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[sunnstar]

Enjoy Chapter 7!! And thanks soo much, everyone who joined Cosmic Cindy!!

(The chapter IS longer, I'm just too lazy to type the rest of it right now, but it's been a few days and you guys should get SOMETHING. :P)

Chapter VII, Part 1

Nick, needless to say, was pretty surprised to see Cindy’s attire when she met him at the Café. He stared at her, wide-eyed and open-mouth, as she sat down in silence.
“So, what are you having?” Cindy asked meekly, a minute after the waiter handed them their menus.
Nick couldn’t ignore a direct question. “The chicken,” he said. His voice cracked a little from not being used all night.
Cindy nodded. “Me too.”
Nick nodded too and hid behind his menu.
Cindy wondered why he hadn’t cancelled either.
“Excuse me, are you done?” A much friendlier, less bored-looking waiter was standing in front of them, pen poised on pad.
“Yes, two chickens people, a soup appetizer,” Nick said, grateful for an excuse not to look at Cindy.
Cindy frowned: why hadn’t he asked if she wanted an appetizer?
“And a small salad, please,” she added.
The waiter disappeared with their menus. Cindy attempted to make small talk and Nick answered every sentence with three or four words. Then she wondered whether Nick would have ordered the chicken for her had they not been having the same thing.
Ten boring minutes later, their food arrived. Nick seemed relieved to have an excuse not to speak and Cindy silently wished they had gone to a movie. Anxiously, she checked her watch. Five to eight—uh oh.
She looked at her watch every sixty sentence. Four minutes left.
Three minutes left.
Two minutes left.
One minute left.
Then it happened—as quickly and punctual as if it had been on a timer. She was holding her fork and knife, holding her chicken, and all of a sudden she erupted in green. It started from her feet, she could feel it, but unlike last time, when it had spread slowly, color ran up her legs like someone was slathering paint on her. Then it fell down her arms from her fingertips faster than green spray-on sunscreen. Finally, everything from her airline down turned the same color as the rest of her body.
Cindy looked down at her plate, allowing the brim of her hat to shield her face; Nick, who was determinedly avoiding her gaze, didn’t notice a thing. But something happened that he couldn’t possibly ignore:
Every inch of Cindy that was green suddenly burned and since, of course, there was not one cell of skin that wasn’t, the poor girl was nearly on fire.
Cindy gave a squeak of pain and Nick looked up, horrified, backed away and toppled over his chair.

[Chica_Andromeda]

OSNAP MISS RACHEL.

Seriously though, even if it WAS a little sneek preview thing, I loved it. PLEASE POST THE REST SOON!!!!! *hides pitchfork behind back*

EDIT: Oh wow. WAY AWESOME RACHEL!!!! :thumbsup: You did such a great job!! Keep it up, my amazing author co-admin! ;)

[sunnstar]

K, since dis is a long chapter I'll split it into parts, for benefit of my lazyness. Enjoy!

[Justine<3]

Hey!

Great! It's awesome. Nick isn't too nice. :mad: But I hope Cindy will be OK. PLEASE Post it soon! Don't be lazy!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1



With Love From A Friend,
JimmysGurl11 :P

[sunnstar]

Awww, thanks!

[Alex]

Awww, thanks!

You're thanking her for telling you to get off your :uhoh: and work on the fanfic? :blink: :wacko:

Anyways, good preview!

[AnDrEa]

oh! wow that is so....ennervating!! how could you leave us with that kind of ending! I need to know more!!!! wow that was awesome! cindy and nick!! omg!!! and what about the other people? and oh!! (can u see I'm writing incoplete sentences and of the kind? well it's the excitment and sus...pense lol!!) as always, please write more soon plz!!! don't make us wait an eternity!!! (u never do that, but I like the sound of it lol)


o:) Andre o:)

[sunnstar]

LOL. Thanks Andrea! I love it when you compliment me. =D

**just noticed Chica's edit** Thanks, author and co-admin!!

@AE: yes. =D

[AnDrEa]

LOL. Thanks Andrea! I love it when you compliment me. =D

oh really?? and I really love when u write more chapters lol :P no, realle thank u!!


o:) Andre o:)

[loopin]

Here, I hve an illustration for ya!

It's kinda crappy, but you cn use it if you want! ^_^

[sunnstar]

LOL@Andrea

OOH, thanks Loopin! I'm kinda done with that whole illustrating thing, tho :P

[loopin]

Okay! Just posted it in case... and not to mention, I was bored and had the sudden urge to illustate something....
BUT any way, GREAT job! You've got a VERY original idea, and you've gone way into detail! Exellent!

[sunnstar]

LOL, thanks!!

[Beks]

This is getting good! *grabs popcorn*

[loopin]

*Nods, and grabs ultra-large soda*

[sunnstar]

Aww, thanks, you twooz!

[Alex]

*Nods, and grabs ultra-large soda*

Fanfic go byebye? :'( WAAAA! :'( I WANT MORE FANFIC!

And some of that soda...

[sunnstar]

LOL.

[gummiworld]

You know may favorite about being super busy? When I do sit down to read my favorite fanfics, there's a TON of chapters that you don't have to wait for inbetween!!!! WHOOT WHOOT!


This is some seriously cool shnaps, Rachel, and I would just like to say for the thousandth time that you rock my socks. I luv this story and can't wait to so how Cindy, Nick, and Jimmy deal with this one. I like that the source of conflict is a creative one. (A invention that malfunctions and turns some one into a progressively 70s-esque color code? Can you say unique! I can.) Fabulous, dah-ling, and update soon. SQUEE! :bock:

[Alex]

*Cough*FANFIC!*Cough* :ph43r: I didn't say anything.