4674 replies to this topic

[RocksmySocks]

Wow, awesome update! I kept alternating between sitting on the edge of my seat reading as fast as possible to make sure everyone was safe, and laughing my head off and getting weird looks from my dad.

I have a feeling every update from now until the end is going to be a cliffhanger.

Must. Practice. Patience.



....*spazzes*

[cancel_me]

My favorite part was the line about Nav having buttsex with a missile. :'D Just kidding.

MARA, YOU KILLED ME WITH THE CHAPS. AUGH. This update was amazazing.





... Everyone who's after DJ, stfu. He's mine. *Pets hair protectively* Well, technically he belongs to Mara, but he's my sex on legs! Just like FS is Gwen's (and Carrie's)! GOT IT?

[.:!Gwen!:.]

lol I <3 u for evar Krista.

BUT FS IS NOT CARRIE'S HOW MANY TIMES MUST I GO OVER THIS. REGULAR, EVERYDAY, NORMAL SHEEN IS CARRIE'S.

And whoever else wants him, I don't care.

But Future Sheen is definitely, infinitely mine. I only let this FS/FL thing prosper cause Mara wants it and...I don't want to get my ass kicked.








.:!Gwen!:.

[cancel_me]

HAR.

I KID YOU.

Sort of. C; I just mentioned that to irritate you. Lawl FS/FL: imagining FL as Gwen the entire time. Hawt?

[.:!Gwen!:.]

It's the only thing that keeps me from baw-ing all over my laptop. 8C








.:!Gwen!:.

[curiochibi]

...I'm having way too much fun with this, aren't I? I TOLD you I'd never be able to take this story seriously again! Thanks a lot you guys! :grr:

...Nonetheless, I should warn you that the next 2-3 chapters will be equally filled with hotness, in the form of DJ (who admittedly starts out as a bit of a cold character), FS, FL, and possibly even J/C and S/L :o

BE PREPARED.

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

*screams so shrilly the cat goes flying the broken window to another house*

=Jessi=

[Flank]

Thanks for the new installment, Mara. I'll read it later.

[Kaz]

Flank! Where you been? ^_^

[sunnstar]

Speaking of typos, this is the only one I found:

"The Half Life rises ominously over the shining curve of the planet, ominous and terrible in its perfection."

[SweeneyxxTodd]

Psh, talk about redundancy.

lol I'm guilty of being redundant in my stories, too. One time I think I said something like, "He could feel the heated stares of the courtroom hot on his back." Good thing it was only the rough draft.

[Mara=^.^=]

CRAP. I changed that in the Word copy of the story, but not in the final HTML version. GAH :grr:


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[.:!Gwen!:.]

Psh, talk about redundancy.

lol I'm guilty of being redundant in my stories, too. One time I think I said something like, "He could feel the heated stares of the courtroom hot on his back." Good thing it was only the rough draft.

LOL. I love it when authors use redundancy. It adds an aspect of humor only weirdos like me laugh at.









.:!Gwen!:.

[cancel_me]

I often find redundancy in my stories, as well. I hate it. >:l

i can has oops plz mara?

[SweeneyxxTodd]

I'm a fan of like, practically all villains. I just love reading about or watching villains in action. Evil is awesome.

I shall also be a fan of DJ, when he comes. FS too, even though he's not evil. But he's drawn so awesome in his pictures, plus he's Sheen. I love anything Sheen-related.

[Kaytron]

I also liked when April threw Cindy, and Nav caught her.

Oooo I'm so excited for meeting DJ. I have to see him. I will totally worship him, but I don't want to steal him from Krista.

I'll just be a fan of him.

Aurora: Put her down or I'll put you down

:lol: :lol:

I wonder what it was like for Aurora to see Nav annoy her younger self like that.
If I was Cindy, I'd be delighted. ^_^


and yes, I can't wait to see DJ!!! :wub: :wub:

^Kaytron^ :ph43r:

[sunnstar]

I often find redundancy in my stories, as well. I hate it. >:l

i can has oops plz mara?

I have nooo idea why, but that totally made me think of this. Almost the middle, Rach's comment.

ISWEIRD...

[.:!Gwen!:.]

I'm a fan of like, practically all villains. I just love reading about or watching villains in action. Evil is awesome.

I feel that. :lol:







.:!Gwen!:.

[Kaz]

I loved that "I'll put you down" line, although if I saw someone harrassing my younger self, I'd be more likely to go kick some ass...

[curiochibi]

*rolls her eyes*

I'm sorry. I WAS a Nav fangirl...BUUUUUUUUUUUT, I got out cuz there's too much competition.

I AM A PINXIT FANGIRL NAO.

=Jessi=