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[SweeneyxxTodd]

Can I say something about the Spanish version's link picture?

First of all, there's no "g" in "español" and it shouldn't be capitalized, because in Spanish none of the languages are.

Also, "mañana" is feminine, so it should be "de la mañana," not "del mañana."

That's all I can think of, since I don't actually read the Spanish version, but those things have been bothering me since I first started reading TOSOT and I was looking at all the coverpages.

But I loved the new chapter! It was awesome.

[Mara=^.^=]

Can I say something about the Spanish version's link picture?

First of all, there's no "g" in "español" and it shouldn't be capitalized, because in Spanish none of the languages are.

Also, "mañana" is feminine, so it should be "de la mañana," not "del mañana."

That's all I can think of, since I don't actually read the Spanish version, but those things have been bothering me since I first started reading TOSOT and I was looking at all the coverpages.

But I loved the new chapter! It was awesome.

Oh, I keep spelling it like the French version "espagnol" from force of habit.

Oops.

GAHHH, why couldn't I translate it into French? I suck!


~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[girlgenius123]

O_O An..UPDATE??? SA-WEET! *runs off to read*

*later*

Nice chapter! It gave me shivers to think of what's they are doing. I mean, they are take a huge risk of being killed or captured, but do they care? Nope.

The J/C was perfect, BTW. <3

[RocksmySocks]

Really great installment, Mara! Everyone was perfect. LOL at the graffiti. Oh Carl...

I was all getting on the edge of my seat when the ships were deploying to head to the mindfield...and then it ended. Haha. All cliffhangery-like.

So once again, reeeeeeally looking forward to seeing what happens next! Thanks so much for updating!!!

-Katie :ahoy:

[Mara=^.^=]

APRIL'S DREAM COME TRUE:




~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[CraazyOne]

HOLY CRAP LET'S VISIT THAT PLACE.





~Rachel~

[curiochibi]

Thank you for melting my heart with the JCness, Mara. Now it's melted into a nice cherry puddle on the floor.
NO, VIC! DON'T EAT IT! THAT'S MY HEART! GO AWAY, YOU PSYCHO DOG! KEE-YAHHHHHHHH!!!

-Jessi

[Mara=^.^=]

No problem-o!

I figured it was high time for some J/C.



~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[Macey]

MAN, THIS IS GETTING GOOD.

:kawaii:

(Yes Mara, I've been reading it after all this time)

So they finally are heading to fight DJ...or at least weaken him enough to give him the antidote.

:dance:

I SHALL WAIT FOR THE UPDATE.

[curiochibi]

*assumes the position of a cat ready to pounce and sits on top of a shelf in Mara's dorm, watching to make sure she's writing and not PROCRASTINATING*


-Jessi

[Mara=^.^=]

Just thought I'd post this...

There was a question regarding April's pet Loof-loof, who was mentioned in chapter 23. So let me provide you with a little background info and an explanation.

Loof-loof is a vicious, flesh-eating alien beast. April bought him from an exotic animal smuggler a few years before the story starts.

Why did she buy him? Well, you know how obnoxious preppy girls carry around those little chihuahuas in their purses? Loof-loof is like the April version of that :lol: haha

He probably looks something like this, only red: click

~*Mara*~ = ^.^ =

[CraazyOne]

LOL. Sweet.





~Rachel~

[Beks]

Double sweet. :D

[Kaz]

wouldn't wanna meet him in a dark alley....

[Fire Pearl]

He looks cuddly! If you ignore the fangs...and the black eyes....and the huge mouth....and....


But he does look cuddly, though :wub:

[curiochibi]

That is why I am his official keeper, Laura.

-Jessi :lol:

[Flank]

Hey, Jessi, what do you mean by AURORA-in-a-jar in your siggie? <_<

[curiochibi]

That's something for me to know and you to NEVER find out, LOL.

Oh, J/K. I'll tell you. *sends off a PM*

-Jessi

[Fire Pearl]

Could ya tell me too? Pretty please? I'm curious ^_^

[curiochibi]

Ask Flank. He knows now.
But you can't tell anyone what it means.
I dunno why, but I don't want to explain it again. Though it is hilarious to a certain degree :lol:

-Jessi