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#21 Fire Pearl

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Posted 27 August 2008 - 10:47 PM

Noemi...

Laura: **bewildered** Pedro? **shakes in realization*** Pedro!!! don't leave me in here!!! I'm coming with u!!!!
***glares sadly at Cindy and Jimmy** I'm sorry guys but I my friend is in trouble. U can't help like this. It's better if u return...Bye **runs**

Cindy and Jimmy gasped looking at each other totally stunned and began running

Jimmy: Wait!!!!! Laura!!!
Cindy: Pedro!! come back here!!!
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 10:48 PM

Laura...

Jimmy: They've gone away....

Cindy: Yeah....

*silence*

Cindy:I...

Jimmy:I...

Both:I'm sorry.

Jimmy:You are?

Cindy:What ...you are?

Both:yeah...

*silence again*

Jimmy:Well...uh...

Cindy: Ya uhm....

Jimmy: Oh sorry what were you saying again?

Cindy: No you started first...

Jimmy:But....

Cindy: Just say what you wanted to see...

Jimmy: We really screwed it this time, didn't we?

Cindy: Yeah...I suppose...

*silence....again*

Both:Do you...

Cindy: What were you going to sayß

Jimmy: No you go first...

Cindy: Well...uh...what Pedro said...

Jimmy:*weakly*yeah?

Cindy: Why....why do you think he said these things?

Jimmy: Uh...scientifcly the only explanation is...

Cindy: No Jimmy...there's no science involved in this...

Jimmy:Uhh...maybe because he is so worried about their friend that our arguing forced him to overreact and say the most ridiculous things...

Cindy:You don't believe this yourself. do you?

Jimmy:Uh....no...

Cindy:Then why...?

Jimmy: Maybe because...

Cindy: Yes?

Jimmy: *sheepishly*just maybe because....he saw that I...maybe kinda like you...

Cindy: Maybe.....maybe he saw the same for me....

Jimmy: It's just one possibilty...

Cindy:Of course.

Jimmy:It doesn't mean that...

Cindy:Right -_-

Jimmy: Ya well...

Cindy: Yup...

*both stare into each other eyes and move slowly forward...when suddenly...*

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*both turn quickly and disappointed away.*

Jimmy: This was Pedro!!!
*thinking: Did she really wanted to kiss me?*
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

Cindy: And Laura!!!
*thinking: Did we almost do, what I think we almost did?*

Jimmy: We gotta rescue them!!!

Cindy: Right behind you!
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 10:49 PM

Pedro...

*As Jimmy and Cindy head to a light in the forest, Jimmy stops Cindy and the two duck just in time to see a large moon monster*

Cindy: Jimmy, that's the same moon monster that abducted Noemi.

*She then spots Pedro and Laura in the monster's hand, both unconsious*

Cindy: And there's Pedro and Laura.

*The moon moster push a tree and appears underground esclators. The monster goes down as the door closes behind it.*

Jimmy: I see. So they use a tree to not only to open their underground door but keep it camoflauged to avoid suspestion.

Cindy: But it's a pretty big tree Neutron. How are we gonna open the door with THAT heavy thing?

Jimmy: That's when YOU come in.

Cindy: Me?

Jimmy: I'll use my tractor beam from my watch so I can push you forward and then you deliever your hardest kick to bring it down."

Cindy: That's a GREAT idea Neutron!!

*Jimmy's suprised at Cindy's aprroval that he blushes*

Cindy: Uh, Jimmy. Your checks.

Jimmy: Wha.. OH! Uh..

Cindy: He,he. Let's just get this going, ok.

Jimmy: Um, alright.

*Jimmy takes a few steps back and arms his tractor beam. Cindy crouches down in a running positsion but then...*

Cindy: Wait!!

Jimmy: What is it?

Cindy: I forgot something.

*She starts removing her clohtes to reveal her karate dress from within.*

Jimmy: *GASP* Cindy. You were wearing that this whole time?

Cindy: You always gotta be ready to fight Neutron.

*For a second Jimmy lost himself looking at Cindy but then remembered the plan*

Jimmy: Ok then. Ready Cindy?

Cindy: Ready!

*She returns to her crouching position as Jimmy prepares the tractor beam.*

Jimmy: GO!

*He fires the tractor beam from behind Cindy, pushing her at a VERY fast speed as she runs, then jumps very high and with her barefoot kicks the tree HARD*

Cindy: *Smiles* TIMBER!!!

*The trees not only opened the esclator doors, she even knocked down the tree itself! Jimmy's mouth is WIDE open.*

Cindy: There! What a workout! Whoo!

Jimmy: That was amazing Cindy!

Cindy: He, he. Thank you. ^_^

Jimmy: Now let's save Pedro, Laura, and Noemi.

Cindy: Right behind ya!

*Cindy and Jimmy go to the down esclator into the moon monster's lair. Unbeknowst to them, a figure in the shadows was wacthing... and waiting...*
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 10:50 PM

Laura...

Jimmy: Okay...

Cindy: Well....where do you think it brought them?

Jimmy: If I only knew...this monster lair is HUGE!!!


Meanwhile...

Laura: I don't like it here.

Pedro: Duh! Really?

*both are hanging tied up over an abbyss filled with hot lava.

Laura: You know what's the worst?

Pedro*exasperated* What???

Laura: I don't even know, why we are hanging here! Or who it was, for that matters!

Pedro: Mercy, please!!!!

Laura: Oh come on! Would you rather have me hysteric?

Pedro: Are you quieter then?

Laura: Let me think....NO! That's why they call it h y s t e r i c!

Pedro: I'm about to ask them to throw me down there!!!

Laura: And then what?

Pedro: Silence....

Laura: Hey I'm not talking....THAT much annoying things!

Pedro: Hmmm...let's think about that. You're constantly drooling over Jimmy and Cindy and now you're blabbering just for the sake of talking!

Laura: First of all I am not drooling. I'm...overwhelmed of seeing them arguing live!

Pedro: uhuh....sure...

Laura: Why, what you said is true! They were acting ridiculous and I shunned them too! And about the talking....well better than to deal with the death fear I'm facing right now!!! Why are you so agressive anyways? You seemed to be quite calm till recently...

Pedro: Hmmm...don't know, maybe we're hanging over that devil soup there?!!!

Laura: Yeah yeah....*starts to shout* JIMMY CINDY!!!! WHEREVER YOU ARE BRING YOUR ARGUING BUTTS DOWN HERE AND RESCUE US, FOR GOD'S SAKE!!!!

Pedro: I shouldn't have taken the potion.... :grr:

Laura: I'm getting tired....

Pedro:WHAT???

Laura: Well...hanging here isn't that exciting!

Pedro: I just don't believe you....

*suddenly a door opens and a person enters the hall where the abbyss is placed. The person wears clothes of an ancient queen, but at her side robots are following her*

Person: Look who we have here....The plan is working after all.

Pedro: What pl---*looks at the face of the person* ...oh shit.

Laura*stunned*: No....Noemi?

Noemi*laughs evilly*

Pedro: I don't believe all this. HOW COULD YOU!!!!

Noemi: We have a master plan to get over with. And it includes you two.

Pedro: We?

Noemi: Unimportant.

Laura*still stunned* This isn't possible...unless...*realization crosses her face*

Pedro: What the heck is going on here ???!!! :mad:

Laura:*weak* Pedro...

Noemi: Oh you'll see....

Pedro: How do you even dare?! And what about these clothes?

Laura: Pedro!

Noemi: Just the right thing for a future queen don't you think?*spins playfully around*

Pedro: I....I just don't believe you! You...you...

Laura: PEDRO!!!

Pedro*angrily* What?

Laura: Don't you get it? This is not the real Noemi....she's been brainwashed!!!

Pedro: Oh.....oh crap.

Noemi: Anyways....the next phase should start any second...*cold laughter*

Laura: Who just did this to you Noemi?*hangs her head low*

Random robot : We have always ways to get people cooperating.



*From the corner of the hall, the mysterious figure in the shadow was watching.....just watching, as the person did at Jimmy and Cindy*
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 10:52 PM

Pedro...

*Jimmy and Cindy still searches for Pedro, Noemi and Laura*

Cindy: So what should we do genius?

Jimmy: This place is too big to cover together, so we'll have to split up to cover more ground. I'll go to the left hall and you'll take the right.

*Jimmy takes a little white beeper from his backpack and tosses it at Cindy*

Cindy: What's this?

Jimmy: Neutronic Signel Pads. It's like a miniture walkie talkie but has a more wider and longer signel range. If we find Pedro, Laura, Noemi or anything suspicious, you press that red button to activate the signel.

Cindy: And what's the blue one for?

Jimmy: 5 second self destruct.

Cindy: He, I'm glad Sheen isn't here, he'd mistake the blue button for a remote control to his Ultralord shows. :lol:

Jimmy: He, yeah he would. Ok, we meet back here in 1 hour.

Cindy: Let's do this!

*Both go a few steps in the opposite directions but then..*

Cindy: Wait! Jimmy!

Jimmy: Yeah Cindy?

*She quickly runs up to him as he turned his head and gave him a kiss on his cheek*

Cindy: *smiling* Thanks Jimmy. ^_^

Jimmy: *Taken off guard by her kiss but smiles back* Oh, uh you're welcome Cindy. ^_^

Cindy: Be careful.

Jimmy: You too.

*The two without looking back ran towards their opposite dircetions*

*Meanwhile in a control room, a security camera pans the obliious pair as they split up*

Noemi: So they've come to save those two morons. Should I go down there and take care of them permently?

*A strange voice coming from a darkend chair*

Strange voice: No! Not yet. Let's see if those two has what it takes against our moon monsters.

*The stranger pushes a button and unleashes a swarm of moon monsters to destroy Jimmy and Cindy as he laughs evily and maniacly*
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 10:53 PM

Pedro...

*In one side Jimmy walks down the hall*

Jimmy: Pedro? Noemi? Laura? Where are you?

*His voice echoes down the hall. He checks his wrist wacth but no signel*

Jimmy: No. The frequency is too low. That also means I can't call Goddard.

*He starts pondering on the situation but then the area shakes*

Jimmy: Wha.. Wha.. What's going on?

*Sunddenly the wall smashes open and out comes a moon monster*

M.M.: So, you're the boy genius. Time to meet your maker!

*Sensing he's overpowered, he makes a run for it with the monster behind him*

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*Meanwhile, Cindy walks down another hall serching for the rest*

Cindy: Laura? Noemi? Pedro?

*Nothing*

Cindy: This place is so big, I don't know where to start.

*She then comes to a gigantic door*

Cindy: *Smiles* So...

*She kicks down the door and comes into a big dark room*

Cindy: Pedro? Laura? Anybody?

*Empty*

Cindy: Man! This is starting to bore me! I wish I can fight something badly.

Voice: Well, well, well...

*Then a moon monster appeared from the shadows but unlike the one with Jimmy, this was about Cindy's size and looked female.*

Girl Moon Monster: Look what we have here. A pony-tailed girl wearing a karate dress and looking lost.

Cindy: Ok blaber mouth! Where's the three kids you kidnapped?!

Girl Moon Monster: I didn't kidnapped them. But judging by your stature, you skills seems admirable.

Cindy: Who cares what I look like?!? Tell me or I'll punch your eyeballs from your skull!!!

Girl Monster: Ok... under one condition. Fight me. If you win, I'll tell you where are they. If I win, you'll become our slave. *She crosses her arms* So, do we have a deal?

Cindy: Whatever. Sounds like I don't have a choice. Besides, at least hearing your screams of pain will entertain me. BRING IT!!!

*Cindy assumes her fighting guard and the girl monster makes a strange posture of which Cindy hasn't seen before*

Cindy HEEAHH!!!

Girl Monster: YAAHAHHHHH!!!!!!!

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*At the chamber the lava is near Pedro and Laura's feet*

Pedro: Man!!! There has to be a way outta here!

Laura: But how? All I have is my cell phone and floss!

*Pedro's face turns stupified*

Pedro: And you carry those things around you why?

Laura: .... 'Cause...

Pedro: WAIT!!! IDEA!!!

*Grabs Laura's cell and floss*

Pedro: I may be no genius but this should work... and hopefully not split your phone in half. I'm gonna throw this cell on that pipe *point to a pipe in the celling next to the door* and we'll use this floss as a rope. We'll swing from here and run to the door.

*He throws the cell towards the pipe and it grabs it. He makes sure it's tight and prepares to swing*

Pedro: Jump on my back!!

Laura: On YOUR back?!? Well... uh... I might get spinal curvege and..

*Pedro grabs her and swings just in time as the lava burns the plattform.*

Pedro: There. You're ok...

*Pedro sees Laura stare at him then turn away*

Pedro: Uhh, Laura?

Laura: What? OH!!! Uh sorry.

Pedro: That's ok. Now, knowing Jimmy and Cindy they're probably looking for us. We'd better go find them. C'mon!

*The two runs past the door*
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 10:55 PM

Laura...

"You can not run away little boy....."

*Jimmy runs faster, and turns left into a dark floor*

"Can not run....."

"No escape...."

*He enters a large hall, where thousands of echoes resound*

"Are you scared.....?

"....not run, little...."

"....lost...."

*Jimmy trips and falls on his face....from far away he can hear the monster's steps *

Jimmy: I ....need to get away..."*he isn't able to stand up*

"No escape...."

"You're caught...."

"Give up..."

*The echoes penetrate Jimmy's mind, he can't keep a clear mind...*

Jimmy: I have to....do something....

*The monster's steps come nearer*

"Lost...."

"Give up.....give up...."

Jimmy: NO! I can't give up....I have to find out....what's going on here...i have to help....the others....have to..."

*A deep, mighty growl resounds, the walls start shaking*

"No way out.....you're lost...."

Jimmy: I...am so weak....the monster...

M.M.: I found you!!! *it's voice increases the volume of the echoes in the echo room*

Jimmy: No....this....

*The world starts spinning in front of his very eyes....his head aches and his body gets numb*

Jimmy:....isn't the way it's gonna end...

"Give up...."

Jimmy*shaking voice*: No...Cindy gives never up....and neither do I!

*he rises shakily, and staggers slowly in the direction of the entrance*

"Hopeless...."

Jimmy: And now....I just need to do this...

*he raises his arm and sends a blue ray out with his watch. A blue shining barrier seals immediately the entrance, just in front of the Moon Monster*

"This won't rescue you....your soul is lost...."

*The M.M. smashes angrily against the barrier, but it can't break it.*

M.M.*furious howl*: This won't help you!!! Sooner or later we'll get you! This lair has many secrets, mind you, little brat!"

*It turns around and storms off to ask for a solution for this problem*

"Lost....."

"No way out...."

*The echoes sound through Jimmy's mind....the blue light lightens his facial features...weakly he sinks to the ground again.*

Jimmy: Maybe they'll find me....I have to wait....for Cindy....yes I'll wait for Cindy....

*He passes out...icily cold wind blows through the echo room...hoarfrost is slowly covering his face*

"Nobody will find you...."



*Cindy jumps back in order to avoid the Monster's punches.*

Cindy: Is this all you've got?

G.M: We'll see!!!

*G.M. wants to punch Cindy in her face. Cindy twirls around and avoids the punch, but trips over the monster's foot prank. She lies on the ground and blows a strand of hair out of her face. But before the G.M can take advantage of her position, Cindy rolls quickly away and jumps up, causing the G.M. to fall due to it's own punch.*

g.M.:ARGHHHHH!!!

Cindy*wants to start an attack....but suddenly she gets a strange feeling. Her pupils widen and her inside freezes. Her heart starts aching badly*

Cindy*breathless whisper*: Jimmy....

*The G.M. got a hold of itself and punches Cindy hard in the side. The girl flies through the air and crahes into a wall. Her karate suit is covered with dirt, her face muddy and her hair loose and damp.*

G.M.:*Cold and harsh*: That is what happens if you mess with us.

*Suddenly Cindy raises her head. Her lips are pressed hard together and her eyes burn through the muddy strands of hair. Her whole face expresses: Anger...deep utter anger.*

Cindy*calm but threatening voice* And this happens, if anyone messes with Jimmy.

*She stands up, in her eyes deathly determination*


Pedro: We gotta find them here anywhere!

Laura: that's for sure....hopefully they'll be alive when we find them....

Pedro: Negative talk isn't going to help us a bit.

Laura: No. But it helps to be realistic about a situation.

Pedro: Or to get desperate and be useless.

Laura: That happens only when one is too weak to handle it....look there's a giant door, what do you think is behind it?

Pedro:Only one way to find out. But it would be very careless if we did so.

Laura: What other choice do we have? Sooner or later we have to enter somewhere....this door isn't better or worse than any other....we are on enemy's area anyways!

*From behind*

Noemi: Nice to see you again.+

Laura: Oh no...

Noemi: My master is surprised you escaped...he wants to see you in person.

Pedro: I don't think so.

Noemi: I don't care about what you think.

Laura: Noemi you've got to fight this! Whoever your so called master is, he has NO real power over you! You can free yourself!

Noemi: Why should I...I am..,.satisfied!

Pedro: Then why are you stuttering?

Noemi: I...I...can not I am ...evil....

Laura: NO! You're not! Fight against it Noemi!

Noemi; I...can't....

Pedro: Yes you do!

*mechanic steps sound from the floor....an army of robots approaches*

Noemi: they're here to fetch you. You better prepare yourself to get destroyed after my master's conversation with you....

Laura: Noemi you've gotta help us!

Noemi: I...I....

*the steps come nearer*

Noemi: But I...

*She takes a gadget out of her dress and pushes a button. The whole time her hand is heavily shaking. With a soft crashing sound, a wall open next to Pedro and Laura. Noemi hands Pedro the gadget.*

Noemi:"Here...this is....you have full access to the lair with this....except...echo hall...go...now!"

Laura: what about you?

Noemi: Too weak....have to obey....GO!!!

Laura: But...

Noemi: JUST GO!!!

*Pedro grabs Laura's wrist and drags her into the new opened floor*

Laura:But....

Pedro: there's nothing we can do! We are a better help if we find Cindy or Jimmy and put an end to all this!

Laura: Right...but leaving a friend behind feels....bad....

Pedro: Yes it does....but we have to leave now.

*He pushes a button*

Robot:Where are they?

*The wall closes the instant, the robots appear*

Noemi: They...escaped. I don't know where they are.

Robot: We have to find them, follow us.

Noemi*cold smirk, the brainwash has full control over her again*
No you follow me. When we find them there will be no mercy.

*They go away*

Noemi:*whispers*Not again....
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 10:55 PM

Pedro...

Song of the moment:

"Turn my Head" by Live

*From 3rd person view*

*Jimmy cold and alone in the room*
Anyone, caught in your mystery
Keep it angry
Keep it whispy
I've fallen down
Drunk on your juices

I..
Turn my head
Turn my head
Its aimed at you

*Cindy on the ground* (Orchestra starts playing)
Funky temple
Your dress is torn to shreds
Your eyes are crazy
I bowed to save my head and
I can't forget you
But I can't remember

I..
Turn my head
Turn my head
Its aimed at you

Turn my head
Turn my head
Its aimed at you

*Pedro and Laura at Noemi*
Baby, baby, oh no
We came to love you all day
These bastards are leaving
Somebody's go to stay
Whatever we called you
Its just a name
Just a name

Turn my head
Turn my head
Its aimed at you
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 10:56 PM

Laura...

Cindy*kicks the G.M. in the stomach for the fifth time. The G.M is pretty beaten up by now....it's bruised and its fur is muddy. Cindy lets go of the Girl Monster and stares hateful down at it. Her own breath goes hard. She bends down to the nearly unconscious monster*

Cindy*whisper*: What is going on here? And where. is. Jimmy?

*The G.M. coughs and whines a bit*

G.M: i...can't tell you! I can tell you nothing!

Cindy*grabs the G.M. in the fur (there where a collar would have been) *

Cindy:Tell. Me.

G.M: Never!

*Suddenly steps resound. Too many as to handle for one girl. Cindy curses and turns around, running into a dark floor.*


*She runs through many floors, without knowing why. It's just a feeling....the feeling of a need to choose this direction...until she hears that voices calling.....silent voices.....almost echoes....*

"Give up.....it's too late...."

".....too late...."

*Cindy scoffs and runs faster to where the voices come from*

Cindy: It's never too late for anything!

"....Lost...."

*She sees a blue shimmering light around the edge*

Cindy:What is....

*She reaches the barrier. Stunned she looks through it and discovers....*

Cindy:Jimmy!!!! Oh no...."

*His face is as pale as a ghost, his lips nearly frozen. Hoarfrost is covering evry inch of his body. If it wasn't for the short breaths he still takes , she'd think he was dead.*

Cindy: No! No´!!!!

*she smashes in blind anger and despair against the barrier*

Cindy:Jimmy....please...NO!

*tears start to pour out of her eyes and run over her muddy cheeks. Again and again she smashes against the barrier...finally she sinks on her knees still banging against it. Her fists start getting harmed. She feels the biting cold on her own face, but refuses to give up. Without any rest she smashes against the blue wall*

Cindy: Jimmy! Wake up please....you have to get out here!!! Please, please wake up!!!

*No response....*

*Someone comes near her. She doesn't even care. Cindy just keeps on banging against the barrier. Metallic arms grab her shoulders. "

Cindy: LET GO!!! I have to stay here....!!!

*The arms pull her away. Cindy fights bitterly against them, but she is too weak.....with a wild, yet deperate expression on her face she reaches out with her arm *

Cindy: Jimmy....

*The arms pull her completely away from the echo hall*
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 10:57 PM

Pedro...

*Pedro and Laura runs into a dark room*

Laura: We've been running for a LONG TIME! I'M TIRED!!!

Pedro: It's only been 10 minutes.

Laura: Feels like 12.

Pedro: *Covers his arms* And speaking of feeling, who turned the AC down? It's freaking cold!

Laura: *Blows into her hands and rubs them fast* I dunno. It suddenly got freezing! What kind of room is this, the freezer?

*Suddenly the echoes of large steps is heard*

Pedro: Wait! You hear that?

Laura: Oh NOT AGAIN!! More Moon Monsters!

Pedro: We'd better get outta here!

*The two turn into a corner and sudden;y froze, their eyes widened at the sight of a boy laying lifeless on the floor*

Laura: Oh.. no..

Pedro: JIMMY!!!!!!

*The two rush over to his side and turn him over to see him almost frozen*

Pedro: Oh NO!!! C'mon, we have to do something!!!!

Laura: Why're looking at ME!!!!!!!????

Pedro: I dunno? We need heat, a fire of somekind!!

*Suddenly the door smashes open and in comes the huge Moon Monster*

M.M.: Finally... got you!

Laura: Uhh... maybe we'd better discuss this later before we'd get flaten like a pancake.

Pedro: Agreed. One word: RUN!!!!!!!

*The two make a run for it with Laura carrying Jimmy in her arms. They head right into another hall until...*

Pedro: OH NO!! DEAD END!!!

*The M.M. comes closer*

M.M. Now... you all... DIE

*Suddenly an old like cry sounds from nowhere and a pair of black numchucks comes swinging at the monster's head. It falls to the ground.*

Pedro: Wha.. What happened?

Laura: I dunno.

*Then a black figure dropped in front of them. It turns around to face the kids*

Voice: Are you alright dearies?

Pedro: Wait! I know that voice!

Laura: *Her breath in the cold air* It's... IT'S....

Pedro & Laura: GRANDMA TATERS!?!?!?!?
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 10:58 PM

Laura...

*Cindy is being dragged into a smaller room by the robots, as she finally gets their robot arms off, she faces a certain someone*

Noemi: Look who we found just on the floor...

Cindy: You??! But you...were...with us...You're...you're...A TRAITOR, YOU DAMN....

Noemi: Oh traitor is such a bad word....I changed sides, that's all.

Cindy: I can't believe you! And the others of you, have they 'changed' sides as well?!

Noemi: You mean Pedro and Laura? Nope....not by a long shot....the poor misguided two of them are still trying to rescue you....how awfully stupid...

Cindy: What happened to Jimmy? Why is he lying there on the floor, nearl frozen *she shudders* to death?

Noemi: Ah concerned, aren't we? Well he locked himself up in one of the most dangerous rooms in this lairs....that really wasn't my fault...

Cindy: Yeah, and the Moon Monsters chasing us had nothing to do with it, right?

Noemi: You're not in the position to make fun of me, Cindy.

Cindy: You're glad I'm not in the position to punch in your face!

Noemi: Ah ah ah....don't be naughty...well it doesn't matter anyways...our master has no use for you anymore....

Cindy: How very flattering...

Noemi: Well he has the Granny and he has Neutron....it's all he needs...

Cindy*gasp*: The granny? So you're after her as well? Then she's on our side?

Noemi: I guess so...she didn't seem 'happy' for once, when we chained her...

Cindy: What is this for a plan? Jimmy and Grandma Taters...why all of that?

Noemi : Do you really expect me to tell you the plan just to escape somehow and ruin it? You maybe from a TV show, but I'm not as dumb as these TV villains...

Cindy: TV---oh screw that! And to think Pedro and Laura went wild to save you...I'm disgusted!

Noemi: No need for you to be here anyways...my master intended to let you 'join' us....but due to recent 'events' concerning my person, that isn't necessary anymore...You're useless Cindy. Time to get you off our chests.

Cindy: What are you gonna---?

*The robots take her arms rudely again and drag her deep into the lair's core...in a dark chamber. She cannot see anything, she cannot hear something from outside...all she has is darkness....if somebody doesn't rescue her soon, she will go mad in time*

Cindy: I wished we had never gotten this Grandmother Taters to know....
*She sighs and tries to chase the darkness away by humming a little melody...but she knows, she is so deep under the earth, that no one save the guards will find her any time soon.*


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Laura: Granny? What are you....what are you doing here?

Pedro: You saved our lives!

G.Taters: Oh yes that's right. Well these meanies kidnapped me....and they didn't treat me as a lady...I was not very happy...

Laura: They kidnapped you? Why?

G.Taters: I'm not sure but...oh dear, what is with him?
*she looks at Jimmy's frozen body*

Pedro:We found him frozen like that....

G.Taters: Oh we've gotta make it warm for the poor boy...

Laura: Wait...aren't you one of his enemies?

G.Taters: Is that a reason to let the poor boy freeze to death?

Laura: Well...actually it is, indeed.

Pedro: Laura!

Laura: Oh yeah sorry...I was just confused...

G.Taters: C'mon now honeys, we have to help him now...and then he will be happy again!

Pedro: This is so cliche...

*they all kneel down to help Jimmy*
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 10:58 PM

Pedro...

*Taters examines Jimmy's frozen body*

G'Taters: Oh dear. A few more minutes and he'll be a human icicle. But I know what to do.

*Taters puts her palms in front of Jimmy, glows an orange red and then it starts melting his body. Fog vapors fill the room as Jimmy slowly starts breathing again until his whole body was back to normal tempetures. He awakes to find Pedro and Laura*

Jimmy: uhh... Pedro? Laura?

P & L: *Faces beam* YOU'RE ALIVE!!!!

*The three exchange a friendship hug*

Jimmy: Uh, Pedro. You're holding me.

Pedro: *Gasps* OH! Uh, sorry.

*He puts Jimmy down*

Laura: How do you feel?

Jimmy: *He stagers a bit* Uh, o-okay. A b-bit dizzy. But thanks for saving my life you guys.

Pedro: We didn't save you Jim.

Jimmy: Really? Then who did?

*Pedro points to Taters as Jimmy turns his head around and his face falls in shock*

Jimmy: GRANDMA TATERS!!!!!!!!!???????
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 11:00 PM

Noemi...

Jimmy: U...u.... I must be deaming...Ok Jimmy wake up!!!

Laura: **blinks** U're awake

Taters: **scoffs** And he's a genius...

Pedro: Ahem..no complaints over that

Jimmy: But...but,,,


Taters: Listen up well Neutron. There's something fishy happening in here and I don't know if I will be able to face this on my own as these lunatics in here were after both of us from the beginning and besides..we have a bigger problem... **gazes Laura and Pedro***

Pedro: We haven't tell him anything

Taters: Then u should begin with it so he can get the situation

Jimmy: Hey..guys....where is Cindy?

Pedro and Laura: We don't know **glance to Granny***

Taters: Oh don't look at me. I have no idea were that ranting and coleric girl is...

Jimmy: Ahem´

Laura: She meant it in the good way

Pedro: It doesn't matter now

Laura:We have a slightly not so big problem...

Jimmy: ***blinks***what's happening?
´
Pedro: The word "brainwash" is somehow familiar to you?

Jimmy: **yelling**BRAINWASHED??? SOMEONE BRAINWASHED CINDY??!!


Taters: We don't know where she is!!! Didn't u listen?? Son I think u need to stop daydreaming when someone talks to you

Jimmy: Oh ..right....HEY! I was listening! but cindy took a different hall when we got in here so i don't know where she is..

Pedro: **coughs**maybe u can use ur watch **coughs** to help u on that

Jimmy: U think that if i could use it i would be asking? **scowls**

Pedro: **shrugs*** just trying to help

Laura: ok...we're off topic again

Taters: Can u just tell him that ur friend got brainwashed and almost killed both of you and almost tortured me instead of arguing anything about the blondy one?

Jimmy: WHAT!!!!!!!!!!????

Laura: Jimmy...noemi got brainwashed...

Pedro: and we have no idea of who's commanding her in this instant

Tatters: If she finds us we're doomed.

Laura: We have to snap her out of that just as we did when we met her and she let us escaoe

Pedro: Yes that's true, but how can we reach her without being prisoners of who knows????

Jimmy: oh man, then cindy is in big trouble right??

Tatters: Yes ur girlfriend is in trouble too

Jimmy: ***blushed***hey!! she's not my girlfriend!

Tatters: She is and i can proove it


jimmy:**blushing hard** can we talk about this later perhaps???

Laura: **yells** Can we focus on getting my friend back to norma??? I'm not leaving this place without her!! besides havent u consider that cindy can get into the same boat???

Pedro: We're doom

Jimmy: Not helping...

Taters: ***walks looking at a huge rock formation*** what is this?? **moves a tool kit from the ground that was hidden on the back of the rock*** what in the world???

***an unbearable rumble was heard and everyone tried to cover their ears without success as the floor trembled so hard at the same time. Tatters was on the other side alone while Jimmy laid on the ground helplessly, just as LAura and Pedro. The three of them stared blankly to a sparkling light coming from the rock where Tatters was....

Jimmy: m-m-my body
Laura: I c-can't...
Pedro: m-move
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 11:01 PM

Laura...

The man in the shadow watches. How pathetic these little humans look...do they really think they have a chance against him? If he had a heart he would feel impressed by their bravery. But he isn't human. He never was and he never want to be human.

They are so weak....their lives so short. They all have these feelings...emotions that drive them to do things without calculating before. He doesn't need this. He can't afford a weak spot like this.

Looking at humans for centuries he still hasn't figured out what makes them so passionate. Don't they know, how short their live is? Don't they see how meaningless their feelings are? The feelings they value so high....why?

He watches it...he always did. But he can never feel the same. Maybe he will never understand them. Compared to his long life what did these short flames of emotion mean? He shakes his head.

Humans are his tools. As are the alien monsters he had hired. These flies can never bring him down. They are careless...overhasty...powerless.

He thinks of the little girl human in the darkest chamber under earth. A human would feel pity for her. He is cold. She thinks the tiny humans will rescue her. Another thing he doesn't understand. Hope.

Doesn't she see her situation? There is no way anyone can rescue her. Yet she still hopes. Her emotions are silly...and they will destroy her with time. her friends won't rescue her. It isn't possible. Her unfullfilled hope will kill her from the inside...why do humans value hope so high?

It is an unlogical thing. It harms you more than it can help you.

He doesn't need hope. He has power.

He can sense another feeling in her heart. This silly affection towards one another of these milions of worthless humans. She keeps it as a treasure in her heart....he knows it is a curse instead.

Love made her defenseless. She had the oppotunity to escape, but she kept on trying to rescue this little boy.

Why? Love dies quicker than she can imagine. Doesn't she see it?

Doesn't she see if it wasn't for her feelings towards that boy, she never would be in that situation?

Humans are silly. Ridiculous are their emotions.

One of his mechanical servants brings him a message. They all have gone into his trap...the humans...the grandmother.

Should he smile because of the success? No. He always knew they wouldn't succeed. Why be glad about something so obvious? It doesn't make sense at all.

He gives orders. A next step to fulfill his plan. His master piece.

He spent too long time trying to understand these humans. Now he knows what they and their emotions are.

Worthless.

Or how should their simple feelings rescue each other?
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 11:02 PM

Pedro...

*In the dark room Cindy is sitting with her arms chained to the wall. A moon monster is sleeping next to her*

Cindy: *Struggling* Dang! I can't get out of these chains!

*Her body finally give up*

Cindy: No, no, no.... *Begins weeping* Jimmy. I'm so sorry! I tried but... but... *Her tears starts flowing from her eyes* I couldn't save you. I... I... never got the chance... to tell... y-you that I... I... *with a haunting whispher* loved you...

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Pedro: J-Jimmy wha-what's going on?!?!?

Jimmy: I-I don't know! We're being pulled down by some strong gravtational pull!!!

Laura: I'm getting sick just breathing!!!

Jimmy: TATERS!!! DO SOMETHING!!!

G'Taters: Light... too bright.. can't see!

*Suddenly Pedro notices Laura change. She starts looking hostile*

Laura: What's.. happening to... me?

Pedro: *Her emotionless look reminded him of Noemi* OH NO!!! THAT LIGHT MIGHT BE THE ONE THAT BRAINWASHED NOEMI!!!!

Jimmy: LAURA!!! DON'T LOOK AT THE LIGHT!!!

*Pedro struggles to move and crawls to Laura, whose about to be possesed. Then, just on reaction and impulse, he did the unthinkable: he gave her the breath of life. She collapses to the ground.*

Jimmy: NOW TATERS!!!!!

*G'Taters laser eyes blasts the light and explodes. The room returns to normal and Laura wakes up dizzy*

Laura: Ow! My head. What happend?

Pedro: Well, uhh... you see... I...

Jimmy: I saved your life Laura.

Laura: *Her face instantly beams* OMG!!!! YOU SAVED ME?!? YOU'RE THE GREATEST!!! *Gives Jimmy a BIG hug*

Jimmy: Ok... thats enough.

Taters: I've found the exit. Let's go!

*Everyone leaves while Pedro walks behind*

Jimmy: What's a matter Pedro?

Pedro: Well, I dunno why I did that? I didn't think. I just... did it.

*Suddenly Jimmy's device activated*

Jimmy: Hey! It's Cindy! She's still ailve!!!

Pedro: REALLY?!?

Jimmy: Cindy? Can you read me? Cindy?

*All he could hear was static. But the blue light was blinking which indicated Cindy's wacth was still on*

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Cindy: *GASP* Neutron's wacth is on!! HE'S STILL ALIVE!!! Opps!!

*She rembered to stay quiet. With her knowing Jimmy's still alive, her hope renewed and so did her confidence.*

Cindy: *Sigh* Thank God Jimmy's alive. Now I gotta figure a way out of here.

*She observes the guard sleeping in front of her. The key to her chains was strapped to his waist. He was in walking distance from her but she couldn't reach it since her hands are tied. Then she looked at her feet, they were bare*

Cindy: *Thinking* It's a good thing I'm not wearing shoes. Now, let's see...

*She reached for the guard's waist with her bare foot. Using her toes she put the key in between her big toe and her second toe and slowly slipped the key from the guard. She then brought her foot to her arm and unlocks the left chain. Then with her left hand, now free, unlocked her other arm*

Cindy: *Quietly* Thank you Gymnastics

*She crept silently passed the guard and out of the dark room. Once out she turned her wacth on in an attempt to contact Jimmy*
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 11:03 PM

Laura...

Cindy:*whisper* Oh..come on...make contact...make contact....!

*the watch glows, but the contact won't come*

Cindy: Oh crap...there has to be a possibilty....

*she creeps slowly further, her white clothes getting muddier and muddier...from the distance she sees a shadow. Afraid, she clangs tightly to the wall as not to get discovered*

*Steps echoe through the floor...heavy steps*

Moon Monster: The master told us the humans were under the same mind control as the human woman before...

Girl Moon Monster: I don't care about the master's plans, so stop talking about it. I just do my job and that's it!

Moon Monster: Then why are we going to see the prisoner?

Girl Moon Monster: Because the little brat punched me way too hard, that's why! Now shut up and let's tell her that her dear friends have changed sides*evil laughter*

Moon Monster: I can't wait to see her desperate expression...

Girl Moon Monster: C'mon..enough chit chat...these bruises need to get paid for...

*Behind the wall Cindy sinks slowly to the ground. Her heart stops beating for a second....brain wash? That was the reason why Noemi had acted as a traitor....
Her hope vanishes withe every passing second....they have just done the same to Pedro...Laura...Taters....
but worst of all Jimmy! Tears dwell up in her eyes. How can somebody make him to their mindless toy? It just couldn't be....she cannot believe it....
Her watch blinks as it finally made contact with Jimmy...and Cindy hears the voice, she longed to her so much*

Jimmy: Cindy? Cindy can you read me??? Where are you? We are very concerned!

*Cindy glances blankly at the little gadget around her wrist...her heart breaks a bit more as she hears Jimmy's next sentence:*

Jimmy: please Cindy, say something. Urgh! I am so worried about you, please say something!

*There it is...he says that he cares about her...the words she wanted to hear so badly, ever since she knew him...and now...now that he finally says them...he is mind controlled...the words she always thought to be her dream come true...were nothing but a trap for her...the mysterious force wants to capture her again. Again Jimmy's voice echoes in her ears:*

Jimmy: Please oh please Cindy tell me where you are! I..I am so afraid because of you...I need to know whether you are okay...I care more about you than anyone else!

*Words...nice words, but nothing more*

*She gazes with tear veiled eyes at her watch and pulls it off. With a blank yet desperate voice she says:*

Cindy: No....you do not.

*She throws the watch against the wall. It cracks...then the blue light goes off*

*Cindy's cheeks go wet as she looks at the poor remains of the watch*

Cindy:*whisper* You never did.

*She remains sitting there to tired to keep on fighting*


Laura: And? What did she say? Where is she???

Pedro: Jimmy! C'mon tell us?

*Jimmy glances paralyzed at the watch. Stunned he turns around and faces them*

Jimmy: Her watch....it's...it's...broken....

Laura: WHAT? Oh my goodness, is she...?

Jimmy: No you...you don't understand...she...did...she did break it!

Pedro:*gasp*: But...but why would she do that???

*Jimmy just gazes glumly down at his wrist. With a complete blank expression he shakes his head*

G.Taters: Sweetheart, you have to tell us what happened....

Laura: Yes Jimmy, tell us!

Jimmy: I asked her where she is, okay?! She wouldn't answer! So I begged her and told her that we all were so worried about her....*his voice cracks*

Pedro: And....?

Jimmy: And...and I told her...that I....that I care about her...but...

Laura: You told her WHAT???

Jimmy*angry glare*: YES I DID!!! And do you want to know what happened then??? She said : No you don't and all I heard afterwards was a smashing sound!!!!

*Silence*

Laura*helpless voice*: Jimmy...I'm I'm sorry...

Jimmy: Yeah, yeah ! Just leave me alone!!! All of you!

Pedro: Jimmy...

Jimmy: No! Just leave it be! It's no great deal, really! The only girl I ever really loved just didn't believe me , shunned me and ruined every chance for us of finding her, but WHO CARES!!!

Laura: You do. And we do,too.

Jimmy*scoff*: Yeah right...you're just some weird fans...whatever could you know!

Laura: Jimmy..yes I admit we were just fans...and I exagerrated my outbursts...but now...I mean we are your friends Jimmy, you have to believe us!

Pedro: She's right. We are on your side Jimmy...you don't have to push us away...

Jimmy: I guess...

Pedro: Really! We will help you and we will find her Jimmy, I promise!

Jimmy: Don't do that....there is nothing we can do anymore, anyways....

Laura: Oh but there is...we will find that mysterious boss , we will free Noemi no matter what it costs, we will find Cindy and we will kick this shadow guy's sorry butt!

Jimmy*tired smirk* You sound like Cindy...

Laura*grin* Just because I'm your friend, doesn't mean I'm not your fan anymore...

Pedro*rolls eyes*

Grandma Taters*sniffs, pulls out a tissue*: You children make me so happy!!!


*Cindy just sits there...she still cannot believe it...all her friends...under mind control...and they want to catch her...she knows she has to get away...but she simply cannot...she has become much too weak...and desperate....*

*A strong hand suddenly covers her mouth from behind. Cindy makes struggles to break free but gives up soon. What is the point now? she has no chance....
Her hair band slips to the ground. Immediately her full blond her swings down her back framing her pale face and giving her a wild yet angelic look. The figure that holds her mouth covered, drags her along the floor. *

*As the person speaks for the very first time, Cindy recognizes a female voice*

Mysterious stranger: You have to stay quiet, till I brought you out here, you hear me?
*For the lack of doing anything better Cindy simply nods...somehow the voice sounds familiar*

*Half an hour later they have reached a strange underground basis...Cindy, who still hasn't seen the real face of the stranger, who wears a dark hood, ísn't even sure whether they are still in the lair...or somewhere completely different....*

Mysterious stranger: As you can see, Cindy, we aren't anymore in the enemies lair...we aren't even on earth anymore...you see we just passed a dimension gate...thsi is the dimension of the rebels...

*Cindy blinks confused...all around her is strange technology ...an odd red light glows nearly everywhere. startled she stutters:*

Cindy: Other dimension? rebels? And and...why..why do you know my name?

Mysterious stranger: You will see....

*She slowly lifts her hood. A very familiar face comes to the surfaces.*

Cindy*gasp * :blink: A-A...APRIL????

*The alien girl with the green skin the purple eyes and the deep violet hair nods gently*

April: Yes Cindy it is me...

Cindy: But how? Why? Where?

April: I will explain this all later to you...important is just that you are safe now...

Cindy: But what...why are you here?

April: As I told you...we're rebels from planet Gorlock. We made this dimension as to our protecttion and main basis.

Cindy: But...what has Gorlock to do with this plot here on earth?

April:This creature you are fighting...it is our enemy as well...and a great threat to our folk.

*Cindy takes a deep breath*

Cindy: Meldar?

*April laughs bitterly and shakes sadly her head*

April: No...unfortunately not...this creature is much more powerful...we don't know really WHO he is...but he is as old as both our worlds...and the greatest danger we have ever faced.

Cindy: But you have immense power....Jimmy gave you Meldar's-

April: We used all their power to stabilize this dimension...they're useless now. I'm afraid.

Cindy:Oh....

April: I came to search for your help, especially for Jimmy Neutron's help...but I found you alone in the enemies lair instead....

*Cindy closes hurt her eyes as memories come back*

Cindy: April...The enemy...he has taken the control over the mind of some real good friends of us...

April: Yes but...

Cindy: And over Jimmy's mind, as well!

April: WHAT???

Cindy: Yes.

April: Oh no...there goes our fine plan...no I'm not willing to give up yet!!! Then we will free him and your friends! But first...Cindy you look awful. Come with me...I will get you some water to wash and new clothes....

*Fifteen minutes later Cindy comes back...clean and in new clothes...she wears a Gorlockian batttlesuit...but due to her body structure which is much more fragile than the one of a Gorlock she wears the lightest cloth the Gorlocks could modify. Her suit consists of a lightgreen shimmery upperpart with just one lightly armored sleeve. The upper part is adorned with strange glowing ornaments , yet she can feel that the cloth is very strong. Gorlockian handwork is nothing to joke with. For the lower part she wears a light skirt made of shimmery cloth that is cut higher on one side than on the other. Underneath the skirt she wears emerald massive greaves, equally adorned with ornaments.
She looks very pretty with her hair down and her new outfit...but her face is still hopeless, her eyes lack any sparkle.
April eyes her.

April: I think it is time now to tell you everything.

*Cindy just shakes sadly her ehad, but follows April*


On the ground of the floor in the lair, only her hair band rememebers of her presesence, which has fallen down to the ground, waiting for someone to find it....
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Posted 27 August 2008 - 11:38 PM

Well...that's as far as we got, yet.... ^_^
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Posted 28 August 2008 - 04:31 AM

that's gr8 :lol: of course silly i would like to keep writing :D
Remember that i was in exams when i stopped posting n for the other crazy dancing fic

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Posted 28 August 2008 - 01:58 PM

I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!

Sorry for poppingin randomly, but I had to say something.
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Posted 28 August 2008 - 09:33 PM

^_^ :lol: That was kinda fun to read
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