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#21
Posted 05 February 2009 - 09:39 PM
#22
Posted 05 February 2009 - 10:48 PM
That's a good story.
I know a lot of you like TOSOT, but I read the first couple chapters to it, and I don't like it at all. I don't find it interesting.
ToKi
#23
Posted 05 February 2009 - 11:22 PM
#24
Posted 05 February 2009 - 11:32 PM
#25
Posted 05 February 2009 - 11:35 PM
#26
Posted 06 February 2009 - 03:43 AM
I dunno how to describe it. It's just... so...I know Mara's gonna strangle me for saying this but w/e... FLAWLESS.
Everything is, from the characterization, to the plot, the sequence of events, the syntaxs sentences... EVERYTHING!! And Mara's ONLY 20 and can do all of this! Can you believe it? I see an absolutly GREAT career in her future, which I really, REALLY hope she has. :D
Not to say this in a self-defacing way, but mine's could never, ever, EVER touch hers. EVER! ^_^
#27
Posted 06 February 2009 - 04:24 PM
#28
Posted 06 February 2009 - 04:27 PM
#29
Posted 06 February 2009 - 05:53 PM
I know a lot of you like TOSOT, but I read the first couple chapters to it, and I don't like it at all. I don't find it interesting.
I didn't really like the first couple chapters all that much, either. I found the story on fanfiction.net and read maybe three chapters, and I was like, "Nah, not feelin' this story." But then I came here and I found that it had a huge fan basis and thought I might as well give it another shot. So I did, taking about a week to read through it, and I say it was worth it. The beginning is a bit rough, but I feel that it gets much better as it goes on.
#30
Posted 07 February 2009 - 08:19 PM
#31
Posted 08 February 2009 - 02:46 AM
#32
Posted 08 February 2009 - 03:18 AM
You can't expect many different people to visit this one topic in the span of about...6 hours.
As for help from myself, I'm afraid I'm all out of ideas...I don't know what to do with the fic either. :unsure:
#33
Posted 08 February 2009 - 03:21 AM
I haven't really read either story, so I can't help you, unfortunately.
Why don't you try watching a few eps or listening to music? That helps me get inspiration sometimes.
#34
Posted 08 February 2009 - 03:23 AM
#35
Posted 08 February 2009 - 03:25 AM
Btw, sorry about the ranting! I was just in a bad mood, is all! :grr:
Maybe someone else who's read my fics has some ideas... ^_^
#36
Posted 09 February 2009 - 05:00 PM
#37
Posted 10 February 2009 - 04:11 AM
#38
Posted 10 February 2009 - 06:35 PM
WHEN ARE YOU POSTING A NEW LL&D CHAPTER?!?!?
#39
Posted 11 February 2009 - 02:40 PM
And after reading Mara's critques and suggestions on Part 1 itself, I've come to the conclusion that I'm NOT sastisfied with how Pt. 1 came out.
So based on Mara's suggestions, I plan to "re-make" Pt. 1.
Suggestions, objections, or other stuff let me know.
#40
Posted 11 February 2009 - 05:27 PM
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