cool congrats!!! look I'm almost 800 idk how that hapened either! :P I thought I still was in 600 lolEDIT:: AH!! I have 604 posts!! How the heck did that happen?! Yesterday I was celebrating my 500th post anniversary!
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Posted 22 August 2007 - 08:22 PM
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Posted 22 August 2007 - 10:16 PM
I want 1000!! ^_^ I cantwait. lolcool congrats!!! look I'm almost 800 idk how that hapened either! :P I thought I still was in 600 lol
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Posted 22 August 2007 - 11:37 PM
Cool! I can't wait to see what Carl does!
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Posted 23 August 2007 - 12:56 AM
ahhh!!!! it wasn't boring, don't worry! it was funny when Future Libby said, "Jimmy knows where you live." I liked it... uh... a lot.
[I was going to say it in Spanish, but my three years of French got in the way in my brain. It's very messy up there. ^_^ ]
keep that pen a writin'!
[I was going to say it in Spanish, but my three years of French got in the way in my brain. It's very messy up there. ^_^ ]
keep that pen a writin'!
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Posted 23 August 2007 - 03:37 AM
Okay, Chica, now you're scaring me. Did you post half this fic on Nick (rhymes) or something? Cuz I could've SWORN I read this before. I have a feeling that I know what happens in the next chapter (specifically, I mean) and I'll tell to in my next PM.
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Posted 25 August 2007 - 01:01 AM
Andrea: Thanks! No, that chapter comes in a little bit later in the story. :P I'm glad you like it, though!oh nice chapter!!!! I liked it really! what's next chapter liking ur future so far (or something like that) or what? b/c I like that chapter!!! :P no wait sorry it's not that is something about carl's eold's largest soemthing lol
keep writing!!
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BekBoo20: Don't worry, you'll find out soon enough! ;)Cool! I can't wait to see what Carl does!
cynthia_aurora24: Yay! I was kinda nervous since this chapter's a little below my normal standards, so I'm glad that you liked it! ^_^ Yeah, that's probably my favorite line in this chapter! :Dahhh!!!! it wasn't boring, don't worry! it was funny when Future Libby said, "Jimmy knows where you live." I liked it... uh... a lot.
[I was going to say it in Spanish, but my three years of French got in the way in my brain. It's very messy up there. ^_^ ]
keep that pen a writin'!
Rachel: LOL, sorry that I scared ya! :lol: Yes, I actually did. :D LOL, deja vu is the worst, isn't it? :POkay, Chica, now you're scaring me. Did you post half this fic on Nick (rhymes) or something? Cuz I could've SWORN I read this before. I have a feeling that I know what happens in the next chapter (specifically, I mean) and I'll tell to in my next PM.
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Yup, we've already covered that deja vu is freaky. In a cool sorta way :P and lol, it's ok
btw, the more I look at your banner, the more that spellcheck thing (both of them) stands out to me **HEADDESK** :huh: :PCpwn:
btw, the more I look at your banner, the more that spellcheck thing (both of them) stands out to me **HEADDESK** :huh: :PCpwn:
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Posted 26 August 2007 - 01:21 AM
Hey guys. I was going to post this chapter a little bit later, but I'm kinda upset about something, so I figured that posting this chapter might cheer me up. Hope you like it!
Chapter Five: A Dream Realized
**After about ten minutes of walking, Jimmy, Cindy, Sheen, Libby and Carl reach a farmhouse surrounded by a picture-esque fence. The house has a few llamas grazing outside.**
CARL: My lifelong dream is realized!!
SHEEN: Your lifelong dream is to live in a storybook farmhouse and raise llamas?
**Carl nods.**
SHEEN: Well, that’s the lamest dream ever!
CARL: Nuh-uh!! Your dream was to marry Libby and become Dingo-Man!!
LIBBY (disbelievingly): Dingo-Man?
SHEEN (striking a heroic pose): What? It’d be cool!!
JIMMY: If we’re going to go in, I suggest we do it now.
**The quintet of children walks up to the door and knocks. A hefty, redheaded man opens the door and stares at the five.**
MAN: Ahhhh!!!!! The world’s coming to an end!!!
**A slender woman appears from in the house. She has pale blonde hair and grey eyes.**
WOMAN (in a Swedish accent): Ooh, Carl, are these kids selling something, ya?
**Jimmy, Sheen, Carl, Cindy and Libby’s jaws all drop.**
FUTURE CARL: No, I don’t think they are. They look like me and my friends when we were younger, but that’d be impossible unless Jimmy did something.
CARL: It’s possible! Hi Future Me!!
FUTURE CARL: Um, Elke, why don’t you go check on the llamas?
**Future Elke smiles sweetly and runs off. Future Carl leads the five into the den of the farmhouse.**
CARL: Um, Future Me, do you raise llamas?
FUTURE CARL (smiling): Uh-huh!! And, I have the world’s largest collection of llama-themed videogames!
CARL: Someone pinch me!
**Sheen pinches him.**
CARL: Ow! Not literally, Sheen!
SHEEN: How was I supposed to know?
LIBBY: Sheen, ya can’t just go around pinchin’ people.
SHEEN: Sorry I embarrassed you, mi pelicana pegajosa. Sorry for pinching you, Carl.
CINDY: Yeah, as much as I hate to ruin this little geek-fest, I really wanna see my future self. And, if we don’t get going now, SOMEONE whose name starts with a “J” will face my wrath!!
**Jimmy gets up from the sofa and backs over to the door.**
JIMMY: Oh, would you look at the time! I think we should leave now, and I’m not just saying that because Cindy’s frightening me.
CARL: Bye Future Me. You’ve given me something to look forward to.
**Future Carl waves as they walk out in hopes of finding the second address. After walking for a little bit, the group arrives at a large and very nice house.**
CINDY (impressed): Wow, are you sure this is where your future self lives, Neutron?
**A loud boom is heard from the house.**
CINDY: Yup, it’s your house alright.
**The five venture to the door and ring a doorbell. With only a few seconds of delay, the door is answered by a woman. She has golden blonde hair that is pinned into a bun with a few strands framing her face. She’s wearing a white lab coat with a pair of black pants and a deep green turtleneck underneath. A delicate golden chain hangs around her neck with a pendant in the shape of Jimmy’s infamous atom symbol. She drops the clipboard she has with her in shock when she sees the children, thus, revealing her name. They stare at each other, shocked.**
Okay, I know that this chapter isn't that good, but I like it. ^_^ Any guesses on who the woman is (even though it's probably obvious)? Reply and tell me what you thought of this chapter!
~Chica
Chapter Five: A Dream Realized
**After about ten minutes of walking, Jimmy, Cindy, Sheen, Libby and Carl reach a farmhouse surrounded by a picture-esque fence. The house has a few llamas grazing outside.**
CARL: My lifelong dream is realized!!
SHEEN: Your lifelong dream is to live in a storybook farmhouse and raise llamas?
**Carl nods.**
SHEEN: Well, that’s the lamest dream ever!
CARL: Nuh-uh!! Your dream was to marry Libby and become Dingo-Man!!
LIBBY (disbelievingly): Dingo-Man?
SHEEN (striking a heroic pose): What? It’d be cool!!
JIMMY: If we’re going to go in, I suggest we do it now.
**The quintet of children walks up to the door and knocks. A hefty, redheaded man opens the door and stares at the five.**
MAN: Ahhhh!!!!! The world’s coming to an end!!!
**A slender woman appears from in the house. She has pale blonde hair and grey eyes.**
WOMAN (in a Swedish accent): Ooh, Carl, are these kids selling something, ya?
**Jimmy, Sheen, Carl, Cindy and Libby’s jaws all drop.**
FUTURE CARL: No, I don’t think they are. They look like me and my friends when we were younger, but that’d be impossible unless Jimmy did something.
CARL: It’s possible! Hi Future Me!!
FUTURE CARL: Um, Elke, why don’t you go check on the llamas?
**Future Elke smiles sweetly and runs off. Future Carl leads the five into the den of the farmhouse.**
CARL: Um, Future Me, do you raise llamas?
FUTURE CARL (smiling): Uh-huh!! And, I have the world’s largest collection of llama-themed videogames!
CARL: Someone pinch me!
**Sheen pinches him.**
CARL: Ow! Not literally, Sheen!
SHEEN: How was I supposed to know?
LIBBY: Sheen, ya can’t just go around pinchin’ people.
SHEEN: Sorry I embarrassed you, mi pelicana pegajosa. Sorry for pinching you, Carl.
CINDY: Yeah, as much as I hate to ruin this little geek-fest, I really wanna see my future self. And, if we don’t get going now, SOMEONE whose name starts with a “J” will face my wrath!!
**Jimmy gets up from the sofa and backs over to the door.**
JIMMY: Oh, would you look at the time! I think we should leave now, and I’m not just saying that because Cindy’s frightening me.
CARL: Bye Future Me. You’ve given me something to look forward to.
**Future Carl waves as they walk out in hopes of finding the second address. After walking for a little bit, the group arrives at a large and very nice house.**
CINDY (impressed): Wow, are you sure this is where your future self lives, Neutron?
**A loud boom is heard from the house.**
CINDY: Yup, it’s your house alright.
**The five venture to the door and ring a doorbell. With only a few seconds of delay, the door is answered by a woman. She has golden blonde hair that is pinned into a bun with a few strands framing her face. She’s wearing a white lab coat with a pair of black pants and a deep green turtleneck underneath. A delicate golden chain hangs around her neck with a pendant in the shape of Jimmy’s infamous atom symbol. She drops the clipboard she has with her in shock when she sees the children, thus, revealing her name. They stare at each other, shocked.**
Okay, I know that this chapter isn't that good, but I like it. ^_^ Any guesses on who the woman is (even though it's probably obvious)? Reply and tell me what you thought of this chapter!
~Chica
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Posted 26 August 2007 - 02:31 AM
YAY!
Go Chica! Go Chica! Go Chica! Go Chica!
I LOVE your fanfic!!!! :kawaii: It rocks meh socks! :dance: :rock:
Go Chica! Go Chica! Go Chica! Go Chica!
I LOVE your fanfic!!!! :kawaii: It rocks meh socks! :dance: :rock:
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Posted 26 August 2007 - 02:47 AM
Yeah! Carl married Elkie! I was worried that he wouldn't be married or something. Good job!
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Posted 26 August 2007 - 03:39 AM
Wow, awesome chapter Chica!! Go check your PM box, btw.
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Posted 27 August 2007 - 01:36 AM
squeeeeeee! awesome! awesome! awesomeness!
:D :D :D
I liked the part when they heard a boom and Cindy's like, "yup, it's your house alright."
I'm glad you paired Carl up with Elke. Most of the times he's the only one alone and that bothers me. Yayyy for pairings!
squee!
:D :D :D
I liked the part when they heard a boom and Cindy's like, "yup, it's your house alright."
I'm glad you paired Carl up with Elke. Most of the times he's the only one alone and that bothers me. Yayyy for pairings!
squee!
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Posted 27 August 2007 - 02:35 AM
LOL yeah that was awesome...I liked the part when they heard a boom and Cindy's like, "yup, it's your house alright."
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Posted 28 August 2007 - 04:39 AM
YAY!
Go Chica! Go Chica! Go Chica! Go Chica!
I LOVE your fanfic!!!! :kawaii: It rocks meh socks! :dance: :rock:
Amanda: LOL, thanks. Yay! I rock someone's socks!! :P
Yeah! Carl married Elkie! I was worried that he wouldn't be married or something. Good job!
BekBoo20: Thank you! C/E is one of my favorite pairings. I had to make them end up together. ;)
Wow, awesome chapter Chica!! Go check your PM box, btw.
Rachel: Thank you, Rachel! I'm gonna have the next chapter up very soon! ^_^
squeeeeeee! awesome! awesome! awesomeness!
:D :D :D
I liked the part when they heard a boom and Cindy's like, "yup, it's your house alright."
I'm glad you paired Carl up with Elke. Most of the times he's the only one alone and that bothers me. Yayyy for pairings!
squee!
cynthia_aurora24: Thanks!! LOL, I wasn't about to leave Carl out. ^_^ Plus I really like C/E.
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Posted 28 August 2007 - 04:41 AM
Welxies!! YAY! How are you gunna post two fics at once? (coming from the girl who's writing 5 at one time)Rachel: Thank you, Rachel! I'm gonna have the next chapter up very soon! ^_^
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Posted 28 August 2007 - 04:50 AM
Okay guys, I was gonna wait for a little to post this chapter, but I really wanted to post it now, since it's my favorite chapter I've written so far. By the way, be sure to check out "He Loves You Not" if you haven't already. It's a J/C fic that Amanda and I are writing together. Enough with my shameless self-advertising, on with the chapter!
Chapter Six: "What? I am not!! Nope, sorry! Wrong Number!!"
**The name “Cindy Neutron” glares up from the clipboard almost tauntingly. Jimmy and Cindy are blushing wildly, Libby is mouthing “I knew it!”, Carl and Sheen are arguing about who is better: Llamaboy or Ultralord, oblivious to the world around them.**
JIMMY: But, this was supposed to only happen in the BAD future!
CINDY (angry): Hey! What’s wrong with being married to me?!
SHEEN (calmly): Guys, fate has obviously perspired to keep you together.
CINDY: It’s “conspired”, you numskull.
SHEEN: Oh. Well, what does “perspire” mean?
CINDY: It means “to sweat”. Read a dictionary!
SHEEN: The dictionary would be a…
**Cindy lunges for Sheen, but Jimmy catches her. He holds her back until she’s calmed down.**
CINDY: Uh, I’m not gonna attack Sheen anymore. You can let go now.
**Jimmy lets go of her and they back away from each other.**
FUTURE CINDY: I’m gonna go get someone. I’ll be right back.
**Future Cindy walks off.**
LIBBY: Ooh, girl, your future self looks successful!! Ya must be happy!
CINDY: I’d be a lot happier if my future self wasn’t married to Neutron.
LIBBY: Give it up, Cin. Me, you and practically EVERYONE in Retroville knows you’re crushin’ on him.
CINDY: What? I am not!! Nope, sorry! Wrong number!!
**Libby gives her the “I’m not buying it” look.**
LIBBY: Then why did ya carve “J+C forever” into a tree?
CINDY: Well, um…
LIBBY: And, why did’cha spend five hours in the make-up department tryin’ to find the perfect shade of radiation proof lip-gloss to wear to Mars?
CINDY (nervously): That’s because…
LIBBY: And, why do ya have the name “Mrs. Cynthia Aurora Neutron” written on your notebook?
CINDY: I don’t have that on my notebook! (To herself) Besides, it says “Cindy Neutron”.
**Libby raises an eyebrow before letting it go. Meanwhile, out of the earshot of Cindy and Libby, Carl and Sheen are trying to convince Jimmy that being married to Cindy isn’t that bad.**
CARL: Aw, come on, Jimmy. So what if you’re gonna be married to Cindy? You practically admitted you liked her on Mars.
JIMMY (defensive): I did not! I said she distracts me!
SHEEN: Carl’s right. You should be happy you’re gonna be married to the girl you think is finer than silk.
**Jimmy and Carl look at Sheen weirdly.**
SHEEN: What? I heard Libby say it once.
JIMMY: Whatever. I don’t like her!
SHEEN: Well, if you don’t like her, then why do have those pictures of her in your lab?
JIMMY: Because, um…
SHEEN: Time to face the facts, mi amigo. You’ve fallen in love with your rival.
**Before Jimmy can embarrass…err…defend himself any further, Future Cindy returns. She’s holding hands with a man who’s a couple of inches taller then her. The man has chestnut hair and vivid blue eyes. He’s wearing a slightly singed white lab coat with a burgundy shirt and dark blue jeans underneath.**
FUTURE CINDY: This is my husband.
Okay, not too good of an ending for this chapter, but it's still my favorite. ^_^ I hope you all enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. Please reply!
~Chica
Chapter Six: "What? I am not!! Nope, sorry! Wrong Number!!"
**The name “Cindy Neutron” glares up from the clipboard almost tauntingly. Jimmy and Cindy are blushing wildly, Libby is mouthing “I knew it!”, Carl and Sheen are arguing about who is better: Llamaboy or Ultralord, oblivious to the world around them.**
JIMMY: But, this was supposed to only happen in the BAD future!
CINDY (angry): Hey! What’s wrong with being married to me?!
SHEEN (calmly): Guys, fate has obviously perspired to keep you together.
CINDY: It’s “conspired”, you numskull.
SHEEN: Oh. Well, what does “perspire” mean?
CINDY: It means “to sweat”. Read a dictionary!
SHEEN: The dictionary would be a…
**Cindy lunges for Sheen, but Jimmy catches her. He holds her back until she’s calmed down.**
CINDY: Uh, I’m not gonna attack Sheen anymore. You can let go now.
**Jimmy lets go of her and they back away from each other.**
FUTURE CINDY: I’m gonna go get someone. I’ll be right back.
**Future Cindy walks off.**
LIBBY: Ooh, girl, your future self looks successful!! Ya must be happy!
CINDY: I’d be a lot happier if my future self wasn’t married to Neutron.
LIBBY: Give it up, Cin. Me, you and practically EVERYONE in Retroville knows you’re crushin’ on him.
CINDY: What? I am not!! Nope, sorry! Wrong number!!
**Libby gives her the “I’m not buying it” look.**
LIBBY: Then why did ya carve “J+C forever” into a tree?
CINDY: Well, um…
LIBBY: And, why did’cha spend five hours in the make-up department tryin’ to find the perfect shade of radiation proof lip-gloss to wear to Mars?
CINDY (nervously): That’s because…
LIBBY: And, why do ya have the name “Mrs. Cynthia Aurora Neutron” written on your notebook?
CINDY: I don’t have that on my notebook! (To herself) Besides, it says “Cindy Neutron”.
**Libby raises an eyebrow before letting it go. Meanwhile, out of the earshot of Cindy and Libby, Carl and Sheen are trying to convince Jimmy that being married to Cindy isn’t that bad.**
CARL: Aw, come on, Jimmy. So what if you’re gonna be married to Cindy? You practically admitted you liked her on Mars.
JIMMY (defensive): I did not! I said she distracts me!
SHEEN: Carl’s right. You should be happy you’re gonna be married to the girl you think is finer than silk.
**Jimmy and Carl look at Sheen weirdly.**
SHEEN: What? I heard Libby say it once.
JIMMY: Whatever. I don’t like her!
SHEEN: Well, if you don’t like her, then why do have those pictures of her in your lab?
JIMMY: Because, um…
SHEEN: Time to face the facts, mi amigo. You’ve fallen in love with your rival.
**Before Jimmy can embarrass…err…defend himself any further, Future Cindy returns. She’s holding hands with a man who’s a couple of inches taller then her. The man has chestnut hair and vivid blue eyes. He’s wearing a slightly singed white lab coat with a burgundy shirt and dark blue jeans underneath.**
FUTURE CINDY: This is my husband.
Okay, not too good of an ending for this chapter, but it's still my favorite. ^_^ I hope you all enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. Please reply!
~Chica
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Posted 28 August 2007 - 04:53 AM
Reading it the second time (you know, from Nick) was even better than the first!
GO CHICA!
GO CHICA!
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Posted 28 August 2007 - 04:57 AM
Thanks Rachel!! I'm glad you enjoyed re-reading it. :D *cough*eventhoughyoucan'treadonnick.comanymore*cough*Reading it the second time (you know, from Nick) was even better than the first!
GO CHICA!
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Posted 28 August 2007 - 05:00 AM
Welcome! :bff:
Want some cough medicine? ;) Dangit, I g2g. Bye!
Want some cough medicine? ;) Dangit, I g2g. Bye!
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Posted 28 August 2007 - 06:26 AM
:kawaii: yay!!! funny chapter!
you rule, Chica!
I can't wait to see what happens next!!
[I like exclamation points!]
you rule, Chica!
I can't wait to see what happens next!!
[I like exclamation points!]
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