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#3361 Mara=^.^=

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Posted 30 March 2011 - 04:39 AM

Dude, you seriously need to go back and read those chapters! :o

That's the best part of the story...

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Posted 30 March 2011 - 04:21 PM

Dude, you seriously need to go back and read those chapters! :o

That's the best part of the story...

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Oh YEAH! NAV's death is just the GREATEST part of the entire epic! :rolleyes:





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#3363 Mara=^.^=

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Posted 30 March 2011 - 07:00 PM

I was referring to the fight with DJ ;)

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#3364 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 30 March 2011 - 08:12 PM

That scene stands alone as the greatest one in the fic, though for me, the greatest scene ever, or the most memorable for me, would HAVE to be the emotion rooms, especially the dream sequence one. I mean, who could forget how epic THAT was, not to mention how much I flipped out over it, thinking it was actually happening to them(hence this drawing I made of it lol)?!

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#3365 Mara=^.^=

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Posted 31 March 2011 - 02:15 AM

UGHHH I am so FRUSTRATED with this next chapter I wanna chew off my own foot and beat myself senseless with it! :grr: Why oh WHY aren't basic character interactions working? It's like everyone decided to go all OOC at the same time. FL is spontaneously emo, April is taking bully pills, and FC is pulling shit that would make even Beks raise an eyebrow. All the dialogue sounds forced, and I think FJ is gearing up to EAT someone here. If I don't hammer out what the HECK is going on pretty soon, I'll lose motivation and it'll be another two months before you get another chapter.

Shoot me now.

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#3366 Anita

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Posted 31 March 2011 - 02:21 AM

I think characters often want to annoy their author... it's like: 'oh, you can do what you want to me, so I'll turn your writing into hell'
Mine do these stuffs sometimes, anyway.


Ok, am I crazy or what? :blink:
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#3367 Mara=^.^=

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Posted 31 March 2011 - 02:26 AM

I think characters often want to annoy their author... it's like: 'oh, you can do what you want to me, so I'll turn your writing into hell'
Mine do these stuffs sometimes, anyway


Glad I'm not the only one ;)

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Posted 31 March 2011 - 07:59 PM

I think FJ is gearing up to EAT someone here.

Shoot me now.

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TOSOT: Vore Edition. I CAN SEE IT NOW.

If April is such a bully, I'm sure she'd be more than willing to hand over her AK-47 in exchange for your lunch money, if you know what I mean. ;)


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#3369 Mara=^.^=

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Posted 31 March 2011 - 09:34 PM

TOSOT: Vore Edition. I CAN SEE IT NOW.

I had to look up "Vore", and now...I AM HORRIFIED. Posted Image

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#3370 curiochibi

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Posted 31 March 2011 - 10:37 PM

I had to look up "Vore", and now...I AM HORRIFIED. Posted Image

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:thumbsup: I WIN.

And just so you know, I'm attempting to draw a visual depiction of your OOC issues with the TOSOT characters that you mentioned ;)


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#3371 sonicjet

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Posted 31 March 2011 - 11:09 PM

FJ is gearing up to EAT someone here.

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Now, I can get really dirty with this...heh, I won't.
I would like to see some more DJ in FJ, if FJ can effect the controlling DJ then DJ can do the same to a controlling FJ. I like evil jimmy(Maybe we should just call him that now, FJ is still the dictator technically...)

PS- Why is FJ so Drained? He does have the SuperSuit, the infection has subsided.

PPS-Why do I detect some major JC coming in the next chapter?
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#3372 Mara=^.^=

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Posted 31 March 2011 - 11:25 PM

PS- Why is FJ so Drained? He does have the SuperSuit, the infection has subsided.

PPS-Why do I detect some major JC coming in the next chapter?

It's psychological and emotional drain, not physical drain.

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#3373 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 01 April 2011 - 12:02 AM

That should be very interesting... :rolleyes:
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Posted 10 April 2011 - 02:01 AM

I love it ♥
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#3375 Mara=^.^=

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Posted 13 April 2011 - 10:15 AM

LOL, someone e-mailed me today and asked when FJ and Aurora are going to get married. Bad news for you, kiddo...

>.< People amuse me.

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#3376 Lizz

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Posted 13 April 2011 - 05:27 PM

I'm sure almost anybody reading the story can tell what the answer to that question will be.
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#3377 ~*Annabellion*~

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Posted 13 April 2011 - 07:58 PM

LOL, someone e-mailed me today and asked when FJ and Aurora are going to get married. Bad news for you, kiddo...

>.< People amuse me.

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WHAT??!!!????! THEY'RE NOT???!!
haha... just kidding. :P
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#3378 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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    I'D forgive you, FJ... <3<3

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Posted 13 April 2011 - 08:02 PM

What I'D like to find out is if he's finally gonna tell her how to get the tubing part of her suit off without harming her skin. Looking forward to it, Mara! ^_^
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Posted 13 April 2011 - 09:02 PM

sounds dirty. ;P
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#3380 Mara=^.^=

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Posted 13 April 2011 - 10:41 PM

sounds dirty. ;P


Exactly what I was thinking Posted Image

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