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[sunnstar]

Thanks so much everyone!

awwww thank you!! I's nothing is really the result of lack of sleep and my addiction to ur fanfic and IDOJ!!!   :bff:

Andrea: Welcome! yay, addiction to my fic! =D

Flibberty-gibber XD ...for some reason, that made me laugh.
I love ridiculous sounding words like that

Argh, another cliffhanger, though! I want to see Jimmy's plan now   :dance:

Zeit: I know, I loved it when Cap'n Betty said it and for the rest of the day I was literally just walking around the house saying, "Enough with the flibberty-gibber!" there was even one awesome moment where my brother was talking for like 10 seconds straight so I bellowed at the top of my lungs, "ENOUGH WITH THE FLIBBERTY-GIBBER!!"

Cliffies rock! Don't vorry, it will come soon!

lol, it's three thirty in the morning where I am,
and yet your new chapter stopped me from shutting my laptop

Cynthia_aurora24: I luv u!!! hey everyone, Cynthia_aurora24 is DA BOMBEST BOMB!!

Sunnstar! I am sooo sorry for not replying! School has well, tooken over unfortunately.  But I will NOT abandon you I promise!

Wow, I missed a couple chapters aye? Ah, no worries! Its still completely, aweomely, ahmaze-ingly, crazy.......grrrr um, I ran out of words. Hehe.... 

Anyways, I loved the chapters! Keep writing, keep up the awesome work, your much better than I am at writing(Ho boy is that true!).


Um, yeah ok I think you get the point now. 

Cindy_Auora: It's okay! Yeah, I know, I've read your PMs ;)

Yup! wait, "Aye" ... are you from Canada??? The people we ate dinner with on the cruise were from Canada and they were 4ever saying " 'ey?" and thanks! I did that a lot with Mara's chapters on Nick, but now that she releases them in volumes, I just put a whole bunch of words together and then tell her my favorite parts and how indivually awesome they were =D [geez, look at me, talking about Mara's fic while I'm replying to MY replier!!]

Thanks, thanks, and thanks sooo much!! And that is NOT true. NOT NOT NOT NOT NOT true, I tells ya! You should have seen me when I first starting writing. My very first fanfic (titled "This is My Very First Fanfic" ... do you get it already?) was a good plot (some of it) but I totally butchered it by WRITING it. Course, I WAS nine. And since you're 12 and like 3/4, there is nooooo reason to not be able to write well! OKAY?!??!

Yup, I did. =D

[sunnstar]

Krista's still in the lead for most posts here besides me! But Mandy and Andre are catching up fast, cuz THEY didn't abandom me yet!! And this was, by far, my favorite clue/note/thing, and it took forever to write it cuz I was running out of scary rhyming words... ENJOY AND REPLY!!

Chapter 13

The traditional trip through Jimmy’s brain and purple things let to a familiar image of Calamitous going to the bathroom, five minutes ago. Suddenly Jimmy remembered when Calamitous had trapped Goddard and forced his to fix an invention. Then he realized the way he had escaped was by pretending to obey Professor Calamitous to trick him.
“Brain blast!” Jimmy’s eyes snapped open.
“So what’s the plan?” Cindy and Libby asked together.
“Listen up, guys—”
“I hope there’s no secret plotting going on here!” Meldar said disapprovingly.
“Of course not! We were just, um—” Sheen stopped to think, something he doesn’t do very often.
“We. . . decided we’re gunna get the chip,” Jimmy told him, trying to make it sound as if he were admitting defeat.
“We are?!” Sheen, Carl, and Libby exclaimed.
Meldar looked surprised and pleased. Cindy, however, had known Jimmy long enough to know when he’s lying (this skill had come in particularly handy when he tried to trick Libby and her into testing an experiment) and this was one of those times.
“Yeah, we are,” she spoke up, shooting a meaningful look at Libby.
“Oh yeah!” Libby said, elbowing Sheen in the side. Sheen gave a thumbs-up and rubbed the spot where she had jabbed him.
“So,” Meldar said, as if he just wanted to clarify a few points, “if I release you know, you’ll get the chip as fast as you can?”
“Yes,” Cindy and Jimmy said at the same time.
“You won’t do anything else? You’ll open your clues immediately and go straight there?”
“Yeah,” Cindy, Jimmy, and Libby agreed in unison.
“And, assuming you get it, you’ll do nothing to destroy, harm, or change the microchip?”
“Yes!” all five kids yelled at once.
Meldar cracked an evil smile.
“Perfect.”
Carl shivered. This evil smile was, perhaps, the scariest thing he had seen all day.
“Well?” Calamitous said exasperatedly. “Aren’t you going to open your clues?”
Cindy became aware that a pink folded up piece of paper was sitting expectantly on her watch and opened it. Jimmy, somehow knowing they would be identical, didn’t move.
“Well? What does it say?” Libby asked nervously.
“Cindy cleared her throat and read her note—which, unlike all the others, was printed over a skill and crossbones sign—aloud:

Congratulations, you’ve come this far,
But now, beware, you’ll find out who you really are.
Although this clue might be the last,
It could be friendships that run out fast.
And now to find the microchip,
You’d be wise to take this tip:
Alas, tonight the moon is full—
Ignoring that’d be gullible
For when it reaches the middle of the sky,
You’ll know just where your secrets lie.
Congratulations, you’ve come this far,
But now, beware, you’ll find out who you really are.

And on that ominous note, Meldar let them out of their cage.

[Chica_Andromeda]

:o *eyes widen* Whoa, that note is very melodramatic.

Great chapter! My gosh, that is pretty big cliffhanger. I hope you post the next chapter soon!! ^_^

[sunnstar]

:o *eyes widen* Whoa, that note is very melodramatic.

Great chapter! My gosh, that is pretty big cliffhanger. I hope you post the next chapter soon!! ^_^

Yay, I always wuv it when someone replies like the exact second I post a chapter! Do you have my fic on email alert? cuz if you do, that would be SO SO COOL!

Yeah. Me and melodrama are like this **holds up 2 fingers crossed**

LOL thanks a lot! Mara and I are fighting over Cliff. You know, short for cliffhangers? w/e. will post soon, I'm typing up Chapter 14+ now!

[Zeitgheist]

That riddled clue makes my brain hurt :wacko: But that just makes the chapter even greater! Hehe, and nice touch on Cindy catching up on Jimmy's intentions... I hate in some fics how she's just a dumb blonde :P that's one of my many "fanfic pet peeves"

[sunnstar]

That riddled clue makes my brain hurt :wacko: But that just makes the chapter even greater! Hehe, and nice touch on Cindy catching up on Jimmy's intentions... I hate in some fics how she's just a dumb blonde :P that's one of my many "fanfic pet peeves"

Teehee :wacko: Thanks! Yeah, she's the 2nd smartest character so why should the blondeness be a problem?
Thanks for 'plyin!

[cynthia_aurora24]

*LovePotioneppieMouthDrop*

[sunnstar]

*LovePotioneppieMouthDrop*

LOL
that totally confused me for a second but noooow I get it =D

[cynthia_aurora24]

LOL
that totally confused me for a second but noooow I get it =D

haha, maybe a picture would've been more sufficient!

[sunnstar]

LOL that was way better
wat was so surprising?

[cynthia_aurora24]

eh I dunno, I just liked the chapter. alas, another cliffhanger

:D

[sunnstar]

O0O0O0O0ooooh thanks!

[sunnstar]

Wow, it's been 11 minutes since Krista started posting. It must be one heck of a reply!

Edit:: GASPETH! Krista signed off, how rude!

[cancel_me]

WOAH. The end is almost near. It's kinda hard to believe. =o I wonder what's going to happen. CURSE YOU, SUNNY.

By the way, sorry I haven't been reviewing. As I explained earlier, the actin' life has been hectic for me and has left be exhausted. But now that we did our final performance of Alice in Wonderland last night, I have more time on my schedule. YIPEE, YES SIREE BOB. :D

However, auditions for Annie are in, I think, less than a month. Since my school's starting later that usual, they're going to have rehearsals right away. In fact, when Mrs. Fenton (my director) came to see Alice in Wonderland, she told me to start practicing and learning the music ASAP. She really wants me in Annie, methinks. And I'm going to try out for a large role (Miss Hannigan) so you can expect me to be BUSAAY. D;

Edit: Naw, it's not, I just had to go downstairs for awhile. XD

[sunnstar]

Yeah, there are 4-6 chapters left, I think. Will count later.

And it's okay! Wow, you must have been busy. Good luck with your next show!

PS. oh. :P

[Beks]

Oooo! Can't wait! ^_^

[sunnstar]

For what, Chapter 13? (Beka?)

There are 5 chapters left, in case you were all wondering. 13-15 are pretty short (less than a page each) but 16 is up to IaMoLaD standards. 17 is normal.

[sunnstar]

I will posteth Chapter 13eth tomorrow, unlesseth I can'teth get on. Eth.

[sunnstar]

**realizes I'm on Chapter 14 and not 13**

This chapter is dedicated to Chica_Andromeda... who rocks!!

Sorry this is a really really short chapter... the next one is too, but Chapter 16 is so dramatically awesome ( :thumbsup: ) that it'll probably make up for it. **toots own horn** Also, since there's only this, plus three chapters left **tear** the first replier of this chapter, Chapter 15, and Chapter 16 will each get to PM me and ask 3 questions that I will have to answer (unless it's like, WHAT'S THE LAST CHAPTER ABOUT? or something really dumb like that.) BUT, it can't be Mandie or Chica_Andromeda cuz they already asked their 3 questions **Andrea sharpens a pitchfork** and the 3 people can't be the same people **Ms. "Fast Reply" Roxy fires up a cannon** , okay? Enjoy!

EDIT:: Wow, this really is a short chapter. Okay, I'll just post Chapter 15 with it and the first TWO repliers will get ^^.

Chapter 14

“You know, that gets more annoying every time,” Cindy commented, referring to the gigantic tube that sucked them out of the lair, much like the one in Jimmy’s lab.
“Listen, guys, we need to get out of here,” Jimmy whispered urgently.
“But you said—” Sheen began.
“Yeah, yeah, I know what I said, but—”
“You’re not thinking of ditching us, are you?” Calamitous’s voice rang out.
“Oh, no, of course not!” Jimmy lied, looking around for the source of the noise.
“Yes, we thought this might happen,” Meldar informed them over a sort of loudspeaker. “That’s why we had a plan.”
And then, Libby fell through the same chute they had just escaped from. Screaming her lungs out, she disappeared from sight.
“Give Libby back!” Sheen bellowed.
“You have until midnight. Bring me the microchip by then or you’ll never see your precious Lily again!” Meldar spoke with a sort of finality that meant business.
“It’s Libby!” Carl exclaimed.
“Jimmy, we can’t just leave without Libby!” Cindy shrieked.
“Of course we can’t!” Jimmy said, like it was the most obvious thing in the world.
“Well, what are we gunna d—” Sheen stopped abruptly.
“Did she just call you Jimmy?” he and Carl asked together.
Cindy blushed.
“Maybe,” Jimmy muttered. “Anyway, here’s what we’re gunna do. Huddle up, guys.”
Meldar cleared his throat over the intercom.
“We’re gunna get the chip, okay?!” Jimmy shouted, glaring at the spot where Libby had vanished.
“Excellent.”

Chapter 15

Hours later, after passing the time by riding other coasters (carefully avoiding Terror Tower and Spine-Chillin’ Screamin), Jimmy, Cindy, Sheen, and Carl were growing weary and nervous. By eleven o’clock, four minutes and twelve seconds before the moon reached the middle of the sky, according the boy genius, Jimmy had had enough.
“Listen, Meldar—”
“And Professor Calamitous!” an indignant voice rang out.
“Listen, Meldar and Professor Calamitous, we want Libby back to help us. So if you don’t give her back now, the deal’s off!”
Nobody answered for a few seconds, during which Meldar and Calamitous were obviously discussing his offer.
“Fine. But if we don’t get the chip by midnight we’re taking her back!”
Jimmy rolled his eyes and muttered to Cindy “Tough negotiator” in a sarcastic voice.
There was an odd squelching noise, followed by a pop, and Libby was raised from the ground in front of them, shaking.
“Libby!” Sheen yelled happily.
“What. . . happened to you?” Jimmy demanded.
“They—they—played opera for six hours straight! I was dying!”
The boys all let out their breaths in relief, but Cindy looked absolutely horrified. However, she didn’t say anything to console her best friend—this was unusual for her.
Jimmy cleared his throat. “Well, it’s 11:04 and the moon is in the middle of the sky. Where’s the chip?”
Libby shook her head and made herself stop wondering why such an ugly expression had glued itself to Cindy’s face. “Ahem, but guys, look closer at the moon. See where the light is shining?”
Indeed, once they followed the trail of moonlight with their eyes, even the half-asleep Carl could distinguish their next destination.
And then, at 11:06, fifty-four minutes before the deadline, Jimmy, Cindy, Sheen, Libby, and Carl ran.

[Chica_Andromeda]

I have a chapter deticated to me? *faints* THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! ^_^ ^_^ :D

Gah! This chapter was off the chiz-ain! *is trying (but not succeding) to be cool* Way totally awesome job! :thumbsup:

*sniffletear* There are only a few chapters left? :'( WHY MUST THE GREATEST FICS COME TO AN END SO SOON (well soon for me...)!!! :'( :'(

Ooh, dramatic? Yeah! I love it when things get all dramatic!! :D :thumbsup: Now I'm on the edge of my seat to read the next!! I can't wait! :kawaii: :D