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Jimmy Neutron Boy Genius: Big Brother
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#162
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Posted 05 November 2008 - 09:30 PM
Come on Rachel, and reply to my story.
Did you tell her Athena?
Did you tell her Athena?
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Posted 08 November 2008 - 02:07 AM
Oh my gosh, that was a funny chapter Gretchen!
That was great. Keep it up girl.
ToKi
That was great. Keep it up girl.
ToKi
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Posted 08 November 2008 - 03:30 AM
Awww!
Great chapter. So cute, and LOL, a bit creepy and hilarious with Carl winking at Judy and blowing a kiss... :blink: So true to the show! XD And Hugh, clueless as ever... *shakes head*
Great!
Sorry it took me a while to read and reply to it. I've been...busy and sidetracked with things. *sigh* I gotta get a hold of myself! :lol:
~Rachel~
Great chapter. So cute, and LOL, a bit creepy and hilarious with Carl winking at Judy and blowing a kiss... :blink: So true to the show! XD And Hugh, clueless as ever... *shakes head*
Great!
Sorry it took me a while to read and reply to it. I've been...busy and sidetracked with things. *sigh* I gotta get a hold of myself! :lol:
~Rachel~
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Posted 08 November 2008 - 04:14 AM
Hey thanks for finally replying, Rachel.
I said I was gonna post chapter 25 tonight, but I can't think of any ideas right now.
I'm going to try and think of some, so I can post tomorrow.
I said I was gonna post chapter 25 tonight, but I can't think of any ideas right now.
I'm going to try and think of some, so I can post tomorrow.
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Posted 09 November 2008 - 03:51 AM
Okay, I have my idea for Chapter 25. This chapter has two parts, so I'm splitting it up. I'm only doing Part 1 today.
So enjoy.
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Chapter 25 Part 1: Narrator
Over the weeks, Jimmy's baby siblings had been growing. Before he knew it, his sisters were one month old.
Jimmy was getting excited to see when the girls would start doing intellectual things. He had learned to crawl at four months old. He couldn't wait to see if they would be smart or not.
But today, he had something else to do besides loving his sisters of course. His class was going on a field trip to a science lab. He would be interested in this of course.
"I'll actually get to see real scientists," Jimmy thought.
He thought of taking some of his inventions to show the scientists, but he didn't want to annoy them.
The kids in his class got on the bus. Jimmy sat next to Carl, Sheen sat behind them with Libby, and Cindy sat in front of the with Betty. So Jimmy was around his friends.
Their conversations on the bus ride there were about Ultralord, llamas, experiments, and some arguing too.
"Why do we have to go to a boring science lab?" Sheen complained. "I want to go to an Ultralord museum."
"No, I want to go to the llama zoo," Carl said.
"No, Music World," Libby said.
"Music World would be cool, Libby, but Sheen come on, Ultralord museums, and Carl a llama zoo? This will be exciting," Betty said.
"Yeah, I agree with you, Betty. No one wants to go to an Ultralord museum, UltraDork, and no one wants to go to a llama zoo, LlamaBoy," Cindy said.
"Well, no one wants to go to a science lab. This will be soooooo boring," Sheen said.
"Just try to enjoy it you guys," Jimmy said.
"Okay," Sheen and Carl said.
That's how their conversations went throughout the rest of the bus ride, arguing, and more Ultralord and llama talk.
Finally, they got to the science lab.
Jimmy was fascinated with all the expereiments in there. Everyone in the class was in fact. Yes, even Sheen and Carl.
One of the scientists came over to greet them.
"Welcome to the Retroville Science Lab, I see we have a fifth grade class here from Lindburgh Elementary school," he said.
"Yes, well my class just did an experiment that they really enjoyed," Ms. Fowl said.
"Well then, they'll enjoy our experiments too," the scientist said.
He showed the class some of the experiments which they all loved. The other scientists came out too.
They found out Jimmy was a genius by the way he described the experiments to his classmates instead of the scientists or Ms. Fowl telling them.
"Well, you're very intelligent boy," the scientist said, ''would you like to help us make an experiment in the lab?"
"I would love too," Jimmy said.
"Oh great, Nerdtron is going to blow up this whole place if he makes an experiment," Cindy said.
"Cindy, I thought we were being nice to each other," Jimmy said.
"Well, I got tired of being nice to you. Don't ruin this field trip for us Big Brother Nerdtron," Cindy said.
"I'm not Vortex. You'll see. I'll make these scientists an invention that will blow them away," Jimmy said.
"We'll see," Cindy said.
Then Jimmy did a mad breath at her, and walked away with the scientists to help them with an experiment in their lab.
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Oh, how is Jimm'y invention going to turn out? Will the scientsists be astonished by this young kids scientific talent, or will they be mad at him, and kick him out of the lab and ruin his field trip?
Find out in Part 2.
So enjoy.
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Chapter 25 Part 1: Narrator
Over the weeks, Jimmy's baby siblings had been growing. Before he knew it, his sisters were one month old.
Jimmy was getting excited to see when the girls would start doing intellectual things. He had learned to crawl at four months old. He couldn't wait to see if they would be smart or not.
But today, he had something else to do besides loving his sisters of course. His class was going on a field trip to a science lab. He would be interested in this of course.
"I'll actually get to see real scientists," Jimmy thought.
He thought of taking some of his inventions to show the scientists, but he didn't want to annoy them.
The kids in his class got on the bus. Jimmy sat next to Carl, Sheen sat behind them with Libby, and Cindy sat in front of the with Betty. So Jimmy was around his friends.
Their conversations on the bus ride there were about Ultralord, llamas, experiments, and some arguing too.
"Why do we have to go to a boring science lab?" Sheen complained. "I want to go to an Ultralord museum."
"No, I want to go to the llama zoo," Carl said.
"No, Music World," Libby said.
"Music World would be cool, Libby, but Sheen come on, Ultralord museums, and Carl a llama zoo? This will be exciting," Betty said.
"Yeah, I agree with you, Betty. No one wants to go to an Ultralord museum, UltraDork, and no one wants to go to a llama zoo, LlamaBoy," Cindy said.
"Well, no one wants to go to a science lab. This will be soooooo boring," Sheen said.
"Just try to enjoy it you guys," Jimmy said.
"Okay," Sheen and Carl said.
That's how their conversations went throughout the rest of the bus ride, arguing, and more Ultralord and llama talk.
Finally, they got to the science lab.
Jimmy was fascinated with all the expereiments in there. Everyone in the class was in fact. Yes, even Sheen and Carl.
One of the scientists came over to greet them.
"Welcome to the Retroville Science Lab, I see we have a fifth grade class here from Lindburgh Elementary school," he said.
"Yes, well my class just did an experiment that they really enjoyed," Ms. Fowl said.
"Well then, they'll enjoy our experiments too," the scientist said.
He showed the class some of the experiments which they all loved. The other scientists came out too.
They found out Jimmy was a genius by the way he described the experiments to his classmates instead of the scientists or Ms. Fowl telling them.
"Well, you're very intelligent boy," the scientist said, ''would you like to help us make an experiment in the lab?"
"I would love too," Jimmy said.
"Oh great, Nerdtron is going to blow up this whole place if he makes an experiment," Cindy said.
"Cindy, I thought we were being nice to each other," Jimmy said.
"Well, I got tired of being nice to you. Don't ruin this field trip for us Big Brother Nerdtron," Cindy said.
"I'm not Vortex. You'll see. I'll make these scientists an invention that will blow them away," Jimmy said.
"We'll see," Cindy said.
Then Jimmy did a mad breath at her, and walked away with the scientists to help them with an experiment in their lab.
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Oh, how is Jimm'y invention going to turn out? Will the scientsists be astonished by this young kids scientific talent, or will they be mad at him, and kick him out of the lab and ruin his field trip?
Find out in Part 2.
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Posted 09 November 2008 - 04:06 AM
Awesome Chapter Gretch!!
Can't wait for part 2!! ^_^
^Kaytron^ :ph43r:
Can't wait for part 2!! ^_^
^Kaytron^ :ph43r:
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Posted 09 November 2008 - 04:07 AM
Kewl. LOL, let's hope Jimmy doesn't cause mass destruction... :blink:
~Rachel~
~Rachel~
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Posted 10 November 2008 - 11:35 PM
Oh thanks so much for replying to my story Athena.
I will put Part 2 up on Friday.
So I'll see you then.
See ya on Friday, Athena,
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I will put Part 2 up on Friday.
So I'll see you then.
See ya on Friday, Athena,
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Posted 11 November 2008 - 01:43 AM
Really good story Gretchen.
I am sorry if I haven't been replying, but I have been reading your story.
Keep up the great work!
Let's see what kind of destruction Jimmy is going to make with his experiments.
Post soon.
I am sorry if I haven't been replying, but I have been reading your story.
Keep up the great work!
Let's see what kind of destruction Jimmy is going to make with his experiments.
Post soon.
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Posted 11 November 2008 - 09:00 PM
Thanks for the reply to my story, Hannah.
Part 2 will be up on Friday, so keep waiting.
Part 2 will be up on Friday, so keep waiting.
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Posted 13 November 2008 - 07:27 PM
Grrr! *gets impatient* C'mon, hurry up, Friday!!! :mad:
Yours Truly,
Yours Truly,
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I'D forgive you, FJ... <3<3
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Posted 14 November 2008 - 05:24 PM
Yay! Friday's here!! :D
Yours Truly,
Yours Truly,
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Posted 17 November 2008 - 10:00 PM
Good chapters, Gretchen.
Update soon.
Your BFF,
Millicent
Update soon.
Your BFF,
Millicent
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Posted 23 November 2008 - 06:42 PM
Hey I'm sorry for not updating this for awhile.
I was busy with schoolwork and then I got sick.
I was not able to come on IDOJ for awhile.
i will update this soon. I promise.
Sorry to keep you guys waiting.
I was busy with schoolwork and then I got sick.
I was not able to come on IDOJ for awhile.
i will update this soon. I promise.
Sorry to keep you guys waiting.
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Posted 29 November 2008 - 12:58 AM
Alright, it's time to update my story.
I hope you're ready for it.
Remember, Jimmy and his friends are on a field trip, and Jimmy has just been asked by a scientist to help him with an experiment.
It's a short one. So get ready.
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Chapter 25 Part 2
Jimmy was excited when he saw all the eqipment in the lab.
"Woa, this technology is absolutley incredible!."
"Well, we're glad you like it. We need your help on creating an experiment that will be on display in the museum."
"I would be glad to help."
So Jimmy helped the scientist with the experiment.
In the meantime, the rest of the class was waiting to see how Jimmy did.
"We better get out of here. Neutron may blow up the place. He might get us all killed." Cindy said.
"Hey Jimmy would never want to kill us. He's too nice," Carl said.
"Okay, maybe not kill us, but get us all injured." Cindy said.
Time went by. It was almost time for lunch. Jimmy wasn't out yet. Where could he have gone? They all hoped he was okay.
Finally after twenty minutes, the scientist came out with Jimmy, and a scowl on his face.
"What did Neutron do?" Cindy asked.
"This young man almost ruined my experiment! He spilled a chemical on my lab coat, and he made the other scientists run away! This kid isn't a genius, if he was, he would have known how to do the experiment!" the scientist yelled.
"Well maybe if your instructions were more explicit and precise I could have done it correctly. Maybe you're not real scientists!" Jimmy yelled furiously.
"How dare you insult me like that, you little brat! Your parents will be really ashamed to have a kid like you! You're crazy experiments could kill or injure anyone! You could make someone go crazy, and send to a mental hospital!"
"All this stuff you're saying is not true. My friends see my make experiments all the time, they don't hurt anyone, right Sheen and Carl?"
"Yeah, Jimmy's inventions are the best!"
"Yeah," said Carl.
"Okay but those are inventions. He's good at inventing, but not experimenting."
"It's the same thing..."
"No, it is not! You've ruined my day! I don't want to see you anymore! Get out of my science lab and museum.!"
"But our field trip isn't over yet!"
"I don't care! I want you out of here! All of you! Go away!"
The scientist took them all to the door, and pusjhed them out.
"Never come back. Any of you!"
Jimmy was fuming with anger, but most of the kids were happy about it.
They were happy their trip was canceled, they didn't like the museum anyway.
"Well, claaaass, brawk. You heard the scientissssssssst. Get on the buuuss, brawk." Miss. Fowl said.
All the kids went on the bus, and went back to school, but since no lesson plans were made for the class, they just had recess for the rest of the day.
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There you go, there's Part 2.
Enjoy.
See you all later.
I hope you're ready for it.
Remember, Jimmy and his friends are on a field trip, and Jimmy has just been asked by a scientist to help him with an experiment.
It's a short one. So get ready.
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Chapter 25 Part 2
Jimmy was excited when he saw all the eqipment in the lab.
"Woa, this technology is absolutley incredible!."
"Well, we're glad you like it. We need your help on creating an experiment that will be on display in the museum."
"I would be glad to help."
So Jimmy helped the scientist with the experiment.
In the meantime, the rest of the class was waiting to see how Jimmy did.
"We better get out of here. Neutron may blow up the place. He might get us all killed." Cindy said.
"Hey Jimmy would never want to kill us. He's too nice," Carl said.
"Okay, maybe not kill us, but get us all injured." Cindy said.
Time went by. It was almost time for lunch. Jimmy wasn't out yet. Where could he have gone? They all hoped he was okay.
Finally after twenty minutes, the scientist came out with Jimmy, and a scowl on his face.
"What did Neutron do?" Cindy asked.
"This young man almost ruined my experiment! He spilled a chemical on my lab coat, and he made the other scientists run away! This kid isn't a genius, if he was, he would have known how to do the experiment!" the scientist yelled.
"Well maybe if your instructions were more explicit and precise I could have done it correctly. Maybe you're not real scientists!" Jimmy yelled furiously.
"How dare you insult me like that, you little brat! Your parents will be really ashamed to have a kid like you! You're crazy experiments could kill or injure anyone! You could make someone go crazy, and send to a mental hospital!"
"All this stuff you're saying is not true. My friends see my make experiments all the time, they don't hurt anyone, right Sheen and Carl?"
"Yeah, Jimmy's inventions are the best!"
"Yeah," said Carl.
"Okay but those are inventions. He's good at inventing, but not experimenting."
"It's the same thing..."
"No, it is not! You've ruined my day! I don't want to see you anymore! Get out of my science lab and museum.!"
"But our field trip isn't over yet!"
"I don't care! I want you out of here! All of you! Go away!"
The scientist took them all to the door, and pusjhed them out.
"Never come back. Any of you!"
Jimmy was fuming with anger, but most of the kids were happy about it.
They were happy their trip was canceled, they didn't like the museum anyway.
"Well, claaaass, brawk. You heard the scientissssssssst. Get on the buuuss, brawk." Miss. Fowl said.
All the kids went on the bus, and went back to school, but since no lesson plans were made for the class, they just had recess for the rest of the day.
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There you go, there's Part 2.
Enjoy.
See you all later.
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Posted 29 November 2008 - 01:10 AM
I had to think of what I wanted to happen to Jimmy.
I figured to make it happen like the way it did.
But thanks for replying, Athena.
Now I need Rachel to reply.
See ya,
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I figured to make it happen like the way it did.
But thanks for replying, Athena.
Now I need Rachel to reply.
See ya,
:bff:
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Posted 29 November 2008 - 01:15 AM
Well, there's 7 more chapters left of my story.
In one of those chapters, Jimmy goes back to that museum, and shows that scientist what his experiments are actually like.
I can't say which chapter, though.
See ya,
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In one of those chapters, Jimmy goes back to that museum, and shows that scientist what his experiments are actually like.
I can't say which chapter, though.
See ya,
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