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[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Um...

[okmeamithinknow]

Sirriusly, how old are they? Cause if they're show aged, ummm yeah then I'm gonna have problems with this...

~Crys~

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Um, 11/12... But remember, it was ACCIDENTAL.

[Zoey <3]

Um... The makes me want to puke (No offense)

Didn't the same thing happen in unforgettable summer?

[okmeamithinknow]

No offense, but I don't find it very believable that they would first of all be doing things that would enable Cindy to get pregnant at 11/12, let alone them being so readily accepting of the whole concept. Though it is physically possible since girls are coming into puberty at increasingly younger ages due to the amounts of hormones that are pumped into their bodies, but no 11/12 year old is capable of being a decent parent. I would also like to add that it takes weeks for the pregnancy actually register on a pregnancy test.

Don't take it personally. Maybe them kissing and being ashamed about it would make sense, but a pregnant Cindy.... No.

~Crys~

[Katy]

No offense, but I don't find it very believable that they would first of all be doing things that would enable Cindy to get pregnant at 11/12, let alone them being so readily accepting of the whole concept. Though it is physically possible since girls are coming into puberty at increasingly younger ages due to the amounts of hormones that are pumped into their bodies, but no 11/12 year old is capable of being a decent parent. I would also like to add that it takes weeks for the pregnancy actually register on a pregnancy test.

Don't take it personally. Maybe them kissing and being ashamed about it would make sense, but a pregnant Cindy.... No.

~Crys~

i agree crys, and jimmy and cindy aren't the trype to be having sex at 11/12 years old

[okmeamithinknow]

Thanks Katy.

So maybe I'm being a bit overzealous about this, but I have to make myself clear. The thought of Cindy being pregnant with Jimmy's baby is not what I disapprove of. After all one of my fics is based around the premise that she's pregnant, but those circumstances are VASTLY different from the one's in this story, and the baby is literally forced upon her.

It's their age that really bothers me. No 11/12 year old is emotionally, mentally, or financially mature enough to handle raising a kid. In my story they're 19 and both Jimmy and Cindy would be the first ones to say that they are in no way prepared for parenthood. In fact, in an upcoming chapter the two have a conversation admitting to this. Statics though do say that the younger you are when you have kids the more difficulties in their life. Many teenage mom's end up dropping out of school. Birth defects and premature births, which may lead to mental disorders are incredibly common among them as well.

Heck at 23 I'm not emotionally, mentally, or financially ready to start having kids, even though I want to have children of my own.

I'm not sure how well this is going to turn out in your story. I don't see either sets of parents being accepting of their grandchild.

Note: I'm really sorry. Teenage pregnancy is one of my soapboxes and I tend to rant. I've seen too many great kids being raised by people not qualified to raise them. If you are being raised by teen parent, I also mean no offense. There are a lot of really good parents out there who had kids really young. We have a couple of parents who had kids in high school at the place I work and they're GREAT parents. Seriously one of the sweetest little boys in our class was born when his mom was in high school, and she is the most amazing mother. Sadly however, this is not always the case.

~Crys~

[Zoey <3]

I agree with Crys. My mom had me when she was in high school and she had a hard time, but now she is a really good mother, but this isn't always the case with everyone. I find it really gross when little kids have sex.

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

Well, *sigh* ya don't have to read it anymore, if you don't want to. But I will say that Chapter 20 only gets funnier, and after that, there'll be no more occurrences like that, okay? I know it's hard for you to accept, but that's the way my totally TWISTED mind's been workin' these days. I can't get the idea outta my mind.

[Katy]

I agree with Crys. My mom had me when she was in high school and she had a hard time, but now she is a really good mother, but this isn't always the case with everyone. I find it really gross when little kids have sex.

i find it gross when people 13 years and younger is just plain gross and perverted. unfortunately i know people who became sexually active at that age.oth parents would be angry at jimkmy and cindy since they are 11/12 and having a kid.also i can't see those two having sex until either they're married or when they are 18+ anyway.

[CjIiNmDmYy]

Normally I don't read fics where people DO IT (I'm not comfortable saying/typing that.) But being 13 years of age myself, I find that EXTREMELY GROSS if anyone below 17 DOES IT. Are they really 11/12?? Don't get me wrong, Emily. I really liked the plot of the story before that. Do you think you could remove the pregnancy thing from the story and give it another plotline or at least age them a some more in the fic? Because pregnancy at 11 IS NOT appropriate. It's your wish though. I don't want to ruin it. Please don't take this the wrong way. I just find the idea yuck. I'm very sorry if I upset you.

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

No, you didn't upset me. I completely understand where you're coming from. They were 11/12 , but let it be known that from this day forward, they are 15/16, and are in high school nao, not middle school.

[okmeamithinknow]

*still considers this too young, but will deal*

[Katy]

15/16 is kinda young but its better than making them have a kid at 11/12.

[CjIiNmDmYy]

That's better, but I wish they were 17 or 18. No problem. It's close enough.

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

I'm glad ya agree, cuz heeeeeeerrrrrrreee'sss Chapter 20!!!!


Hope For the Hopeless

Chapter 20: The Accident
(Sheen's POV)


The following day started out as any old day would at camp.

Although, once Jimmy, Carl, & I were up, Jimmy acted really weird, almost as if he was trying to keep something from us. Yesterday, my group DID get 2nd place, but I was too preoccupied with thinking about UltraLord to pay much attention to how Jimmy & Cindy acted while getting their award & having their photo taken.

While he was tinkering with his inventions, more often than not I heard him muttering angrily to himself about how they weren't working properly. Something was on his mind that was stronger than his intention to work on his gadgets, but I didn't care about that at the moment. All I cared about was where that delicious Purple Flurp smell was coming from!

So, after I got myself dressed, I started to search through everything like a kid crazed with a sugar rush to try to find where that smell was coming from(heck, I was a kid crazed with a sugar rush!!). It seemed to be coming from Jimmy's clothes bag, so I started to dig through it like crazy.

Unfortunately, he saw what I was doing & tried to stop me, saying, “Sheen, what in the universe are you doing getting into my stuff??!! Get OUTTA there!!”

Too late! I had already found the source of the Purple Flurp smell. It was coming from a test tube with a piece of cork in its top part. The liquid inside it was purple, just like my favorite sugary drink, & I had gotten ahold of it!

I had just pulled the cork piece out of it & was about to drink it when Jimmy shoved it out of my hands & got it splattered all over me & him. He quickly picked it up off of the floor & put the cork piece back in it, scolding, “Sheen, how many times have I told you to leave my chemical solutions ALONE??! Are you aware that this is my modified love potion??!!”

“Oh, so it's NOT Purple Flurp?” I asked dimly.

“No, Sheen!!! Now, I can't stop thinking about...-” he started to snap, but stopped, sighed happily, & breathed with a big grin on his face, “-...Cindy...”

Strangely enough, I felt the same way about Libby-licious! All I could think about was how beautiful she was & how much I wanted to mindlessly make out with her.

Then, I couldn't take it anymore. I burst out of the guys' cabin door & ran over to the girls' cabin & knocked furiously on the door. I wasn't aware of it at the time, but Jimmy happened to be right behind me, just as anxious to see Cindy like I was to see Libby in all her crowning glory. Libby answered it & threw herself into my arms with a passionate look in her eyes. I took her aside & whispered, “What say we find a romantic, quieter, privater location, mi reina??”

“Sure, Sheen. Whatever you say,” she replied quietly as I carried her off into the woods.

Soon, she & I found the perfect romantic neck of the woods. It had tall grass, trees all around it, & a little stream not far off from where we were.

She & I felt so relaxed in that corner of the woods that we soon fell asleep.

Several hours flew by without us knowing it. Then, out of the blue, Libby shook me awake & urged, “Sheen, wake up!! I can hear Neutron's voice calling fo' us!!!”

“What??” I tried to convince her, “I don't hear nothin'!!”

But, clearly, she wasn't buying it. More frustratedly, she snapped, “I swear, Sheen, he's on his way here!! We've gotta get ourselves dressed before he sees us like this!!!! Shut up & pay attention!!”

“I don't hear anything!!” I still protested, “Trust me, he's not gonna find out!!”

“Find out about WHAT?!” came a familiar voice.

Shocked, we turned around to where the voice came from, & saw Jimmy standing in front of us, with a stern look on his face & his arms crossed. Then he snapped, “What I'd like to know is what you 2 are doing here in the first place!”

“That's what I'D like to know, as well!” came yet another familiar voice. We found out that it came from none other than Cindy, who'd just then walked up to Jimmy & glared at us, her hands on her hips.

“Cindy, I can explain!” Libby began.

“Save it, Libby! I was hoping you'd not get involved in this type of situation, but I was wrong!! You 2 should be ashamed of yourselves!” she barked at her.

“I'm equally disappointed in you both! I thought you knew better than this, Sheen!!” Jimmy sharply added, “Just get yourselves dressed & come with us back to camp. I've never been more disappointed in you 2!”

We did what he said & followed them back to camp, prepared to call our parents & give them a full explanation of what happened & how it exactly happened, leaving out no details. We'd make sure that the counselors never found out what happened to us, for they'd be sure to tell our parents first & tell them the direct opposite of what happened before we got a chance to tell them our side of the story. So we decided that no ONE would find out what happened between Libby & me, & what I later found out happened between Jimmy & Cindy. But soon, that proved to be practically impossible.

[Zoey <3]

I'm so confused. Why is Hope for the Hopeless turning into Unforgettable summer and what happened with Natalie?

[Katy]

i wonder if something fishy is going on. its just too weird that sheen/libby deside to make out thge day fater jimm/cindy and like them they didn't remember it. i can't wait for the next chapter to figure out what is going on

[JimmyxxCindy4EVER]

I'm so confused. Why is Hope for the Hopeless turning into Unforgettable summer and what happened with Natalie?

Well, the explanation for the first question is that Sheen, hyperactive as usual, thought he smelled Purple Flurp coming from Jimmy's stuff, so he started to dig through it, but it was really the love potion(modified[Gah... WHY do I do this so MUCH?!! ]), and Jimmy caught him, and they sorta fought over it after it was opened, thus spilling on BOTH of them this time, which explains why Sheen did what he did with Libby. (This isn't in the story, so I'll just tell ya that after their stay at camp, a couple months later, the 2 girls have a miscarriage, so they don't have to deal with raising a child in the future(remember, they're still 15/16).) As to Natalie, she didn't disappear; the focus was temporarily turned onto the guys' points of view, so Natalie isn't in the picture for the time being. See, she's a minor character(sorta), so she doesn't appear as much, but she will appear again in the next couple chapters when it's Cindy's POV. She'll be dealt with(in a good way, mind you) more in a future chapter, which reveals what her destiny ultimately is in the end of the fic.

[okmeamithinknow]

WTF!? SRSLY?!

~Crys~