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#21 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 05 February 2009 - 09:39 PM

Don't worry, Pedro! ;) Mara didn't delete it, so it's still open! :lol:
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Posted 05 February 2009 - 10:48 PM

I like Gretchen's story JN BG Big Brother.

That's a good story.

I know a lot of you like TOSOT, but I read the first couple chapters to it, and I don't like it at all. I don't find it interesting.

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#23 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 05 February 2009 - 11:22 PM

I loved the first couple chapters, but once I got to where Mara stopped, in Part 5, I felt like I had to stop there. But I won't spoil it for you if you read more, for 2 reasons: 1. I didn't like what happened, & 2. I can't REMEMBER what happened exactly! I just don't want Mara to have ANYONE KILLED in this fic, especially the J-man or his future self! If that's how YOU want to do it, Mara, I respect that, but I don't think I'll be too HAPPY about it!!!!!!!! :mad: :grr: :'( :'( :'(
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#24 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 05 February 2009 - 11:32 PM

That's good!! What about DJ(aka: Future Jimmy under influence of megalomanium)??? My heart would feel ripped out of my chest if HE had to go!!!! I want to see him get back to normal! And SOON!!!!!!! ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#25 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 05 February 2009 - 11:35 PM

In that case, I think I might start reading it again! :dance:
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#26 J/C AVA

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Posted 06 February 2009 - 03:43 AM

Mara's TOSOT is one of the main reasons why I wanted to write Life, Love and Death.

I dunno how to describe it. It's just... so...I know Mara's gonna strangle me for saying this but w/e... FLAWLESS.

Everything is, from the characterization, to the plot, the sequence of events, the syntaxs sentences... EVERYTHING!! And Mara's ONLY 20 and can do all of this! Can you believe it? I see an absolutly GREAT career in her future, which I really, REALLY hope she has. :D

Not to say this in a self-defacing way, but mine's could never, ever, EVER touch hers. EVER! ^_^
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#27 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 06 February 2009 - 04:24 PM

Ain't that the truth! I'm FINALLY considering reading her fic again, after ALL this TIME of not reading it. It's probably the greatest fic I've EVER read! I just hope it has a happy ending for the gang! AND FJ, of course, when he's FINALLY back to normal! :D :thumbsup: ;)
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#28 J/C AVA

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Posted 06 February 2009 - 04:27 PM

I'm looking foward to the ending as well. It's gonna be so epic!! :dance:
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Posted 06 February 2009 - 05:53 PM

I know a lot of you like TOSOT, but I read the first couple chapters to it, and I don't like it at all. I don't find it interesting.


I didn't really like the first couple chapters all that much, either. I found the story on fanfiction.net and read maybe three chapters, and I was like, "Nah, not feelin' this story." But then I came here and I found that it had a huge fan basis and thought I might as well give it another shot. So I did, taking about a week to read through it, and I say it was worth it. The beginning is a bit rough, but I feel that it gets much better as it goes on.
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#30 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 07 February 2009 - 08:19 PM

I've been recently informed that my fics, Cat's Got Her Tongue & A New Kid In Town, need updating. But, I swear, I CAN'T find one BIT of inspiration around me or IN me!!!! :mad: So, could you guys be good pals & suggest some good ideas for what could happen next???!! Plz???????? I SWEAR, I NEED the help!!!!!!!! :huh: :rock: :wacko: :grr:
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#31 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 08 February 2009 - 02:46 AM

I SWEAR, I'm NOT gonna wait around forever for this!!! Either help me with this, or you can look forward to an "I'm gonna stop posting chappies" post from me! I MEAN it, people!!!!
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Posted 08 February 2009 - 03:18 AM

Um, Amelia, May I suggest that instead of threatening us with no more chapters and using lots of caps and exclamation points, you calmly ask for help and wait patiently for people to reply with support.

You can't expect many different people to visit this one topic in the span of about...6 hours.

As for help from myself, I'm afraid I'm all out of ideas...I don't know what to do with the fic either. :unsure:
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#33 SweeneyxxTodd

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Posted 08 February 2009 - 03:21 AM

Overusage of caps and exclamation points don't exactly help people come up with ideas.

I haven't really read either story, so I can't help you, unfortunately.

Why don't you try watching a few eps or listening to music? That helps me get inspiration sometimes.
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Posted 08 February 2009 - 03:23 AM

Yeah! :lol: Watching episodes always helps me with characterization and some fanfic ideas as well.
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#35 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 08 February 2009 - 03:25 AM

Thanks for the tips, Mary! I think I might just do that! Using Yidio.com, of course, cuz I can't figure out how to download eps to my Mac & put them in a format that QuickTime Player will ACTUALLY play. :grr:

Btw, sorry about the ranting! I was just in a bad mood, is all! :grr:

Maybe someone else who's read my fics has some ideas... ^_^
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#36 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 09 February 2009 - 05:00 PM

C'mon, I KNOW you guys are out there! Come on over here, you! :bff:
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#37 J/C AVA

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Posted 10 February 2009 - 04:11 AM

I'm here... somewhat. :P
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Posted 10 February 2009 - 06:35 PM

Now here's the all lingering question nearly everyone is asking...

WHEN ARE YOU POSTING A NEW LL&D CHAPTER?!?!?
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Posted 11 February 2009 - 02:40 PM

Part 6 will be FINALLY posted (and later reviewed by Mara in the coming weeks/months) by later tonight.

And after reading Mara's critques and suggestions on Part 1 itself, I've come to the conclusion that I'm NOT sastisfied with how Pt. 1 came out.

So based on Mara's suggestions, I plan to "re-make" Pt. 1.

Suggestions, objections, or other stuff let me know.
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#40 JimmyxxCindy4EVER

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Posted 11 February 2009 - 05:27 PM

That's what I NEED, suggestions from those of you who DID read my fics ALL the way through. Could you urge everyone to do that, Pedro??? I'd REALLY, REALLY appreciate it! ;)
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