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#41 jimmysaver13

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Posted 21 November 2006 - 01:41 AM

I'm glad you all liked it! This next chapter will be split into 2 parts because it's too long to post. Here it is! Betty vs. Evil Jimmy! The next part of the chapter will be when Cindy fights Betty, so it's coming soon! I hope NekoGirl's reading this chapter!

CHAPTER 8A: Evil Jimmy vs. Betty Part 1

"Good luck, Betty," Jimmy said just as Betty was about to go to the ring.

"Thanks, Jimmy," Betty said in her sweet voice.

"I really hope you win. Maybe we can meet, and see who's stronger."

"Yeah, I'd really like that."

Before she went, Betty kissed Jimmy on the lips. All Jimmy did was faint. In the background, Cindy growled. She hated when Betty did that, even when she said she'd back off!

"I can't believe Neutron could fall for her." Cindy said to Libby. "What does he see in her?"

"Well," Libby began. "For one thing, she's actually nice to him. She's beautiful, very helping, likes music, she-"

"OKAY!" Cindy shouted, trying to block out Betty's "qualities." "He shouldn't be with her, though."

"Cin," Libby said. "he's a grown 11-year old. He has a choice who he wants to love."

"But," Cindy paused, thinking. "But, what about all the times we had? The dream, Mars, the news show, Meldar, the island. We were almost together."

"Well," Libby said. "if he really loves you, he wouldn't cheat on you. Come on, he's a good boy." Libby said that last part playfully.

"You got that from "Monster-in-Law", didn't you?"

"Yep."

Everyone turned their attention to the ring, where CJ was about to announce the next match.

"Okay, folks," CJ said. "It's time to start the next match! Now, we have Evil Jimmy and Betty Quinlan!"

Both walked on the ring, getting equal applause from the crowd.

"Let's get this battle started!"

'Please, Betty,' Jimmy thought. 'Please win. Don't let your guard down.'

Round 1, Match 5: Evil Jimmy vs. Betty

Stats:

Evil Jimmy: 91hp 13mp 18Atk 53Def 0EXP
Betty: 75hp 19mp 18Atk 36Def 0EXP

"Well, well, well," Evil Jimmy said, smiling. "look who it is. It's whipy-did's girlfriend. Or his other girlfriend."

"Don't call Jimmy whimpy-dip!" Betty said, rage in her eyes. :rock:

Evil Jimmy goes first.

Evil Jimmy attacks. =0hp lost.

"WHAT!?" :o Evil Jimmy screamed.

'I better play it smart,' Betty thought to herself. 'Jimmy warned me not to take him lightly.'

Betty uses Rushing Drive. =10mp lost. 0hp lost.

Betty: 8mp

"Well," Evil Jimmy said. "looks like we're all tied up here."

Betty looked at Jimmy. He smiled at her, giving her a thumbs up. She felt power burning inside her. Power that Cindy wanted. Strangely, Cindy felt Betty's power.

"No," Cindy said. "She can't have THAT power."

"What's wrong, Cindy?" Libby asked.

"How can I beat her now?"

Evil Jimmy uses Atomic Ray. =15mp lost. 7hp lost.

Evil Jimmy: 3mp

Betty: 68hp

Betty could feel the power in her. Then for a second, it seems like time stopped. She went into her own world. A world where her and Jimmy were living happily together. Not married, but together. She decided then and there, that she had to use that power. For Jimmy.

'Now.' Betty said to herself.

"What's the hold-up, Ms. Whipy-dip?" Evil Jimmy said laughing.

That ticked Betty off. She had it with him taunting the boy she loved. loved. That was it. She was in love with Jimmy. And noone would take that away.

The ground shaked. Everyone looked at Betty. She was in a fighting stance like she was about to go to a new level.

'So,' Jimmy said. 'She has it too. She's not the only one.' Jimmy looked at the palm of his hand. It was glowing, showing he was the first to recieve that power.

"This-is-for---JIMMY!" Betty screamed as yellow streaks went up and came down on Betty.

"WHAT'S HAPPENING!?" Sheen shouted.

"So," CJ said to himself. "She finally used the power I gave her. And many people." CJ just smiled.

Within seconds, Betty had transformed. Her power increased. Her chakara was far more powerful. She became Super Betty. Cindy just looked. She was almost in tears. Why? Because she knew that if she wanted Jimmy, she would have to go through April and Betty. And, well, her chances of having Jimmy...were slim.

That's part 1 of Chapter 8! ^_^ :P :D Nice chapter, huh? Super Betty is here! The people who have that power are Jimmy, Cindy, and Betty, for now. Do you want to see Super Sheen? Super Libby? Super Carl!? Post and I just might add them!
Next Chapter: Betty finishes her match, and she moves on Jimmy. Cindy can't take it anymore. She has to fight her. Even if she loses, she'll go down with pride. But Cindy's not like that. Even if she loses, she'll continue to fight.
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Posted 21 November 2006 - 01:48 AM

Oooh this keeps on getting better and better! :thumbsup:

But Cindy's not like that. Even if she loses, she'll continue to fight.

Yep that's Cindy ^_^

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#43 Lavender_Harmony

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Posted 21 November 2006 - 02:10 AM

He-he the fic keeps getting better! Cindy, you can do it! :lol:

Yeah that's Cindy. She'll keep fighting. She's a fighter and a lover! Lol :rock: :wub:
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#44 cherii

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Posted 21 November 2006 - 05:15 AM

Ooh! More Naruto! XD Am I the only one who picked up on the Chakra(sp?)? Keep 'em coming! :P
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Posted 22 November 2006 - 01:06 AM

Okay! Here's Part 2! This part, (SPOILERS BEWARE! :unsure: ) Betty wins her match with Evil Jimmy. Jimmy confronts Betty, and Betty makes a move on Jimmy. Cindy can't take it anymore and fights for Jimmy. Will she win? Find out
now! This chapter is for NekoGirl, JXB lovers, and Cindy getting jealous lovers! JxC lovers may cringe in the beginning :angry: but near the end, you might love it. :D

CHAPTER 8B: Cindy's Jealousy and Cindy vs. Betty Part 2

The crowd sat in awe, witnessing Super Betty.

Super Betty: 105hp 49mp 48ATK 66Def

"Whoa, dude!" Nick said. "What happened to her?"

"I've never felt so much power before." April said. "Jimmy Neutron, do you know this power?"

"Yes," Jimmy said. "It's a technique that only certain people have. I have it. Cindy has it. And now, Betty has it. Unfortunately, she has the weakest super form of us three."

Cindy's heart opened up. She looked up with a jolt. All she had to do is reach Super level, and she would have Jimmy to herself. The problem is...how was she gonna reach it?

"What is this?" Evil Jimmy said, taking a step back.

"This is what happens when you mess with the people I love." Betty said, in a voice not sweet, but kinda sweet/mean. Jimmy blushed.

Super Betty uses Love Ray. =10mp lost. 48hp lost.

Evil Jimmy: 43hp

Super Betty: 39mp

Evil Jimmy knelt down, coughing up spit and blood.

"How..can..anyone.." He said. "have..that much..power?"

"Oh, don't worry," Super Betty said. "Jimmy is much more powerful."

Evil Jimmy defends.

Evil Jimmy: 54Def

Super Betty uses Love Triangle Dive. =15mp lost. 49hp lost.

Evil Jimmy: 0hp DEFEATED!

"And in a very intense battle," CJ said. "Betty is our winner!"

Betty returns to her normal self. She quietly goes back to the entrance of the ring. Jimmy ran to the entrance. Cindy just looked. Should she go? She was met by Libby's hand on her shoulder.

"Go get yo man." Libby said, smiling.

Cindy smiled too and ran for Jimmy. When Jimmy got there, Betty was waiting for him.

"I know why you turned Super," Jimmy said, smiling.

"And why is that?" Betty said in a knowing voice. She seemed to be getting closer and closer to his face. Cindy was hiding behind a wall near them. She couldn't hold it in any longer. She had to fight her.

"It was because of me." Jimmy said, also leaning towards Betty.

Betty smiled, "You are correct, boy genius."

"I always am." Jimmy said, smiling as he was 5 inches away from her.

"Yes you are. And always cute."

Betty filled in the space between them and she kissed him. Jimmy quickly got into it and kissed her back. Cindy's heart broke. But it quickly regained strength by her anger.

'That's it,' Cindy said, raging. 'I'm going to KILL her!!!!!!!'

As soon as they stopped kissing, Cindy jumped out and tackled Betty. Libby was secretly watching, Carl taking notes on what Libby was saying, and Sheen was videotaping it.

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING, VORTEX!?" Betty screamed.

"YOU KNOW EXACTLY WHAT I'M DOING!" Cindy screamed turning her over so she can punch the living daylights out of her. "YOU SAID YOU WOULD BACK OFF!!"

"I ONLY SAID THAT SO YOU WOULD BACK OFF!"

Jimmy saw Libby, Carl, and Sheen. They all saw him and stopped what they were doing. Except Sheen, who was dumb enough to keep recording. Jimmy ran to Libby.

"Guys!" Jimmy screamed. "What's going on!?"

"Well, it looks like Cindy's beating the heck out of Betty." Libby said, still watching the fight.

"Wow," Carl said. "Cindy has a nice right hook."

"Yeah, but Betty has the defense. I think we should see an interesting fight here tonight. Don't you Tom?" Sheen said as he pulled his hand puppet from behind him.

"That's right, Sheen!" Sheen said with a voice to intimidate the hand puppet.

"Well, it has to stop!" Jimmy said.

"YOU stop it!" Libby said. "They're you're girlfriends. Besides, we're going to be rich if we sell this!"

"Fine!" Jimmy said and he ran back to the 2 brawling girls. Jimmy pulled Cindy and Betty off of each other. Each was bloody, but Betty's face was almost covered. Jimmy gave Betty a towel. Jimmy looked at Cindy disappointenly. Cindy felt bad.

"What is going on here, Cynthia Aurora Vortex!?" Jimmy said angrily. He used her full name when he was really angry.

"I...well," Cindy said, trying to make up an excuse. "She promised me something and she broke it!"

"What was the promise?!"

Cindy searched for the right answer. If she told Jimmy the truth, everyone would know she likes, no, loves Jimmy.

"I can't tell you that." Cindy lied, looking down at her feet.

"Well, don't let it happen again. Come on, Betty. I'll clean you up."

"Thanks Jimmy." Betty said.

They both walked off. Cindy felt heartbroken. Not because of Jimmy. But because of what she did to hurt Jimmy. Libby came to her to confort her.

"Cin," Libby said. "are you going to be okay?"

"I lost, Libby," Cindy said, tears in her eyes. "I lost Jimmy." :'(

"Well," Libby said. "if I know the real Cindy, even if she loses, she continues to fight for what she wants." And with that, Libby walked away with Carl and Sheen.

"Nice fight, though." Sheen said. Libby smacked him in the back of his head.

Cindy let Libby's words sink in. She was right. No matter how hard anyone smacked her down, no matter how convincing her theory was wrong, no matter how bad the situation was, Cindy Vortex never gave up. Jimmy's match was next. She would do her plan there.

"Jimmy Neutron," Cindy said with determination and smiling, "you will be mine." And she walked to her seat, next to the boy genius.

:'( Wow. What a powerful chapter.
NEXT CHAPTER IS JIMMY'S MATCH! ^_^ :P :D :lol: :rock: STAY TUNED FOR CHAPTER 9! JIMMY VS. SEYMOUR!
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Posted 22 November 2006 - 01:46 AM

OMG OMG OMG SO GOOD OMG OMG OMG
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Posted 22 November 2006 - 03:02 AM

Omfg :o ....omfg!
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Posted 22 November 2006 - 03:48 AM

Cindy, go get your man! :rock: She’s a fighter and a lover LOL Don’t worry Cin, you’ll get your man :wub: I hope :unsure: “Just keep fightin’…just keep fightin’.” - Me
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Posted 22 November 2006 - 05:54 AM

That was awesome! But I don't like that JxB kissed, but I know that nekogirl and other JxB fans loved it. Go Cindy! You go and win Jimmy over! I can't wait until the next chapter. It's starting to get very interesting! ^_^
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Posted 22 November 2006 - 01:46 PM

Thanks everybody! And an extra bonus:

Today at my school is a 2:00 dismissal, and tomorrow AND Friday I have no school! So expect more chpaters on Thursday and Friday!
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Posted 22 November 2006 - 02:22 PM

Cool! I'm definitely hoping for more JxB, & even if its through a PM, I gotta ask: which pair's gonna be official by the end? Lol, sorry, just my excitement & all, heh. ^_^ :D
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Posted 22 November 2006 - 09:27 PM

Well, at the end, I really don't put in official couples (except S/L.) I'm making a sequel, so nothing will be permanet.
As for love, in the end, JimmyxCindy and JimmyxBetty will be the final couples and of course SheenxLibby and CarlxElke and AprilxBolbi. Jimmy will still be torn between Cindy and Betty. But I'm going to make everyone happy.
Jimmy and Cindy will have their moments and Jimmy and Betty will have their moments. Cindy will have Jimmy, but she won't be able to hang on to it.
I'm glad you liked it! Don't worry! They'll be plenty more JxB as the story progresses.
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Posted 22 November 2006 - 11:17 PM

Okay! Here's the chapter you've been waiting for! This chapter features Cindy's plan to win Jimmy, and Jimmy's match with Seymour! This should be a good one!

CHAPTER 9: Jimmy vs. Seymour ^_^

Before Jimmy went to the ring, everyone wished him a good luck.

"Now be careful, hon," Judy said.

"It's okay mom," Jimmy said. "I'll be fine."

"Whoop his butt, Jim!" Sheen screamed.

"Do good." Carl said, not wanting to get any negative energy.

"Okay, okay guys," Jimmy said. "I get your point. I'll do fine."

Everyone left.

"Good luck, Jimmy." Betty said and she kissed him on the cheek, not wanting to get into another fight with Cindy.

Betty went on to the crowd. But Cindy stayed.

"Oh, did you come to wish me luck, too?" Jimmy asked.

"No." Cindy said.

"Then why did you come?"

"I came to say...I'm sorry."

"What?"

"I'm sorry for making you angry."

"Oh, well, I was kinda ticked off."

"Yeah. Say, after the fight, do you wanna grab a soda?"

"Uh, sure." ^_^

"Great! So, good luck." Cindy ran to her seat, joyed by her "date" with Jimmy. Jimmy just smiled. For a second, he could've sworn he saw Cindy have a big grin on her face.

"Libby!" Cindy called Libby to the wall. Libby walked over.

"What is it, Cin?" Libby said. "I might miss Jimmy's match!"

"I just got a date with Jimmy!" Cindy screamed for joy.

"Really?" Libby said in austaunashment.

"Well, it's not a real date, we're just gonna get a soda."

"Well, still, girl! You get to have some alone time with yo man!"

"Libby, stop it!" Cindy and Libby ran back to their seats, waiting for Jimmy's match to begin.

"Well, folks," CJ called as everyone was waiting non-patienly. "We've made it this far. Now, here's the match you've all been waiting for! First, let's bring out Seymour Nibblefarb!"

The crowd booed him, except for the villains of course.

"And now," CJ said with oomph. "here's the person you've been waiting to see fight! Here he is! The boy genius himself: JIMMY NEUTRON!!!!" :lol: :dance:

The crowd erupted as Jimmy came on the stage. He just smiled. Seymour was filled with jealousy.

"LET'S GET THIS THING STARTED!" The bell sounded, and the match began.

Round 1, Match 7: Jimmy vs. Seymour

Stats:

Jimmy: 36hp 46mp 54ATK 41DEF 0EXP

Seymour: 64hp 65mp 42ATK 44DEF 0EXP

"I'm tired of you stealing my spotlight!" Seymour said, angrily. "Now you're going down!"

"Hmph. Don't start that." Jimmy said, wiggling his pointer finger. "You have no idea what you're up against!"

Jimmy starts.

Jimmy attacks. =10hp lost.

Seymour: 54hp

Seymour attacks. =1hp lost.

Jimmy: 35hp

"What?!" Seymour said in shock. "That nearly had no effect on him."

"Heh," Jimmy said, smiling. "that didn't even hurt. Let me show you what real fighting is!"

Jimmy uses Atomic Ball. =10mp. 20hp lost.

Jimmy: 36mp

Seymour: 34hp

"No!" Seymour said.

Seymour uses Book Run. =5mp. 6hp lost.

Jimmy: 29hp

"Wow," Jimmy said. "I didn't know you were so weak. Oh well, time to finish this!"

Jimmy uses Atomic Deflector Spector. =15mp 35hp lost.

Jimmy: 21mp

Seymour: 0hp DEFEATED!

"NOOO!!!" Seymour screamed.

"YESS!!" Jimmy jumped up for joy.

"And it looks like Jimmy wins!!!!" CJ said, also on the verge of jumping up and down.

The crowd was so loud, you wouldn't be surprized if they lost their voice. Especially Sheen, who had all kinds of cheer things.

Jimmy had won. They all knew it was a happy time. But there was no time to celebrate. They had to take care of the villains first. Little did they know, that Eustace was plotting something at that very moment.

:o Suspense! The next chapter is our 10th chapter! Yay! :rock: ^_^ :dance: :music: Stay tuned for Chapter 10!

Round 2:

1. Beautiful Gorgeous vs. April

2. Carl vs. Cindy

3. Betty vs. Jimmy ;)

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Posted 22 November 2006 - 11:33 PM

Another fabulous ch jimmysaver13 :thumbsup: great job.

1. Beautiful Gorgeous vs. April

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Go April!

2. Carl vs. Cindy

Oooh...go Cindy!

3. Betty vs. Jimmy  ;)

Ooooo :unsure:

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Posted 23 November 2006 - 12:14 AM

3. Betty vs. Jimmy


:o *Le gasp*

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Posted 23 November 2006 - 12:17 AM

OMG OMG GO JIMMY! CINDY KICK CARL'S BUTT

3. Betty vs. Jimmy

OMG :unsure: :o
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Posted 23 November 2006 - 05:51 AM

Betty and Jimmy's match will be very interesting! ^_^ Wonder who'll win, considering they both don't want to hurt each other.
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Posted 23 November 2006 - 01:28 PM

3. Betty vs. Jimmy ;)

O
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OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG
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Posted 23 November 2006 - 03:18 PM

I see you are all freaking out about the Jimmy vs. Betty fight. So, let me clear things up so you won't be sweating.
Remember in Chapter 8A? Jimmy said that he would like for her to win, so they can fight each other to see who's stronger. Betty liked that idea, so there's no worries. Just thought I would clear that up.
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Posted 23 November 2006 - 08:16 PM

Great fanfic, bro!
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