it by. Her heart sank.*

Cindy: No...

April: What is it?

Cindy: No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no.... *She then lowers herself to a fettle position with her palms holding her knees as tears start rolling down her eyes*

Libby, Sheen, and Carl... they've turn evil.....

[N!no]

:P OMG Pedro!! woah!!! that was greatly awesome!!! :thumbsup:
Laura! u owe him a cookie too :P

U did a really nice job dude!! Woah Cindy is all confused of what is happening!! She doesnt even take the chance to go and talk with Jimmy and the rest of the gang plus two fans

HAHAHA Laura's part of being drooling over Sheen is priceless and soooo just the real thing right LAura?????

And she compliments everybody!!! lol oooooh God u left me in the hovercar LOL

ooh ooh what are u planning about that :onfire: :onfire:
ROFL ok Goddard!! u need to say what is really going on!!

Geez Cin will fell so guilty of not listening to them when she figures out she keep sane people in a prison cell unfairly :'(

:grr: and who's that with unknown ID till now!! AWWWWWw
Im dying to find that out lol

So who's turn is it now to write???? ^_^

Geez guys Im so proud of you ^_^ u've done a terrific work in here
keep it up......gosh im freezing to death now in statistics lab!

g2g bye or my bus will leave without me ok??

take care
^_^

[J/C AVA]

AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

My story has been cut!!!! Noemi, sorry but I originally wrote more than you read but for some reason it got cut off.

Now I'll have to write it again!!! :mad: :angrymob:

[N!no]

:angrymob: i know what you mean, it has happened to me too that's why I copy it on word after I write it in here and before posting
IT IS JUST SO :uhoh: :mad:

[J/C AVA]

Has the site been doing that alot lately? I'm filling in the holes now.

[N!no]

No idea man...but feel very sorry it happened to you...coz what I lost I wrote it for 3 hours ...so when I rewrote it I made it shorter coz I was pissed off!! :mad: darn

[Fire Pearl]

OMG thís was so FREAKIN AWESOME Pedro!!!!

I just read the fixed version....WOW!!!!

I was laughing so so hard!!!

Here have a cookie! *gives you a cookie* *.*

See Noemi, decent people (who DON'T steal^^) get a cookie from me :lol: :lol: :lol:

I loved it :wub:

But....you....made....me...drool....over...CARL???!!!

:D :D :D I nearly fell off my chair at this one....Carl is the only character I'm quite...laid back in my fangirlism :lol: So freaking funny ^_^

Anyways I really liked it :thumbsup: It's Noemi's turn now, uh?

Btw, the site didn't cut my posts until now....

[J/C AVA]

Here have a cookie! *gives you a cookie*

YAY!! Chocolate Chip! My favorite!!! :dance: *Eats it whole* Yum. ^_^

But....you....made....me...drool....over...CARL???!!!

Oops!! Sorry. :blink: I assumed you liked him cause of his shyness and akwardness. Maybe I went to overboard than that. But I'm glad you liked it anyway.

WAIT A MINUTE!!!!!! Before Noemi writes, can I put a Part 2 of the Chapter I just wrote? It's gonna be short so I won't take long... I hope.

[N!no]

Just tell me when u're done...yah no problem Pedro...I'll read the new version though

^_^


Laura!!! *sprints and gets cookie from Pedro***

**with mouth full of chocolate cookie** And for the record this is just an awesome and delicious cookie. yum yum :P

oh yah i'm bad!

in UR FACE LAURA!!

^_^