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[Fire Pearl]

Hi^^ Yeah as for me, it would be totally okay if ya joined our little story ^_^ Let's see what the other two think^^

Hmm yeah I'm kinda fond of vampires and Cindy is my fave character in the show...so the mix is just perfect for me. It actually hasn't anything to do with Halloween.... :unsure: I didn't actually want to creep anyone out...I just like those things :lol:

@ Pedro: Noemi told me, that she'd like us not to continue until she fixed her post ^_^ *.*

[J/C AVA]

@Laura: Ok then. I guess all we could do know is wait.

[J/C AVA]

[Posting to keep fic up]

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Hey, again!

*wipes brow* Whew! That's a relief! I'm glad you're not doing that b/c of Halloween, cuz that holiday gives me the heebie-jeebies! *shivers out of fear* :unsure:

Anyway, back on topic... Thanks for including me in this fic, if it's okay w/ Pedro, that is! @Pedro: Is it??

Catcha later!
Yours Truly,

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

C'mon, Pedro!!!! Where r u???!!! :blink: :grr:

Yours Truly,

[Fire Pearl]

Pedro left this site for a while. And Noemi isn't online often anymore as well.... -_-

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Oh, GAS PLANET!!!! *snaps fingers in frustration* I hope he comes back soon! -_-

Yours Truly,

[N!no]

^_^ ok guyz I edited the post so u can continue all right? sorry for not hanging around in here but school is hard now that Im in senior year...
so basically we hv 2 new characters to join...one of 'em is male (already mentioned)

of Laura and anyone feel free to continue and I'll hopefully contribute too ^_^

[Fire Pearl]

It's okay Noemi ^_^ I'm glad you didn't forget about it!

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Am I one of the 2 new characters??? Lemme know!! ;)

Yours Truly,

[N!no]

Am I one of the 2 new characters??? Lemme know!! ;)

Yours Truly,

one of the 2 characters has already been define as male...then I guess the other can be on u... :lol:

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Soo-WEET!!! :D *dances around like Sheen did after Libby showed him she still had Melty-Face in LP 976/J*

Yours Truly,

[J/C AVA]

Hey guys! I'm back!

Actually I was back since yesterday, but I'm alright.

So from seeing the last few posts, Moonlight Black hasn't moved an inch, sad to say.

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Hey, Pedro! Did ya catch the part about me being one of the newer characters???!! I'm SOOOOOOOO excited!!! I can't WAIT 'till you update your fic!!!!!!!! You're totally cool! B)
Cya!

[J/C AVA]

OMG!

I'm SO sorry for not replying earlier Amelia!! Please forgive me. I was so busy with my Epic JN fic I kinda forgot.

I'll read your part in the story right now and maybe post a new chapter very soon! I promise!!

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

I forgive you, Pedro. ?Justo date prisa, vale? I know, I took about a class & 1/2 of Spanish, so I just HAD to use some of it! :lol: Just get on w/ the fic, k? Thx! ;)

[J/C AVA]

WELL...

Coming back to this story after a long time and I kinda feel a bit rusty.

After re-reading most of the story and the last chapter, I kinda have an idea of what's going on and how to continuing with it.

So, with out further ado, here's the long-awaited Chapter of Moonlight Black. Sorry if I haven't been up to date and consistent with this, but with class registration, my Epic JN Fic and friends and family occuping my time... well.. you get the idea.

Forgive me if this seems under-par with the previous chapters.

*Sigh*

Here I go...

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*Back on Planet Gorlock, Cindy weeps over her "supposed" friend's conversion to evil.*

April: Cindy, we're not even sure if that's possible. Your friends MAY be alive but I doubt that they...

*Cindy cuts her short*

Cindy: No! They're evil now. I know it.

April: *In a concered tone* Are you sure, Cindy Vortex? You may be overreacting conclusions and...

*Suddenly her ship's com link beeps. She runs to her ship and answers it.*

April: This is April. What is it?

Voice: Commander April! We've just recived word that a mysterious army is attacking our home base on Sector 12! They came out of nowhere and we're overwheled in numbers! We need you help!

April: Alright, I'll notify the commanding officers and request for back up! Just hold them off for as long as you can! I'm on my way!

*She turns the com link off and hastly turns around to find Cindy standing at the ship's enterence way.*

April: I'm sorry if this is not the right time, but I could use your help. A mysterious army is attack...

Cindy: I've heard. It must be the moon monsters.

April: *Appauled by her answer* How did you know?

Cindy: They're looking for me. I can feel it.

April: *Concerned* I know how you must feel. But right now we have to put our emotions aside and take action, Cindy Vortex. If we are lucky, maybe Jimmy Neutron is with them. We could capture him and see what is wrong.

*Cindy's eyes widened and her fist clenched hard. She knew she loved Jimmy with all her heart, but she also couldn't risk the fate of the universe. Then an image of Jimmy appeared in her head:

"People don't change, your personality is imprinted in your head since birth! Look it up...

Those words alone confirmed it: Jimmy was now evil. And once evil, always evil. All those dreams, memories and aspirations of him were now gone. Replaced with an overwhelming inner rage and betrayal.

She then walked past April like an emotionless robot*

April: Cindy? Are you alright?

Cindy: *In an emotionless tone* No. I'm not alright. I've never been alright since... since HE left me.

April: Cindy, please! Maybe Jimmy Neutron isn't as evil as you think. I know him and...

*Suddenly Cindy cuts her short again*

Cindy: AND WHAT?!? Huh? Do you LOVE him is that it?! Well, YOU can have him!! I'm done with that back-stabbing, selfish, know it all..

April: CINDY!!

*Cindy snaps out of it but facally remains cold*

Apirl: We have NO time for this! My people are in danger! I know how you're feeling now but as I said before, we MUST put our emotions aside for now! My people need me! We can worry about Jimmy Neutron later. But right now, PLEASE, help me!

*Cindy's body shook, hesitent to give in but nonetheless did. She then put her hand over her face, wipped it down and her facial expression changed to a strict, determined look.*

Cindy: Alright. Let's go. C'mon Goddard.

*She motions for Goddard and he runs towards the ship. And with that the ship takes off for Sector 12...*

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*Back at the prison on Planet Nelfar....*

Carl: This place give me the creeps.

Sheen: *Sarcastic* Gee, I wonder when did you think that up?

Libby: Guys shut up! Y'all want us to be spotted with ya yappin'!!

Pedro: *To Laura*: Seriously, why do we hang with these guys?

Larua: Cause we're fans, remember?

Pedro: I know, but Carl has been whinnng all day, Sheen's constantly eyeing on Libby, and Jimmy and... well, actually they're doing an important thing so I guess I can leave them out of it.

Laura: I dunno. I love Carl and Sheen's fighting. They keep my laughing, especally now when everything's so tense and dramatic.

Pedro: True.

*Pedro then starts lookign behind himself*

Pedro: Don't get me worng, but why do I have the feeling we're being wacthed?

Laura: Your imagination..?

Pedro: I don't think so. I'm really feeling that someone is wacthing us. It give me the hebbie gibbies just thinking about it.

G'Taters: He's right. I can feel somekind of prescnce here dearies. We better be on our toes.

*The group then sees a big, metal door. They approach it when...*

Noemi: Stop! All of you!

Jimmy: What is it?

*Noemi then reached in her belt to find a small sliver looking shpere. She tosses it towards the door and it lightly explodes filling the hallway with grey smoke. Then appeared red sensors on the floor, illuminated with the smoke.

Pedro: Wow.

Sheen: Cool!

Jimmy: How did you know there was...

*Noemi scrons at Jimmy*

Noemi: I thought you were a genius!! You should've known that in every entrence there's always sensors to track escapists!! Why don't YOU know...

*Suddenly she places her hand on her chest, groning in pain. The gang quickly rush to her side but she shrugs them off.*

*Noemi: *breathing heavily* Nevermind... Jimmy, do you have a device that can get us across?

*Jimmy stood still, feeling hurt of Noemi's critisism*

Noemi: JIMMY!

Jimmy: What? Oh right!

*He examines the beams*

Jimmy: We could just climb on the celling and crawl across, but then that would be too much for Noemi to handle...

Sheen: Cool! So we can be like Spider people and spit spider webs at everyone.

*They all scorn as Sheen with some-what muderious intent*

Sheen: What?

Pedro: Or we could try to find some small metal plates to cover the beams, thereby reverting it's direction to the wall and allowing us to sneek by undetected.

*They all stared at Pedro in bewillderment*

Libby: Are you sure you guys are fans?

Laura: Of course we are, really smart fans that is! ^_^

Libby: Oh brotha'

Jimmy: Guys, focus!

*He serches the celling to find a small grey box at the upper corner.*

Jimmy: There it is! The source of the beams.

*Using his Levetating Shoes, Jimmy floats up to the box. Then reaching the hypercube, he takes out a small black circular device, puts it on the box and floats back down. Suddenly the box short circites and the beams disapper. They all cheer for Jimmy except Noemi, who remains indifferent to it.*

Jimmy: Alright. Noemi, use your sword and cut the door open.

*Without saying a word, Noemi tosses her sword like a boomerang and slices the dorr in and out, then returning to her hand. A few seconds later, the cuts and shashes appear on the door and falls completly apart. The children applaude and cheer for her, though she doesn't respond at atll.*

Jimmy: OK guys. Let's keep going before..

*Suddenly the alarm sounds.*

Jimmy: Oh no!

Sheen: Carl! What did you do now?!

Carl: I didn't do anything!!

Jimmy: My control scrambler must've set off the alarm system.

Laura: Oh no! Now they're gonna find us!

Libby: Not unless we make a run for it.

*Then the sound of rushing footsteps echoes from down the hall*

Carl: Oh no! The guards are coming to kill us!!

Sheen: Oh gee, you think?!?

Jimmy: Guys STOP IT!! Quick, Libby, Carl and Sheen, hide in tha air vent!

Sheen: Oh great job Jimmy! It'll be SO cosy with HIM squishing me!!

Jimmy: Are you done?!

Pedro: There's no time!! We're gonna get caught for sure now!

*Suddenly the gang hears a voice*

Voice: Psst! Hey, you.

*The gang looks around but finds no one*

Carl: Oh no! Now we're hearing voices!!

All: CARL, SHUT UP!!

Voice: ALL OF YOU SHUT UP!!

*The gang freezes at the command of the voice*

Voice: Quick, run past the door and head towards the wall.

Sheen: Oh great! Now the voice wants us dead! What's next? A cat comes out of nowhere and scracths us all to death?!

Voice: Didn't I say to shut up?!

*Sheen's mouth muted*

Voice: Quickly, run before they catch you! NOW!

*The gang, dumbfounded of where the voice came from, nontheless heded it's warning and made a dash for the door into the next hallway. There they run into a wall with an ensignia of two intertwining snakes and a skull in the middle. On the bottom were the words: Nelfar Prison, Where NO ONE gets out alive...*

Sheen: Well, gee. THAT was so obvious!!

Libby: Sheen, do I have ta break both yo' legs?!

Sheen: Maybe...

*Jimmy serches the wall for a switch..*

Jimmy: If only I can find a button, a switch, anything?

Carl: And if only I can eat someting, I haven't eaten anything all day.

Pedro: Carl! We don't have time for you stupid ramblings of your hunger!!

Carl: But I'm hungry!!

Computer voice: Password accepted.

*The wall then slides sideways, opening up showing a darkend flight of steps going down.*

Libby: You MUST be trippin'! More stairs?

*The footsteps gets closer*

Libby: Way better than dying!

Jimmy: Let's go!

*The gang rushes down stairs as the wall closes behind them.

Once they reach the bottm they find a brightly lit green room with a huge computer in the middle and other controls on it's left and right walls.*

Jimmy: Amazing.

Sheen: So where the heck is this voice dude?

Voice: Right here..

*Out of the shadows comes a figure wearing a dark green robe, lifting it's hood. The gang then gasped.*

Voice: I'm Amelia, captian of the Nelfar resistent team. It's an honor to finally meet you Jimmy Neutron.

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Well that's it. I didn't have the time or patience to make this more elaborate as I have with previous chapters so please forgive me if this seems very spotty.

And I decided to make Amelia a full character rather than a minor one. So if you guys have anything about that, feel free to speak.

Sorry this took so long, but at least now Moonlight Black can get going agian. -_-

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Sheen: So where the heck is this voice dude?

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And I decided to make Amelia a full character rather than a minor one. So if you guys have anything about that, feel free to speak.

Note the word "DUDE" that Sheen said. I'm NOT a guy, I'm a girl, for crying out loud!!!! No offense, Sheen!

:Sheen: None taken! *pauses* HEY!!!!

Anyway, just thought I'd make that point, heh-heh! Don't wanna start any catfights! :catfight: By the way, Pedro, great job introducing me as a major character! I thought I was going to be a minor one, but BOY, was I wrong!!! Soo-WEET!!!!

:Sheen: Hey, that's MY line!!!

Whoops, he looks mad, so I'd better scram!! *takes off running with Sheen in hot pursuit* YAAAAAAHHH!!!!

[J/C AVA]

Ha ha ha ha! Yeah Amelia, better make a run for it! :lol:

Well, so far Laura and Noemi hasn't returned to continue Moonlight Black most likely due to their busy scheduales, which I completly understand.

So now it looks like the responsibility of finishing this fic has fallen squarly on my shoulders.

So, when I find the right time, I can try to contribute a chapter or so to MB, but don't expect it to be updated as frequent as before. -_-

[N!no]

yah terribly sorry. I'm pickin 4 subjects now n workin. So till now I'm only missin 9 credits to finish my career...then I'm going to my seminar to finally oficially graduate in october ^_^