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#21 ShadRose17

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Posted 19 August 2007 - 03:52 AM

:thumbsup: Nice, keep up the good writing.
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#22 cynthia_aurora24

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Posted 19 August 2007 - 04:08 AM

woot!!!! *gets glimpse of JN future* :D


write on! (get it? ....heh. -_- :ph43r: )
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#23 AnDrEa

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Posted 19 August 2007 - 04:29 AM

oooh!! S/L!!! love it!! this chapter is one of my faves!



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#24 Chica_Andromeda

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Posted 19 August 2007 - 05:35 PM

:thumbsup: Nice, keep up the good writing.


JimmyandCindyforever: Thanks! I've got a lot of the chapters written, so I'll be putting those up soon! ^_^

woot!!!! *gets glimpse of JN future* :D

write on! (get it? ....heh. -_-  :ph43r: )


cynthia_aurora24: Yay! I'm happy you liked it. LOL, I get it! ^_^ :lol:

oooh!! S/L!!! love it!! this chapter is one of my faves!




o:) andre o:)


Andrea: Thank you! Yup, this is one of my favorite chapters, too. It was fun to write. ^_^
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#25 Bianca

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Posted 19 August 2007 - 06:07 PM

Great chapter Chica!! love it!! More more more!!!!! <3 :o
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#26 Chica_Andromeda

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Posted 19 August 2007 - 06:14 PM

Great chapter Chica!! love it!! More more more!!!!! <3 :o

Thank you so much!! I'll be posting the next chapter pretty soon. ;) ^_^
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#27 Bianca

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Posted 19 August 2007 - 06:33 PM

Thank you so much!! I'll be posting the next chapter pretty soon. ;) ^_^

You're welcome! yay! :lol: ^_^ lol
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Posted 20 August 2007 - 01:01 AM

Yah! Sheen and Libby! Gold minivan? I want one! And I want Libby's outfit too! :wub:
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Posted 20 August 2007 - 01:31 AM

Nice chapters Chica! We've been talking about them and I haven't even seen them yet! Hahaha!

Anyways. It was great! I can't wait to hear more! Hope you can get over your, (Gulp..) writers block. :bff:


**still has pitchfork and torch behind back**



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#30 Chica_Andromeda

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 01:40 AM

Nice chapters Chica! We've been talking about them and I haven't even seen them yet! Hahaha!

Anyways. It was great! I can't wait to hear more! Hope you can get over your, (Gulp..) writers block. :bff:


**still has pitchfork and torch behind back**



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LOL, that's okay. I'm glad you liked them! ^_^

Trust me, you will hear more. I never give up on anything. It's just my nature, I guess. :lol: I've actually been doing as much work as I'm able to on the chapter that comes after "The Access Pass". :D Evil writer's block... <_<

*hides behind sofa* *whispering* Awesome! I've still got my angry mob! :angrymob: :lol:
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#31 Chica_Andromeda

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Posted 20 August 2007 - 06:26 PM

Yah! Sheen and Libby!  Gold minivan?  I want one! And I want Libby's outfit too!  :wub:

Glad you liked it!! :D I'm gonna have the next chapter up by the end of the week. ^_^
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#32 Bianca

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 05:14 PM

I'm gonna have the next chapter up by the end of the week. ^_^

that's great!!! ^_^
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#33 cynthia_aurora24

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 08:44 PM

yayyy!


by the way, Chica_Andromeda I love your avatar. :P
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#34 Chica_Andromeda

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Posted 21 August 2007 - 10:41 PM

LOL, thanks. ^_^ You can call me Chica, if you want.
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Posted 22 August 2007 - 06:03 PM

**slaphead** Sorry Chica, I TOTALLY forgot I already read your three chapters!! Rest assured, tho, reading them again was :thumbsup: I--CAN'T--WAIT--FOR--MORE!! **breaks down Chica's door** Okay honey, now which couch are you hiding behind?! Cuz I've got an anti-writer's block ray and I'm NOT afraid to use it!
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#36 Chica_Andromeda

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Posted 22 August 2007 - 06:09 PM

Yay!! I am so excited and happy that you liked re-reading them! :dance: *is hiding* AHHH!! I'm not behind this talking couch! Nope! That not me at all!!! :lol:

I'm probably gonna post the next chapter later today or tomorrow!! ^_^
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Posted 22 August 2007 - 06:11 PM

SWEET!

EDIT:: AH!! I have 604 posts!! How the heck did that happen?! Yesterday I was celebrating my 500th post anniversary!
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#38 Chica_Andromeda

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Posted 22 August 2007 - 07:09 PM

Wow guys. Thank you for all your AWESOME replys!! ^_^ Here's the next chapter.



Chapter Four: Surprise, Surprise

**The woman’s jaw drops slightly as she nods. Libby’s jaw also drops and the two stand there, mirroring each others expressions.**

SHEEN: Wow, Future Libby is caliente!

FUTURE LIBBY: I’ll be right back.

**She runs off, leaving them confused before returning with the man from earlier.**

SHEEN: Hey!! What’s he doing with her?!

**The man and Future Libby laugh.**

FUTURE LIBBY: Actually, this is my husband.

SHEEN: Pfft, I bet he’s some kinda wimp. What’s his name?

FUTURE LIBBY: Well, his name is Sheen Estevez.

SHEEN: No wonder he’s such a handsome fellow!

**Libby rolls her eyes.**

LIBBY: Sheen, you just said he was a wimp.

SHEEN: That’s before I knew he was me!

CINDY: Libbs, how could your future self marry Ultra-Freak?

SHEEN/FUTURE SHEEN: Hey!!

FUTURE LIBBY: Okay, I don’t want the neighbors to think I’m crazy, so why don’t you guys come in?

**She and Future Sheen walk into the house with the others following behind. The house is beautifully decorated with Spanish influences and the walls are dotted with pictures.**

CARL: Wow, nice house.

**Future Libby smiles as she and Future Sheen sit down on a garnet colored sofa.**

LIBBY: So, what’s your job? I’ve always wanted to know what I’ll be when I’m older.

FUTURE LIBBY: Sheen and I are both models for Melvin Shine.

SHEEN: Cool!! Who was that little kid that ran outside?

FUTURE SHEEN: Oh, that was our son, Esteban. Hey Esteban! Come in here for a minute!

**Esteban runs into the room.**

ESTEBAN: What? The Ultralord Musical is about to start!

FUTURE LIBBY: Esteban, we have some people we want you to meet.

ESTEBAN (looking at Sheen and Libby): What’s up with you and Dad’s mini-me’s?

FUTURE SHEEN: Well, these are our younger selves. I don’t know why they’re here, but they are!!

JIMMY: We came here because a certain person couldn’t wait to see her future!

CINDY: Well sorry for being curious!!

FUTURE LIBBY: Okay, you guys need to chill.

**Jimmy and Cindy stop arguing.**

JIMMY: Fine. Future Libby, do you have the addresses of our future selves?

**Future Libby nods and grabs a piece of paper. She quickly writes down some addresses. She hands the paper to Jimmy, only to have it snatched away by Cindy.**

CINDY: Hey, why are there only two addresses on here? Where does my future self live?

FUTURE LIBBY (snickering to herself a little bit): Oh, Jimmy knows where you live.

CARL: Jimmy, can we please go to see my future self next?

JIMMY: Sure. But let’s get going.

**They leave Future Sheen and Libby’s house look for the address Future Libby gave them.**



Eh, I don't like this chapter so much. It's definitely not my best work. But, the next chapter is one of my favorites.

The main thing is what you guys thought about this chapter. Was it boring? Did you like it? Reply and tell me!! ^_^

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#39 Bianca

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Posted 22 August 2007 - 07:44 PM

I'm probably gonna post the next chapter later today or tomorrow!! ^_^

Awesome!! lol ^_^
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#40 AnDrEa

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Posted 22 August 2007 - 08:20 PM

oh nice chapter!!!! I liked it really! what's next chapter liking ur future so far (or something like that) or what? b/c I like that chapter!!! :P no wait sorry it's not that is something about carl's eold's largest soemthing lol
keep writing!!


o:) Andre o:)
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