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[Macey]

SO IT'S BEEN POSTED. As I've read all that except the bit at the end (which made me lol, Beks is probably dying) I don't have much to say here xD

[Mara=^.^=]

It'll probably be a few days before the rest of the chapter is out...and then Katie is my official beta reader for the big finale chapter!


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Beks]

Finished! And man, what an acid trip that was! The parts with FC are superb as always. I love my little bliss-addicted lover.

And MAN! Those hallucinations are MESSED UP! I'm excited to see how they get out of this one! Will Sheen wake up as a werewolf? Will Cindy or Libby not wake up at all? And what is Jimmy's inner-self?

All these questions, and more, better be explained soon, darn it!

[Mara=^.^=]

Finished! And man, what an acid trip that was! The parts with FC are superb as always. I love my little bliss-addicted lover.

And MAN! Those hallucinations are MESSED UP! I'm excited to see how they get out of this one! Will Sheen wake up as a werewolf? Will Cindy or Libby not wake up at all? And what is Jimmy's inner-self?

All these questions, and more, better be explained soon, darn it!

I was going to cut out this part entirely, but then changed my mind. Maybe I'll axe it in the final version. Not sure yet...

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Beks]

Personally, I love it! It's not necesarilly an emotion room, but as a psycological weapon, it works really well, having people fight their inner-self/archetype. I wonder what mine would be?

[Mara=^.^=]

I wouldn't really say "inner self", since people have a lot of good inside them. I'd say the room brings to the surface the absolute most depraved elements in everyone's personality.


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Beks]

Ooo, gotcha.

Btw, I love that little bit in Sheen's about it his mom. Nice touch.

Hm...I'm gonna take a guess and say that Jimmy's is gonna be some form of arrogance...maybe a king or something?

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Oh, gosh... This sounds a little... STRONG... for my liking. It's awesome that part of Chapter 36 was posted, but I'm not sure how I'll react to it, after reading everyone's replies about it here in this topic... I'm just not so sure if I'll be able to stand it this time. What, with all the gang almost killing eachother, then the odd attractions of non-canon/slash pairings, I'm not sure if I can handle it this time... Help me out here. I can't think of any other way to put it.

[Mara=^.^=]

Dude, if you can't handle this, there's no WAY you'll be able to stomach DJ and Aurora's big fight next chapter. It's gonna be SERIOUS BUSINESS.

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Beks]

YAY SERIOUS BUSINESS!

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Dude, if you can't handle this, there's no WAY you'll be able to stomach DJ and Aurora's big fight next chapter. It's gonna be SERIOUS BUSINESS.

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

Girl, is there gonna be bloodshed, fowl language, and HEAVY violence?? *shudder* I can't take that stuff.

[Mara=^.^=]

Well, let's see.

1) Bloodshed...hmm...CHECK
2) Swearing...yup, CHECK (only 2-3 swears, though, nothing extreme)
3) Heavy violence...well, not so much HEAVY as nerve-wracking, but, just to be safe we'll call that CHECK


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[CjIiNmDmYy]

Just read the latest installment. I can't believe at what the kids have to through. But still, this chapter was really good!

Um, bloodshed? Does that mean murder is going to be involved?

[Mara=^.^=]

Just read the latest installment. I can't believe at what the kids have to through. But still, this chapter was really good!

Um, bloodshed? Does that mean murder is going to be involved?

No. No murder. I meant more along the lines of cuts and bloody noses.


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Katy]

i read the chapter. its was good but kinda confusing though. it was a little jumpy.

[CjIiNmDmYy]

No. No murder. I meant more along the lines of cuts and bloody noses.


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

Oh, too bad. I was hoping Aurora would push a flaming hand through DJ's flesh.



















Joking! Joking! I'd never really want that to happen.

[okmeamithinknow]

Oh, too bad. I was hoping Aurora would push a flaming hand through DJ's flesh.

That would be my job! Oh wait! I read the words taunt him mercilessly, not push a flaming hand through DJ's flesh. My bad!

~Crys~

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

No. No murder. I meant more along the lines of cuts and bloody noses.


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

Oh, okay! Phew!!!! *wipes brow* Now THAT I can handle!! *preps self to read chappie ASAP*

[sam-ely-ember]

I screamed .___. I screamed like there was not future...

This is the most exciting thing I've lived since I joined IDOJ!!!!!

That was amazing .w.
All the time I waited for it, really worth it...

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LOL, murder XD

~Ely:3

[SweeneyxxTodd]

This chapter was EPIC!

And this part at the very beginning made me laugh:

LIBBY: (wincing) What God-awful interior decorator is responsiblefor this paint job?JIMMY: That would be me, I believe.


LIBBY: (shuddering) Yeesh…

And I was re-reading part of chapter 35 before reading this installment, to refresh my memory, and found this little bit:

This is madness! This is…anarchy!

I immediately thought that it would have made my day if, instead of Jimmy continuing with "This is...anarchy!", one of the others (probably Sheen) respond with "This is SPARTA!"